ff-thoda thoda pyaar(mayur) updated part 23- Pg140

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unknowndesires.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#171

Awesome part! Plzz continue soon!!!!!!!

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afsha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#172

Tujhe kyu nahi pasand aaye Madhvi

Both are superb

Update next part soon

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naina.s

@naina.s

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Posted: 16 years ago

#173

hey madhavi it was too good

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399703

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Posted: 16 years ago

#174

OMG madz! fab update! just loved it! truly awesome! keep it up and plz update the next part soon! i cnt wait till mayu says ilu!

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 16 years ago

#175

Third part was really cool.
Mayu aur un ki chinta Noops ko le k , hieeeeeeeee mai sadke jaawan. Aakhir raha nahi gaya na us se to seedhe aa hi gaya us se milne aur aise dekhbhaal kar raha tha us ki jaise Gunjan bhi nahi kar paati hogi. Noops ka plan to sucessful ho hi gaya hai aur ab jaldi hi poora ho jaayega. FB was so cute.

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 16 years ago

#176

Good update the fourth part.
Sahi hai, Noops ko gussa aana obvious tha hi ki Mayu us se milne aaya aur ye dono itne jaldi nikal aaye.Sammy ne bhi bahut acche tarah se Mayu ko samjha diya ki pyaar kaise feel kiya jaata hai. Mayu ki mom bhi samaj rahi hain haan bus Mayu hi sab se jyada confuse n buddhu hai. Ab dekhte hain ki trip par kya dhamaal karte hain dono mil k.

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Fathima Fernandez

@sweetgalFats

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#177

Hey Madhvi! very nice update! They r sooo cute! Hope Mayu vl say ILU in the next part! Thanx for the pm!

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preksha07

@preksha07

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Posted: 16 years ago

#178

omg omg omg....i have just read all the parts nthey r just outstanding....its really a nice ff......i must say how can i just missed such a ff......its just awesome......cont. soon..........keep it up.....add me to ur pm list.......

luv yaa...............