ANKAHI...{LRL-RN}note n page 157 - Page 57

Originally posted by: sweta2005

awesomeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggg for next asap.


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Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Mujhe na samajh me hi nahi aa raha hai....main kya likhu?? I mean....sirf Raj ka naam likhne se comment to pura hoga nahi....but seriously mujhe kuch aur nahi sujh raha hai....ye kya kiya yaar tumne?? kya kiya maine...ha ha ha...😆

Firstly I love the song a lot...and the Raj-Naina convo was very sweet....and subtle....jo mujhe bahut achha laga!! Raj ki toh har baat tumhe achhi lagti hai...!!! vaise...aisi koi baat hai raj ki jo tumhe achha na lagta ho...huh...??? naaaaaaa.....😆

Then Huda n NOOR....it was again a nice sequence!!! Huda n Aalekh ka Yudi ko tease karna bhi badhiya tha... Shukriya maam...😃

And then the flashbak scenes....it was all nice...Raj n Naaz ki flashbak wali sequence mujhe bahut achha laga... tum sab k kuch doubts toh clear hue...

But end me hua to hua kya?? Am I only missing sumthing?? sayad....ha ha ha😆

Pls jaldi continue karo yaar....warna main pagal ho jaungi.... main tumhe pagal hone nahi dungi...varna hamare DDPA ka kya hoga...😆

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Seriously Priya I am shocked..😲😲😲 n happy too😃😃😃 ha ha ha😆

Arre itne saare acche updates padne ko jo mil rahe hain...😆😆 sach me...???😆

But aaj ke din tumne record hi bana diya hai..Apni saari fictions update kar di...Other writers shud learn something from u..😊😊 vaise yeh kia kaise????..I mean itne saare n lambe updates kaise likhe tumne??? hats off to u yaar👏👏👏yeh karamat Dhara k idea ki wajah se hai...!!! usi ne mujhe kaha tha ki main ud likh kar draft me save kar lun...!!! aur us din maine dekha ki mere sare fics k uds ready the...toh maine socha ki chalo...chutti hai aaj toh kar hi lete hain sab ka 'bheja fry'😆

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Priya Hiiii Suhana...

How r u?? F9...wat abt u...

Wat can I say abt the update..It left me craving for more...Just wonderful👏👏👏 thanqqqqqqq😳 😳

Raj is trying to contol his feelings badly but its not easy for him...

"Tere bin yun rahi zindagi
jaise thahari hui ek nadi,
yun kata ek pal ,
jaise kati ho maine sadi,
kabse khada tere liye,
tere liye tere liye tere liye

Tere sajde mein sir hai jhuka,
tu ibaadat hai tu hi duaa
maut ke baad bhi jo mile bandagi ka sila,
wo maang lu tere liye, tere liye,
Jism paak aankho mein bhar lu,
saans saans mein shamil kar lu,
is duniya mein jaan gawa,
tujhe us duniya mein hasil kar lu...
tere liye , tere liye"

He loves Naina n she loves him but dono mein se koi bhi apne dil ki baat nahin bol raha..Very confused people..😆😆 arre dear...voh dono confused nahi hai...!!! bal ki main un dono ko confused karr rahi hun...varna mere fic ka naam ANKAHI kaise rahta... ha ha ha😆 😆 😆

That song was just so beautiful n perfect with the scenes..😊👏👏 thanqqqq😃

Huda ne kitni chalaki se Noor ko un gundon se bacha liya aakhir army mein hone ka yeh faiyda to hai hi..😃 But yeh Noor ja kahan rahi hai??? hmmm...ja kahan rahi hai pata nahi...par dhundh kise rahi hai...yeh toh sayad tumhe pata ho hi gaya hoga...???😉

Yudi as always is confused abt his feelings n every1 is trying to help him..But no1 is giving him any sensible idea..😆😆 sahi hai😆

Gunny is now enjoying teasing Naina..😆😆😉😳 use pata jo hai...😆

Flashback was gud..It cleared many things like howcome Raj knows Naaz n her family...poor Raj he went through hell but army wale usko hi blame kar rahe hain..🤢🤢 kabhi kabhi kuch logon ko pata hota hai ki voh galat hain...para akad kamm nahi hoti un ki...😡

Finally unhe akal to aayi n Raj ko major bana diya gaya..😃 Chalo kucch to theek kiya.. yeh bhi unhone apne faide k liye hi toh kiya hai...

Last part mein yeh kya ho gaya???? Who were these people???yeh main sayad 2-3 uds me clear kar dungi...😃

Itna to samajh mein aa raha tha ki Raj ne Naina ko goli un terrorist ko distract karne ke liye maari thi nahin to woh log Naina ko maar dete..😭 main philhal is bare me kuch nahi kahungi...😉

It was really difficult for him..He had tears in his eyes but he had no other choice..😭😭😭 yeh baat sahi hai ki us ne jo kiya...voh us ki majburi thi...

yeh beech mein Gunny kyun aa raha hai vilian bankar😡😡 kuch log hote hi aise hain...

Naina sirf Raj ka hi sath chahti thi ..Wo jaanti this ki Raj ne aisa kyun kiya..😊😊😊 sayad...

This is true love😊😊😊😊 jab bhi baat RN ki aati hai...main bhi yehi sochti hun...

I hope Naina is fine in the end... next part thoda sa ajeeb hai...sambhal lena...😉

I hope Gunny Abhimanyu ki tarah Raj ki life mein problems na create kare..😡😡 main hun na...aur is baar toh mera sath denewale aur bhi hain...isiliye Gunny...kabhi bhi 'balon wale bhai sahab(abhimanyu) nahi ban payega...!!!😉

pls continue soon n solve this mystery.. mystery toh thodi der se solve hogi...😉 matlab 2-4 uds lag sakte hain...😃

Bye

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Okay....I'm sorry!!! kis khushi me...???Abhi mujhe pata chala sab kcuh mere sir ke upar se kyun guzra?? Kyunki maine page 65 wala UD padha nahi tha na....isliye!! Warna mujhe itna shock nahi lagta!! Sorry!!! apna SORRY wala word wapas le...!!! agar hum aisi galati nahi karnege toh DDPA k mem kaise kahlayenge...😆

Coming to the previous part (that I missed).....it was all veryyyyy beautifully done....aur main aisa isliye keh sakti hu coz I hav read the next part....hehe. thanqqqqq ...ha ha ha...😆

I mean....all the hidden emotions cud be well understood by me.....so mujhe kuch zyada hi maza aya!! Specially Raj ki wo saare scenes jab wo soch me tha.....dard me tha.....maine jaise usse kuch zyada achhe se mehsus kiya....so mujhe to fayda hi hua...late padhne ka....hehe. haan...kyoun ki tab agar tum voh ud padh leti...toh is situation k liye mujhe achhi khashi jhaad lagati...ki main raj ko kyoun itna dard de rahi hun...!!! lekin tum ab mujh par gussa nahi ho sakti...!!! is ka matlab faide me main hi rahi...😆

Naina-Gunny teasing scene was very nice.....and even Raj-Naaz scene was gud....lekin Raj to abhi tak nahi janta Naaz kya kar rahi hai....aur jab Raj hi nahi janta to hum kaise jaanenge?? And why did she point Naina as a target?? Iska jawab mujhe next part me bhi nahi mila yaar....hehe. in fact...is ka jawab...abhi tumhe kai sare uds me bhi nahi milega...😆

Lets...may be baad me milega...hai na?? Arre of course....kabhi na kabhi to milega.... yeh sahi hai...yeh fic khatam hone se pahle toh mil hi jayega...ha ha ha...😆

w8ing for that very part!!

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

At the moment I can think of only one thing...why do you have such a fixation for flashbacks....yoiu and flashbacks go hand in hand...and kabhi kabhi toh ek ke andar ek fb...yaar tu likhte waqt confuse nahai hoti...??? Main toh seedhi lines likhte waqt bhi confuse ho jaati hun....!!!! ha ha ha...😆 main bilkul bhi confuse nahi hoti...!!! ab dekho...jab hum school me the...toh History ki sirf ek hi book hoti thi class me...!!! lekin us me kitne sare logon k flashbacks hote the...hai na...??? aur humain dekho...hum sab kuch yaad kar k...xams k tym me 2 ghante k ander sare FB ko likhne padte hain...aur toh aur...koun se saal...koun se mahine...koun si ladai kahna ladi gayi thi...kin k bich ladi gayi thi......kyoun ladi gayi thi...GODDDD...sare sawalon k jawab yaad karte hue likh kar aate the...!!! aur jab hum tab itne sare FB ko yaad rakh sakte the ...aur confused bilkul bhi nahi hote the toh...phir yahan par toh maine bass kuch hi FB likhe hain...ha ha ha...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Abt the update...toh baaki ka toh superb tha.... thanqqqqqq 😃kooi koi words toh ekdum priya style the...wat was that...san sanan...????😆😆😆😆😆😆😆 mujhe khud nahi pata toh main tumhe kahan se samjhayungi...ha ha ha!!! khair...tumhe sayad yaad hoga ki Govinda ki ek film thi 'banarasi babu'... us me ek song tha na...'san sana na...sain...sain...ho rahi thi gaon me'...ha ha ha...kuch yaad aaya...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

And abt the end....yeh mera sar ke upar se gaya.....so i ll wait for you to clear this mess yourself...update soon....!!!! chalo...ek baat ka toh yakeen ho gaya...ki kuch toh hai is duniya me jo...tumhare sar k upar se bhi gujarta hai...!!! chahe voh mere uds hi kyoun na ho...😆 😆 😆

Originally posted by: Puri_2711

awesome part 👏👏👏👏.................. loved it......... ab tino fic ek sath update kar di......... tarif ke liye words nahi mil rahe........... 😛😛😛😛.......... thanqqq...thanqqq...thanqqqq😳 😳 😳

ok............... part was njoyable to read............. 👏👏👏👏................ huda's scene was hilarious....... 😆😆😆😆.............. ha ha ha...😆!!! maine use is fic me -ve role diya hi nahi hai...
as 4 RN scene ....... it was 2 gud............ 👏👏👏......... thanqqqqqqq😃
i knew it u were planning something big 4 both RN......... & proved my guess right.......of Raj shooting Naina......... .............hope she doesn't misunderstands him....... 😃😃😃...... ab yeh toh tumhe next ud par hi pata chalega...😃
zyada toh nahi lagi na naina ko.......... 😊😊😊............ hope she is fine......... 😊😊😊😊.......yeh bhi tumhe next part me pata chalega...😉

loved Raj's FB......... 😃😃......... huda's letter 😆😆😆😆😆......... & it was so dificult 4 Rajveer to save himself........ 4m the blast.... 😭😭😭............. but everythings well in the end....... 😃😃😃 mere hote hue Raj k sath kuch galat ho bhi nahi sakta...😃

will wait 4 next part to see naina's reaction ......... & to know why exactly all this happened..... 😕😕😕 haan...naina ka reaction toh tumhe pata chal jayega...par yeh sab hua kyoun yeh jan ne k liye tumhe thoda wait karna padega...😃.........so continue soon...... 😃😃😃😃............. ASAP 😃 😃

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

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Originally posted by: danish1

superb update. Thanxxxxx Afreen...

i hope naina will be fine. did raj knew before this gonna happen?in dono ques ka ans tumhe next part me mil jayega dear...😃

Originally posted by: nisha1984

nice update