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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#551

Hi Priya

How r u??

Wat can I say abt the update..It left me craving for more...Just wonderful👏👏👏

Raj is trying to contol his feelings badly but its not easy for him...

"Tere bin yun rahi zindagi
jaise thahari hui ek nadi,
yun kata ek pal ,
jaise kati ho maine sadi,
kabse khada tere liye,
tere liye tere liye tere liye

Tere sajde mein sir hai jhuka,
tu ibaadat hai tu hi duaa
maut ke baad bhi jo mile bandagi ka sila,
wo maang lu tere liye, tere liye,
Jism paak aankho mein bhar lu,
saans saans mein shamil kar lu,
is duniya mein jaan gawa,
tujhe us duniya mein hasil kar lu...
tere liye , tere liye"

He loves Naina n she loves him but dono mein se koi bhi apne dil ki baat nahin bol raha..Very confused people..😆😆

That song was just so beautiful n perfect with the scenes..😊👏👏

Huda ne kitni chalaki se Noor ko un gundon se bacha liya aakhir army mein hone ka yeh faiyda to hai hi..😃 But yeh Noor ja kahan rahi hai???

Yudi as always is confused abt his feelings n every1 is trying to help him..But no1 is giving him any sensible idea..😆😆

Gunny is now enjoying teasing Naina..😆😆😉😳

Flashback was gud..It cleared many things like howcome Raj knows Naaz n her family...poor Raj he went through hell but army wale usko hi blame kar rahe hain..🤢🤢

Finally unhe akal to aayi n Raj ko major bana diya gaya..😃 Chalo kucch to theek kiya..

Last part mein yeh kya ho gaya???? Who were these people???

Itna to samajh mein aa raha tha ki Raj ne Naina ko goli un terrorist ko distract karne ke liye maari thi nahin to woh log Naina ko maar dete..😭

It was really difficult for him..He had tears in his eyes but he had no other choice..😭😭😭

yeh beech mein Gunny kyun aa raha hai vilian bankar😡😡

Naina sirf Raj ka hi sath chahti thi ..Wo jaanti this ki Raj ne aisa kyun kiya..😊😊😊

This is true love😊😊😊😊

I hope Naina is fine in the end...

I hope Gunny Abhimanyu ki tarah Raj ki life mein problems na create kare..😡😡

pls continue soon n solve this mystery..

Bye

Edited by suhana_dixit - 14 years ago

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#552

Okay....I'm sorry!!! Abhi mujhe pata chala sab kcuh mere sir ke upar se kyun guzra?? Kyunki maine page 65 wala UD padha nahi tha na....isliye!! Warna mujhe itna shock nahi lagta!! Sorry!!!

Coming to the previous part (that I missed).....it was all veryyyyy beautifully done....aur main aisa isliye keh sakti hu coz I hav read the next part....hehe. I mean....all the hidden emotions cud be well understood by me.....so mujhe kuch zyada hi maza aya!! Specially Raj ki wo saare scenes jab wo soch me tha.....dard me tha.....maine jaise usse kuch zyada achhe se mehsus kiya....so mujhe to fayda hi hua...late padhne ka....hehe.

Naina-Gunny teasing scene was very nice.....and even Raj-Naaz scene was gud....lekin Raj to abhi tak nahi janta Naaz kya kar rahi hai....aur jab Raj hi nahi janta to hum kaise jaanenge?? And why did she point Naina as a target?? Iska jawab mujhe next part me bhi nahi mila yaar....hehe. Lets...may be baad me milega...hai na?? Arre of course....kabhi na kabhi to milega....w8ing for that very part!!

Edited by sumaiya wahid - 14 years ago

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Dhara Singh

@Dhara_s

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#553

At the moment I can think of only one thing...why do you have such a fixation for flashbacks....yoiu and flashbacks go hand in hand...and kabhi kabhi toh ek ke andar ek fb...yaar tu likhte waqt confuse nahai hoti...??? Main toh seedhi lines likhte waqt bhi confuse ho jaati hun....!!!!

Abt the update...toh baaki ka toh superb tha....kooi koi words toh ekdum priya style the...wat was that...san sanan...????😆😆😆😆😆😆😆

And abt the end....yeh mera sar ke upar se gaya.....so i ll wait for you to clear this mess yourself...update soon....!!!!

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Purnima

@-purnima-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#554

awesome part 👏👏👏👏.................. loved it......... ab tino fic ek sath update kar di......... tarif ke liye words nahi mil rahe........... 😛😛😛😛..........

ok............... part was njoyable to read............. 👏👏👏👏................ huda's scene was hilarious....... 😆😆😆😆..............
as 4 RN scene ....... it was 2 gud............ 👏👏👏.........
i knew it u were planning something big 4 both RN......... & proved my guess right.......of Raj shooting Naina......... .............hope she doesn't misunderstands him....... 😃😃😃......
zyada toh nahi lagi na naina ko.......... 😊😊😊............ hope she is fine......... 😊😊😊😊.......

loved Raj's FB......... 😃😃......... huda's letter 😆😆😆😆😆......... & it was so dificult 4 Rajveer to save himself........ 4m the blast.... 😭😭😭............. but everythings well in the end....... 😃😃😃

will wait 4 next part to see naina's reaction ......... & to know why exactly all this happened..... 😕😕😕.........so continue soon...... 😃😃😃😃............. ASAP 😃 😃

Edited by Puri_2711 - 14 years ago

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385641

Hibernated

Posted: 14 years ago

#555

superb update. i hope naina will be fine. did raj knew before this gonna happen?

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Prerna

@prerna1

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#556

that was awesome
plz continue soon

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fanatic 21

@fanatic 21

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#557

Wow!!!!!!absolutely wonderful updt....👏👏👏

loved d way u described d past events of how raj escaped 👏👏and also d chit of huda...tooo funny....😉😆

also d way naina and raj had convo in the jeep...awesome....😳👏

den d chos.....lets see wats next...hope evrything turns out ok.....😊

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#558

Nice update dear. 👏 👏 👏
I am surprised too that how did u update all these fics at one go. 😲 😲 😲
So finally Raj cleared all the misunderstandings and confusions of his cadets and Naina as well. 😊 😊 😊
Noor is sis of Naaz and she searching for her sister than y did Naaz say that his parents and family members died in a bomb blast? 😕 😕 😕 May be she doesn't know that they r still alive.
I liked the smartness of Huda by which he saved Noor from that old man. 👏 👏 👏 The trick he used to save Noor by pretending that she is pregnant worked really well.😉 😉 😉
Huda has superb intelligence and presence of mind but i think he uses all these things in wrong way.😛 😛 😛 When Huda was busy with that gal why did Alekh disturb him? 😆 😆 😆
naina has so much trust over Rajveer and that's why she can understand that he was busy in thinking something. The song selection was really nice it's in one of my fav. 😃 😃 😃
I believe soon Raj will tell her about the gal to whom he love now a days the most 😳 😳 😳. Kahin na kahin i know Naina ko ye vishwaas jaroor hai ki vo ladki Naina khud hai. 😉 😉 😉
Par jjitne pure heart se us ne baar Raj k liye duniya ki saari khushiyaan maangi hai that was cute.😳 😳 😳 To Raj ko Naaz k dad ne bachaya tha jo pehle se jaante the us ko. 😊 😊 😊
Shabnam bechari galti se maari gayi but i loved Naaz's spirit when she said that she want to kill that person who killed her best friend Naaz. 👏 👏 👏
Raj did whatever he has planed and i think that's why he chose that restaurant. He saved Naina and Gunny now feels something fishy.😛 😛 😛 Still Naina has trust over Rajveer and that's y he carried her in his arms. 😭 😭 😭
continue soon darling

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 14 years ago

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#559

This update has left me completely speechless and waiting desperately to read the next part

Raj puri koshish kar raha hai apni feelings par control rakhne ki but every time he sees naina he finds his resolve breaking. Dono hi ek dusre se pyaar karte hai par koi bhi apne dil ki baat khul kar nahi bole raha. Raj seems to be fighting a battle within himself and naina can sense his unease.

Huda badi hi chalaki se Noor ko un gundon se bacha leta hai. Akhir unka Huda se kya muqabla? He has been trained by the best'Rajveer ofcourse. But Noor hai kaun aur who ja kahan rahi hai?

Everyone wants Yudi and Shalini's relationship to move forward. But Yudi himself is very confused about his feelings..and the stupid ideas which his friends are giving him are not helping at all.

The Flashback were good. Raj had helped Naaz and her family earlier and when he needed help they were they to support him. Raj ko apna honour haasil karne ke liye bahut sehna pada..army put him through hell and then to cover up their mistake they promoted him to Major.

The last part was most shocking. Raj had to shoot naina to save her from those goons. It was the hardest thing for him to do and he could not help the tears from coming to his eyes.

Gunny cannot believe that Raj was the one who shot naina. He is not sure if he should trust Raj anymore but he also knows that Raj would have a reason for doing this. He will have to wait to get any explanation.

Naina wants to be with Raj'She knows that Raj would never endanger her life. TIs good to see her trust Raj comepletely.

Har baar Raj ko apne doston aur pyaar par kyun goli chalani padti hai. Hope that Gunny will not misunderstand him like Abhi.

Please continue soon