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Posted: 15 years ago
You are very very bad....Why did you stop here...????😡😡
😡You know you describe the action scenes very well....!!!!👏👏 We can imagine very easily what is going on...!!!👍🏼
Naaz n the stranger's 'pehle aap-pehle aap' thing was funny😆😆😆 ...and the guy who came later was actually running behind his wife who was running away...!!!! 🤣🤣
We did see the Eid ka Chaand 😉 ...though not properly...!!!! 😛
The feeling scene was very well described....!!! 👏

Now you dont become Eid ka Chaand n update soon...!!!😛
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hi Priya

How r u?????

Happy Eid to u too🤗🤗.
First of all let me tell u ki woh jo maine last update mein shayri likhi thi woh mere paas likhi rakhi hai..maine nahin likhi hai yaar tum ko aisa laga bhi kaise ki main itna accha likh leti hoon..😳😳😳
Maina to bas theek se reply hi kar doon wohi bahut hai...😆😆😆
Now coming to the update it was excellent👏👏👏
That man who held Naina was known to her..😲😲maina kya kya socha tha!!😃😃😃
Naaz n woh ajnabhi to pehle aap pehle aap karte karte train jaane ka intezaar kar rahe the...😆😆😆
Waise woh hain kaun???
Finally the moment came where Raj met Naina...
He was so shocked to know that he is holding her on the gun point..Even Naina recognized his touch..How can she ever forget him..????
Abhi Naina ne usko theek se dekha nahin hain par woh uski aankhon se usko pehchaan rahi hai...
Dono ki hi aankhein aapas mein bina kuch bole baatein kar rahi hain...
Is moment par to mujhe ek gana yaad aa raha hai...
"Tere liye, ham hain jiye, honton ko siye
Tere liye, ham hain jiye, har aansoo piye
Dil mein magar, jalte rahe, chaahat ke diye
Tere liye, tere liye
Tere liye, ham hain jiye, har aansoo piye
Tere liye, ham hain jiye, honton ko siye
Dil mein magar, jalte rahe, chaahat ke diye
Tere liye, tere liye
Zindagi, le ke aayi hai, beete dinon ki kitaab
Ghere hain, ab hamein, yaadein be-hisaab
Bin poochhe, mile mujhe, kitne saare jawaab
Chaaha tha kya, paaya hai kya, hamne dekhiye
Dil mein magar, jalte rahe, chaahat ke diye
Tere liye, tere liye
Kya kahoon, duniya ne kiya, mujh se kaisa bair
Hukam tha, main jiyun, lekin tere baghair
Naadaan hai woh, kehte hain jo, mere liye tum ho ghair
Kitne sitam, hampe sanam, logon ne kiye
Dil mein magar, jalte rahe, chaahat ke diye
Tere liye, tere liye
Tere liye, ham hain jiye, honton ko siye
Tere liye, ham hain jiye, har aansoo piye
Dil mein magar, jalte rahe, chaahat ke diye
Tere liye, tere liye
Tere liye
"
I hope tumhe accha lage...😛😛😛
kitne crucial point par update rok diya..
Wat will happen now???Kya Raj n Naina milenge...
Pls update soon
Bye
Edited by suhana_dixit - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Eid mubarak to u too
awsome update
too good
loved it
great going
plz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
That was an extremely bad part.😡😡 Raj ki entry karwake bhi thik se nahi ki tumne.....aur nahi Naaz k saath wo kaun tha ye bataya......Eid spl me aisa thodi hota hai dear..........Pure UD me to Raj ka naam bhi nahi tha...😲

But haan, wo poem achha tha.......aur entry ka style bhi....kitna intelligent hai apne Major Saab...😳😳😳....bas usiki wajah se tumhe chhor rahi hu.....but next part me aisa kuch nahi chalega ok....mujhe Raj adha adhura nahi pura pura chahiye😳😉

Anyways, EID ke waqt jhooth nahi bolungi......part bahut achha tha. Par ab tum bhi thodi achhi ban jao.....hamare dil ki halat ko samjho aur jaldi se UD kardo.😊😊

😉😳
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Posted: 15 years ago

khadoos priya!!

ek toh Eid ke chand ki tarah update karti ho....aur uparse eid ka chand dekhne ke liye jaise tadap te hai waise suspense rakh kar tadpaati ho!

khair....tum bhi kya karogi? aadat se majboor ho!😆

Update ekdam zhakkas tha!
ab plz nxt time paani mat pherna.....kehdo woh officer Rajveer hai...(jo main jaanti hoon tum itni aasani se nahi kahogi!)
arey jaldi update karna....plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 15 years ago

I cannot believe that you stopped at such a point...how could you....you know that we have all been waiting for Raj and Naina's reunion.

But the surprise with Sipahi Salim was good...completely unexpected.

But please don't give us any more surprises...bas RN ko mila do.

The scene with Naaz and the strangers was were funny.

Please continue soon

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Posted: 15 years ago
wonderful update..Naaz n stranger ka part was funny..aur rahi baat Eid ke chand ki..to wo thikse dhikh hi nahi paya😕 vo itne saare kale badal jo chaye hua the😉(ye Raj ne mask kyun pehna?😆)bus thodi si jhalak dikhi😛 but asli mazza to tab hai jab dhire se badal hat jyatein hai aur chand dikhta hai...toh bas ab badal hata de aur chand dikha de.........
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Posted: 15 years ago

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Woh admi kaun tha jisse Naaz station pe mili??😕 😕 😕 😕Kya woh Gunny tha??😛 😛 😛 😛

Yeh dono toh "pehle aap pehle aap" mein lag gaye!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Inhe kisi ne bataya nahi ke "pehle aap pehle aap" mein Lucknow waalo ki train chhoot gayi thi??😔 😔 😔 😔

The guy who came later was actually after his wife who was running away with his best friend!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Naina bhi kam nahi hai and she fought back against the person holding her!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Naina ko jisne pakda tha woh Sipahi Salim Khan tha!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲

He has worked with Naina before and she recognised him when he told her who he is!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Maine kya kya nahi socha tha!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Finally the moment came when Raj met Naina indirectly!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Naina recognised his touch and felt ke jis seene se woh lagi huyi thi uske har dhadkan ko mehsus kar chuki hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

After all how can she ever forget him??😊 😊 😊 😊

I loved the feeling Naina had at just Raj's touch!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Raj was shocked to know that he was holding Naina at gun point!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲

Naina ka naam sunte hi Raj ki dhadkan tez ho gayi aur tufan uske dil mein bhi utha!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Eid ka chand toh theek se dikha hi nahi kyunki mask mein tha na!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina can just see his eyes now and she can recognise them aur uske dil unhe dekh kar zor se dhadka!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina is now asking herself ke kaun hai woh jiski ankhon mein dekh ke laga ke Naina usse gehrai se judi huyi hai!!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕

Raj ki ankhen bas uske jeene ki wajah Naina ko dekh rahi thi!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍

The poem was beautiful!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Kab tak Raj Naina se bhaagne ki koshish karega??😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Waise for the meeting of Raj and Naina the "Tere liye" song from Veer-Zaara would have been perfect!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina is still thinking ke yeh kaun hai jo usse apna sa laga!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

I hope Raj and Naina meet properly the next time with the song in the background of course!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊


Edited by Shaina_b - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
hi dear..
kaisi ho...
hume eid ka chand nahi dikha dear...
b/c usne toh black mask phena tha...😉 😆
so ab jaldi mask nikalo.... aur pura chand dikhao...😆
waise isko kehte hai jisko dhunda gali gali woh hamre pichwade mili i mean mila... 😉 😆
ud was as usal very nice... koi doubt mat rakhna..
aur ab jaldi se ud kare ke pura chand dikhaoo...
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!! thanxx😊

Naina chand ko dekh kar Raj ko yaad kar rahi hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

😍 😍 😍 😍haan...kyoun ki suraj niklne k tym par use apni duty nibhani padti hai...😆

Naina is missing Raj and Navin very much!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Kitna akeli hai woh!!!!! haan...duniya me jise voh apne sab se kareeb samajhti thi vohi dono us se dur jo hain...

Mujhse ab uska dukh dekha nahi jaata!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔Ab jaldi hi usse Raj se mila do!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊yeh mere hathon me nahin hai...😛

Gunny medicine lene aaya hai tab bhi mazak kar raha hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛

😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆haan...maine bataya tha na...main yahan par gunny ko jyada serious type ka nahin dikhayungi...😛

Gunny ne Naina ki diary mein rakhi huyi Raj ki tasveer dekhi!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

The poem is beautiful and depicted Naina's pain very well!!!!👏 👏 👏

👏 👏thanqqqq😃

Naina ke diary mein likhe huye Kavita ko padh kar Gunny ko pata chalta hai ke uske dil mein kitna dard chhupa hai!!!!! naina ko apna dard dushron k samne batana achha nahin lagta hai...

But he did not say anything to Naina!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊batayega toh naina aur bhi jyada dukhi ho jati...

Magar mujhe lagta hai Gunny waha kisi aur wajah se bhi aaya tha!!!!!!

😔 😔 😔 😔nahin...aisa kuch nahin hai...😆

The way Naaz described her religion was superb!!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏thanqqq😃

Naaz Raj aur Naina ki jaan bachane ki koshish kar rahi hai aur iske liye woh kuch bhi kar sakti hai!!!!!

😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼haan...😃

Both these people and Naaz know about Naina!!!!!😛 😛 😛

😛 😊 😊 😊 😊hmmm...kaise yeh story aage badhne par pata chalega...!!!😛

Dekha ek Raj ne hi Naina se nahi kaha warna puri duniya ko pata hai ke Raj Naina se pyaar karta hai!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊sahi kaha hai tum ne...😃

Naaz ka boyfriend ek terrorist hai and she is fighting against him to save her beloved brother Raj!!!!!

😊 😊 😊 😊yeah...😊...

Poor Naina!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Her parents want her to marry soon but she cannot do that!!!!! kaise kar sakti hai voh kisi aur se shaadi...voh toh dil se judi hui hai Raj k sath😊

Accha hai woh ish mission pe jaa rahi hai kyunki waha sab theek ho jayega!!!!!

😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊nahin...Naina koi mission par nahin ja rahi hai...us ka sirf transfore hua hai J&k me...😊

Naina used Huda as an excuse!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Kisi aur ka naam bhi toh le sakti thi like Yudi or Gunny!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔gunny ko voh apne bhai jaisa manti hai...par huda ka naam lene k piche koi baat hai...😊

I think that would have been safer because I do not trust Huda one bit!!!!!

😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡bt i trust him...😊...bcz its my fic...😊

Naina apne mom dad se jhooth nahi bolna chahti thi magar uske paas aur koi raasta nahi tha!!!!!

😔 😔 😔 😔tabhi us ne Huda ka naam liya tha...😃

Pyaar toh woh sirf Raj se karti hai aur hamesha karti rahegi!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳ryt...😃

He is present in her soul and she can never ever forget him!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭is me koi shaq ki baat toh hai hi nahin...😃

Pyaar toh zindagi mein ek baar hi hota hai naa!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊jo pyar kya hai samajhte hain...unhe apni zindagi me sirf ek hi baar pyar hota hai...!!! par baht se log aise hote hain...jo yeh samajhte hain ki'yeh nahin...toh koi sahi'....😛

Gunny ko headquarters mein brief mil gaya hai mission ka aur ish mission ko lead karne waale ke baare mein bhi bataya gaya!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊jee haan...

Jo officer unhe lead kar raha hai woh apne saathiyon ko pehchanta hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛

😛 😊 😊 😊 😊haan...😃

I am sure Raj is going to lead them and Naina will be with Gunny in this mission!!!!!😊

😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼tum log guess karte jaao...tum sab k guesses par paani pherne k liye main jo hun...yahan par...😆 😆 😆

Naina ko ek terrorist se ghira huya bus dikha!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲

Now lets see what she does!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊main bhi usi ka wait kar rahi hun...😃

After all woh Raj ki protegee hai toh kamal toh karegi hi!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼dekhte hain koun sa kamal karegi voh...😃

Yeh kaun hai jisne Naina ke muh par haath rakha??😕 😕 😕 😕

I hope it is Raj!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊latest ud padh lo...maine tumhare is guess par already paani pher diya hai...😆 😆 😆


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