MayUr FF _A Brilliant Tragedy|Part 18\Page118|NEW

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Hello Everyone!!

My Name is Sonia, for those who don't know. I'm a FF writer on the FF Forum and have written 3 DMG FF's, i used to be a massive DMG Fan but now am completely devoted to MJHT and MayUr.

This FF is inspired by the movie The Proposal and the song A Brilliant Tragedy by a local artist who lives across the road from me, you wont be able to find the song on Youtube (sorry).

OLD FF's:

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INDEX:
Part 1- Page 1
Part 2- Page 7
Part 3- page 14
Part 4- Page 21
Part 5: Page
Part 6: Page 37
Part 7: Page 46
Part 8: Page 52
Part 9: Page 59
Part 10: Page 67
Part 11: Page 75
Part 12: Page 80
Part 13: Page 86
Part 14: Page 92
Part 15: Page 99
Part 16: Page 103
Part 17: Page 109
Part 18: Page 118



xxSonia

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Posted: 16 years ago
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A Brilliant Tragedy

Part 1:

As the sun rose over the already awake city, he ran through the parks and roads that had once been unfamiliar to him. Now he had become accustomed to the hustle and bustle of the ever growing city, the constant noise, the dust filled streets, the smoke that covered the city. None of this affected him anymore, it was Home. Coming to a halt he leaned down, hands resting on his knees, as he caught his breath, standing up he saw the new rays of the sun flickering over the water and over the horizon. Rushing his hand through his hair he smiled and turned back to his destination.

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The baby blue drapes on her windows, blew in the air due to the fan spinning. She skipped around her apartment singing along to her iPod, while her wet hair fell past her shoulders dripping water to the white tiles below. Looking at the large clock on the wall, she sighed calming down and making her way to her room to get ready.

Coming out of the lift, she was dressed in a black pencil skirt, black pumps and purple coloured blouse. Looking at the watch on her wrist she quickened her pace, pushing out of the rotating door and onto the main street to catch a Rickshaw.

"Morning Annie…" she spoke as she went through to the little Caf outside her office, "morning Nupur.. Here's the black coffee, 1 spoon brown sugar and tea-spoon low-fat milk and your Chocolate Iced-Frappe.." spoke the bubbly, big-haired waiter at the counter. For the past 3 years, Annie had been working at Happy Beans; she'd have both of Nupur's drink's ready just as she walked through the door. "Thanks so much.. ." spoke Nupur with a smile on her face.

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"Good Morning sir" spoke a young man as he welcomed his boss into the office, as Mayank walked ahead the boy sighed and slumped back into his chair. Following the man entered Nupur, rolling her eyes and sticking her tongue out at Mayank's back and giving a smile to the boy. "Heyy Benji…hitler ka right hand man aagaya…" spoke Nupur as she quickly followed the man through the glass doors and into his office, stopping by her table and leaving her bag, files and Frappe there.

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"Morning Mr Sharma…" she said putting a smile on her face, he looked at her and smiled as she passed him his coffee. "I'll just bring the new project files in…" spoke Nupur. Mayank Sharma was the Manager of the advertising section of CQ Insurance Company, and Nupur Bhushan was his assistant. 3 years, 3 long years she'd been working with him and both of them together had increased the Companies share price drastically and launched many new sub-sections of the company. Yet still, Nupur hadn't got the raise or the promotion he'd been promising her from their first market-scheme success.

"Here are the end of week project summaries along with next weeks meeting schedule and summary of what the new insurance plan is and how we have to sell it to the public.." she passed each file to him as she spoke, with him just nodding. Turning around she rolled her eyes and mumbled something under her breath "thanks bhi nahin bolta.." "oh Nupur..I looked over the proposal you had given to me before passing it up to HQ and It wont work.. I wouldn't waste time in passing it up there…" Nupur's mouth hung open, "what?.. But when you flicked through it the other day you said it was good.." she said walking towards his table, "well.. I was wrong.." he got up from his chair and started walking towards the door. "You know it was good.. You're just afraid of it being passed and me getting my promotion…" annoyed, annoyed was what she was feeling right now. Annoyed at Mayank for saying that 2 months of work was going to 'waste time', "what ever stops the tears.." he said before walking out the door.

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"3 years!! 3 years..I've been waiting for this promotion and he acts like he knows nothing about it…" spoke Nupur to herself "gahhh…it's not fair.. First mujhe yeh hitler ke right hand man ke saath kaam karna parta hain.. Aur uske upar.. Holiday nahin milti mujhe aur main kuch kaam karu woh saare credit lete hain.."

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As the morning pulled through, Nupur stood next to CJ and Jacko. One hand held her files and the other hand holding her nearly finished iced-frappe. "ek minute Nupur… after so many years.. I don't understand.. How can you drink and iced-frappe in the morning??.." Benji said, as he was walking pass the three-some, "I can't stand the heat..itne saal baad mujhe Mumbai ki weather nahin se pahti.." Benji laughed as he continued walking pass them. "anyways.. Like I was saying remember the charts I'd given you last week with the consumer usage rate?.. Please photocopy it and send it up to HQ by lunch?..thank you so much" Nupur spoke to Jacko, then turning to speak to CJ about organising the next team meeting.

She could here the phone ringing from her office, as she made her way to pick it up she saw Mayank sitting in his cabin face in hands with paper-work surrounding him. Looking at the phone ring and Mayank through the glass doors, she walked towards the door and quickly pushed it open. "sir.. Aaj Thursday hain.. And long weekend bhi aaraha hain.. Isliye.. Aap aise beth kar aapka kaam khatam nahin hoga.. Aur mujhe pata bhi hain ke aapko Goa jana hain kal.. So please.. Hum sab ke liye.. Don't waste time.." it all just came out of her mouth, still annoyed at him she didn't think about what she was saying. He glared at her, "aap jaye aur aap ka kaam kariye.. The phones ringing in case you couldn't hear.." scrunching her nose at him, she went to pick up the phone. "Hello, Advertising.." dropping her files on the table and chucking her drink in the bin next to her table she sat down in her chair "Shukla sir.. Jee haan.. Okay..i'll let Mayank know.." putting the phone down she made her way to the glass door of his office, pushing it open she stepped inside "uhh.. Mr Sharma.." he looked up at her from the same position he was in when she had gone to pick the phone up, "Shukla sir is calling us to his office now.." he nodded, sighing getting up from his chair and walking towards her.

There was not much of an age different between Mayank and Nupur, yet he got the managing position and she was left with being his assistant. The reason she had been given the position of the assistant was because the main owners of the company knew she had potential, though Mayank's skills were greater than Nupur's they promised this job as experience and a chance to get a feel of the job. Subtly hinting of a promotion in the near future.

Nupur Bhushan was known as the happy-go-lucky girl who had moved to Mumbai against her will, she'd worked hard for what she had today and she wasn't going to let it go easily. Mayank Sharma, was a man of little words. This was because people didn't know him, it was a facet he had put on; he was just like Nupur in many ways and he too he wasn't going to let the job he had worked so hard for slip out of his hands.

Edited by Bollywood_chic - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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😲oohhh miii goshh.... snuzzzyy!!!

hww cummm i neeverr kneww u wrotee ffs????
pehlee awesummm vms...
n nowww ffs.... wwoaaaaahhh yaar.. hatss off to u...
👏
tu too cchaa gayee re!⭐️
seriouslyy....
okkkk cumnn to the ff....
it wuzz awessuum,mmmm....
mayank... right hand of hitler???👏😆
and nupur ko kitna tang kiya us doggy ne!gawwdddd mayu is walking into serious trouble wid me!
😡
aurr to aurr usnee benji swthrt ko hii bhi nai bola....
kitnaa ulluu insaan aur kitna meeaaaann hai ye mayankk...😕
and he rejecteddd nupurs pruposal like that!!!!
😲🤢
maaaannnnn mayuu u shudd beware of mee....
or elsee....😡
newyzzz awesuummmmm one snuzyy...
do continue soonn swtyy n do pm mee....
love u loadsss
sindhya
Edited by cool.sindhya - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hmm
Such a different name
Brilliant tregedy

AWWW
nyc part
Lyked it
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Posted: 16 years ago
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*reserved* EDITED!!
Sonii..first of all.congrats on starting your FF.im going to be in the pm list..informing you from now as ive read the part and it was 😲 😲..!!!!Its simply superb!!
The name of the FF is verry offbeat..it has this completely different and new feel to it..A brilliant tragedy..Brilliant name i must say!!👍🏼
Ohk coming to the first part..OMG such an amazing start i must say..the intro to both the charecters was outstanding..the description being so well mixed with the dialogues..loved the way you've described the little details also....👏 👏 👏 👏..
Coming to the story..i think its a verry good idea..i mean its soo realistic..all this happens in real life with many couples..and im so looking forward to see how the ego-clashes would be..their love...how their career and work would come in between their relationship..omg..im already thinking about so many things that could happen!!😆..ohhh yaa i loved how you've included the other charecters also!!ohh god theres a real long list of what all i loved!!..😆
Soni..amazing part.youre a talented writer and im sure you'll do realy well with the FF!!.youve left me wondering about whole lott of things..!!😉 😆...im so waiting for the next part..all the best..!!
Love you!!🤗
Edited by palak5 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Great start sonia!!
You write really well yaar...I love how you pay attention to the details...the conversation...the routine...its looks very believable!!
And the fact that you didn't show them already having a crush on each other was nice...! Mayank is sadu and even more so than in the show...hehe...great!!
Also...its really nice to read something other than the usual college fanfic...I'm really looking forward to reading more!!
Do update soon and PM me..!!
hmmm...i haven't seen "The Proposal" movie...so what's the basic storyline....?? I'm really curious...!
and you named it The Brilliant Tragedy...its such a contradictory name!! it really built up my interest...!
Edited by hgrhr - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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reserved! EDITED!
hey huni! it was fab start! loved it! plz do continue! add me in ur pm lists plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
Edited by sweety4jaan - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome awesome awesome
meri jaan..rocking FF re !!
too cool ...jjst PERFECT INTRO !!
LOVED IT
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Posted: 16 years ago
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so sweet,great mayank right hand hitler wow...
nupur assistant...go on yaar....but am waiting to know the story ahead..
title itself made feel something nice....whats the story line?i havent watched the movie...could you plz say that...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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a nice concept.good to see you have included the side characters-annie,chacko,cj & even shukla.i would like to find your shukla as funny as the original one in the soap.but its absolutely upto you how you will shape up your characters.i want to read more of this ff.pls pm me your next update

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