ANKAHI...{LRL-RN}note n page 157 - Page 21

Originally posted by: manatated

priya madam........

kya kahoo? medicines k naam k alawa aur kuch bhi bol sakti hai...!!! bass itna dhyaan rakhna ki main samajh payun...😆 😆 😆

bass bolti bandh kardi aapne to!👏👏👏yaar doc bhi kabhi bolna band karte hain kya...???😆 😆 😆

I just can't describe what i want to tell properly!

bass...itna kahungi ki.....

Muaaah muaah !jeeyo! fantabulous update!!⭐️ab toh mujhe tumhara aashirvaad bhi mil gaya hai...ab toh meri nikal padi...haaaaiiiiii😆 😆 😆 😆

Aur haan...moov main parcel kardungi, tum aise hi lambe update kiya karo...sirf parcel karogi... massage karne koun aayega...😆 😆 😆

detail mein baadmein comment karungi....jab main apne aap ko trance se bahar nikaal paau! ek mahine se jyada ho gaya hai...tumhare detail comments k liye...!!! lagta hai abhi bhi tum baht BZ ho...!!!😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

Originally posted by: sania_58

wow

awsome

kya update hai dear

finally Naina Raj ko pehchan gaayi

Naina ka gussa hona jaayez hai.

hope Naina jaldi Raj ko maaf kar de

fantastic update

too good

u rocked

great going

plz continue soon

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Ye diwali sepcial tha??? haan...😆

Ek to jab maine kaha wo Raj tha tumne kitni safayi se mana kar diya😡😡....khair wo baat to beet chuki hai coz wo Raj hi tha. But ye end me kya kar diya??? Shukr hai ki tum mere samne nahi ho Priya....warna sach mepatake phor deti sarr pe.😆tabhi toh maine yeh ud post kiya na...ki koi mere samne nhai hi nahin toh main safe hun...😆 😆 😆

Achha ab mazak bandh....seriously ye UD bahut touching tha. nahi yaar karo mazak...mujhe achha lagta hai...!!! tum toh janti hi ho na...😆

Par mujhe na Naina pe gussa bhi aya....I mean usse itna bhi kya gussa aya ki Raj ko palat kar dekha tak nahi aur aise hi chali gayi....bewkuf hai bilkul.....itne handsum chehre ko dekhe bina hi chali gayi....uski journey sach mebahut buri kategi.😆😆nahiiiiii...us ki journey baht hi achhi kategi...yeh mera vaada hai...😉 😉 😉

Waise bhi usse Srinagar jaa kar Major Saab k under hi ye mission complete karna hai....kab tak bhagegi wo?? 😉😉arre yaar...nahin...naina ki bass posting hui hain vahan par...!!! voh kisi mission par nahi hai...😊

well I agree ye kaafi lamba UD tha aur main hairan thi ye dekh kar ki tumne itna bara UD kaise kar diya.....😆😆 RN ka side effect hi samajh lo...😆 😆 😆

Ab ye dekhna hai Naina kab kripa karke Raj ki baat sunti hai.....😆😆kripa toh hogi hi na...!!! akhir kab tak dur rahegi...😉 😆

W8ing for the next part. And UD jaldi karo ye nahi kahungi.....warna tum do minute kehke do din logi.😆😆 dekh lo is baar kuch bhi nahi kaha aur ek month se jyada ho gaya...😆 😆

And yes, late reply k liye sorry.....main na bahuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuut zyada bz thi. 😳😳main bhi...😆 😆

Ok now, bye. Mera dimag aur nahi chal raha.... DIMAG...😲??? is ka matlab tumhare pass dimag hai...😲!!! congrats yaar👏...chalo mithai khilao😆...main toh tumhe yun hi samajh rahi thi😛...par tum toh badi saayani nikli...😆!!! chalo mere paas nahin toh kya ...kam se kam tumhare paas toh dimag hai...!!! kabhi kabhi jarurat padegi toh udhaar le jayungi...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Luv,
Sumi.

Originally posted by: guglu088

EID Special ko itna chota sa update kiya.😡 Usme bas Raj aur Naina ke feelings depict kiye😡 par wo mast the.👏 👏 👏mujhe laga tha ki tum jam kar galiyaan denewali ho...!!! thank God tum ne tarif kar di 😃

Aakhir aisa kaise ho sakta hai ki Naina apne Rajveer sir ke karib ho aur usko mehsus na kare. 😆 😊 sahi hai boss...😆

Aur Naaz ja takrai ek stranger se. Pehle aap pehle aap ke chakkar me train chut jayegi. Shukr hai ki unki train nahi chuti. time table mere pass tha na... toh main kaise train ko jane deti...😆

Aur ye DIWALI special update ka kya haal kar diya?😡 😡 😡 kyoun...😲

Aakhir hum sab readers ko tadpane me tumhe itna mazaa kyun aata hai.?😡 yeh sach nahi hai...!!! mujhe maza nahi aata...main bass dekhna chahti hun ki aap sab ise like karte ho ya nahi...😊

Naina ne apne Raj ko pehchaan liya par wo usse mili bhi nahi aur uska wrist watch bhi wapas kar diya.😭. Naina humesha Raj ko galat kyun samajhti hai?😕😭 Usse explain karne ka mauka kyun nahi deti hai.?😭. kyoun ki us ka dimag hamesha ulta sochta hai...😆

Arrey haan, kaise degi, iss fic ki writer ne than rakhi hai ki wo saare readers ko rula kar chodegi. Hai na??? To isliye RN mile bhi aur nahi bhi mile. is fic k stupid writer ki toh tum baat hi mat karo...!!! ek no ki JHALLI hai...😆

Naina chali gayi Raj ki awaz ansuni karke. Uska bechari ka gussa jayaz hai par aisa reaction!!! Naina ko Raj ko tadpane ki aadat hai. Bada maza aata hai usse Raj ko tadpane me aur tujhe mazaa aata hai hum readers ko tadpane me. Par kya karen, tu apni aadat se majbur hai, hai na??? na na...aadat se majbur nahi hun...!!! dimag se majbur hun...!!! kya karun jab mujhe is ki jarurat padti hai toh sahi tym par kambakhat dimag gayab rahta hai...!!!😆

Par bahut hi badhiya episode tha. The emotions were very well depicted. Naina ka gussa, uska dard, uski bebaasi Raj ki takleef aur RN ka ek dusre ke liye pyaar aur ek dusre par bharosa. 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏yaar tu toh baht kuch samajh gayi...!!!😃

Ab tak agar tumne moov laga liya ho to next part jaldi hi update kar do. We are waiting. And make the next part long. next part baht jald aa raha hai...par long ud ka vaada nahi kar sakti...😊

Love
Guglu

Originally posted by: Sanskruthi

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This one is for u priya for the long update vaah...long ud k 11 jhappiyaan...!!! meri toh life ban gayi...!!! 😆 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

Kaaaaaaaaaaaaaash har bar itna long update padhne ko milta to kitna accha lagtha ,ha.ha..ha pata hai aap ka kamar mei problem hogi par don't worry hum sab dost haina moov kya saare pain relief ko sponsor kardenge 😉aur us k baad mere naam k aage LATE lag jata...kyoun...???😆

Priya jee .........lagtha hai app iss ud mei saare emotions ko ek saath balance karna chahthi hai ek taraf khush kardi us army officer ko reveal kiya as raj socha chalo hamare expectations iss baar bachgaye naina ne bhi raj ko pehchan liya parrrrrrrrr the end part mein raj aur naina ko rula diya aur saath saath hum sab ko bhi 😭 yeh mera fav kaam hai...😆

Jokes apart, the update is really nice 👏 Thanxxx a lot Yogitha...!!!😃

good work 👏Thanqqqq sweety...😃

Har kadam par naina ke feelings bahut acchi tarah se describe kiya ...!!! tumhe toh vaise bhi mujhe jhaad par chadhana achha lagta hai na...toh phir der kis baat ki hai...!!! chadhao...vaise tum ne Raj ko kah diya hai na...!!! use hi aana padega mujhe utarne...aur tum ne vaada bhi kiya hai...!!!😆

Naina kitna confused hai pehale ,bechari kitna koshish ke us army officer ko pechane ki par kamyab nahi ho payee 😲

The way naina finally realized about raj is awesome,I think raj kehne wala tha "I trust u naina ah singh but rukgaya'''agar kaha to naina ko pata chal jayega na isiliye nahi kaha hai na arre vaah...tumhare paas toh dimag bhi hai...tum ne kitne achhe se yeh baat guess kar liya...!!!😛

Naina aaj bhi kitni acchi tarah se samaj thi hai raj ki ankhon ka isharon ko aaj bhi matlab...??? mere har fic me use Raj k ankhon k isharon ko samajhna padega...!!!😛

They all tackled well with the terrorists par raj ko goli laggayee 😭ab yeh toh hona hi tha na...😛

naina ne jab pehchan liya raj ko tab usne kuch nahi kaha aur raj ko ye samaj mein nahi aaraha ki kyun usko naina avoid kar rahi hai 😭😭ab sara kiya dhara Raj ka hi toh hai na...ab bhugte...😆

naina kitni dard mein hai,usko medicine ka jalneka ehsaas bhi nahi 😭😭us medicine ki expry date chali gayi thi na isiliye...😆

ye kya naina aise kyon soch rahi hai ki wo raj ko is galti ke liye kabhi maaf nahi karegi aur usne raj ka gift bhi waapas kardi 😭ullu ki patthi hai yaar...!!! tu us ki tention mat le...main hun na...😃

Raj ko jab pata chala ki naina ne use pehchanliya to wo baag kar aya par naina ka bus ja chuki thi,naina raj ka awaj suna bhi par mudh ke nahi dekhi..........ek baar wo sun lethi ki raj kya kehna chahtha hai,naina ka gussa hona apni jagah par sahi hai,phir bhi raj ko ek chance dena chahiye na apne baat batane ke liye ...in sab baton ko sochne k liye dimag chahiye...aur naina k paas is ka akaal pada hua hai...toh bichari kya karti...😆

The song suits perfectly well with the situation mujhe thoda sa doubt tha...!!! chalo tumhara approval mil gaya...!!!

Naaz ne gunny ki chot par band aid laga diya .........how sweet

Ye naaz kya gunny ko already janthi hai.......par question is kaise? yeh toh mujhe bhi nahi pata. par dont worry jaise hi pata chalega main tumhe bata dungi...!!! pakka promise...😃

once again nice update 👏 dont misunderstood ke ye taarif raj aur naina ko milke bhi na milne ka barabar ke liya hai but for the way u portrayed the emotions of both of them matlab tarif me bhi tum ne meri taang khinch hi li...😆

Ab akhir mein ek special request hai please agli ud karne ke liya Christmas tak wait mat karna......... U guessed it right,maine aisa kyun kaha,eid ka gift hogaya,diwali ka bhi hogaya,aur mujhe ab Christmas hi nazar aarahi hai.........par wo bahut durrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr hai,so in between 2 or more ud hum ko padahne ko millenge to we really don't mind 😉nahi...itne dur ki toh main bhi nahi soch rahi hun, ab se na...main apne sare fics ko jaldi jaldi ud karungi...!!! thoda chota hoga...par regular hoga...😃

HAPPY DIWALI TO YOU TOOOOO

Originally posted by: Sur_Singhania

Hi Priya Hiiii Sur...

To finally me tumhari is fic pe bhi pahuch hi gai ghumti ghamti! welcome darl...🤗

I must say ye baaki dono se kaafi alag hai..very emtional but as usual very gud. alag is liye hai kyoun ki mera dimag hamesha ek hi jagah par toh tikta hai nahi...😆

ur writing style is full to bindass..aisa lagta hai k sach me samne tv chal raha hai..seriously! ...lo...chane k jhaad par chadhane k liye sirf tum hi baki thi...😆

Chap 1 nd intro

shuru me jo lines likhi tumne wo bahut achi hai..pehle pyar...bahut strange hota hai...na milta hai aur na hi choot ta hai..very well expressed!👏yeh mera personal xperience bilkul nahi hai😆...bass kah sakti ho ki ek din dimag ghum gaya...aur yeh sab likh baithi...😆 ...par thanqqq sweety...tumhare comment k liye...😃

Raj is alive! 😃meri jaan ki jaan na lene k liye thanqqqq..🤗🤗Raj me sirf tumhari jaan thodi hi thi...sab ki thi...na...toh main kaise use kuch kar sakti thi...😃

aur ye military walo ki to mai😡😡

bezzati ki sabke samne aur case vapis liya to akele me..baised idiots.. haan...!!! yahi toh point hai na...!!! agar sab k samne karte toh un sab ka sara kiya dhara samne jo aa jata...😡

anyways ab vo kitna sad sad hai..apni Naina se alag😭 my sympathy

naina k bhi haal bure hai..crying like dat wo bhi subah subah..my dear ye raj hai..vaade ka pakka...hero ayega thoda sabr karo..acha hua k gunny a gaya uski help karne

emotins kafi ache se express kiye tumne.. haan...ek hi yahi chiz toh bachi hai mere paas...emotions...😃

Raj shud hav told her ! gadha kahi ka! jab naina use milegi to usey jaan se maar degi sachi me!😆😆nahi yaar...apne hath se kaise maregi...lekin haan..kuch na kuch toh karegi hi...😉

abhi baki k chptrs pe comm krti hu...mom bula rahi hai nahi gai to mera tabakla ho jayega jhehnum me ...arre vaah...phir toh maza aayega...!!! main toh roz vahan jati hun...meri mom mujhe har din ek ghante k liye bhejti hai...jogging k liye😆

love

sur

Originally posted by: Sur_Singhania

Chap-2

Nice intro... Thanqqqq😃

sabkie thi

Huda ko finally akal a gai...starnge k vo uth gaya 4 baje...uske asar kabhi lage nahi mujhe...aur uski jo bezatti ki capt pallavi ne dat was cool...mujhe aisa lag raha hai k ye huda ji ki dharampatni banengi..weird thought par mujhe aisa laga..poor girl ...ab huda k liye bhi kisi ka intezaam toh karna hi padega na...😆

Ali ka sapna was surprising..mene socha nahi tha k vo sapne me bhi aisa soch sakta hai...but acha hai uski sagai to ho gai vaise usool bhai thoda badale toh hain...par pura nahi...😛

Pooja ka sapna to lagta hai ali k sapne ka cont tha...hehe suhagraat k baad bache! dekha dono ka pyar kitna majbut hai...!!! jahan Ali ne sapna dekhna band kiya Pooja ne vohin se start kiya...😆

aalekh ki haalat is bad...Neelu k sath hokar bhhi wo ussey kitna door ho gaya hai...is akash ki to mai!I hope Neelu jaldi se thik ho jaye nd alekh ko accept karle aur pehle ki tarah usey irritate kare wow...tumhe toh abhi tak sab kuch yaad hai yaar...!!! actually main Neelu ki us so called BF ka naam bhul gayi thi...😛

Naina to khair kya keh sakte hai...uske raj sir jo nahi to kuch bhi nahi...usse kaho dont cry..i think ye mene pichle comment me likh dia hai par chalo koi baat nahi dobaara padh lo

Gunny ka char is gud,he always tries 2 cheer her up...badhiya hai

gr8 work thanqqqqqqqqqqq maam....😃

Originally posted by: Sur_Singhania

Chap-3

Very dhasu I must say..story ko bahut ache se depict kara hai tumne...Naaz mujhe bahut lagi mujhe...d way she cared abt Raj as her brother is amazing..asliyat me yahi hota tha until these b****** politicians came around...huh

neways i hope wo atanvadi Raj ko pareshan na kare vrna bahut bura hoga... unke liye of course

Naina ka akelapan is sooo depressing...Gunny uski diary padh k hi samajh gaya...lets hope jaldi se Raj a jaye nd sab thik ho jaye

nice part(i m running out of words now)

Originally posted by: Sur_Singhania

Chap 4

fir vahi bus vala scene! matalb apna hero a gaya! yippeeee! pehle vaale scene me paani dala tumne but nxt scene me u made up fr it..acha kia vrna sab milke maarte tumhe... haan yaar tabhi toh daar kar aisa ud diya...varna mera kya hota...???😆

finally Raj Naina k samne a hi gaya!

Naina ko bina dekhe hi feel ho gaya tha..and technically speaking Raj ne usey dekhte hi hug kia(he can use it as a defense l8r jab Naina uspe chilayegi)lol yeah technically Raj ne Naina ko hug hi kiya tha...😉

ab in atankvadiyo ki to khair nahi..inko pata nahi h pure unit ki zarurat nai padegi 2 hi kafi hai inko upar pahuchane k liye lekin inhe koun samjhaye...!!! dimag ki kami hai na...😆

nd ye Raj pakka marne ka plan bana raha hai Naina ko avoid karke... sahi kaha boss...😆

lets c aage kya hta hai

Originally posted by: Sur_Singhania

Chap-5

Mene kaha tha na k ye atanvadiyo ki band bajegi...baat hi nahi maante... na lete panga to zinda hote abhi tak...khair Naina ne pura 1 ud liya Raj ko pehchan ne me! very bad...bada sir sir krti thi...pehli baar dekhte hi mask utar k dekh lene tha na..stupid girl...par Raj ne acha kia, apni nd Naina ki jaan bachane ka style mast tha!!! naina ki jagah agar tum hoti toh sayad yahi karti...par agar main hoti toh use pahle bhav khane deti...phir us ki voh halat karti ki aage se aisi acting karna bhul jata...😆

Ab yaar apne hero k chakkar me mai baki chars ko bhul hi jaati hu

Naaz nd Gunny sath sath ja rahe hai..badiya hai par Gunny ji soch samajh k line marna capt sorry major rajveer ki behan hai..agar apki complaint pahuch gai to vaare nyaare ho jayenge! nahi hoga...!!! kyon ki ek soldier ka dard ek soldier hi samajh pata hai...😆

Yes so back 2 main pt ie Raj nd Naina...Raj ki akal pe taala pad gaya hai kay? jis vehicle me baaki k jawan the, usme a jata Naina ko lekar..ussey baat to krta, aur Naina bhi dekho, ghadi wapis karke chaldi bina kuch kahe..ek baar sun to leti...vese agar usko ghadi achi nahi lagi to mujhe de di hoti, meri kharab ho gai hai na tumhara no baad me aata hai...!!! pahle mera no pahle aata hai...kyoun ki maine toh kho di hai apni wrist watch...😆

Raj to daudta reh gaya..dont worry hume Priya pe poora bharosa hai aapko Naina jaldi fir milegi..lol

ab mere pass kuch hai nahi kehne k liye tumhara dimag kharab hai kya...jo tum is fic k writer par bharosha kar rahi ho...!!! ek no ki JHALLI hai voh...😆

ur fic is gr8 thanqqq sweety...😃

jaldi se ud kardo bas

pm me fr sure ab yeh bhi koi kahne ki baat hai...😛

Sur