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Sur_10

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Posted: 15 years ago

#181

Chap-2

Nice intro...sabkie thi

Huda ko finally akal a gai...starnge k vo uth gaya 4 baje...uske asar kabhi lage nahi mujhe...aur uski jo bezatti ki capt pallavi ne dat was cool...mujhe aisa lag raha hai k ye huda ji ki dharampatni banengi..weird thought par mujhe aisa laga..poor girl

Ali ka sapna was surprising..mene socha nahi tha k vo sapne me bhi aisa soch sakta hai...but acha hai uski sagai to ho gai

Pooja ka sapna to lagta hai ali k sapne ka cont tha...hehe suhagraat k baad bache!

aalekh ki haalat is bad...Neelu k sath hokar bhhi wo ussey kitna door ho gaya hai...is akash ki to mai!I hope Neelu jaldi se thik ho jaye nd alekh ko accept karle aur pehle ki tarah usey irritate kare

Naina to khair kya keh sakte hai...uske raj sir jo nahi to kuch bhi nahi...usse kaho dont cry..i think ye mene pichle comment me likh dia hai par chalo koi baat nahi dobaara padh lo

Gunny ka char is gud,he always tries 2 cheer her up...badhiya hai

gr8 work

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Sur_10

@Sur_10

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Posted: 15 years ago

#182

Chap-3

Very dhasu I must say..story ko bahut ache se depict kara hai tumne...Naaz mujhe bahut lagi mujhe...d way she cared abt Raj as her brother is amazing..asliyat me yahi hota tha until these b****** politicians came around...huh

neways i hope wo atanvadi Raj ko pareshan na kare vrna bahut bura hoga... unke liye of course

Naina ka akelapan is sooo depressing...Gunny uski diary padh k hi samajh gaya...lets hope jaldi se Raj a jaye nd sab thik ho jaye

nice part(i m running out of words now)

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Sur_10

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Posted: 15 years ago

#183

Chap 4

fir vahi bus vala scene! matalb apna hero a gaya! yippeeee! pehle vaale scene me paani dala tumne but nxt scene me u made up fr it..acha kia vrna sab milke maarte tumhe...finally Raj Naina k samne a hi gaya!

Naina ko bina dekhe hi feel ho gaya tha..and technically speaking Raj ne usey dekhte hi hug kia(he can use it as a defense l8r jab Naina uspe chilayegi)lol

ab in atankvadiyo ki to khair nahi..inko pata nahi h pure unit ki zarurat nai padegi 2 hi kafi hai inko upar pahuchane k liye

nd ye Raj pakka marne ka plan bana raha hai Naina ko avoid karke...

lets c aage kya hta hai

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Sur_10

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Posted: 15 years ago

#184

Chap-5

Mene kaha tha na k ye atanvadiyo ki band bajegi...baat hi nahi maante... na lete panga to zinda hote abhi tak...khair Naina ne pura 1 ud liya Raj ko pehchan ne me! very bad...bada sir sir krti thi...pehli baar dekhte hi mask utar k dekh lene tha na..stupid girl...par Raj ne acha kia, apni nd Naina ki jaan bachane ka style mast tha!!!

Ab yaar apne hero k chakkar me mai baki chars ko bhul hi jaati hu

Naaz nd Gunny sath sath ja rahe hai..badiya hai par Gunny ji soch samajh k line marna capt sorry major rajveer ki behan hai..agar apki complaint pahuch gai to vaare nyaare ho jayenge!

Yes so back 2 main pt ie Raj nd Naina...Raj ki akal pe taala pad gaya hai kay? jis vehicle me baaki k jawan the, usme a jata Naina ko lekar..ussey baat to krta, aur Naina bhi dekho, ghadi wapis karke chaldi bina kuch kahe..ek baar sun to leti...vese agar usko ghadi achi nahi lagi to mujhe de di hoti, meri kharab ho gai hai na

Raj to daudta reh gaya..dont worry hume Priya pe poora bharosa hai aapko Naina jaldi fir milegi..lol

ab mere pass kuch hai nahi kehne k liye

ur fic is gr8

jaldi se ud kardo bas

pm me fr sure

Sur

Edited by Sur_Singhania - 15 years ago

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Nisha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#185

Thanks for the long and wonderful update…kaash all your updates could be of this length.

You have described naina's feelings very beautifully…all the thoughts that she has while she is being held by the army officer. And finally when Raj tells her that he trust's naina…she recognizes him to be her raj..her life. Even today naina can read Rajs' eyes perfectly…she understands what he wants to tell her and acts perfectly. You have described their fight with the terrorist very well.

Naina is so happy to see raj alive that she herself does not know how to react at first..but then she feels hurt, angry and betrayed by the fact that all this while raj never contacted her. She is so hurt mentally and emotionally that she cannot feel any physical pain. She even gives back raj his watch. She thinks that she will never be able to forgive raj for this.

Raj ko jab pata chala ki naina ne use pehchan liya to who baag kar naina ke peeche jata hai par tab tak bus chaalu ho chuki thi,naina raj ki awaj sunti hai par phir bhu mudh ke nahi dekhti. Please RN ko jaldi mila do…clear this misunderstanding between them very soon.

The scene between Gunny and Naaz was nice. You are upto something with these two.

Waiting to see RN together…continue soon.

Wish you a very HAPPY DIWALI AND PROSPEROUS NEW YEAR!!

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 15 years ago

#186

Mere paas shayad aaj words nahi hain kuch kehne k liye. Saara dard aur saara gussa Naina ka saaf samajh me aa raha hai mujhe. Tu hi bata kya kahoon tere is update k liye

"Brilliant One"

aur agar ye kam lage to next time bahut saara likh doongi don't worry.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 15 years ago

#187

Par ab soch rahi hoon ki agar maine kuch nahi kaha to shayad "Wanted" me aa jaayega mera naam to filhaal kahe deti hoon mai jo kehna hai.

Raj ko maine last update me hi pehchaan liya tha, par mujhe ek baat samajh me nahi aayi vo ye ki tum ne mere reply par jo comment post kiya hai us me tum samajh hi nahi paayi ho mai kya kehna chahti hoon. I mean mai Salim Khan ki baat nahi kar rahi thi mai usi Army Officer ki baat kar rahi thi jis ko tum ne is update me reveal kar diya tha.

Raj jaanta hai na Naina ko sab se acchi tarah se bus vo ek baar fir se Naina ka imtihaan le raha tha na ki abhi bhi Naina me vahi spark hai na jo tab tha jab Naina se door chala gaya tha vo. Raj samajh raha tha Naina ko aur Naina us ka andaaz aur us ka ehsaas hi nahi us ki aakhein bhi padh le rahi thi; tabhi maine samjha ki agar Naina ka dil samajhta hai ki vo koi apna hi hai to jaroor vo Raj hi hai.

Naina aur Raj ne ek baar fir se saare terrorists ka mukabala bravely kiya aur is poore process me Naina ko pata hi chal gayi vo baat jo Raj chupana chahta tha. Bus Naina ka gussa ek baar fir itna badh gaya ki us ne Raj ko avoid karna start kar diya. Koi bhi insaan Naina ki jagah hota to aisa hi karta na, jis k liye hum ne itna intezaar kiya aur jis k baare me ye laga ki vo hum ko humesha k liye chod k chala gaya vo humare pass hai aur us ne kabhi kaha bhi nahi ki vo abhi bhi saath hai un k.

Raj ko maaf karna Naina k liye vakai me asaan nahi hona hai. Shayad is jagah mai bhi Naina se agree hoon. Naina ne us ki gift ki hue watch Raj ko vapas kar di tab us ko ehsaas hua ki Naina ko pata chal gaya hai ki vo kaun hai? Raj ne roka par Naina chali gayi, par mai jaanti hoon ki jaldi hi vo fir milenge. Song was brilliant n well suited to the current situation.

update soon, shayad ye mera abhi tak ka longest comment hai.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago

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kads_8302

@kads_8302

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Posted: 15 years ago

#188

hi priya,
how ru...
waise toh mai jayada bolti nahi but kehna padega ki tum comedy ke saath saath serious kind ke fics bhi ache likhti ho.... infact mindblowing likhti ho...
ab mai ek toh itne time ke baad padh kar comment de rahi hu... aur tum ho ki aise pt pe stop kar diya ... too bad....
tumhe jara bhi reham nahi aata hum readers par.....
hum pe nahi toh RN par hi kuch krupa kar di hoti....
ok ab bahut nautanki ho gayi... seriously each n every RN part was very good and their eye game is my fav.... so is ud mai toh bahut sara eye to eye talk part that... so thanks for that... aur ab jayada bhaav mat kaho aur jaldi se ud kar do.... aur raj par jara rahem karo....

kads...

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desaiprachi07

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Posted: 15 years ago

#189

Reply for part 3

Kya sab k sab Naina k peeche pade hue hain? 😡 Mai ye nahi kehti ki Naina k mom dad galat soch rahe hain,😕 par Naina ko abhi thoda waqt to de kam se kam, shaadi to honi hi hai bus ek baar Raj se mil le vo 😉. Gunny bhi jaa raha hai naina k saath mission par, 😃 accha hai saath me rahega to 😊. Gunny ko Naina k dard ak ehsaas ho raha hai 😭. Jahan tak baat Naaz ki hai to kaun hai vo jis se mile hai vo abhi? 😕

Edited by desaiprachi07 - 15 years ago

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desaiprachi07

@desaiprachi07

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Posted: 15 years ago

#190

I am sure ki ye Raj hi hai Salim Khan ka senior jis ne apna face hide kar rakha hai. Salim Khan to pehchaan hi gaya Naina ko aur saath hi vo officer bhi. Mujhe lagta hai ki is baar fir Naina aur us ki abiities ko test kiya jaa raha hai. Kyounki jaisa Naina ko mehsoos raha hai us ka matlab Raj hai us k aas paas. Is hadse ne vo bus vaala hadsa yaad dila diya LRL ka jab Naina ne Raj ko bachaya tha aur aaj bhi kuch vaisa hi scene hai.

Aur haan ye part 4 ka reply hai.

Edited by desaiprachi07 - 15 years ago

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