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Posted: 16 years ago
really very touching part...😳😳
u explained the feeling of two ppl in a very good manner...how they define love..and how helpless they r...
very nice update...👏👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
Poor mayu and nups... please clear the misundersting as soon as possible.. i love u r FF... please continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago

Part-7

Both dia and mayu came inside,.dia was so tired….that she kissed mayu and went for taking a small nap……mayu was feeling thirsty he went inside the kitchen and saw nupur chopping the vegetables,….her eyes were red and puffy anyone could easily make out that she was crying…

mayu thought: Some feelings in life are unimaginably beautiful and unplanned yet they are conditioned with hurt and pain ....
Some people in life are so dear to yourself that u couldnt ever imagine to live widout 'em.....
sometimes you know that person u care and love wid all ur might ....would backfire and still u cant help urself loving that person ...becuase love is sumthin which comes from within and its either there or it isn't...theres so no other possiblity ...
somtimes u wana hate some one and u just cant....
sometimes where u stand in life is not the place where u ever wanted to be..... but....

mayu felt his heart sinking……he walked towards her,turned her around so she could face him…… they both looked into each others eyes…..he kissed her dried tears and launched her in his arms…….she willingly went in his arms……she was dying to feel this comfort and today when she got it she poured all her pain and started crying hysterically….mayu couldn't stand anymore he carried nupur in his arms and made his way towards his room

He layed down nups on bed…..nups closed her eyes……she felt may's hands unbuttoning her top….and pulling down her skirt…..she felt herself light(und********)…..after few minutes…..she felt his body on top of her…..she opened her teary eyes………her hands went on his back leaving nail-marks and moaned in pleasure.. and he turned her over him………

Later we see nups on mayu ….both wrapped in a black silk sheet they both were awake….nupur wiped away her tears……..she knew he did this because she was crying…….he always did this to comfort her………nupur smiled knowing till today he care for her………

Whereas mayu was cursing himself for going weak and caring for her……nupur suddenly looked into his eyes and did an unexpected thing….she kissed him…mayu was shocked not because of her kissing him but by himself responding to her kissing her back with same amount of passion….

They both started dressing up for checking dia……….mayu was still not knowing what he exactly wants……..

Once they went inside dia's room….they found her sleeping like an angel they both sat on the either sides of the bed……….suddenly nupur said:

mayu:she has your eyes…
mayu(absent minded):hm….but she has your angelic smile
nup blushed and said:she's like you a complete brat….
mayu:brat??????he looked towards her and said:I was never a brat!!!
nupi:sure you weren't……it was me playing pranks and all…(she said under breath)short-term memory loss
mayu:uh………please.
nup:but u know mayu when I was pregnant I always wanted our child to be like you…

nupur looked towards mayu and saw that expression which has always haunted her……tears were in his eyes………he remembered how nup kept him in dark about dia….and how badly dia needs a bone-marrow for her survival……..he left the room….tears automatically welled up in her eyes…she cursed herself….he was being so frank n open with her but again she reminded him about the truth of their daughter and her disloyalty but again she was never disloyal it was just that the ball was not in her court….

mayu sat on couch living room….acknowledging his life five years ago…..both confessing their love,making love,fighting like kids,playing,marrying,nupital night……..then her accident,her departure(at this point mayu was in tears)…then he remembered nupur coming and telling about dia…..(he was now furious,)he broke the glass kept on table

nupur heard the voice and came rushing…….she was stunned to see the sight before her…mayu's hand was literally bleeding and he was in tears….she immediately rushed towards him…..she took his hand to examine but mayu pulled away but even nup was also stubborn she reached out into his pocket and got hankerchief out,she wrapped it around his wound…mayu hissed in pain…….nup suddenly went inside the kitchen and brought milk with a pinch of turmeric ……..she kept it on table but he refused to have it……

nup:mayu,have it it will ease your pain..
mayu(looking plain):nup give me something to ease that pain which you gave me….
nup:______
mayu:cant ease the pain………right nup tell..
nupi:mayu plz have it ,we can talk about it afterwards……..

mayu got up and held nup's arm very harshly and asked….
mayu:why???????? we'll talk today……hmmm…..tell me nup what did I do wrong……I don't know nup whether I should be happy that my daughter is ill because due to her illness I came to know about her or whether I should be in grief that my daughter is ill and is in pain…for heavens sake.DAMMIT!!SHE'S MY DAUGHTER……..OUR DAUGHTER HOW COULD YOU DO THIS………

nup(slid down and hugged his knees):I am sorry………(started sobbing)please forgive me mayu…I never meant to.!!…..
mayu:sorry…..ohh yaaa but tell me nup truly if dia would not have been ill,you would have told me about her or not……tell
nup kept quite he was right she would have never told him….

mayu:you know what nup after you left me,I tried to move on……even started dating but whenever a girl tried to touch me or kiss me…your image came back flooding to me……… I couldn't cheat you nor could allow anyone to take your place…….but I was so wrong you actually cheated me……..nup after dia's operation i'll give you the dam* divorce and would file a case for the custody of dia and MY to-be born baby…….this time you'll pay

With that he left the room leaving a shocked nups,what did he just say????????CUSTODY…..how could he……she knows she has hidden the truth…..but she is a mother…how could he…….she will not let him take away her child…she knew he loves her but why love is so complicated…….why was there so differences ……….WHY?????????

in the background a song was being played
"zindagi mein koi kabhi aaye na rabba,
Aaye jo kabhi toh phir jaaye na rabba
Dene ho agar mujhe baad mein aansu,
To pehle koi hasaye na rabba"

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Posted: 16 years ago
it was so emotional.....and poor nupur...continue soon...
Edited by zummi03 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
OMG they still love each other ...that too madly...☺️.......oh no.....they fought again.😭..i thought they will patch up..😭....but i was wrong.....i hope they fall in love......awesome part yaar.........please update soon.pm me😳
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: AMMY LUVS RIDZ

OMG they still love each other ...that too madly...☺️.......oh no.....they fought again.😭..i thought they will patch up..😭....but i was wrong.....i hope they fall in love......awesome part yaar.........please update soon.pm me😳

sure i will pm you
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi Adi
again a nice update dear.
both mayu and nupur feel for each other.
but they dont show it.
good going .
keep it up
Thanx 4 ur PM
Faria
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Posted: 16 years ago
superbbbbbbbb rockin update dear once again..............bt endin thoda sad tha......plzzzzzz jald se jald make them fall in love again yaar(d way did durin first part of this update 2day...😳😳😳...)
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Posted: 16 years ago
loved it..

their pain was beautifully brought out.i can totally empathize with mayu he is not gona forgive nups easily. and his anger is totally justified..

waiting for the next one. :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
OMG! soooooooooooooo emotional, just loved it! i could feel mayur pain man! truly awesome!

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