MayUr FF _A Brilliant Tragedy|Part 18\Page118|NEW

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Asm

@Angel-A

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#711

awesome... atlast u updated.. was waiting for it long tym..:):)

wow u updated on a sunday das y it was abit long.. but im enjoying reading it..

wow maynk was gng to kiss her.. n she blurted she loves him... liking da ff so much...

soni do cont soon wil b waiting..

Quote

roshni_light

@roshni_light

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#712

Hey! I'm sorry for the late reply because I had my exams.......I must say it was a beautiful part.......and sooooo cute.

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Sonia

@Bollywood_chic

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#713

Originally posted by: adi_gupta
nice part
maynk feeling for her is very lovely

and beautifully written

thx for pm

naww thanks, im glad u liked it.

xSonia

Quote

Sonia

@Bollywood_chic

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#714

Originally posted by: nikki028
soni.........🤗🤗🤗..........awesome update dear..........its sooo sooo gud to c d mayur moments.....😳😳😳........naww Nikki, i know.. we hardly get them on TV and for my FF if i have any.. there are kinda boring...lol...tht almost kiss scene ws my fav......i lovd diaaaaaa in this update.......absolutely i go wid her......dono ko pyar hai bt dono wohi baat deny karte hai......😆yeh i know. Dia was the star of the show. 😃😉..........by god pata nahi yeh log kab tak yeh denial game khelte rahenge?????????????

by god soni maine pichle hi update mein poochi thi ki mayu ko nupsi ka sapna kab aayega......n in this upd8 when i gt to knw mayu ko toh 9 mahine se sirf nupsi ke hi sapne aa rahe hai....i ws lik...😲😲😲....then..lik this...😳..........thnxxx a special ton for tht info....naww im glad u were happy and so true about the 9 month thing. 😛

nywz plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soooooooon dear.........really really lookin 4wd 4ur next update......😳😳thanks for the comment hunny 😳

Quote

Sonia

@Bollywood_chic

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#715

Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti
hey huni

well, loved this part to cores!

breautifully described mayur longing, loved that part

Dia-mayur, really sweet, enjoyed that!

ovarall, awesome update loved it!

Heyy! I'm really glad u liked it and yeh Dia was the star of the show.. but i liked Dia-M scene too.. loving them as friends on the show too..

thanks for ur comment.

Quote

Sonia

@Bollywood_chic

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#716

Originally posted by: -Dreamy_Girl-

Awesome update Sonia.......

This part is really sweet and cute......

I really like it............

Keep it up buddy..... And continue soon.....

Hey!

Thanks so much, i'll be updating today..

Originally posted by: bharathi aram
loved it~~~to te core!

naww thanks
😳

Originally posted by: tehzeeb25
awwwwwwesome prt
thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxx 4 d pm

Thank you and no problem
😃

Originally posted by: -afsha-
Loved it
They are getting comfortable but why dose Nups get Nervous

Why both are still not confident of their feeling

Loved the way Diya is behind them to Patch up

Loved it

Heyy Afsha, both are scared of what the other feels.. i guess its like the old cliche

hahaha..

and yehh Dia is the best part haha

Originally posted by: _Monu_
HEY SONIA ...JUST READ THE PARTS 13-14 REALLY AWESOME!!....
I REALLY LOVED IT!!

DIA IS GREAT...SOOO COOOL!!

AL THE END THEY WERE TO KISS...

BUT HE STAY BACK

AND NOW NUPS IS CONFUSED!!..LOL!!

CANT WAIT 4 NEXT PART!

I THINK WILL A PROMANTIC PART!..

OR I HOPE SO!!

GREAT PART SONIA!!

U ROCK!!
SEE U SOON!!

LOVE UUUU!!!

Heyy Mona!!

Nupz is confused coz she was ready for M to kiss her.. but then she got caught in the moment too.

next part is coming soon.. dw

thanks for the comment.

Quote

Sonia

@Bollywood_chic

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#717

Originally posted by: t-mayur-sajan-j
really nice part

Thanks 😳

Originally posted by: ~*mishu*~
awesome updt!!!
loved the dia part!! she is soo true!
both of them r denying their feelings!
n the almost kiss was very cute
everything was jst wonderful
continue soon

Heyy Mishu
:)

I'm glad u liked it, and everyone loved Dia in this part so im ecstatic.
everything is going to get better too..

thanks for the comment..

Originally posted by: fariaa70

Hi Sonia,

Brilliant part dear.

Loved it so much.

Mayur feel 4 each other but could not admit.

Wish they acknowledge their feelings.

Good job dear.

Keep it up

Heyy!!

I'm really happy you liked it, thats the main thing, that the readers like it.. haha

MN will "confess" soon
:)

thanks for the comment.

Originally posted by: rkmnkp
Oh my god
Sonia di

this part was fablous

I love the way Mayank feels for her

its so cute

Heyy Lina
:D

glad u liked M.. im trying to make it different
:)

thanks for the comment..

Quote

Sonia

@Bollywood_chic

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#718

Originally posted by: aati1429
well.. i like it a lot specially skating part.. it was fun.. nice one really..

Thanks

(: There's more skating in the next part

😆😃

Originally posted by: annie07
a very sweet part sonia..............i loved that mayank lied to her, and she caught it............so cute.............plz update soon............this is getting interesting

Heyy annie, glad u liked it... my next update is soon dw.. and u shall see what happens btwn MN then
:D

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur
grt update!
continue soon.....

Thanks and will do soon 😃

Quote

Sonia

@Bollywood_chic

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#719

Originally posted by: romiebee2002

Hey Sonia Great Part😃

Finally the progress can be seen I really liked the Dia & Mayank part especially her questioning😆

& the last part was cute especially

"Mayank.. What the hell are you doing, this isn't a dream, you're not going to wake up and be 'wow that was a great dream' don't make a fool of yourself" his mind spoke to him, as he finally realised what he was doing he backed away"

😃