ff-thoda thoda pyaar(mayur) updated part 23- Pg140

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Preethi

@preethis

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Posted: 16 years ago

#181

omg.. wonderful dear.. i loveed both the part....
part 5 mein flashback wala scenes....
part 6 mein i liked all wonderful.. waiting for next part...

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Rabbia

@Bewafa_Behan

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Posted: 16 years ago

#182

first ov all sorry 4 late reply...!! kinda buzy u know na...!!
n BIG HUG ma cranky 4 part...!!
have to say u r toatlyy dedicated to mayur... one shotz bhi n apni ff bhi... uf..!!
wow... lyked ur treat..!!
n luved the FB.. they quite emotional n cute...!!!
aur cant wait for next part now..!!

Edited by robinblue91 - 16 years ago

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GamesOfLife

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Posted: 16 years ago

#183

first of all sorry for late reply yaar i got 50 pms and i am just logging these day for an hr or so and reply on few posts😛.. bust these days so everyone FF r remaining

.yaar ur flashbacks r so cute ...mayu is romantic as well as caring and loving ..i loved reading both the chapter ...the guitar scene was sweet 😛

Edited by SanaSarwar - 16 years ago

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Bulbul

@Bul3

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Posted: 16 years ago

#184

sorry Madhvi I have read your FF but couldnt reply..now I will reply nicely in a while..and till then *reserved* 😊

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tehzeeb25

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Posted: 16 years ago

#185

awesome parts yaar

fabulasssssssssssssssss

thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx 4 d pm 🤗

update next part sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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Priya

@little_dragon

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Posted: 16 years ago

#186

wonderful madz... really sweet update.... they in bus.. mayu singing for nupz... aur toh aur some chance pei dance romance scenes...

haaaiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii mei margayi...

thank u so much for the PM.. wonderful.. waiting for the next part...

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Anthara

@Anthara

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Posted: 16 years ago

#187

hey very very nice dear... I loved it... Bohath cute tha

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XAiShBaBy08X

@XAiShBaBy08X

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Posted: 16 years ago

#188

hey! great story. plz add me to your pm list!

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Mithila

@Mithila_22

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Posted: 16 years ago

#189

haaayeeeee...................how lovely parts they were yaar..

truly awwesuuum..............

the dialouges were toooooooooooooo gooooood......

n i just loved this part....

Nupur: Kya hua mayank koi problem?

Mayank: Nahi '''..woh packing tumne ki hai kya?

Nupur: Kya?? tum itni raat ko ye puchne aaye ho?? Haan thodi maine aur thodi gunjan ne

Mayank: Matlab saara sensible stuff gunjan ne daala

Nupur: Haan toh?

Mayank thinks " what nonsense mujhe toh ilu kehna tha aur main yeh''"

so confession on its way.........waiting for it now.....loved the parts..soooooo beautiful...update soon...

Edited by taniyamiths - 16 years ago

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Vaishnavi

@-ialwayswill-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#190

hey Madhvi
first of all i am sorry !!
sorry for not reading........actually u know..i was busy with studies......reading all FF updates one by one now......also was out of stataion for 2 weeks sooooooo

Well i start iwth my comments..............read 1st n commenetd already sooo starting with ....

Part - 2

That was a very cute part !!👏
loved it!!
Thank god mayank asked gunjan or else she'd havbe trouble lolzz
well i know mayur cant stay without each other !!
cute part !!😍

Part - 3

PRoject shopping !!

And u still having shee.....naa........

FLashback in b/w are grt to read along !!

aww......pehli dost aunty........sho cute..............n mayu sooo jealous i say !!🤪
Well its was yet another beautiful PArt !!👏
great work madhvi !!👏
thanx for d PM !!😳

PArt - 4

Must say.....U have a very fluent style of writing !!👏
lolzzzzz...........dialogues r just asome yaar👏
u r jus like me...i feel......😳

maha upset lolzz😆
gadha kahika..........god i am falling off my seats.......lolzz😆

mayank is soooooo buddhu yaar relli !!😆

Aww.........gr8 flashback👏...mayu ab toh samaj jaao......

Princi..........pagal...hadda kahika !!😡

mayank ne nupur ke taaaaaareeeeeef ki..........kya plan hai..wah wah !!👍🏼

itna sab kuch main bataon aur tum......lolzzzzzz😆

hmm..........trip ke baad nothing similar.......lets see😉

Avery cute n interesting part !!👏

PArt - 5

strange..........mayu dint react on her word....share karne se pyaar badta hai !!😲
well maybe he hasd some plans!!😉

god.............nupur is speaking bindassly abt love n all😲...........she think both know abt their love???

hey wat song did mayu sing in truth dare game ??😃

huh? mayu sadoo even in aunty's that haalat....great !!😆

i knew there wud be catch or a fall !!lolzzzz😉

finally god !!
she actauuly had an hint but now sure........so cute !!😍
gr8 part
loved it
cool work !!👏

PArt - 6

god that was an amazing part !!👏

i am soooooo happy he realised

Madhvi plzzzzzzz make the next part rocking.....maybe teheri izhaar...........awwwwww
cant wait !!😍

Great flashbacks !!
its jus soooo gud .....to read along !!👏

plzz update soon n pm me !!😛
will read as n when possible😊

Sorry for sooooooo long comment😊

But i want a reply.......i am obseesed of replies !!lolzzzz😆

AND I THINK I GOT UR MISSING CONFIDENCE................its already with you dear !!

luv ya😳
take care
🤗vaishu !!🤗

Edited by vaish04 - 16 years ago

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