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Nikhila Chandran S.S.

@Nikki_Titli

Elite

+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

#691

soni.........🤗🤗🤗..........awesome update dear..........its sooo sooo gud to c d mayur moments.....😳😳😳...........tht almost kiss scene ws my fav......i lovd diaaaaaa in this update.......absolutely i go wid her......dono ko pyar hai bt dono wohi baat deny karte hai......😆😉..........by god pata nahi yeh log kab tak yeh denial game khelte rahenge?????????????

by god soni maine pichle hi update mein poochi thi ki mayu ko nupsi ka sapna kab aayega......n in this upd8 when i gt to knw mayu ko toh 9 mahine se sirf nupsi ke hi sapne aa rahe hai....i ws lik...😲😲😲....then..lik this...😳..........thnxxx a special ton for tht info....

nywz plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soooooooon dear.........really really lookin 4wd 4ur next update......😳😳

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Ranbir Deewani ........

@ranbir_lekha

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#692

Originally posted by: Bollywood_chic

Lekha, i dunno why it gives that sense of Nostalgia but to a certain extent im glad it does.. coz when this FF ends.. someone will take a part away with it..
:D
i write for all of u..
and ur so rght about the lyrics.. love the song too
😳
thanks for ur comment..
x

no problem sonii I always have maintained my point that you r an exception when it comes to the FF writers in the topic of MayUr man tough competition for other writers.. have to say that

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399703

Suspended

Posted: 15 years ago

#693

hey huni

well, loved this part to cores!

breautifully described mayur longing, loved that part

Dia-mayur, really sweet, enjoyed that!

ovarall, awesome update loved it!

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Soni

@Dreamy_Girl03

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#694

Awesome update Sonia.......

This part is really sweet and cute......

I really like it............

Keep it up buddy..... And continue soon.....

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tehzeeb25

@tehzeeb25

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#695

awwwwwwesome prt

thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxx 4 d pm

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#696

Loved it

They are getting comfortable but why dose Nups get Nervous

Why both are still not confident of their feeling

Loved the way Diya is behind them to Patch up

Loved it

Edited by -afsha- - 15 years ago

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Monica

@_Monu_

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#697

HEY SONIA ...JUST READ THE PARTS 13-14 REALLY AWESOME!!....

I REALLY LOVED IT!!

DIA IS GREAT...SOOO COOOL!!

AL THE END THEY WERE TO KISS...

BUT HE STAY BACK

AND NOW NUPS IS CONFUSED!!..LOL!!

CANT WAIT 4 NEXT PART!

I THINK WILL A PROMANTIC PART!..

OR I HOPE SO!!

GREAT PART SONIA!!

U ROCK!!
SEE U SOON!!

LOVE UUUU!!!

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Srishti but I prefer being called Mishu

@~*mishu*~

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#698

awesome updt!!!
loved the dia part!! she is soo true!
both of them r denying their feelings!
n the almost kiss was very cute
everything was jst wonderful
continue soon