ANKAHI...{LRL-RN}note n page 157 - Page 15

Originally posted by: sania_58

Eid mubarak to u too

awsome update

too good

loved it

great going

plz continue soon

Hi priya,

This fic is nice, n i liked all the parts they r simply awesome,u described each character very well,great work 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Naaz n the strangers pehle aap pehle aap was funny ,by the way who is this stranger, i think it is gunny

Naina tackled salim khan very well, finally jiska intezaar tha wo moment came wohi yaar our fav couple meeting indirectly sahi 😃😃😃😃😃😃

u described the emotions of both raj n naina well

Raj naina ka naam sunte his grip on her was tight haiiiiiiiiii aur wo naina ko aur bhi kareeb mehsus karna chatha hai,😳😳😳😳😳

The poem was beautiful

waiting for the next part, plz continue soon

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

You are very very bad....Why did you stop here...????😡😡 😡 thanxxx a lot...😆 n main is tym par isiliye ruki taki tum jaan payo ki i m a baaaaaaaaaad girl😆

You know you describe the action scenes very well....!!!!👏👏 We can imagine very easily what is going on...!!!👍🏼chalo bach gaye...actually mujhe khud pata nahin tha ki main thik se xplain kar payungi ya nahin...us scene ko...😃
Naaz n the stranger's 'pehle aap-pehle aap' thing was funny😆😆😆 ...and the guy who came later was actually running behind his wife who was running away...!!!! 🤣🤣yeah dear...tabhi toh log gaate hain na k 'dost dost na raha...pyar pyar na raha'😆 😆
We did see the Eid ka Chaand 😉 ...though not properly...!!!! 😛properly bhi dikha dungi...bas thoda sa aur intezar...😛
The feeling scene was very well described....!!! 😳😳👏👏Thanqqqq Dhara...😃

Now you dont become Eid ka Chaand n update soon...!!!😛nahin main Eid ka chaand nahin banugi...aur jaldi ud post karne k bare me try karungi...😃

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Priya hiii Suhana😃

How r u????? f9 dear...wat abt u???😃

Happy Eid to u too🤗🤗.

First of all let me tell u ki woh jo maine last update mein shayri likhi thi woh mere paas likhi rakhi hai..maine nahin likhi hai yaar tum ko aisa laga bhi kaise ki main itna accha likh leti hoon..😳😳😳

Maina to bas theek se reply hi kar doon wohi bahut hai...😆😆😆mujhe laga tha ki sayad jiju k sangat ka aasar hai jo tum sayari karne lagi ho...😆 😆 😆

Now coming to the update it was excellent👏👏👏thanqqqq😃

That man who held Naina was known to her..😲😲maina kya kya socha tha!!😃😃😃 mujhe pata tha...sabhi ne ek hi baat socha tha...isiliye mujhe achha mauka mila aap sab ko din me taare dikhane ka...😆

Naaz n woh ajnabhi to pehle aap pehle aap karte karte train jaane ka intezaar kar rahe the...😆😆😆

Waise woh hain kaun??? next ud me sayad clear karungi...😃

Finally the moment came where Raj met Naina... tumhe kaise pata ki voh Raj hai...??? voh Huda, gunny,ya kisi aur naye hero ki bhi toh entry ho sakti hai na...😛 😛 😆 😆

He was so shocked to know that he is holding her on the gun point..Even Naina recognized his touch..How can she ever forget him..???? abhi tak conform nahin hai ki voh raj hai ya nahin...😛

Abhi Naina ne usko theek se dekha nahin hain par woh uski aankhon se usko pehchaan rahi hai...

Dono ki hi aankhein aapas mein bina kuch bole baatein kar rahi hain... arre tum abhi bhi sochti ho ki voh Raj hai...???😆

Is moment par to mujhe ek gana yaad aa raha hai...

"Tere liye, ham hain jiye, honton ko siye
Tere liye, ham hain jiye, har aansoo piye
Dil mein magar, jalte rahe, chaahat ke diye
Tere liye, tere liye
Tere liye, ham hain jiye, har aansoo piye
Tere liye, ham hain jiye, honton ko siye
Dil mein magar, jalte rahe, chaahat ke diye
Tere liye, tere liye
Zindagi, le ke aayi hai, beete dinon ki kitaab
Ghere hain, ab hamein, yaadein be-hisaab
Bin poochhe, mile mujhe, kitne saare jawaab
Chaaha tha kya, paaya hai kya, hamne dekhiye
Dil mein magar, jalte rahe, chaahat ke diye
Tere liye, tere liye
Kya kahoon, duniya ne kiya, mujh se kaisa bair
Hukam tha, main jiyun, lekin tere baghair
Naadaan hai woh, kehte hain jo, mere liye tum ho ghair
Kitne sitam, hampe sanam, logon ne kiye
Dil mein magar, jalte rahe, chaahat ke diye
Tere liye, tere liye
Tere liye, ham hain jiye, honton ko siye
Tere liye, ham hain jiye, har aansoo piye
Dil mein magar, jalte rahe, chaahat ke diye
Tere liye, tere liye
Tere liye"

I hope tumhe accha lage...😛😛😛song toh bilkul perfect chuna hai tum ne👏...par agar naina k samne Raj hota toh yeh song baht hi achhe se suit karta...😛

kitne crucial point par update rok diya..

Wat will happen now???Kya Raj n Naina milenge... haan is fic me toh RN milenge...par kab aur kahan...yeh toh bas is fic ki stupid writer k dimag me kaid hai...😛

Pls update soon

Bye

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

That was an extremely bad part.😡😡 thanqqqq so much sumi jee😆 😆

Raj ki entry karwake bhi thik se nahi ki tumne.....aur nahi Naaz k saath wo kaun tha ye bataya......Eid spl me aisa thodi hota hai dear..........Pure UD me to Raj ka naam bhi nahi tha...😲ud me Raj ka naam ho ya na ho...hum sab k dil me toh hai😛. aur tumhe kis ne kah diya ki Raj ki entry hui hai😛...sayad tum jise raj samajh rahi ho...voh koi aur nikle😆...aur rahi baat Naaz ki...toh us k sath maj bhargav hain...😆

But haan, wo poem achha tha ...Thanqqq ma'am😃

.......aur entry ka style bhi....kitna intelligent hai apne Major Saab...😳😳😳....bas usiki wajah se tumhe chhor rahi hu.....but next part me aisa kuch nahi chalega ok....mujhe Raj adha adhura nahi pura pura chahiye😳😉arre Raj hai hi nahin toh main kahan se layun...😆...!!! n thanxx a lot tum ne mujhe maj saab ki wajah se chod diya...😆!!! vaise maj saab hain hi itne achhe ki sabhi un k liye kuch bhi karne k liye taiyar ho jate hain...😉

Anyways, EID ke waqt jhooth nahi bolungi......part bahut achha tha. thanqqq Sumi jee😃

Par ab tum bhi thodi achhi ban jao.....hamare dil ki halat ko samjho aur jaldi se UD kardo.😊😊😉 😳ok...tum 2 min ruko main 2 din baad ud karti hun...😆!!! just kidding...😆...main jaldi ud karne ki koshish karungi😃

Originally posted by: manatated

khadoos priya!! ek aur naya naam...😆??? vaise yeh naam baht cute lagata hai na...😆

ek toh Eid ke chand ki tarah update karti ho....aur uparse eid ka chand dekhne ke liye jaise tadap te hai waise suspense rakh kar tadpaati ho! tabhi toh tum ne mujhe itne achhe naam se nabaza hai...'khadoos Priya'...😆

khair....tum bhi kya karogi? aadat se majboor ho!😆voh kahte hain na...apna profession badla itna aasan nahin hota...😆

Update ekdam zhakkas tha! Thanqqq Mana jee...😃

ab plz nxt time paani mat pherna.....kehdo woh officer Rajveer hai...(jo main jaanti hoon tum itni aasani se nahi kahogi!) he...he...he...yaar tum mujhe kitne achhe se janti ho...!!! aur rahi baat pani pherne ki toh abhi barshat ki wajah se charon taraf bas paani hi pani hai...toh mujhe pherne ki jarurat hi nahin hai na...😆

arey jaldi update karna....plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz karungi...par tum ho kahan aaj kal...??? nazar hi nahin aati ho...

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

I cannot believe that you stopped at such a point...how could you....you know that we have all been waiting for Raj and Naina's reunion. sorry...dear...par voh sach me Raj nahin hai...voh koi aur hai...!!! i hope ki next part me main voh clear kar dungi...😛

But the surprise with Sipahi Salim was good...completely unexpected. mujhe pata tha...😆

But please don't give us any more surprises...bas RN ko mila do. hmmmmm...😛

The scene with Naaz and the strangers was were funny.

Please continue soon