ff-thoda thoda pyaar(mayur) updated part 23- Pg140 - Page 20

Originally posted by: ~*mishu*~

dangerously great parts madz😉
the FBs were awesome
loved mayur
nupur n mayank both care for each other so much
n the confession is on its way!!
can't wait
continue soon

Originally posted by: nikki028

awesomeeeeeee n superb n rockin updates,...............thnxxxxxxxxx a ton for this 'double bonaza'........ 🤗 🤗 ......plzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzz continue soon......n plzzz ab toh mayank se ilu bulwa dena durin the walk....plzz..... 😳 😳

madhvi........main firse teri pm list mein nahi hun...... 😭

soo plzz add me also.......

Originally posted by: hgrhr

great updates yaar!! Loved reading two longg parts!!

The bus conversations were so cute, nupur ki finget cut wali wish finally poori ho gayi..!! Ek hi plate mein khana...., the flashbacks with Mayu's mom and when she was in the hospital..how I wish all this happened in the show as well..!!

Nupur trusted mayank so much to take a bath without any tension but Mayank checked all the doors and windows twice...!! LOL...!!😆😆

Mayanks' about to confess..!! i hope he does....

can't wait for the next part.....continue soon!!

Originally posted by: AMMY LUVS RIDZ

OMG awesome flashbacks and part.........mayu is soo carrying..........please update soon.pm me😳

Originally posted by: Shafoo

hey i love your parts 5 and 6 there amazing

Originally posted by: ranbir_lekha

awesome

Originally posted by: mjhtnupurmayank

very nice update.....thnxx 4 the pm....

Originally posted by: -Rajveer-

awesome! good job.. claps!!

Originally posted by: Sunny-Malik

woww awsome part..plzz continue dear

Originally posted by: gurmeetrocks

haye so sweet n cute
MM rocks keep posting these gud ones

Originally posted by: sanju_veni

both the 5th n the 6th part were amazing great update n thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: cutie_nikki

wow beautiful part. loved it! Add me to the PM list.

Originally posted by: raj-guria-kriti

wowwwwwwwwwwwww yaar. very nicely written........ awesome..😉....... veryyyyyyyy nice.......... loved it....... thanxxxxxxxxxx. thoda thoda pyarr is just wonderful..........👏 😉

Originally posted by: gr8_mms

aik dum zabardast part tha madhvi ..next part abhi bohat bohat zada jaldi post karna coz abhi mujh se wait nahi ho raha hehehe

Originally posted by: AFSHA18

Tujhe kyu nahi pasand aaye Madhvi

Both are superb

Update next part soon

Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti

OMG madz! fab update! just loved it! truly awesome! keep it up and plz update the next part soon! i cnt wait till mayu says ilu!

Originally posted by: preksha07

omg omg omg....i have just read all the parts nthey r just outstanding....its really a nice ff......i must say how can i just missed such a ff......its just awesome......cont. soon..........keep it up.....add me to ur pm list.......

luv yaa...............

Originally posted by: preethis

omg.. wonderful dear.. i loveed both the part....
part 5 mein flashback wala scenes....
part 6 mein i liked all wonderful.. waiting for next part...

Originally posted by: muneefah

luvely update

Originally posted by: robinblue91

first ov all sorry 4 late reply...!! kinda buzy u know na...!!
n BIG HUG ma cranky 4 part...!!
have to say u r toatlyy dedicated to mayur... one shotz bhi n apni ff bhi... uf..!!
wow... lyked ur treat..!!
n luved the FB.. they quite emotional n cute...!!!
aur cant wait for next part now..!!

Originally posted by: SanaSarwar

first of all sorry for late reply yaar i got 50 pms and i am just logging these day for an hr or so and reply on few posts😛.. bust these days so everyone FF r remaining

.yaar ur flashbacks r so cute ...mayu is romantic as well as caring and loving ..i loved reading both the chapter ...the guitar scene was sweet 😛

Originally posted by: Bul3

sorry Madhvi I have read your FF but couldnt reply..now I will reply nicely in a while..and till then *reserved* 😊

Originally posted by: little_dragon

wonderful madz... really sweet update.... they in bus.. mayu singing for nupz... aur toh aur some chance pei dance romance scenes...

haaaiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii mei margayi...

thank u so much for the PM.. wonderful.. waiting for the next part...

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

I just read the part 5 n it was really cool. Kuch kuch ho raha hai ab, chahe dono samajhe na samjhe.
Mayu to samajhna hi nahi chahta hai but Noops hain na vo to samjha k hi rahegi ki yahi pyaar hai. Mayu has started praising her that's good. Noops supported Mayu when his mom was in pain that's y he started liking her, so cute.
Flash back was cool n i loved the way Mayu saved Noops from falling n sucked her finger.

Originally posted by: XAiShBaBy08X

hey! great story. plz add me to your pm list!

Originally posted by: taniyamiths

haaayeeeee...................how lovely parts they were yaar..

truly awwesuuum..............

the dialouges were toooooooooooooo gooooood......

n i just loved this part....

Nupur: Kya hua mayank koi problem?

Mayank: Nahi '''..woh packing tumne ki hai kya?

Nupur: Kya?? tum itni raat ko ye puchne aaye ho?? Haan thodi maine aur thodi gunjan ne

Mayank: Matlab saara sensible stuff gunjan ne daala

Nupur: Haan toh?

Mayank thinks " what nonsense mujhe toh ilu kehna tha aur main yeh''"

so confession on its way.........waiting for it now.....loved the parts..soooooo beautiful...update soon...

Originally posted by: zummi03

both the parts wer very good,awesome continue soon...

Originally posted by: mayank-nupurfan

oh dear gr8 update yaar...... finally dey luv each other......bas confession bacha hai........ plzz continue soon....thanks 4 d pm dear.....

Originally posted by: -Neelam-

Awesome part! Plzz continue soon!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: naina.s

hey madhavi it was too good

Originally posted by: Bushra Javeria

@ madhvi...gr8 work yar

Originally posted by: _priya_

OMG awesome work dear....Both parts are great and please update soon.pm me😳

LUV priya

Originally posted by: abs_insane

hey really good man....

Flash backs have always played a good part in mayur realisation!!!!

keep up the good job... luv u all...

Originally posted by: luckystar007

great yaar i like it.

Originally posted by: tehzeeb25

awesome parts yaar

fabulasssssssssssssssss

thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx 4 d pm 🤗

update next part sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Originally posted by: anthara_mjht

hey very very nice dear... I loved it... Bohath cute tha

Originally posted by: vaish04

hey Madhvi
first of all i am sorry !!
sorry for not reading........actually u know..i was busy with studies......reading all FF updates one by one now......also was out of stataion for 2 weeks sooooooo

Well i start iwth my comments..............read 1st n commenetd already sooo starting with ....

Part - 2

That was a very cute part !!👏
loved it!!
Thank god mayank asked gunjan or else she'd havbe trouble lolzz
well i know mayur cant stay without each other !!
cute part !!😍

Part - 3

PRoject shopping !!

And u still having shee.....naa........

FLashback in b/w are grt to read along !!

aww......pehli dost aunty........sho cute..............n mayu sooo jealous i say !!🤪
Well its was yet another beautiful PArt !!👏
great work madhvi !!👏
thanx for d PM !!😳

PArt - 4

Must say.....U have a very fluent style of writing !!👏
lolzzzzz...........dialogues r just asome yaar👏
u r jus like me...i feel......😳

maha upset lolzz😆
gadha kahika..........god i am falling off my seats.......lolzz😆

mayank is soooooo buddhu yaar relli !!😆

Aww.........gr8 flashback👏...mayu ab toh samaj jaao......

Princi..........pagal...hadda kahika !!😡

mayank ne nupur ke taaaaaareeeeeef ki..........kya plan hai..wah wah !!👍🏼

itna sab kuch main bataon aur tum......lolzzzzzz😆

hmm..........trip ke baad nothing similar.......lets see😉

Avery cute n interesting part !!👏

PArt - 5

strange..........mayu dint react on her word....share karne se pyaar badta hai !!😲
well maybe he hasd some plans!!😉

god.............nupur is speaking bindassly abt love n all😲...........she think both know abt their love???

hey wat song did mayu sing in truth dare game ??😃

huh? mayu sadoo even in aunty's that haalat....great !!😆

i knew there wud be catch or a fall !!lolzzzz😉

finally god !!
she actauuly had an hint but now sure........so cute !!😍
gr8 part
loved it
cool work !!👏

PArt - 6

god that was an amazing part !!👏

i am soooooo happy he realised

Madhvi plzzzzzzz make the next part rocking.....maybe teheri izhaar...........awwwwww
cant wait !!😍

Great flashbacks !!
its jus soooo gud .....to read along !!👏

plzz update soon n pm me !!😛
will read as n when possible😊

Sorry for sooooooo long comment😊

But i want a reply.......i am obseesed of replies !!lolzzzz😆

AND I THINK I GOT UR MISSING CONFIDENCE................its already with you dear !!



luv ya😳
take care
🤗vaishu !!🤗

Originally posted by: ch0c0lates

Both parts are great....confession on its way?

Originally posted by: myownarea

Madhvi

Absolutely cool parts both...they have this constant thot going on in their minds while they say something else, i just love that..so hopig for a confession in the walk... 😃

DIvya

Originally posted by: parisbynight

waouh
it was worth the wait!
confession while on a walk!!thts brilliant!

Originally posted by: Nishithini

hi madhvi!!!!!

both the parts are awesome. so, confession is gonna happen soon? I am waiting eagerly for the next part. plz continue soon.

Originally posted by: sweetgalFats

Hey Madhvi! very nice update! They r sooo cute! Hope Mayu vl say ILU in the next part! Thanx for the pm!