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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Thanks for the long and wonderful update?kaash all your updates could be of this length.tum toh mujhe maarne ka pura prog bana rahi ho yaar...lolz😆

You have described naina's feelings very beautifully?all the thoughts that she has while she is being held by the army officer. And finally when Raj tells her that he trust's naina?she recognizes him to be her raj..her life. Even today naina can read Rajs' eyes perfectly?she understands what he wants to tell her and acts perfectly. You have described their fight with the terrorist very well. Thanqqqqq Nisha...😃!!! mujhe toh kabhi kabhi apni hi fic samajh me nahi aati...lekin achha hua ki mere readers ko samajh me aa jata hai...😛

Naina is so happy to see raj alive that she herself does not know how to react at first..but then she feels hurt, angry and betrayed by the fact that all this while raj never contacted her. She is so hurt mentally and emotionally that she cannot feel any physical pain. She even gives back raj his watch. She thinks that she will never be able to forgive raj for this. Raj us ki zindagi me kitna imp hai...yeh voh janti hai. aur itne dino tak us k bina voh kis tarah se jeeti rahi...phir jab use Raj ki sachhai pata chali toh us ka is tarah se react karna toh obvious tha hi na...

Raj ko jab pata chala ki naina ne use pehchan liya to who baag kar naina ke peeche jata hai par tab tak bus chaalu ho chuki thi,naina raj ki awaj sunti hai par phir bhu mudh ke nahi dekhti. Please RN ko jaldi mila do?clear this misunderstanding between them very soon. dekhte hain ki next part me kya hota hai...😃

The scene between Gunny and Naaz was nice. You are upto something with these two. hmmmmmmmmmm....😛

Waiting to see RN together?continue soon.

Wish you a very HAPPY DIWALI AND PROSPEROUS NEW YEAR!! to u too dear😃

Thanqqqqq so much Nisha...!!!😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Mere paas shayad aaj words nahi hain kuch kehne k liye. Saara dard aur saara gussa Naina ka saaf samajh me aa raha hai mujhe. Tu hi bata kya kahoon tere is update k liye... tu kuch bhi kah de...mere liye vohi baht hai yaar...😃

"Brilliant One" Thanqqqqqq Vertika😃


aur agar ye kam lage to next time bahut saara likh doongi don't worry. likh to diya hai na...😛

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Par ab soch rahi hoon ki agar maine kuch nahi kaha to shayad "Wanted" me aa jaayega mera naam to filhaal kahe deti hoon mai jo kehna hai. bol na...main sun rahi hun...i mean padh rahi hun...😃

Raj ko maine last update me hi pehchaan liya tha, par mujhe ek baat samajh me nahi aayi vo ye ki tum ne mere reply par jo comment post kiya hai us me tum samajh hi nahi paayi ho mai kya kehna chahti hoon. I mean mai Salim Khan ki baat nahi kar rahi thi mai usi Army Officer ki baat kar rahi thi jis ko tum ne is update me reveal kar diya tha.
ohhkkkkkk.....😃

Raj jaanta hai na Naina ko sab se acchi tarah se bus vo ek baar fir se Naina ka imtihaan le raha tha na ki abhi bhi Naina me vahi spark hai na jo tab tha jab Naina se door chala gaya tha vo. Raj samajh raha tha Naina ko aur Naina us ka andaaz aur us ka ehsaas hi nahi us ki aakhein bhi padh le rahi thi; tabhi maine samjha ki agar Naina ka dil samajhta hai ki vo koi apna hi hai to jaroor vo Raj hi hai.
haan yaar...jo hamesha dil k kareeb hote hain...unhe toh pahchan hi leta hai na dil...😃

Naina aur Raj ne ek baar fir se saare terrorists ka mukabala bravely kiya aur is poore process me Naina ko pata hi chal gayi vo baat jo Raj chupana chahta tha. Bus Naina ka gussa ek baar fir itna badh gaya ki us ne Raj ko avoid karna start kar diya. Koi bhi insaan Naina ki jagah hota to aisa hi karta na, jis k liye hum ne itna intezaar kiya aur jis k baare me ye laga ki vo hum ko humesha k liye chod k chala gaya vo humare pass hai aur us ne kabhi kaha bhi nahi ki vo abhi bhi saath hai un k. yahi wajah hai naina k gusse ka...!!! voh toh umeed kho kar zinda thi na...ab use is baat se khushi toh hai...par Raj ne khud is baat ko chupaya...is baat se voh hurt hui hai...😊

Raj ko maaf karna Naina k liye vakai me asaan nahi hona hai. Shayad is jagah mai bhi Naina se agree hoon. Naina ne us ki gift ki hue watch Raj ko vapas kar di tab us ko ehsaas hua ki Naina ko pata chal gaya hai ki vo kaun hai? Raj ne roka par Naina chali gayi, par mai jaanti hoon ki jaldi hi vo fir milenge. achha...??? tujhe kaise pata ki vph dono phir milenge...??? mujh pe bharosha mat kar...😉

Song was brilliant n well suited to the current situation.
thanqqq...actually mujhe laga tha ki pata nahi yeh song thik hai ki nahi...😊

update soon, shayad ye mera abhi tak ka longest comment hai.
main bhi is baat se hairan hun yaar...!!!😛

Thanxxxxxxxxxxxxx a lot Vertika...!!!😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: kads_8302

hi priya, Hiii Kads...
how ru... f9...wat abt u dear...😊

waise toh mai jayada bolti nahi but kehna padega ki tum comedy ke saath saath serious kind ke fics bhi ache likhti ho.... infact mindblowing likhti ho...meri taang khinch rahi ho na...???😛
ab mai ek toh itne time ke baad padh kar comment de rahi hu... aur tum ho ki aise pt pe stop kar diya ... too bad.... kya karun...aadat se majbur hun...😆
tumhe jara bhi reham nahi aata hum readers par.....
hum pe nahi toh RN par hi kuch krupa kar di hoti.... tumhari baat par gaur karenge hum balike...😆
ok ab bahut nautanki ho gayi... seriously each n every RN part was very good and their eye game is my fav.... so is ud mai toh bahut sara eye to eye talk part that... so thanks for that... aur ab jayada bhaav mat kaho aur jaldi se ud kar do.... aur raj par jara rahem karo.... chalo ab tum itna kah rahi ho toh main kuch karti hun...!!!😃 par kya karun...

kads...



Thanxxxxxxxxxxx a lot Kads...!!!😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: desaiprachi07

Reply for part 3
Kya sab k sab Naina k peeche pade hue hain? 😡 Mai ye nahi kehti ki Naina k mom dad galat soch rahe hain,😕 par Naina ko abhi thoda waqt to de kam se kam, shaadi to honi hi hai bus ek baar Raj se mil le vo 😉. Gunny bhi jaa raha hai naina k saath mission par, 😃 accha hai saath me rahega to 😊. Gunny ko Naina k dard ak ehsaas ho raha hai 😭. Jahan tak baat Naaz ki hai to kaun hai vo jis se mile hai vo abhi? 😕

Thanxxxxx a lot Drishti...😃!!! naina kisi mission par nahi ja rahi hai. sirf ghunny mission par ja raha hai...!!! naina ki sirf posting hui hai vahan par...!!! aur haan...naina k shaadi ka tention mat lo...main hun na...!!!😉 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: desaiprachi07

I am sure ki ye Raj hi hai Salim Khan ka senior jis ne apna face hide kar rakha hai. Salim Khan to pehchaan hi gaya Naina ko aur saath hi vo officer bhi. Mujhe lagta hai ki is baar fir Naina aur us ki abiities ko test kiya jaa raha hai. Kyounki jaisa Naina ko mehsoos raha hai us ka matlab Raj hai us k aas paas. Is hadse ne vo bus vaala hadsa yaad dila diya LRL ka jab Naina ne Raj ko bachaya tha aur aaj bhi kuch vaisa hi scene hai.

Aur haan ye part 4 ka reply hai.

thanxxxx a lot Drishti...😃!!! haan voh Raj hi hai...yeh maine 5th part me clear kar diya hai...😃!!! maine isiliye hi voh bus scene rakha tha...kyoun ki LRL me yehi voh scene tha...jab naina ko pahli baar ehsaas hua tha ki Raj us par baht bharosha karta hai...tabhi us ne apni gun naina ko di thi. aur maine isiliye yahan par voh scene add kar liya...!!!😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
I'll be updating tonight...😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Naina is confused about that army officer aur woh usse apna sa lagta hai!!!!!😛 😛

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Raj Naina ko sabse acchi tarah se jaanta hai toh woh phir se Naina ka imtihaan lena chahta tha!!!!

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Woh dekhna chahta hai ke kya abhi bhi Naina mein woh spark hai jo tab tha jab woh uske saath tha ya waqt ke saath saath wo bhi badal gayi hai??😛 😛

😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

While climbing down from the hill, Raj ne Naina ki taraf apna haath badaya!!!!

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This reminded me of their going to the mentorship camp when Raj had helped Naina down a hill in a similar way!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Jisse Naaz takrayi thi usse chot lagi thi toh Naaz ne uske chot par band-aid laga diya!!!!!

😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Just as I had guess ke Naaz jisse takrayi hai woh Gunny hai!!!!

😊 😊 😊 😊

Why was Naaz shocked on hearing Gunny's name??

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Naina does not like taking anyone's help except Rajveer's!!!!!😛 😛 😛

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But her hand automatically went into Raj's hand and when she slipped he caught her in his arms!!!!!!

😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊Wow!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛
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Naina's feelings and confusion were very well described at every stage!!!!!👏

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She is trying hard to control her emotions as everytime she sees him she is reminded of Raj!!!!!

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Naina felt the touch to be familiar when he held her hand and gave her a gun!!!!😊

😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj ne kaha "I trust you Naina" but I am sure he was going to say "Naina Ah Singh"!!!!!!😉

😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

He stopped himself in time warna Naina usse pehchaan leti aur isiliye usne nahi kaha!!!!!😔

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Just like before once again Raj and Naina bravely fought against the terrorists!!!!!😊 😊

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Naina saw ke Raj ke haathon mein goli lagi hai!!!

History repeats itself as Raj is once again held at gun point by one of the terrorists who was not dead!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

The scene was exactly the same as before when the terrorist asked Naina to surrender!!!!!😊

😊 😊 😊

Pehle ki tarah ish baar bhi Naina Raj ki ankhon ki baat samajh gayi and they successfully defeated the terrorists!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Naina and Raj were both in each others arms on the ground!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

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Even today Naina can read Raj's eyes perfectly and she understands what he wants to tell her!!!!!!

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Naina ne ish baar uski ankhon se, uske dhadakte huye dil se aur uski ehsaas se pehchaan kiya ke yehi uska Raj hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

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Naina ignored his hand and walked off angry and sad!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡

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Naina ne apne asoon bahut muskil se dabake baithi thi and she is avoiding Raj!!!!!😭

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Raj is thinking ke Naina abhi bhi waisi hi hai but he is unable to guess the reason of her anger!!!!!

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Kya usne yeh nahi socha tha ke Naina ko jab pata chalega toh usse kaisa lagega??😡

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Was he stupid enough to think that his Naina won't be able to recognise him??😒 😒

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Naina's anger is justified kyunki usne Raj se itna pyaar kiya aur Raj ne usse hi nahi bataya ke woh zinda hai!!!!! 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Naina ko dawai lagate waqt usse koi dard ka ehsaas hi nahi hota hai kyunki Raj ka diya huya dard usse kayi zyada hai!!!!

But now she is crying as she feels ke Raj ne usse yeh baat na batakar khud se alag kar diya!!!!!

😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Naina returned the watch that Raj had given her!!!!!! Wohi watch jisse woh apni jaan se zyada sambhal kar rakhti thi usne woh watch lauta di!!!!!!😭 😭 😭

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Seeing this Raj realised that Naina had recognised him!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Finally the masked army officer is revealed to be Rajveer just as I had guessed!!!!!

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The song is very nice and describes their feelings perfectly!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina felt without even meeting Raj once she was so angry!!!!!!

Navin is right ke Naina kyun na ho gusse kyunki jiske liye woh pal pal jeeti rahi woh insaan zinda hai magar phir bhi usse kitna dur hai!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Naina feels betrayed and thinks he does not care for her feelings at all!!!!!!

Raj ne Naina ko rokna chaha magar Naina usse ansuna kar ke chali gayi!!!!!!😔 😔

😔 😔

Somehow Raj is responsible for all this!!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Raj collapsed on his knees while Naina went away from him!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

But they will meet again and I wonder Raj usse kaise manata hai after what he has done!!!!!

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Posted: 15 years ago

EPISODE:-6

Meri bahn Naina...ka dil kuch kah raha tha aur dimag kuch aur...!!! voh soch kuch aur rahi thi aur kar kuch aur rahi thi...!!!
HER HEART:- "tujhe ek baar sun ni chahiye thi...Rajveer sir ki baat...!!! ek baar mud kar dekh leti...ek baar apne aap ko rok leti...toh sayad sab kuch thik ho jata...!!! kam se kam ek mauka toh de deti unhe apni baat kahne k liye...!!! is sab k piche koi na koi wajah toh hogi hi na...!!!"
HER MIND:- "kyoun mauka dun main unhe...??? hamesha sir ne vohi toh kiya hai...jo unhe sahi laga...!!! un k kuch faishlon se mujhe bhi taklif ho sakti hai, kabhi socha hai unhone...??? mentorship k baad un ka voh ravaiya...mujhe abhi bhi yaad hai...
achanak us bus k sudden break lene se Naina apne khayalon se bahar aayi...!!! sabhi log phir se dare hue lag rahe the...!! Naina ne apni gun phir se tham li...!!!
ek jeep us bus ko overtake karte hue, achanak aa kar us bus k aage ruk gayi thi...!!!
bus ka door khol kar ander koi dakhil hua...voh sipahi Salim Khan tha...!!!
voh sidha Naina k pas gaya aur kafi baichaini k sath bola:- "maam...jaldi chaliye...!!!"
Naina pahle toh thoda hairan hui, phir thoda dari bhi...!!! us k awaz kaamp rahe the:- "kkkya...baat hai Salim...???"
Salim:- "maam aap pahle jaldi chaliye...bahar...!!! main jeep le kar aaya hun...!!!"
Naina ne dekha tha jab Rajveer ko goli lagi thi...kahin kuch...??? voh bahr bhaagi...!!! aur jeep k paas aa kar dekha...Rajveer khada tha...aur use dekh raha tha...bina palak jhapkaye...!!!
ek pal k liye Naina ko dil kiya ki...bhag kar jaye aur Rajveer ko gale se laga le...par phir us k ander use koi rok raha tha...!!!
us ne apni ankhon me anshun liye phir mudi...bus k ander wapas jane k liye...par ja nahi payi...!!! Rajveer ne baht tightly us ka hath pakad rakha tha...!!! Naina ne baht koshish ki apna hath chudane ki...par kamiyaab nahi ho payi...!!! us k muh se bhi koi awaz nahi nikal rahe the...!!!
Rajveer ne Naina ki taraf dekha...phir Salim ko dekh kar kaha:- "Khan...tum is bus me wapas chale jayo...hum dono baad me aa jayenge...!!!"
Salim:- "ji sir ji...!!!"
Salim Khan Rajveer ko salam thokte hue bus k kareeb aaya...aur do baar zor se bus ko peet te hua kaha:- "oye chal re...!!!"
bus chali gayi...Rajveer aur Naina ko rashte me akele chod kar chali gayi...!!!
Rajveer ne Naina ki taraf dekha aur dhire se kaha:- "Naina...jeep me baitho...!!! mujhe tum se kuch baat karni hai...!!!"
Naina abhi tak Rajveer ki taraf pith kar k khadi thi...!!! ankhon me us k anshun bhare hue the...!!! voh usi tarah se Rajveer ki taraf bina dekhe boli:- "par mujhe kuch bhi nahi sun na hai SIR...!!!
Rajveer:- "plz Naina ek akhir baar meri baat sun lo...!!! main aage kuch bhi nahi kahunga...!!! aage jo bhi tumhara dil kare voh karna...!!! plz ek baar meri baat sun lo...!!!"
Naina phir bhi Rajveer ki taraf pith kar k khadi thi...!!! Naina ka is tarah ki berukhi Rajveer ko dard de raha tha...!!! Rajveer ne Naina ka hath chod diya...!!! Naina vohin khadi rahi...!!! thodi der baad Rajveer Naina k samne aaya...!!!
Naina ne phir se dushri taraf apni nazrain ghuma li...!!! us k ankhon se lagataar anshun bah rahe the...!!! Rajveer bardast nahi kar pa raha tha...!!!
voh thoda aur kareeb gaya...Naina k...!!! thodi der ruka...Naina k chehre ko kareeb se dekhna chahta tha voh...!!! apni dil ki chahat ko Naina ki agosh me panah dena chata tha voh...par Naina us se bina nazar milaye khadi thi...!!!
Rajveer ne bina kuch kahe...achanak se Naina ko apni bahon me bhar liya...baht tightly...jaise voh kisi bhi keemat par Naina ko khona nahi chahta...!!!
"{ Tere liye hum hain jiye
Honthon ko seeye
Tere liye, hum hain jiye
Har anshun piye
Dil me magar jalte rahe,chahat k diye
Tere liye tere liye...}-2
Naina kuch der tak apne aap ko Rajveer ki bahon se chudane ki nakam koshish karti rahi...!!! par finally voh har gayi...Rajveer se...apne dil se...apne ander uth rahe us tufan k samne us ne apne aap ko surrender kar diya...!!! she hugged him fiercely n cried out loud...!!!
{Zindagi...leke aayi hai, beete dino ki kitab(2)
Ghere hain, ab humain, yaadain be-hishab
Bin puche,mile mujhe,kitne sare jawab
Chaha tha kya, paaya hai kya,humne dekhiye
Dil me magar, jalte rahe, chahat k diye
Tere liye tere liye}
Rajveer use aise hi apne bahon me jakde khada raha baht der tak...!!! Naina Rajveer k bahon me...us k seene me apna chehra chupa kar roye ja rahi thi...!!!
Rajveer mehsus kar raha tha Naina ko...apne dil k baht kareeb...!!! Naina mehsus kar rahi thi apne Rajveer sir ko...!!! us seene ko...jis ne us k har ek dard ko apna samjh kar aapnaya tha hamesha se...!!!
Naina ka dil kiya ek baar Rajveer k chehre ko dekhe...baht kareeb se...!!! kitni muddat se dekhi nahi thi voh chehra us ne...!!!
voh Rajveer se alag hui...dekha Rajveer k chehre ko...!!! phir us ne apni ankhen band kar di...!!! use darr laga ki kahin yeh us ka khawab toh nahi...!!! kahin phir se voh apne dil ko dard toh nahi de rahi hai...!!!
kafi der tak voh apni ankhen band kar k khadi rahi...!!! Rajveer ne us k cheek ko touch kiya...Naina ne dhire se phir se apni ankhen kholi...apne aap ko yakeen dilaya ki yeh us k Rajveer sir hi hain...!!!
Rajveer k ankhon me anshun the par voh beh nahi rahe the...!!! Naina ne badi mushkil se bas itna hi kaha ki :- "KYOUN...???"
aage voh aur kuch kah nahi payi...!!! us k honth kampne lage the...!! Rajveer k ankhon se do boond anshun chalke...voh bhi baht kuch kahna chata tha par kah nahi pa raha tha...!!! aaj us k yeh anshun us ki har ek baat ko ansuna kar k bah rahe the...jo salon se us k ander kahin dafn the...!!!
{Kya kahun,duniya ne kiye, mujh se kaisa bair
Hukum tha, main jiyun, lekin tere baighair
Naadan hai vo, kehte hain jo, mere liye tum ho gair
Kitne sitam hum pe sanam,logon ne kiye
Dil me magar jalte rahe chahat k diye
Tere liye tere liye...
Tere liye hum hain jiye
Honthon ko siye
Tere liye hum hain jiye
Har anshun piye
Dil me magar jalte rahe chahat k diye
Tere liye tere liye
Tere liye}
Naina:- "baht...baht dard hua tha mujhe...aap ko kho kar...!!! aur aaj bhi utna hi dard ho raha hai...!!! kyoun sir...??? aap toh zinda hain na...phir kyoun nahi kaha...??? kya aap ko kabhi bhi yeh nahi laga...ki main aapne haushle aur gurur ko kho kar zinda hun bhi ya nahi...!!! aap toh jante the na ki aap kya mayne rakhte ho mere liye...phir bhi aap ne yeh kyoun kiya...???"
Rajveer:- "kya tum abhi bhi mujh par trust karti ho Naina...???"
Naina ne kuch bhi nahi kaha...bass Rajveer k kareeb khadi rah kar us k chehre ko dekhti rahi...!!! par us ki ankhon se Rajveer ne mehsus kiya ki Naina ki ankhon me aaj bhi kitna bishwas bhara hua hai us k liye...!!!
Rajveer:- "main tumhare liye zinda hun Naina...!!! kyoun ki main dekhna chahta tha apne cadet Naina Ahh Singh ko jeet te hue...use best cadet bante hue...!!! kahte hain ki khawahish agar sachhe dil se karo toh voh puri hoti hai...aur maut zindagi k samne ghutne tek deti hai...!!! aaj main bhi zinda hun toh us ki ek badi WAJAH sirf tum ho Naina...!!!"
Naina k liye yeh baht badi baat thi ki us k Rajveer sir k zinda hone ki WAJAH voh hai...!!! aaj agar un k ankhon me kisi se milne k baad anshun hain toh us ki WAJAH bhi coh hai......
voh aur kuch der tak Rajveer k kareeb rahna chahti thi...par achanak se barshat suru ho gayi...!!! Naina se Rajveer ne kaha:- "Naina jaldi se jeep me baitho...varna bheeg jayogi...!!! yeh bin mausham ki barshat hai, bheeg jayogi toh bimar pad jayogi...!!!"
Rajveer itna kah kar Naina ko jeep me baithne k liye us k hath ko pakda...par ruk gaya...kyoun ki Naina koi move nahi kar rahi thi...!!! Rajveer ne dekha Naina ko hairani se...
Naina:-"bimar pad gayi toh kya hua sir...??? aap ho na mera khayal rakhne k liye...aur hamesha rahoge bhi...hai na...!!! sir...aap mujhe phir se akela chod kar toh nahi chale jayoge na...???"
last line kahte hue Naina k honth kaamp rahe the...ankhon me phir se anshun aa gaye the...!!! jaise voh abhi...isi waqt Rajveer se ek vaada chahti thi.
Rajveer aage badha...Naina k chehre k kareeb aaya...aur us ankhon me dekhte hue kaha:- "main tum se vaada karta hun Naina...main hamesha tumhare sath rahunga...!!!"
Naina k chehre par ek mushkurahat dikhi...
cut to SRINAGAR...
army camp...
7:30 p.m
cafeteria k ander aaye Lft Ali aur un k piche thi Lft Pooja...!!!
Pooja:- "oye Ali sun na meri baat...!!! tu samajh hi nahi raha hai meri baat ko...!!! dekh baht jald hamari shaadi honewali hai...us k baad toh hum dono sath me rahenge hi na...!!! toh phir abhi se do do quarter me kyoun rahe...??? abhi bhi toh hum dono ek hi quarter me rah sakte hain na...!!! dekh abhi toh hamari sagai bhi ho chuki hai...!!!"
Ali ne turn kiya aur kaha:- "aap samajh nahi rahi hai Pooja aisa nahi hota hai...!!! yahan hamare seniors ko pata chalega toh pata hai kya hoga...???"
Pooja:- "oye miss call...sab kuch thik hoga...!!! bas no thik jagah par lagni chahiye...!!! main abhi ja kar baat karti hun...!!!"
tabhi unhone ne suna :- "sahi toh kah rahi hai mobile ki dukaan...!!! is se faida toh tujhe hi hoga na...!!! tu Pooja ko khana bana na sikha dena...aur pooja tujhe thoda mordern bana degi...!!! vaise mujhe itna toh yakeen hai ki tum dono sath rahoge toh Pooja safe rahegi...par usool tere kya hoga...??? teri izzat koun bachayega...Pooja k hathon se...!!!"
Pooja aur Ali dono ne hairani se us taraf dekha...toh ek aadmi un ki tarf pith kar k baitha coffee pi raha tha...!!! dono aage aaye...aur jaise hi Pooja ki nazar us insaan par padi...voh Ali ko dhakka maar kar aage aa kar us insaan k gale lagi...!!! in fact hum yeh kah sakte hain ki gale padi...aur kuch is tarah se padi ki voh insaan apni chair k sath piche zameen par gira tha...aur us k gale me abhi tak Pooja lagi hui thi aur kah rahi thi...
Pooja:- "Kaidiiiiii...tu...???"
Alekh zameen se uthne ki koshish ki par Pooja abhi tak Alekh k seene lagi hui thi...!!! Ali mushkura raha tha...!!!
Alekh:- "abe usool...tere pyar ne toh Pooja ko baht BHAARI bana diya hai yaar...!!! dekh na...mujhe aisa lag raha hai ki maj Nair ne mere upar phir se 100 kilo ka samaan rakh diya hai...!!!"
Pooja alag hui Alekh se aur kaha:- "kya bakwaas kar raha hai...??? main kahan moti hui hun...!!! mujhe toh nahi lagta ki main moti hui hun...!!!"
Alekh:- "tujhe kaise lagega...!!! balki tu jis ko is tarah se gale se lagayegi.... use lagega...!!!"
Alekh aur Ali hassne lage zor se...!!! Alekh utha aur Ali ko hug kiya...!!! teeno baith kar coffeee peene lage aur batain karne lage...!!!
tabhi ek aur insaan aaya cafeteria ander...!!! us ne apni puri body ek blanket k ander chupa rakha tha...yahan tak ki pata bhi nahi chal raha tha ki voh ladka hai ki ladki...!!! yahan tak ki us ka chehra bhi chupa hua tha..!!! sirf ankhen hi dikh rahi thi...voh bichara sardi k maare baht kaamp raha tha.
voh aa kar ek chair par baitha...bina kisi k bhi aur dekh kar...!!! aur bad badane laga:- "pahli posting kar di Rajasthan me...aur us k baad Chennai me...aur ab yahan JnK me...!!! in logon ka dimag kya ghaash charne gaya hai...!!! garmi me adjust karna sikh liya toh mujhe yahan bhej diya...!!! mummy ji maine kyoun shart lagayi aap se...!!! main toh Rajesh k sath kitna khush tha...!!! Paro dudh deti thi toh main kitna khush ho jata tha...ab dekhiye in logon ko yahan par toh yeh log mere khun ka kulfi banane me lage hue hain...!!!"
Pooja,Ali aur Alekh chaunke...phir mushkurate hue apni jagah se uth kar us insaan k kareeb aane lage...!!! tabhi ek orderly coffee le kar aa raha tha...!!!
Alekh ne dhire se us orderly se kaha:- "madam ko ja kar coffee de do...unhe thand baht lag rahi hai...!!"
voh orderly aaya us insaan k paas aur kaha :- "madam yeh lijiye coffee...!!! pee lijiye...aap ko achha lagega...!!!"
voh insaan bhadak gaya aur apna blanket utar kar gusse me bola:- "abe barf k sadhe hue aulad main MADAM nahi ADAM hun...samjha...!!! aur dubara agar mujhe MADAM kaha na...toh tujhe kuch bhi achha nahi lagega...samjha...!!!"
Alekh, Ali aur Pooja hassne lage zor se...!!! Huda ne un ki ore dekha hairani se...!!!
end of d epi (note:- posted n page 29)
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hey frenz...waiting for ur precious comments...!!! plz do comment or press d LIKE botton.
Thanqqqq😊
Edited by Lion_Priya - 15 years ago
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NOTE:- mujhe pata hai ki yeh ud baht chota hai...par mere exams chal rahe hain...abhi bhi 2 papers baki hain😭. par maine Yogitha ko vaada kiya tha isiliye ud post kar rahi hun. mujhe pata hai ki yeh ud itna khaash nahi hai...!!! kyoun ki mujhe khud is me kuch kami nazar aa rahi hai...par voh kya pata nahi chal raha hai...aap sab jamm kar galiyaan dena...😃!!!
aur "Tere Liye" song ki farmaish ki thi Suhana aur Shaina ne...!!! i mean un dono ne 4th episode me is song ko rcmd kiya tha...par maine is song ko yaahan par add kiya hai. thanxxx a lot guys...tum dono ne meri ek kaam asaan kar diya...!!!😃
vaise is song ko manatated (Manali)apni fic "love happens only once" me add kar chuki hai...!!! aur aap readers is song ko phir se padh kar bore honge...mujhe pata hai...!!! par hum bhi kya karen Manali aur maine ek hi music composer ko appoint kiya tha apne fics k liye.... SHAHRUKH KHAN aur voh hum dono se paise le kar bhaag gaya hai...😆!!! isiliye hum dono ne ek hi song ko apne apne fic me add kar liya hai...!!! hum dono k bich koi jhagda nahi hai bal ki yeh faishla hamara mutual hai...hai na Mana (haiiiiii)...!!!😆😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
Edited by Lion_Priya - 15 years ago

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