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amazingneira

@amazingneira

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#701

well.. i like it a lot specially skating part.. it was fun.. nice one really..

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Annie

@annie07

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Posted: 15 years ago

#702

a very sweet part sonia..............i loved that mayank lied to her, and she caught it............so cute.............plz update soon............this is getting interesting

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Roma

@romiebee2002

Stunner

Posted: 15 years ago

#703

Hey Sonia Great Part😃

Finally the progress can be seen I really liked the Dia & Mayank part especially her questioning😆

& the last part was cute especially

"Mayank.. What the hell are you doing, this isn't a dream, you're not going to wake up and be 'wow that was a great dream' don't make a fool of yourself" his mind spoke to him, as he finally realised what he was doing he backed away"

😃

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shamil

@shamil

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+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#704

sonia, u r doing a fabulous job.👏 its 100 times bettr than the crap I have almost stopped watching

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nupurvj23

@nupurvj23

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+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#705

gr8 update!😊
keep it up! 👍🏼
plz pm me the next time..
thnks...😃

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I-love-dmg

@I-love-dmg

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#706

Hiya Sonia!!!!

You remembered me yaar.... im happyy now!!!! 😉
this update was good....
i felt sooo bad for mayank dat he was the only one who didn't kno.... 😕
and now dia is gona try and get dem together.... im looking fwd to that!!! its gona be awesomeee 😊
i gotta say i loved how dia jus went out and sed it straight wivout being tactful.... i feel deres some sexual tension!!! 😆 lol!!!!
nywayss awesome updateeee
love loadss
xxxxx

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debby

@debby

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#707

Proofreading errors arent that glaring when the story's so interesting. So rest assured. :D

Dia is the star of this chapter! Right from "I am a psychiatrist" to lecturing Mayank on sexual tension, she stole the show completely. Mayank is so smitten with Nupur though and she with him. Slips of the tongue dont happen just like that Nupur.

Coming to the Christmas ritual. Wonderful ritual this! Mayank's little 'good dream' turned into reality and snapping just in time.. ouch! The 'shall we?' at the end caught me offguard for a moment. =)

I felt romance all over the chapter and it was very.. warm... reading it.
Really lovely!!

I almost forgot, I loved that discussion on resistance. =) What a wonderful way to label and explain every emotion. I'm excited abt what's coming up, hopefully all things bright and beautiful to go with the Christmas spirit. Continue soon..!

Edited by debby - 15 years ago

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prerna_agrawal

@prerna_agrawal

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#708

Hey dear....it was a fabulous part.....both progressing hmmm.....nice....and she almost blurted out that she loved him!!! but loved how she tried to cover it up!!......and the almost kiss scene....i was like y did he back out????..........anyways.....awesome update!! can't wait to read the next part......plzz update soon!! n thanx for the pm!!

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Senny

@Senny

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Posted: 15 years ago

#709

hey sonia wow man, awesome update,

You make MN sooooooooo adorable, i just want to run and give you a big hug. i lovee the way you out in all characters and make them interact, it is all soooooooo well written.

In the last MN parts i was blushinggggggg so hard man, awwwwww mayank it wasn't a dream and hayeeeeeee nups is a doll, even i don;t know to skate so cheers hehe.

Amazing work sonia, continue soon.

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Nikki

@dmgmjht4ever

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#710

Hi I'm Nikki and I just stArted reading your ff. I love it so much it's very interesting and fun to read. It took me a while though to read all of the parts but I really like this fan fiction please add me to your pm list I'm on my iPod touch right now and this is tAking me a while to types this up but you deserve it have many lovers of your fan fiction cause you're story has an amazing concept wonderful title awesome dialouge fantastic plot fascinating twists and turns and if I go on and on about your fan fiction I won't be able to finish my homework sorry about that but I need to pAy attention to my studies anyways hope to hear from you soon