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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid



Haha.....main bhi na.....Raj k liye itna desperate thi ki socha hi nahi kisi aur option k bare me....haha🤣...par main bhi kya karu sweety Dil Hai ki Manta Nahi ☺️...par dear tum jaldi se UD karo....main sach me janna chahti hu kaun tha...😆😆

voh ek suprise item hai yaar...bas thodi der ruko...main baht der baad ud karti hun...😆
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EPISODE:-5
DIWALI SPECIAL
Ek army man aage aaya...aur kaha...:- "Ma'am...kya aap humain un terrorists ka sahi location bata sakti hai...???"
Naina apne khawalon ki duniya se bahar aayi aur kaha:- "Yes...!!!"
Sabhi Naina k paas baithe hue the...aur Naina zameen par sketches bana kar ek brief idea de rahi thi...!!!
"Kul mila kar 4 terrorists hain. aur jin k hath me AK47 hai...!!! Bus bilkul bich me hain...aur sare tourists bus k ander hain...terrorist bahar hi khade hain...bus ko gher kar...!!! Bich bich me ek terrorist bus k ander jjhaank kar ander ki halat ka jayaja leta hai."
One army man:- "Yani ki bus k charon taraf 1 aur 1 aadmi khade hain...!!!
Naina:- "Yeah...
Dat army man:- "Sir...aage ka kya plan hai...???"
Is baar voh army officer bola...jo in sab ko command kar raha tha...!!! Par mask k niche se us ki awaz baht hi bhaari sunai de rahi thi...par us k baat karne ka tarika Naina ko baht apna sa laga...!!!
Dat army officer:- "Lft Singh...kya aap hamari thodi si help kar sakti hain...???"
Naina:- "Jee sir...!!!" Naina abhi bhi us insaan ko le kar confused thi...!!!
Pata nahin kyoun...par voh officer Naina ka imtihaan lena chahata tha...!!!Sayad voh jaan na chahata tha ki Naina me abhi bhi dushmanon se ladne k liye abhi bhi vohi vohi junun hai ya phir waqt k sath sath us me bhi badlab aa chuke hain...!!!
Phir us officer ne apne aage ka plan bataya...!!!
Cut to d jungle......
Voh army officer, Naina aur Salim khan...sath sath gaye...!!! Naina k paas ek loaded gun tha...jise us ne apne kamar me chupa rakha tha...!!!
Plan bana tha k sabhi thik 4 baje tak bus ko gherte hue jungle k ander khade honge...!!! 4 gropus bhi banaye the un logon ne. Naina us army officer k group me thi...Salim Khan k sath...!!!
Vahan par 4 baje tak sabhi k pahunch jane k baad...apni presence zahir karne k liye charon group ek ek baar hi...ek bird ki awaz nikalenge...!!!
Naina us army officer k sath ja rahi thi. Aage Salim Khan tha...us ne bhi balck mask pahn li thi......us k baad voh army officer aur last me naina...!!! Bich bich me Naina us shaksh ko pehchan ne ki koshish kar rahi thi...par kamiyab nahin ho pa rahi thi.
Pahadi par se niche utarte waqt voh officer kuch yun niche utar raha tha...jaise voh barson tak kisi pahadi ilake me raha ho...!!!
Naina dhire dhire utar rahi thi...!!!
Us officer ne turn kar k dekha...Naina ek chattan par apne pair rakh kar niche utarne ki koshish kar rahi thi...!!!
Us officer ne apna right hand aage badhaya...taki Naina use pakad kar niche aasani se utar sake...!!! Par voh jis andaaz se apna hath aage badhaya...Naina us se hairan hui......!!!
Cut to Delhi railway station......
Naaz ne apne luggege train me rakha...!!! Nichewali seat us ki thi...samnewali seat par vohi insaan tha...jis se abhi abhi voh takrayi thi...!!!
Achanak naaz ne kuch notice kiya aur us insaan se kaha:- "Aap ko chot lag gayi hai...meri wajah se...!!! Dekhiye khun bhi nikal raha hai...!!!"
Us insaan ne apne mathe par hath laga kar dekha aur kaha:- "Arre nahin...chota si chot hai...apne aap thik ho jayega...!!!"
Naaz:- "arre aise kaise thik ho jayega...??? Main band-ad laga deti hun...!!!
Voh insaan:- "Aap bekar me tention le rahi hain...!!! Main bilkul thik hun..."
Naaz:- "Maine kab kaha ki aap thik nahin hain...??? Main toh aap ko lage chot ki baat kar rahi hun...
Naaz ne use aage aur kuch kahne ka mauka nahin diya...aur aage badh kar us k chot par band-ad laga diya...!!!
Us insaan ne thanx kaha Naaz se...!!!
Voh insaan:- "Toh aap... Srinagar ja rahi hain...!!!"
Naaz:- "Jee...!!! Mere bhaiya vahan par posted hain...main unhi se milne ja rahi hun...!!! Aur aap...???"
Voh insaan:- "Actually abhi abhi mera vahan par transfore hua hai...isiliye...!!!"
Naaz:- "Ohh...hiii...i m Naaz...!!!"
Voh insaan:- "Hi...Gunraj Singh Randhawa...naam thoda sa lamba hai...par mujhe mere kareebi...Gunny kah kar bulate hain...!!!"
Gunny ka naam sunte hi Naaz chaunki...phir bhi apne xpression ko chupate hue...us ne bas thoda sa mushkura diya...!!!
Cut to Naina......
Vaise bhi Naina ko kabhi bhi kisi ki help lena achha nahin lagata tha....!!! Use jab bhi jarurat padi us ne sirf ek hi insaan ki help li...aur voh hai Rajveer...!!! Us k jane k baad us ne kabhi aur kisi ki help nahin li...!!!! Par us waqt us ka hath apne aap hi us officer k hathon me chala gaya...!!!
Naina.....us officer ki ankhon me dekhte hue us chattan se niche utri...toh us ka pair thoda fishla...par us officer ne Naina ko apni bahon se sambhal liya...!!! Kuch pal k liye dono ki nazrain phir se mili...ek dam kareeb se...!!!
Us officer ki ankhon me ek sukun tha...toh Naina ki ankhon me ek uljhan...!!!
4:00 p.m
Charon groups apni apni jagah par pahunch chuke the...!!! Aur aapsi isaron se apne presence ko bhi ek dushre ko bata diya tha...!!!
Achanak Naina ne apni hathon me ek jaani pehchani sparsh ko mehsus kiya...Naina ne dekha...voh hath us officer ka tha...!!!
Naina ne dekha...us officer ne ek aur gun nikala aur naina ko dete hue kaha..."For u...
Naina:- "Par sir...mere paas mera gun hai...!!!'
Dat officer:- "Pata hai...par tumhe is ki jarurat pad sakti hai...!!!"
Naina ne aage kuch bhi nahin kaha...aur chup chap gun le li...!!!
Us officer ne voh gun Naina ko dete hue bas itna hi kaha ki......"I trust u...Naina...
Voh aage aur bhi kuch kahnewala tha...par chup ho gaya...!!!
Thodi der baad......
Achanak ek terrorist par goli lagi...aur voh vahin dher ho gaya...!!! Sabhi terrorist us taraf bhaage...toh Naina bhagti hui us bus k ander pahunch gayi...aur ander se lock kar diya...aur chillayi...:- "Sabhi plzzz niche let jayiye...!!!"
Sabhi tourist ne vohi kiya...!!! Bahar se terrorist us bus par goli chalane lage...par sare tourost niche lete hue tha...aur sath me naina bhi...!!!
Un terrorist par armywalon ne hamla kar diya tha...!!! Aur kuch der baad...goliyan chalne ki awaz band ho gayi...!!! Bus k door par kisi ne dastak di teen baar aur kaha...:-"Lft Singh...aabhi aap sab sab safe hain...!!!"
Sabhi tourist k chehre par khushi thi aur ankhon me anshun bhi...!!! Aur ek grav bhi tha...hamare desh k sachhe veeron par...!!!
Baht tez taliyoun k sath armywalon ka swagat kiya gaya...!!! Kuch tourists ko bhi halki chot lagi hui thi...!!! Naina bus se bahar aayi...toh dekha ki us army officer ko goli lag gayi thi hathon me...
Achanak ek terrorist utha zammen se...!!! Abhi kuch der pahle sabhi samajh rahe the ki voh maar chuka tha...par voh zinda tha...!!! Us ne us army officer ki taraf gun point kar k rakha hua tha...!!! Itihaas phir se dauhra raha tha...
Sabhi kuch pal k liye hairan se khade rahe...!!! Kai sare guns us terrorist par tiki...par goli koi nahin chala pa raha tha...!!!
Terrorist:- "Mere teen sathyon ko maara hai tum ne...!!! Ab meri rihai... is ki wajah se hogi...!!! Sabhi log ek side me khade ho jayo...varna main ise maar dunga...!!!"
Sare soldiers is waqt ek side par khade the...voh terrorist khada tha us officer k piche...aur kareeb 3 feet ki duri par Naina khadi thi us officer k samne...us k hath me bhi gun tha...aur us ne us terrorist ko point kiya hua tha...!!!
Voh terrorist mushkuraya aur Naina ko dekh kar kaha:- "Ladkiyoun ki hath me chudiyaan achhi lagti hai...gun nahin...!!! Us gun ko niche phenk de...varna tere piche khada mera sathi tujhe maar daalega...!!!"
Naina ne dekha...voh sahi kah raha tha...!!! Kuch hi duri par ek aur terrorist tha...jis ne Naina ko point kiya tha...!!! Naina ka andaaza galat tha...voh 4 nahin bal ki 5 terrorists the...!!!
Terrorist:- "Hum toh marenge officer...lekin sath me tum dono ko bhi maar kar marenge. Kam se kam is desh k sarkaar ko toh pata chalega ki...hum ne kuch toh taufa diya hai...unhe...!!"
Naina ne us officer ki ankhon me dekha...!!! Voh officer bhi Naina k hi ankhon me dekh raha tha...!!! Naina us officer ki ankhon ko samajh rahi thi...us k ankhon k isharon ko samajh rahi thi...ya phir yun kaha jaye ki...pahle bhi samjhti thi...aur aaj bhi samajh rahi hai...!!!
Us officer ne Naina ko kuch ishara kiya...jo ki Naina bilkul samajh gayi...!!!!
Do min k baad voh officer achanak chillaya:- "Salim Khan...shoot him...!!!"
Itna kah kar voh officer Naina ki taraf jump kiya aur use sath le kar niche zameen me gira...!!!
Aur un dono terrorist ne hadabada kar trigger daba diya...aur aamne samne hone ki wajah se ek dushre ki bullet ek dushre ko lag gayi...aur voh dono terrorist vohin par dher ho gaye...!!!
Bas kuch hi second ki baat thi...aur charon taraf khamoshi cha gayi...!!!
Naina aur voh officer abhi bhi ek dushre ki bahon me zameen par pade hue the...!!! Is baar Naina ki nazaron ne dhoka nahin khaya...Naina ne pahchana is nazar ko...is ehsaas ko...ek dhadkte hue dil ko...!!! Us ne kuch nahin kaha...bas us k ankhon me kuch boond anshun jhilmila gaye...!!!
Yeh vohi nazar thi...jis nazar me Naina ne hamesha pane taklifon ko dekha tha...apne dard ko dekh tha...Naina k liye parwah dekhi thi...desh k liye mar mitne ki chaha dekhi thi...aur Naina k liye ek ajeeb magar ek khaas ehsaas dekhi thi...!!!
Voh officer zameen se utha...aur Naina ki taraf dekhte hue...apna hath badhaya...taki voh use pakad kar zameen se utha sake...!!! Par Naina ne apna chehra ghuma liya...aur zameen se uth kar sidhe bus k ander chali gayi...!!!
Voh officer hairan hua...achanak se Naina ne use avoid karna suru kar diya tha...!!! Aur is baat ki wajah use samajh me nahin aa rahi thi...!!!
Phir voh bus jungle se bahar aaya...!!! Us bus me Naina aur voh officer bhi the...un tourists k sath...!!! Baki k jawan...ek aur vehicle se us bus k piche aa rahe the...!!!
Us officer ne Naina ki taraf dekha...Naina khidki k bahar jhaank rahi thi...!!! Usne apne ankhon k anshun baht mushkil se dabaye baithi hui thi...yeh baat us k tight jaw se saaf pata chal rahi thi...!!!
Voh sabhi abhi tak mask me hi the...kyoun ki unhe order mile the ki voh kisi bhi keemat par civilians k samne apni pehchan nahin kar sakte hain...kyoun ki voh ek spl military sqaurd tha...!!!
Voh officer dil hi dil me soch raha tha:- "Tum nahin badli Naina...bilkul bhi nahin badli...!!! Vohi gussa...abhi bhi tumhare paas hai...!!! Lekin aaj main tumhare is gusse ki wajah ko nahin jaan pa raha hun...!!!"
Bus jungle se bahar aa kar ek hospital k samne ruki...ghayal jawan aur tourists k ilaaz k liye...!!! Kisi ko bhi jyada chot nahin lagi thi...!!! Naina k hathon me chot laga tha...aur thoda sar par bhi...!!!
Naina ek nurse k samne baithi hui thi...!!! Us nurse ne kaha:- "jab main aap ko yeh medicine lagayungi toh...yeh jalega...!!!!"
Naina ne kuch bhi nahin kaha...voh jaise statue ban kar baithi hui thi...!!! Us k kanon me us nurse ki baat bhi nahin aa rahi thi...!!!
Us nurse ne jab voh medicine laga kar naina k hath aur sar ko bandage kiya...toh voh thodi hairan hui...!!! Kyoun ki us ne kai sare soldiers ko yeh medicine laga tha...aur sabhi is ki jalan se chillate hain...!!! Par Naina chup thi...
Voh chup thi...aise jaise use kisi bhi dard ka koi ehsaas hi nahin ho raha tha...!!!
Us ne Naina k hath aur sar ko bandage kiya...abhi bhi naina vaisi hi bathi hui thi...!!!
Nurse:- "Ma'am...aap ka bandage ho gaya...!!!"
Naina ne koi jawab nahin diya...!!! Us nurse ne dhire se Naina k kandhe par apna hath rakha aur thoda hilaya....!!! Naina hosh me aayi...!!! Nazrain utha kar us ne us nurse ki tarf dekha...aur Naina ki ankhon se do boond anshun chalke...!!!
Voh nurse hairan hui...kyoun ki jab dard hua hoga...tab Naina ki ankhon me anshun toh nahin the...par abhi jab sab kuch thik ho chuka hai tab us ki ankhen nam hain...!!!
Background......
"Meri bahn Naina......!!! Hamesha se aisi hi hai...!!! Us ka dil kab kya chahta hai kisi ko bhi nahin pata hota. Apne dard ko...apne ehsaas ko dabana use achhi tarah se aata hai. par voh apna gussa kabhi nahin chipa paati...!!! Lekin aaj main bhi hairan hun Naina ko dekh kar...!!!
Aaj kyoun hain us ki ankhon me anshun...???
Aaj kyoun voh phir se udaas hai...???
Aaj kyoun voh har ek dard se dur hai...???
Kis ka voh khayal hai...jis ki wajah se voh apne chot k dard ko bhul gayi...???"
Ek wordboy aaya aur Naina se kaha:- "Ma'am voh bus Srinagar jaane k liye taiyar hai...!!!"
Naina uthi apne jagah se...aur us room se bahar aayi...!!! Use bhi usi bus me jaan hai...Srinagar...!!! Achanak us ne dekha ki Salim Khan aa raha hai......!!!
Cut to dat army officer......
Voh door ki tarf pith kar k baitha hua tha...!!! Us ko goli lagi thi...par shukar ki baat yeh thi...ki goli jyada ander nahin gayi thi...toh doc ne voh goli nikal kar...bandage kar diya tha...us hath...!!!
Voh officer is waqt apni shirt pahan raha tha...aur doc us ki help kar rahe the...!!!
Salim Khan aaya......
Salim:- Sir......
Dat officer:- "Bolo Khan...
Salim:- "Sir...voh Lft Naina Singh chali gayi...aur aap ko yeh packet dene k liye kaha hai...!!!"
Salim aage aa kar us army officer k samne khada hua...aur use voh packet badha diya...!!!
Us officer ne voh packet khola...aur us k pair dagmaga gaye...!!!Aur voh paas pade ek chair par baith gaya...!!!
Use pata nahin tha ki Naina ne use pahchan liya tha...Apne teacher...Apne frnd...Apne mentor...Apne RAJVEER SIR ko...!!!
Background......
Bejaan dil ko......
Bejaan dil ko......
Bejaan dil ko tere....
Isaq ne zinda kiya....
Phir tere isaq ne hi is dil ko tabah kiya....
Rajveer k ankhon me anshun the...kyoun ki us packet me vohi wrist watch thi...jise us ne Naina ko gift kiya tha...!!!
Rajveer nazar utha kar Salim ki taraf dekh kar bola:- "Naina kahan hai...???"
Rajveer ka reaction dekh kar Salim thoda hairan hua...us ne kaha:- "Sir...voh toh chali gayi...abhi 5-7 min me un ki bus chali jayegi...!!!"
Rajveer bhaga...bus ki ore......
Cut to Naina...
Naina apne kandhe par apna bag rakh kar ja rahi thi...us bus ki ore...
{Tadap tadap k is dil se aah nikal ti rahi
Mujh ko saza di pyar ki
Aisa kya gunah kiya
Toh lut gaye...
Haan lut gaye....
Toh tlut gaye hum teri mohabbat me...}:- 3
Naina k chehre par aaj bhi vohi xpression tha...jo us din tha...jis din use sachhai pata chali thi ki mujh par goli Rajveer ne chalayi thi...!!!
Use tab bhi yahi laga tha ki Rajveer ne use betray kiya tha...aur aaj bhi use yahi lag raha hai ...!!! Na us k chehre par koi xpression tha...aur na hi us k ankhon me anshun...!!! Ek gussa saaf jhalak raha tha us k chehre par...!!!
Ajab hai isaq yaara...
Pal do pal ki khushiyan...
Ghum k khazane milte hain phir...
Milti hain tanhaiyaan...
Kabhi anshun kabhi aahain...
Kabhi sikwe kabhi naate...
Tera chehra nazar aaye...
Tera chehra nazar aaye
Mujhe din k ujalon me
{Teri yaadain tadpayain}:-2
Raaton k andheron me tera
Chehra nazar aaye...
Machal machal k is dil se aah nikal ti rahi
Mujh ko saza di pyar ki
Aisa kya gunaah kiya
Toh lut gaye ...haan lut gaye
Toh lut gaye hum teri mohabbat me...
Gussa akhir kyoun na ho meri bahn...??? Voh jis insaan k liye pal pal jiti rahi...jis ki yadon ko le kar apne bikhre hue sapno ko samet ti rahi...har ek lamha...har ek pal jis k liye marti rahi...jis ki maut ki wajah khud ko samajhti rahi...voh insaan zinda hai...phir bhi us se kitna dur hai voh......
Naina (under her breath):-"Kyoun sir...kyoun...??? Kyoun kiya aap ne yeh sab mere sath...??? Aap ko mere feelings ki zara bhi parwah nahin thi...!!! Ek baar bhi aap ko nahin laga ki...aap bhi kisi k jeene ki wajah ho sakte hain...!!! Mere har ek dard...har ek anshun ki wajah aap hi toh the na...phir yeh kyoun kiya aap ne...??? Kyoun chupte rahe aaj tak mujh se...??? Sayad aap k is galati k liye main aap ko kabhi maaf na kar payun...!!!"
Naina bus k door k paas pahunchi......
Piche se Rajveer bhagta hua aa raha tha......
Naina ne bus k ander apna kadam rakha...aur tabhi us ne apne piche se suna......
"Naina...ruk jaao plzzz...!!! Ek baar meri baat sun lo...!!!"
Naina ne us taraf dekhi bhi nahin...jab ki us ki nazar us chehre ko dekhne k liye baichain ho rahi thi...!!! Us ne apni ankhen band kiye aur us bus k ander chali gayi...ankhon me anshun liye aur conductor se kaha:- "Jaldi chaliye...varana Srinagar me pahunchte hue...der raat ho jayegi...!!"
Vaise bhi bus start ho chuki thi...Naina k seat par baithte hi...voh bus chalne lagi...!!!
Rajveer jab tak pahuncha...tab tak bus ja chuki thi...!!! Rajveer niche apne ghutnon k bal baitha zameen par...aashman ki tarf dekha...gusse se...
Agar mile khuda toh...
Poochunga khuda ya...
Jism mujhe de k mitti ka...
Sishe sa dil kyoun banaya...
Aur us par diya fitrat
K voh karta hai mohabbat
{Vaah re vaah teri kudrat}:-2
Us pe de diya kishmat
{Kabhi hai milan kabhi furqat}:-2
Hai yahi kya voh mohabbat
Vaah re vaah teri kudrat...
Sisak sisak k is dil se
Aah nikalti rahi
Mujh ko saza di pyar ki
Aisa kya gunah kiya
Toh lut gaye ...haan lut gaye
Toh lut gaye hum teri mohabbat me...
Tadap tadap k is dil se
Aah nikalti rahi
Mujh ko saza di payar ki
Aisa kya gunah kiya
Toh lut gaye...haan lut gaye ...
Toh lut gaye hum teri mohabbat me..." [Movie:- Hum Dil De Chuke Sanam]
Rajveer aur Naina dono k ankhon me anshun the...
Rajveer Naina ko samjhana chahta tha...
Naina samajhna nahin chahti thi...
end of dis episode......
🤗 HAPPY DIWALI🤗
Edited by Lion_Priya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Note:- Maine apni lyf me itni badi ud kabhi nahin likhi hai...mere kamar me bhi dard hone laga hai...jab tak main moov laga leti hun...tab tak aap sab comments kar dijiye...!!!😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

Mujhe pata hai ki aap sab is baar yeh ud padhne k baad mujh par itna gussa ho gaye honge ki is baar diwali se hi pahle double patakhe kharidenge...mere saar par phodne k liye...!!! Par main bhi kya karun apne aadat se majbur hun...!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
Ek baat aur... yeh ek fiction hai reality nahin hai ki Rajveer ko itni baar kareeb pa kar bhi Naina ne kyoun nahin pahchana...yeh aap sab sochen...!!! Ise bas ek serial ka episode hi samajh kar read karen...PLZZZZ!!!
Thanqqq😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hi Priya

How r u????This Diwali special update was just too gud...😊😊😊😊But thoda sad bhi tha...
Naina is trying to control her emotions...Everytime she sees dat man she is reminded of Raj..poor girl!!!! usko abhi bhi yehi la raha hai ki shayad yeh uska veham hoga...😭😭😭
Terrorist wala part was so much similar to the 1 in LRL...There too Raj n Naina killed all the terrorists n here too..
The scene where 1 terrorist held Raj at the gun point n den ask Naina to surrender was too gud...Pehle ki tarah iss baar bhi Naina Raj ki aankhon ki baat samajh gayi n they both succeeded in saving the tourists...😛😛😛
Naaz Met Gunny but why is she so surprised on hearing his name???
Naina finally Raj ko pehchaan leti hai but woh yeh show nahin karti..Usko dawai lagne ka koi dard nahin hota kyunki jo dard usne Raj ki death ke samay saha tha usse badkar to kuch ho hi nahin sakta...😭😭😭 But aaj usko yeh lag raha tha ki Raj ne apne bare mein na batakar apne se alag kar liya..Woh apni har ek baat Raj se share karti thi n Raj ne itni badi baat usko nahin batayi... Woh Raj ko uski watch lauta deti hai n usse bina mile hi chali jaati hai...
Uska har cheez se vishwass hat gaya...
"aaya woh phir nazar aise
baat chidne lagi phir se
aankhon mein chubta kal ka dhuaa
haal tera na hum sa hi
iss khushi mein kyun gham sa hi
basne laga kuyn phir woh jahan
woh jahan door jisse gaye te nikal
phir se yaadon ne kar di hai jaise pehal
lamha beeta hua dil dhukata raha
khamakha bewaja khwaab bunta raha
tune jo na kaha mein woh sunta raha
khamakha bewaja khwaab bunta raha
jaane kiski humein lag gayi hai nazar
iss shehar mein na apna thikana raha
door chahat se mein apni chalta raha"
Raj ko yeh jaankar shock lag jata hai ki Naina usko pehchaan gayi..😲😲😲 Woh aaj Naina se yeh sab kehna chahta hai but ab woh shayad sunna nahin chahti...
Shayad kahin na kahin Raj bhi iske liye zimmedaar hai...
Mere khyaal se dono hi sahi hain but shayad circumstances galat hain..
Pls ab unki saari problems ko door karo ....Vaise bhi next mission mein Raj hi lead karega Naina n group ko to time to bahut hoga unke pass apni misunderstandings door karne ka😊😊
Do update soon(But moov lagane ke baad😉😉😉)
Bye
Edited by suhana_dixit - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Sorry Priya..cudnt comment on last part....
fantastic part.... Rajveen n Naina aakhir mil hi gaye..!!!! 😳
terrosit se bacha liya sabhi tourist ko...n Naina ko realise ho gaya ki woh unknwon officer kaun hai..!!!
uska gussa hona valid hai... She hs all rights to know abt Raj...!!
Raj cudnt understand why Naina is angry...abb Raj ko paapad belne padege naina ko manaane ke liye..!! 😉 😆
Naina ko bandage ke waqt kuchh pain nahi hua but uske baad uski aankh se aansu nikle...!!!! yup...dard ke aanshu...but not because of physical pain but ..Dil ka Dard....!!!
ohh no Naina returned Raj's watch ..!! n didnt even stop to hear Raj's voice.. dono ro rahe hai...!!
end ws very sad.... 😒 😒
overall lovely update... chalo abb naina ko pata to chal gaya..hope Raj use jaldi manaa paaye..!!! 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely UD
chalo akhir naina ne raj ko pechana to sahi.
hope ye dono jaldi phirse mile.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Naina is confused about that army officer aur woh usse apna sa lagta hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj Naina ko sabse acchi tarah se jaanta hai toh woh phir se Naina ka imtihaan lena chahta tha!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Woh dekhna chahta hai ke kya abhi bhi Naina mein woh spark hai jo tab tha jab woh uske saath tha ya waqt ke saath saath wo bhi badal gayi hai??😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

While climbing down from the hill, Raj ne Naina ki taraf apna haath badaya!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

This reminded me of their going to the mentorship camp when Raj had helped Naina down a hill in a similar way!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Jisse Naaz takrayi thi usse chot lagi thi toh Naaz ne uske chot par band-aid laga diya!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Just as I had guess ke Naaz jisse takrayi hai woh Gunny hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Why was Naaz shocked on hearing Gunny's name??😕 😕 😕 😕

Naina does not like taking anyone's help except Rajveer's!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

But her hand automatically went into Raj's hand and when she slipped he caught her in his arms!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊Wow!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina's feelings and confusion were very well described at every stage!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

She is trying hard to control her emotions as everytime she sees him she is reminded of Raj!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Naina felt the touch to be familiar when he held her hand and gave her a gun!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj ne kaha "I trust you Naina" but I am sure he was going to say "Naina Ah Singh"!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

He stopped himself in time warna Naina usse pehchaan leti aur isiliye usne nahi kaha!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Just like before once again Raj and Naina bravely fought against the terrorists!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Naina saw ke Raj ke haathon mein goli lagi hai!!!

History repeats itself as Raj is once again held at gun point by one of the terrorists who was not dead!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

The scene was exactly the same as before when the terrorist asked Naina to surrender!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Pehle ki tarah ish baar bhi Naina Raj ki ankhon ki baat samajh gayi and they successfully defeated the terrorists!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Naina and Raj were both in each others arms on the ground!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Even today Naina can read Raj's eyes perfectly and she understands what he wants to tell her!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina ne ish baar uski ankhon se, uske dhadakte huye dil se aur uski ehsaas se pehchaan kiya ke yehi uska Raj hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Naina ignored his hand and walked off angry and sad!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Naina ne apne asoon bahut muskil se dabake baithi thi and she is avoiding Raj!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Raj is thinking ke Naina abhi bhi waisi hi hai but he is unable to guess the reason of her anger!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Kya usne yeh nahi socha tha ke Naina ko jab pata chalega toh usse kaisa lagega??😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Was he stupid enough to think that his Naina won't be able to recognise him??😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Naina's anger is justified kyunki usne Raj se itna pyaar kiya aur Raj ne usse hi nahi bataya ke woh zinda hai!!!!! 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Naina ko dawai lagate waqt usse koi dard ka ehsaas hi nahi hota hai kyunki Raj ka diya huya dard usse kayi zyada hai!!!!

But now she is crying as she feels ke Raj ne usse yeh baat na batakar khud se alag kar diya!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Naina returned the watch that Raj had given her!!!!!! Wohi watch jisse woh apni jaan se zyada sambhal kar rakhti thi usne woh watch lauta di!!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Seeing this Raj realised that Naina had recognised him!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Finally the masked army officer is revealed to be Rajveer just as I had guessed!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

The song is very nice and describes their feelings perfectly!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina felt without even meeting Raj once she was so angry!!!!!!

Navin is right ke Naina kyun na ho gusse kyunki jiske liye woh pal pal jeeti rahi woh insaan zinda hai magar phir bhi usse kitna dur hai!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Naina feels betrayed and thinks he does not care for her feelings at all!!!!!!

Raj ne Naina ko rokna chaha magar Naina usse ansuna kar ke chali gayi!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Somehow Raj is responsible for all this!!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Raj collapsed on his knees while Naina went away from him!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

But they will meet again and I wonder Raj usse kaise manata hai after what he has done!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊


Edited by Shaina_b - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Great part...!!!! 👏
👏Very well written action parts...!!!⭐️
At last RN met...but separated again...?????? 😡
Naina is still the same...never ready to listen to anybody else...!!!!😡

Update soon...!!!😃
Edited by Dhara_s - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
yay so Naina and Raj met..........
Now everything will be fine........
Update was quite good.........
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do add me in ur pm list.........i loved ur ff.......

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