ff-thoda thoda pyaar(mayur) updated part 23- Pg140 - Page 21

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Posted: 16 years ago
Reply for part 6:-
Ye Mayu bhi na, kehna kya hai aur keh kya raha hai?
Kitne care karta hai Mayu Noops ki n Noops trusts him the most. He is happy to know that. I like the way Noops always tells him that she trusts him so much.
Finally Mayu thought to tell her his feelings, vow g8.
amazing continue asap.

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: mdkr


Hey vaishu thnx for liking my work and ill always pm you😃 - no probs !!
I really appreciate that u went through so many parts together
- actually i am getting a bit free time these dayz so utilizing it lolzzzz
aur yek kya itna sa reply😭.................

vaishu😳

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Posted: 16 years ago

Hey vaishu yaar tune reply kaha tha pehle kehti ki letter chahti hai😛
Chal better late then never thnx for finding my confidence yaar mujhe uski zarurat hai
Good yaar its really gud to be free ...............i like being free of work atleast

ab are u happy vaishu😳🤗
🤗
Edited by mdkr - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Hey guys part 7, I tried hard to keep up to ur expectation. Guys im dangerously bad with romantic scenes, i can write cute and funny things only 😆. Now i can write a dodo cj ff better that way😛. But if u like the thoda bahut romance in my thoda thoda pyaar, plz press the like button😛😆.

Also this part i hv written in a different style, all the red parts are Mayank dialogues (coz Nupur's fav colour is red😆) And green parts are Nupur dialogues (White dikhta nahi aur i want greener earth too🤣) Everything else is blue coz it only has present part this time. Well this change is temporary if ull dont like it ill go back to my original style😛. Chalo read now i hope u enjoy.


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Part 7: Kahi unkahi

Nupur tum itni chup chap rahogi toh mera indigestion badh jayega

Kyu mayank?

Nupur pehle yaha ka kahana aur ab tumhara chup rehna.........u kno its too much too handle

Nupur is smiling

Isiliye main keh rahi thi ki morena waale vaidji ka churan kha lo..............Pata hai Morena waale vaidji ka churan, chamanprash, kadha sab bahut asardar hai....

Honge par maine ma ki di dawai kha li hai.......toh aur kuch nahi

Toh thik hai.......Pata hai Mayank ki maa ki di koi cheez kharab nahi ho sakti ....

hmmm woh toh hai

Nupur is silent again thinking of her mother

Chalo toh main hi topic shuru karta hu

Arre!!!! mere hote hue tum aisa kaise kar sakte ho.

Mahutarma Nupur Bhushan main apni is gustakhi ke liye shamma prarthi hu (filmy)


Chalomaine tumhe maaf kiya (all the more filmy)

Pata hai Mayank Gunjan hoti toh...........

Tum gunjan ko bahut miss kar rahi ho?? Bahut pyaar karti ho usse......nai?

Hmmm haan ussi mein toh meri jaan basti hai (smiles)

Lekin Nupur tum dono behene bhi ajuba ho ...........ek jo din mein 2-3 line bolti hai ...........aur dusri jo din mein 2-3 min chup rehti hai.......................ye chamatkar bhushan khaandan mein kaise???

Mayank is feeling stupid coz he saying everything except what he wants to say but nupur continues

Pehle aisa nahi tha Mayank...........Pehle Gunjan bhi kaafi baatein karti thi ...................par ma ke baad woh aisi chup chap ho gayi

usne apni dil ki baat dil mein rakhna shuru kar diya

aur tum??


Maine uski dil ki baat jaane ke liye bahut saari baate karna shuru kar diya.........kya pata koi baat sunke woh hi mujhe apni dil ki baat bata de

hum dono ek dusre ke liye ma, behen, best friend sab baane.............actually koi aur option hi nahi tha banna pada

Mere hamesha se bahut se dost the ....par ache dost nahi the.........aur Gunjan ke toh dost hi nahi the..........ek ya do ko 'hi' bolna bas utna hi bahut tha uske liye (she now becomes emotional)

uski zindagi mein pyaar aaya aur woh bhi Samrat jaisa main bahut khush hu

She becomes emotional and pauses for a while

Par chodo main in sab baato se tumhe bor kar rahi ho...........tum apni batao tumhare kitne dost the??.....................the bhi ki nahi??

Nahi Nupur tumhari baato se bor hona .........ye toh mere bas mein hi nahi.......tumhari baate toh har haal mein sirf achi hi lagti hai

Nupur smiles

Mayank tum mere sawaal ko nazar andaaz kar rahe ho ya jaaab dena nahi chahte

Arre nahi Nupur, meri kya majal jo main aisa karu

The aur nahi bhi

kya??

Bas itne hi dost the ki jab main absent hu toh woh mujhe notes de

Nupur starts giggling at this

Phir??

Phir kya college ke first day Samrat se mila...........woh toh jabardasti hi mera dost bana.........you know how he is.....

Haan i know both of u now........(giggles).....Aur cj bhi notes waali dost hogi

hmmm yes and no ............shayad woh meri hi tarah thi isiliye meri dost baani..........i mean padhai oriented

Aisa kyu hai Mayank ki tum dost banana pasand nahi karte??

Shayad issiliye ki Dad ki death ke baad mom really looked after me...........i never really missed a father........actually she never let me

Issiliye mom ka best son hone ke liye main........

Tum har chiz mein best hue.........har us cheez mein jo aunty chahti thi.......jaise padhai

dancing

singing

Nupur tum mujhe kuch jyada hi achi tarah jaanti ho

woh toh hai......... par tumhe aur dost banane chahiye.............

Shayad ab mujhe zarurat nahi...........tum jo ho......Tumhe mere baare mein ye sab pata kaise chala????

Aagar aapko yaad ho toh hum best friends hai

Par tumne abhi toh kaha ki tumhare ache dost nahi the

Arre...........

So do u mean im an exception

Mayank continued

ya aaj tumne thoda zyada senti hoke mujhse woh sab kaha

Arre ofcourse u are.........tumhe doubt hai kya??

Abhi jo maine ye sab tumhare saamne kaha na woh toh main Gunjan ke samne bhi nahi kehti...... akele bhi nahi.....

tumhare samne i feel more comfortable and dont really watch for my words.........i trust u

Oho Nupur kya line maari hai........ (smiling naughtily)

Main bhi Nupur........i guess ye six months mein we hv come to know each other really well

Nupur stops and looks towards Mayank

Tabhi toh main tumhare dil ki baat samajh jaati hu........Kuch bhi jo tum feel karte ho mujhe jhaat se pata lag jata hai........

Tumhe pata lagne se bhi pehle

Nupur kya tum sachme mere dil ki baat samajh jaati ho? (seriously.........looking into her eyes) Kya tumhe saach mein pata lag jata hai??

Haan Mayank tum aisa kyu puch rahe ho?? Tum saaf saaf kyu nahi kehte (Nupur doesnot get it)

Nupur main toh zyadatar kuch saaf saaf nahin keh pata ...........par tum toh har bar samajh jaati ho na

phir ab kyu nahi

both of them were pretty amazed, Mayank at himself and Nupur at him too

Ab kya Mayank?? Kuch kehna hai??? Kuch hua hai?? Mayank sab kuch thik toh hai na?? Kuch serious toh nahi hai na

Nupur was half tearful.......she looked at Mayank..........she looked into his eyes

Nupur kind of half understood what he had to say.........but something in her mind blocked her from understanding him

Mayank takes Nupurs hand keeps it on his chest .....some where near his heart....

Kya ab tumhe kuch samjh aa raha hai.....


Looking at her rather romantically

Nupur is overwhelmed by this gesture of his ...............

She totally understood him or what he wanted to say..........Did she?? Or its her heart which was convincing her to believe that which Mayank dint wanna say

All the opposition of her mind is not able to convince her heart.........her heart......which he rules...........its his kingdom......

it just knows........somehow......it just knows.....

Mayank is also surprized at himself..........but he keeps on looking into Nupur eyes with hope love and passion

Nupur is staring at his affection or she is staring at him in disbelief.......even she dint know

She was overwhelmed enough by this action of his, but the realization of wat he wanted to say has overwhelmed her more

There was a slight smile on her face..........but they continued to look into each others eyes

The smile on Nupur's face convinced Mayank that his message has been recieved and accepted

but...

Mayank wanted to be sure

Kya tum samajh rahi ho Nupur??

Mayank kuch baato ko kehna jaruri hota hai.......

she wants those three words now that she knows that he is aware of his love for her

Haan janta hu ...........aur shayad unhi kuch baato ko samjhna and feel karna, kehne se zyada zaruri hota hai

What ever he said was so true..........nupur knew that.....but she dint wanna force him

Nupur was blushing and wanting to escape from his gaze...........She turned around.........now her back was towards Mayank

Kya tum samjhi Nupur??

Haan😃

While walking back Nupur was walking infront of Mayank................Mayank was constantly looking at Nupur. He was glad he said something

Although Nupur wasnt looking at Mayank, she could still feel his gaze, 'his' gaze..........it made her blush

Both felt their heart skip a beat and then beat with double the speed................

This feeling was new...........and this newly discovered feeling was giving them a feeling of some sort of happiness or completeness

They both smiled it wasnt the usual one it was a blushing kind of a smile.

Suddenly Nupur slipped..........Mayank supported her by holding her hand.........When Nupur

balanced herself she wanted to leave his hand

But Mayank had other plans, he dint leave Nupur's hand, infact he held it very tightly and pulled Nupur towards him

Nupur was blushing............Mayank's lingering gaze made her blush harder

She was turning red.........redder than anything Mayank had seen

She tried to look away in order to avoid his eyes.........but wat all could she avoid............she couldnt avoid Mayank's hand holding hers..............she couldnt avoid Mayank's shoulder brushing hers... She couldnt avoid her new feelings that Mayank invoked in her........ and most of all she couldnt avoid blushing.........

When they reached the room Nupur stopped at the door

Mayank kya hum ab bhi best friends hai

Shayad usse jyada Nupur

Nupur entered the room and closed the door. Both of them knew that destiny had decided not to bless them with sleep tonight but they were happy that atleast it had blessed them with each others thoughts which kept them busy all night. Nupur wondering at her luck just when she was bout to loose hope, Mayank indirectly confessed his feelings for her.

Mayank was wondering at himself.........how did he manage those kinda things.........he thot he was badly influenced by the movies he saw with his mom.............but then he also realized he was badly influenced by Nupur too.

Well i had to be .................ofcourse i had to be influenced by her coz i love her.................i love Nupur

This is the first time he confessed this to himself and he was sure he will confess this to Nupur as well.......

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Hope u liked it plz comment😃and read my thank you note too at Pg 27😃

Love

Madhvi

Edited by mdkr - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Origin of this scene
Hey guys this scene is based on a dream i saw while on the plane😆
And the dream broke abruptly coz the the caption had to inform us bout the weather conditions and the easterly winds outside😆 btw the outside temp was -41 c then😆
Its also inspired by Dil bole hadippa song and do dil ek jaan.😳
Infact this do dil ek jaan was playing in the bg of my dream.............try imagining guys ull like it more😆
Hope u liked my inspiration also😆
Love
Madhvi
*Na kar jyada gol mol
teri khul jaani pol
yeh dil ka dhol hadippa*

Edited by mdkr - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: mdkr

Hey vaishu yaar tune reply kaha tha pehle kehti ki letter chahti hai😛
Chal better late then never thnx for finding my confidence yaar mujhe uski zarurat hai
Good yaar its really gud to be free ...............i like being free of work atleast

ab are u happy vaishu😳🤗

🤗

lolzz..............i am always free n open wid ppl😳............spcialy when u comment its relli nescessary to be honest😊 coz then u'll come to know if u r weak at any place n u can correct it na !!😉n when i need bada reply i need it .............so isme hesitate kya karna ?😳
yaaaa def happy.........!!
take care madhavi!!
vaishu

Ohh..........u..RESERVED.....acha?? hmm update coming hopefully !!😃



Edited by vaish04 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi
Update was cool
Tune thoda romantic kiya
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey nice part yaar....... plzz continue wid ur latest style.......i luved it..... thanks4 d pm dear.........
Posted: 16 years ago
like the new style madz
awesome part
n the name fits perfectly
kahi unkahi
anyways continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago

So happy that they atleast confessed in silence.....love it!

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