may be(mayur ff)part last part-page 27 - Page 15

omg..they both care for each other so much!!!!

it was awesome!!!!

hey wen r u updating? plz do soon

Part-8

nupur couldn't let may take the custody,even if that means she has to be punished…….

Its 3 a.m…….nupur entered the living room,as she expected may was awake…..sitting on floor looking at his palm aimlessly,nupur only knew how her heart cries seeing him in love,MAYBE….he may not believe her but she loves him and had always loved him….

nupur thought: Just tell me the reason, my dear heart,Why is it, we fell apart…..I went to the moon; u ran to the stars,What is the reason, we went so far…..Now that all things are, said & done,U called from...distance…..i turned but you got lost…

nupur let out a whisper "maynk" and stood beside him………she gathered all her courage.and said:

nupur:maynk,punish me,I cant see you in pain,
maynk(looked into her eyes,stood up and said sarcastically):oh!!yes nup then tell me what did you do,has it not hurted me????……..
nupur:punish me,maynk…….
maynk took hold of her hair harshly and said:you want to be punished,fine
He forcefully grabbed her arm and led to their bedroom……..threw her on bed…..ripped her sleeves…bit her lips so hard that it started bleeding..but when he looked into her eyes………again he remembered the moments they had spent together….he left her sat on bed and hid his face in his palm feeling guilty

maynk:I cant nupur,I cant……..getting raped by a husband is a worst thing a woman can suffer…….i tried a lot to hate you but still cant…I worshipped you,you were my god how could I abuse my god I wont be able to face myself,dia I'll hate myself…..but I'll punish you for betraying me….i'll take my child away from you and will give you the damn divorce……

nupur with tears said:how could you I am a mother….you took every relation from me atleast don't take my motherhood.
mayur(sarcastically):look whose talking about relations the person who never knew the importance of relation is teaching me about relation…..
nupur:please ,atleast think about dia for god's sake she's a kid what affect she'll have?
mayur:you never thought of dia even you too hid the fact about her father…and please don't tell me about taking care of dia…I want my baby because I love her you want dia because you are helpless and alone you have no one except dia….you don't love her you are just using her like me..you dont love her..you need her....thats it... you are not a WOMAN!!!!!!
nupur:chee…maynk you are insulting motherhood…….
maynk:motherhood my foot!!!
nupur:you have become heartless maynk In these five years….
maynk:correction nupur now I don't have heart I only have one girl in my life that's dia…..love gave me nothing except pain,deception….now I live for my daughter you know nupur I cant even hate you because you are unfortunately dia's mother..

nupur with moist eyes: .dont do this maynk..
maynk:you know why I am here!!!!!
nupur hugged her knees and said:don't do this….
maynk also bent down took hold of her shoulder and said:I have suffered a lot its pay back time..you took something which was precious to me more than my life…
maynk:you know what today I hate touching you,feeling your skin under me because you left me hollow from within…you left me hollow..he whispered again "hollow"
Mind it nupur I am touching you because of dia..

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he didn't know when he started hurting her….
nupur:you are killing me…maynk
maynk suddenly became gentle nupur was crying whole time how could he just treat her like this…
maynk saw nupur crying it hurted him his gaze fell upon the cut upon her lips which he gave her previously he suddenly sucked her dried blood ,he sucked her tears..nupur was stunned but then kept her hand on his cheeks and said:
nupur:old habits die hard like always you give pain and then heal it…
maynk also got tears and said:I have changed a lot….
nupur moaned and said:ah..yo..you haven't…..you still care for me
maynk then slid down beside her and stared at ceiling but then turned his back towards nupur,nupur felt hurt but then she also turned around…..
Sleep was far away from them…
maynk turned around saw her back,he again turned around and thought:why are we so close still too far…..why cant I take the time back…
nupur turned around ,saw his back and then again turning thought: ….MAYBE the time was not in our favour….

m thought:why did I love you……
nu thought:why did I left you….
my thought:why did you keep the truth…
nu thought:why you never gave me a reason to come back and tell the truth…..
may thought:why did you leave me….
nupur:why did you never stop me….

maynk and nupur thinking:why did we fall apart???why???

may(thinking): Never Thought That iLL Miss You This Much...Never Thought You'll Be Gone Forever.. but suudenly will come back to give me more pain.You Left So Many Things Behind And They'll Never Be compLeTed WithOut You ,But I will Always Love You Till The Death….i just wish I could hate you…why I love you this much that I find you in every woman in every moment.in every pulse.WHY????

nupur(thinking): True Love Never Dies,Its Alive In my Memories,my Thoughts, my Eyes, my Heart,And my Mind.Thinking Of You Always Puts a Smile On My Face,And You Are Lost In All Those Beautiful Memories we have Spent Together .. I will wait for you because I know that my love is true

Background a song was being played :
Tere bin,main yu kaise jiyan
Kaise jiyan tere bin..
Lekar yaade….

its awesome....👏

Again an emotional one.. today already it has been a very very emotional day.....

Hi aditi
u know what-my eyes become moist.
pain of mayur hurts me.
they love each other a lot, but??????
Oh adi its so touchy and emotional part.
loved it.
thanx 4 such a wonderful update.
Faria

Awesum yaar