ANKAHI...{LRL-RN}note n page 157 - Page 13

Originally posted by: prerna1

that was so nice

you explain Naina's emotion for Raj so beaytifully

plz continue soon and RN ko jaldi milao

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

I must say dis ur 1 of d best ud.....

reallly very well described emotions n d dialogues wer fabulous....

ders was no wer ne hurting sentiments .....really awesome

too good...

Originally posted by: guglu088

Hi Priya, ...Hiiiii Guglu

Thank God ki aapne update to kiya. Rehem aa gaya apne bechare readers par tumhe? sorry yaar...ab daant mat...!!! main manti hun ki maine galati ki hai...!!! ab maaf bhi kar de na...😃

Coming to the update: Beautiful ud.👏

👏thanqqqqqqqqqqq😃

Toh tumne Naaz ke role ke liye Daljeet Kaur ko chuna hai. Well she was my choice too.😆really...😛

JAb maine part 2 me Naaz ke baare me padha tha tabhi se Daljeet Kaur ka naam hi dhyan me aaya tha. Good choice.😆. Meri choice.😉. I loved Naaz's character. dekha hum teeno ki choice kitni milti hai...!!! daljit ka idea mujhe Sumi ne diya tha...!!! kyoun ki teli actors k bare me meri bettery baht low hai...!!!

Felt sorry for Naina. Bechari kitni akeli hai. I feel sad for her. Uska jaldi hi Raj se saamna ho jaye.😭😭😭. nahin...abhi toh main us ko 'SACH KA SAMNA' karwayungi...😆 😆 😆

Aur Naina ne terrorists se ghire hue bus ko dekh liya. Ab dekhna hai wo kya karti hai. Rajveer ki protegee hai, kuch na kuch kamal to karegi hi. I hope wo kuch kamaal kare.😉kamal nahin...dhamal hoga...!!! bas tu thodi der ruk ja...😆 😆 😆

Gunny ko HQ se apne orders mil gaye hain. But wo iss mission ko lead karne wale officer ko nahi jaanta. But wo officer usse apne team members ko jaante hain. Kahin Raj toh nahi lead kar raha iss mission ko. Ab wo captain se Major ban chuka hai toh zahir hai HQ ko uske baare me sab pata hai. Wo wahan kisi mission par hai, tabhi toh usne terrorists ko maara aur tabhi baki terrorists Naaz se kuch secrets laane ki baat kar rahe the. phweeee...kya observation hai teri yaar...wow...!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 par lead karnewala officer koun ahi yeh toh baad me hi batayungi...😆

Hmmmmmmm. Raaz gehrata jaa raha hai. Aur mai apne grey cells use karti jaa rahi hun.😆😉😆 Aise suspense me rakhogi tum mujhe toh jaldi hi mai pagal ho jaungi.😆 Kuch toh raaz-fash karo.😕yaar pagal hone me jyada burai nahin hai...!!! ab mujhe hi dekh lo...main buri hun kya...???😆 😆 😆

Aur next update jaldi karo. Warna iss fic ko tum bahut late ud karti ho, jabki ye mujhe bahut pasand hai. Plz id ka chand mat ban jana.😉nahin...EID ka chaand toh bas niklne hi wala hai...😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉

Waiting for the next ud.

Love
Guglu.

Originally posted by: manatated

thank you maate.... kis liye baalike...😆

tune is fic ko update kiya! ohhh...😆

awesome update tha... Thanqqqq sweety...😃

Naina bechari sad sad....😭haan...meri tarh...

gunny ka character achcha hai...usse RN fic mein bahot kam imp milta hai...so this is a welcome change...😊 voh toh meri aadat hai na...main change karti rahti hun...sab ko😆

Naaz is also awesome... Raj ki sister hai toh awesome toh honi ho chahiye na...😃

The meanining of " musalmaan" you quoted was awesome... thanqqq

areyaar... yaha bhi naina ke parents uske piche padhe hai shaaadi karne ke liye.... haan...yeh har ladki k parents ka fav job hota hai...😆

kisne naina ka muuh band kiya???? maine of course...ud khatam karne ka tym ho gaya tha na...isiliye...😆

mai guess nahi karungi....kyunki main jaanti hun,tera dimaag ulta hi chalega..vaise achha hai...k tune precaution le liya hai...😆

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

G8 update. Thanqqqqq Vertika jee😃

Naaz ne jis tarah se apne aur apne religion ko describe kiya hai that was simply superb. Loved that. thanxxx😃

But who was the guy to whom she loves the most. Rajveer us ka bhai kaise hua ye baat bhi mujhe samajh me nahi aayi. Kaisa rishta hai dono ka? sari baat yahin bata dungi toh tu mere fic me aage padhegi kya...???😆

Gunny kya check karne aaya tha Naina k room me? Head ache to ho raha tha but mujhe lagta hai ki us ki vahan jaane ki koi aur bhi vajah thi. nahin voh kuch cheack karne nahin aaya tha...voh sach me medicine lene gaya tha...😃

Us ne Naina ki dairy me Raj ki photo bhi dekhi hai. I think Gunny k saath hi Raj aur Naina kaam karenge is mission me. dekhte hain...😉

Shaddi ki baat par kitna hurt hue Naina, sach bhi hai ki ab vo kisi aur ko pyaar nahi kar paayegi kabhi. Huda to bus ek excuse tha na is matter ko taalne ka. Par Naina ka pain vakai me bahut gehra hai, itna asaan nahi hai is dard ko bhool paana. haan...bas jis par gujarti hai vohi samajhta hai...😭

Kis ne Naina k mouth ko apne hand se cover kiya tha? maine...😆
update soon.

Originally posted by: sweet_shona

Hi Priya, how r u? hey Neelu... im f9 ...aur tum kaisi ho dear...???😊

i m happy that finally u hv updated this fic... 😛 yeah...finally😆
Naaz jisse pyaar karti thi wohi raj n naina ko hurt karna chahta hai.. 😡 ..but naaz is soo nice..woh raj n naina ko kuchhh nahi hone degi.. 😊 yeah...par kaise...??? yeh jyada imp hai...ryt...???😊

lovely poem.... n gunny understood naina's mental state...!! naina ka baht khyayal rakhta hai voh...???😊

poor naina...her parents want her to marry soon... n naina ko unse huda ke baare mein jhuth bolna pada..n she is feeling bad...but she didnt hv any other choice..!! 😒 ..she cant forget raj... 😒 yahi reason thi ki us ne apne parents se jhuth bola...😭

so mission is on ... n i m sure the person who is going to lead the mission is RAj..n gunny is going o work with him... who r others?? arre yaar...tum sab yeh kyoun soch rahe ho ki voh Raj hai...koi aur bhi toh ho sakta hai na...???😆

ohh god..naina ne fir se apne aap ko mushibat mein daal diya...!!!..but i m sure woh un logo ko bacha legi..but who is this unknown person?? next ud me read kar lena...
looking forward for RN meeting.... 😳 dekhte hain kab hota hai yeh...😉
awesome update.. 👏Thanxxxxxxxxx a lot Neelu...!!! 😃

Originally posted by: nisha1984

cool update

Originally posted by: varshita

Superb update.👏Thanqqq Versha...😃

I really felt touched the way u described the word Musalmaan but as far as i know it's made up of Musllam hai jis ka imaan that is called Musalmaan 😕. Really loved the update. 😃 thanqqq😃

One thing from where Raj n Naaz r related i didn't get it till now.😕 arre yaar...abhi toh suru hi hui hai yeh fic...itni jaldi sab kuch kaise clear kar sakti hun main...😕

Gunny is going too with Naina on the mission n i really loved him,😉 i like him too bt yaar voh naina k sath koi mission par nahin ja raha hai...!!! sirf gunny hi mission par ja raha hai...naina ka toh transfore hua hai na...J&K me...!!!😉

he is really cute.😃 I think after Raj he is the one who can take care of Naina just like Raj but ye alag baat hai ki no one can ever replace Raj 😛. alekh bhi toh hai😃...par haan yeh sach hai ki raj ki jagah koi nahin le sakta...😭

Naaz us aadmi se pyaar karti hai but vo dhamki de rahi thi Raj k liye us ko ye samajh nahi aaya mujhe.😕Naaz us se pyar karti hai nahin pyar karti thi😃 ...aur may b kuch aisa ho chuka ho jis ki wajah se ab Naaz k liye Raj baht jyada important ban gaya hai...😉

Abhi to kaafi baatein hain confusing but mujhe lagta hai jaldi hi saari confusions khatam ho jaayengi. 😆 bilkul nahin...!!!yeh bharosha tum mujh par na hi rakho toh behtar hai...yaar...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Who r the officers joining the Mission vaise jahan tak mujhe lagta hai Raj n Naina will be in the group tabhi to Naina ko pata chalega ki vo abhi bhi zinda hai.😛tum sirf guess karti jaao...main hun na...yahan par apni ulti dimag se fic likhne kliye...!!! vaise ek baat clear kar dun ki naina kisi mission me nahin hai...!!! voh J&K sirf apni transfore ki wajah se gayi hui hai...!!!😃

ab jaldi se aage likho jyada wait mat karana. thoda sabar toh kar mere yaar...😃

Hey...YASMIN & SHAINA...last episode par tum dono ka resevation abhi tak chalu hai...!!! Thoda jaldi karo...varna train chut jayegi...!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛