ANKAHI...{LRL-RN}note n page 157 - Page 115

Originally posted by: Sumi_162710

For the part on page 145

Hmm...as I already said...mujhe pata tha kuch nahi hua...😆😆...but phir bhi iss part me kaafi kuch hua...I will cum to that later on...pehle Raj ki baat kar leti hu...warna mera khana hazam nahi hoga...😆😉😳 yahn mera jeen hazam nahi ho raha hai...tumhe apne khane ki padi hai...khair...aage badhte hain...😆

I loved the way u portrayed Raj all thruout...he was silent abt everything...and very very focused...😳 "main hu uske liye Hamesha!!"...just these few words conveyed a lot...😃...waise to Raj ko words ki zarurat nahi hoti...but ek/do aise shabd bol de...to bas...fultoo awesumness hoti hai wo!!😳😳 sahi bola...yaar...raj ko kuch kehne ki jarurat hi nahi padti...!!! uss ke feelings aur jo bhi use kehna ho...voh uss ki nazar se pata chal jata hai...😉

I really loved the RN scene...😳😳...the emotions were rightly described...😃⭐️😳 thanqqq...par mujhe sachhi me laga ke voh KISS scene kuch jyada ho gaya...ha ha ha...😆

Next imp. point for me was Gunny and his Naaz doubts!! Banda bilkul sahi track pe jaa raha hai...😆...I liked the way Rajveer reacted to him...quite professional...still personal...😉 Just perfectly balanced!!😃 ab dono ka farz bhi toh use hi nibhana hai na...😉

It was an Awe scene when I watched Aalekh and Huda outside Naina's qtr...😳...and Raj-Shalini convo was also nice. 😃 Thanqqq😃

RN ki shaadi...idea achha hai Naaz!! We all r wid you in this...but Rajveer ki khwaish sir aakhon pe...lets see wat he decides...😳 ab...maj saab oh decide kar hi chuke hain na...😛

And yes...Gunny was following Maj. Rajveer's sister...🤣...Loved the way she tackled him...😆😆😆 ab raj ke sath reh reh kar thoda baht toh seekh hi jayegi na...😆

Now will move on to the next thread for the next part...😳😳 aur maam aap ka comments bhi aa chuka hai vahan par...

Luv,
Sumi. 😳


P.S. Ye part mujhe chhota laga...seriously!!! 😳 achha...!!! yeh kaise ho gaya...😕??? par sach akhun...tohhh...maine chota update hi post kiya tha...😆

Sorry for being so late but i was not well ..

Originally posted by: psrn

ven wil u update??
vo record sirf ek baar k lie hi tha kya?

Originally posted by: shreyamathur_18

hello😃😃 hiieee

very nice part kyonki is part me naina ko kuch nahi hua👏👏 and ofcourse raj ne bhi ot kaha na ki wo hai humesha naina ke liye👏👏 haan...raj toh hamesha hi hoga naina ke liye...

lekin goli kya naaz ne hi chalai thi naina per😕😕 yupe...

and gunny also started doubting naaz😒😒 usse toh uss par shaq pahle se hi tha...

naina is also scared not for herself but for them😭😭

but do not fear when rajveer is there he does not let anything happened to them😃😃 hello...mera kya...??? sab toh main hi karr rahi hun na...aur sara credit maj rajveer ko...😆

now update the next part very soon pls pls pls pls pls pls...

ab itni bar pls kaha hai to kar bhi do na😉😊😊

phir se keh rahi hun continue soon😃😃 update bhi kar diya hai...aur tumhara comments bhi mil chuka hai...😃

bbbyyyeee

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Great part thanqqq Glad that both Raj and naina are fine. Par Naaz aisa kyun kar rahi hai. She does not want to hurt either Raj or naina but she is playing a very dangerous game. She needs to take Raj's help... ab yeh baat usse koun samjhaye...

Gunny does not trust Naaz., he even shares his doubts with Raj. Who Naaz ka peecha karta hai, par Naaz usse chakma de kar bhag jati hai. naaz apne mann se sabb karna chahti hai...par pata nahi voh kamiyab ho bhi payegi ki nahi...😕

Everyone is worried about Naina...Raj understands her feelings...and assures her that he will always be there for her. Their love is the only remedy for their tension and insecurity. Both of them are now open to show their feelings and passion to each other. haan...naina aur rajveer ek dushre ke sath apni puri life bitana chahte hain...bass yehi baat hai jiss ki wajah se naina thodi si worried thi...par naina ke liye maj Rajveer hai na...

Alekh and Huda are worried about Naina and so they come to her room even though they know that Raj and Shalini are there with her. ab unhe bhi toh apni dosti ka farz nibhana hai na...😛

Naaz ne best suggestion diya hai... Raj and naina should get married. dekha...naaz...kya karr rahi hai...voh pura uss ke dimag me hai...!!! agar voh naina ko hurt karne ke bare me sochti toh voh shadi ka suggetion deti hi nahi... bal ke voh chahti ke naina akeli rahe...taki voh apne makshad ko pura kar sake...

please continue soon

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Sorry for being late Priya but finally i managed to reach here. haan re...mujhe pata hai...aap baht busy thi...isiliye sorry ka prog cancel karte hain...

Good part. 👏 👏 👏 thanqqq

You know sometimes when i read your fics i feel the romance with ethnic style and 60's romance.😍😍😍 I mean Raj should have been Raj Kapoor na? 😍 😍 😍 he he he...yeh tu meri khinchai karr rahi hai na...mujhe pata hai...😆

Raj and his presence changes Naina in to a child and it shows from her face. 😆 😆 😆 Alekh was right that Naina ne to Raj ko loot hi liya hai. 😉 😉 😉 raj khud luttna chahta tha...😆

Par jab Raj khud hi lutna chahta tha to koi aur kya kare? 😉 😉 😉 vohi na yaar...😆

Naina's surprise kiss was really surprising for me and Raj as well but kahin na kahin maine expect kiya tha kuch aisa hone ka. 😆 😆 😆 ha ha ha...main Raj ko bold bhi toh nahi dikha sakti...DJ's ne use kitna reserved inshan dikhya tha...toh main kuch toh respect karun na apne real Rajveer sir ki...😆

Naaz k uper pressure badh raha hai aur kuch na kuch to karna padega but kuch aisa jis se Naina ko koi khaas khatra na ho. haan...sahi samjha tune...

Raj se mauka aur samay dekh kar sahi se baat kar li Naina k parents ne engagement k baare me aur bata bhi diya ki un ko shaadi ki abhi koi jaldi nahi hai. 👏 👏 👏 par pata nahi kismat ne...mera matlab yeh hai ke maine kya likha hai...inn ke kismat me...😆

Raj ne khoob pareshaan kiya na Naina ko ye baat batane k liye aur jab bataya to bhi bade aaram se.😉 😉 😉 Kitna gussa karti hai Naina ki mess ka samaan bhi utha laati hai.😆 😆 😆 uss ne jaan boojh kar nahi bal ke gusse me le aayi thi voh FORK...😆

Accha hi hua ki Raj ne yaad dila diya vapas rakhne k liye.😆 😆 😆 he he he...ab Rajveer sir hi toh apne fav cadet ki galati par parda dalenge na...😆That was lovely scene aur Naaz bhi jo chahti thi vo poora ho gaya. 😉 😉 😉

Kitne naughty hai vo Raj ko tease kar rahi thi aur Raj sharmaaye jaa raha tha. 😳 😳 😳 Huda aur Alekh ki to poochna hi kya. 😆 😆 😆

Bada solid punch pada hai us ko aur doosri baar Alekh ne bacha liya varna fir punch milta solid us ko. 😆 😆 😆 ab Huda ka toh dimag nahi chalta na...toh karta rehta hai kuch na kuch gadbadi...aur usse bhi padta rehta hai raj se...😆

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

My suggestion is that u should start a new thread 😃 😃 😃, if any member is not following the rule it doesn't mean we should do that too. You know second threads are always special they show us that how much our work is liked by our friends and they appreciated that. 😊 😊 😊

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

So coming to the recent update. jee madam...aayiye...padhariye...😛

Superb one. 👏 👏 👏 Thank you...😃

Naaz unintentionally did that because it was needed. All were worried and concerned about Naina. ab wo toh honge hi na...sab ko pata tha ke...Naina ki jaan khatre me hai...

Specially Raj, he never speaks anything but his silent eyes says everything and he feels that Naina's life is in danger. Naina needs Raj more than anyone. yupe...par naina uss hamle se dari nahi...use bass ek baat ka darr hai...raj se judai ka...

Sahlu checked her and Alekh with Huda scene everything and Colonel was there too, her security has been tighten and now i hope she will be safe. aur nahi toh kya...Raj jo hai...aur phir raj par nazar rakhne ke liye main jo hun...😆

Gunny.vow he is sharp and smart, he immediately thought about Naaz knowing that very well at this place no civilian is allowed and now his suspect is Naaz. Ab raj ke team me hain toh dimagless logon ko le kar raj apna mission kaise complite kar sakta hai...use bhi toh dimagwale chahiye ki nahi...😆

I think he is right and now Raj is concerned about his sister too. He knows that Gunny is just performing his duty but he doesn't want Naaz to be trapped in any problem. use bhi fiqar hai na...Naina ki bhi n Naaz ki bhi...

Gunny smartly went to Naaz and told her about Naina's being fine knowing very well that she will respond and the way he threaten her indirectly was good. uss en bass...ek warning dene ki koshish ki thi use...

But in Naaz's situation anyone will do the same.His so called fiancee is using her. But now it seems that she has no fear for anything. Shalu didn't find anything except Raj's need to Naina and it's obvious she has fear of loosing Raj once again. shalu toh hamesha in dono love birds ko sambhalne me hi lagi rehti hai...toh yahan par bhi vohi karr rahi hai...

Thank god Raj knows how to kiss, otherwise i was thinking that he is of Sunil Dutt's age. And indirectly he conveyed all his concern, love, care and a feeling of assurance to her. mujhe pata hai ke raj ke charch ko maine thoda nahi baht slow potrey kiya hai...apr tu soch...LRL ka Raj kaisa tha...aur maine ANKAHI ko uss ka contn. banaya hai toh main uss chaharchter ko pura delete toh nahi kar sakti na...LRL ka Raj toh rahega hi iss me...

Shalu ki neend to barbaad kar di Huda and Alekh ne but all because they were worried about Naina. Naaz smartly replied to the gestures of Gunny. Naaz ke paas bhi thoda dimag hai...😆

But i agree with her POV that when Naina and Raj would be inseparable thre would be less risk to Naina's life. And now i am waiting for RN's reply. Rply toh kab ka ho chuka hai...par main abhi tere comments ko rply karr rahi hun...😆

Try to update soon.

Originally posted by: backy

Exactly

i am with you ver!!