ANKAHI...{LRL-RN}note n page 157 - Page 16

Originally posted by: vvdn

wonderful update.. Thanqqq Namita jee😃

Naaz n stranger ka part was funny..aur rahi baat Eid ke chand ki..to wo thikse dhikh hi nahi paya😕 vo itne saare kale badal jo chaye hua the😉yaar bas thoda intezaar bas full moon night aane hi wala hai...😛

(ye Raj ne mask kyun pehna?😆)bus thodi si jhalak dikhi😛 arre tumhe kis ne kaha ki voh Raj hai...😛 😆

but asli mazza to tab hai jab dhire se badal hat jyatein hai aur chand dikhta hai...toh bas ab badal hata de aur chand dikha de.........

chaand toh dikhayungi...par mujhe pata hai ki us k baad tum sab mujhe maarne k liye daudoge...😆

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!! Thanqq

Woh admi kaun tha jisse Naaz station pe mili??😕 😕 😕 😕Kya woh Gunny tha??

😛 😛 😛 😛yaar mujhe bhi us ka chehra thik se nahin dikha...😆

Yeh dono toh "pehle aap pehle aap" mein lag gaye!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛

😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Inhe kisi ne bataya nahi ke "pehle aap pehle aap" mein Lucknow waalo ki train chhoot gayi thi??

😔 😔 😔 😔nahin bataya hoga tabhi pahle aap pahle aap me uljhe hue hain...😆

The guy who came later was actually after his wife who was running away with his best friend!!!!

😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣reason ek dam solid hai na...😆

Naina bhi kam nahi hai and she fought back against the person holding her!!!!

😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏arre...akhir protege kis ki hai...😉

Naina ko jisne pakda tha woh Sipahi Salim Khan tha!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲haan...😆

He has worked with Naina before and she recognised him when he told her who he is!!!!!

😊 😊 😊 😊

Maine kya kya nahi socha tha!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊mujhe actuaaly pata tha ki tum sabhi ek hi baat ko sochoge...tabhi maine tum sab ki soch par paani pher diya😆

Finally the moment came when Raj met Naina indirectly!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏yeh haadsha kab hua...mujhe toh yaad hi nahin hai😛

Naina recognised his touch and felt ke jis seene se woh lagi huyi thi uske har dhadkan ko mehsus kar chuki hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

😳 😳hmmm...lagta hai emotion kafi tagda hai...😛

After all how can she ever forget him??😊 😊 😊 😊vaise tu kis ki baat kar rahi hai???😛

I loved the feeling Naina had at just Raj's touch!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️arre...phir se Raj...!!! maine kaha na...voh nahin hai😛

Raj was shocked to know that he was holding Naina at gun point!!!!!

😲 😲 😲 😲arre Raj nahin shocked toh voh major saab hue hain na...😛

Naina ka naam sunte hi Raj ki dhadkan tez ho gayi aur tufan uske dil mein bhi utha!!!!

😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️phir Raj....not again...😆

Eid ka chand toh theek se dikha hi nahi kyunki mask mein tha na!!!!!😉 😉

😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊kuch chupi hui chieezain achhi hoti hai na...😆

Naina can just see his eyes now and she can recognise them aur uske dil unhe dekh kar zor se dhadka!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳use laga ki voh un ankhon ko janti hai...maine kahin bhi Raj k bare me nahin likha hai...😃

Naina is now asking herself ke kaun hai woh jiski ankhon mein dekh ke laga ke Naina usse gehrai se judi huyi hai!!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕yahi toh...main reason hai na...😛

Raj ki ankhen bas uske jeene ki wajah Naina ko dekh rahi thi!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

😍 😍 😍 😍arre phir se Raj...uff😆

The poem was beautiful!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏thanqqqq😃

Kab tak Raj Naina se bhaagne ki koshish karega??😡 😡 😡 😡 😡abhi tak toh Raj ki entry bhi nahin hui hai...toh voh bhaaga kahan se...😛

Waise for the meeting of Raj and Naina the "Tere liye" song from Veer-Zaara would have been perfect!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊jab RN mil jayenge...tab dekhte hain ki background me kya bajta hai😃

Naina is still thinking ke yeh kaun hai jo usse apna sa laga!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛

😊 😊 😊 😊

I hope Raj and Naina meet properly the next time with the song in the background of course!!!!!

😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊no way....😆

Originally posted by: kads_8302

hi dear.. Hiiiii😃
kaisi ho... f9 aur tum...???😃
hume eid ka chand nahi dikha dear... kya baat kar rahi ho yaar...!!! 😛
b/c usne toh black mask phena tha...😉 😆kaale badal k piche toh hamesha chaand chupa rahta hai na...😛
so ab jaldi mask nikalo.... aur pura chand dikhao...😆try karti hun...😆
waise isko kehte hai jisko dhunda gali gali woh hamre pichwade mili i mean mila... 😉 😆bilkul sahi line joda hai tum ne...😆 😆 😆
ud was as usal very nice... koi doubt mat rakhna..ab tumhara certified certificate jo mil gaya hai..toh doubt ki toh koi gunjaish hi nahin rahi...😃 😆
aur ab jaldi se ud kare ke pura chand dikhaoo...

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

again sorry for d late reply.....

absolutely brilliant updt.....

loved it totally.....

Originally posted by: danish1

Hii ...Hiii Afreen😃
eid mubarak to u too🤗
wish all happinesss and joy on this eid and your life, ...Thanqqqq so much dear... n same here🤗

this part was great ...thanxxx dear...😃

and i wish on this eid both raj and naina see each other..waiting for that moment in ANKAHI.... ab main toh bas try kar sakti hun...aage uparwale ki marzi...😃
thanks 😃thanxxx to u too...😃

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Tujhe pata hai maine abhi tak ye fic kyoun nahi padhi ...obviously boring lagi hogi na...😃

kyounki maine socha tha ki tune bahut bada sa update likha hoga aur mai us ko aaram se free ho k padhoongi but maine dekha ki madam ne itna chotu sa update kiya ki poocho mat. Mujhe humesha daatati rehti hai aur khud itna chota likhti hai, bata "Maar diya jaaye ki chod diya jaaye, bol tere saath kya sulook kiya jaaye"?

kuch bhi karo maai baap...bas voh mat karna jo basanti ne gabbar singh k sath kiya tha😆

Anyways ab mera comment bhi chota hi hoga samjhi. koi baat nahin hai...!!! main next ud thoda long post karungi...tab dekhungi ki tera comment kitna bada aata hai...ya phir sirf font bada kar k tu aise hi chod deti hai...!!!😆

That was good, thanqqqqq😃

after a long time Naina met Rajveer indirectly. phir rajveer...??? arre yaar salim khan ko dekh kar tum sab abhi bhi nahiun samjhe...phir se guess kar rahe ho ki voh Rajveer hai...???😆

Salim Khan ko to Naina ne pehchaan liya jab us ne bataya ki vo kaun hai. Par mujhe Naina k us ehsaas se bahut khushi hue jo ehsaas Naina ko Raj k bus touch bhar kar lene se ho gaya. Vo ehsaas ek tarfa nahi tha, theek vaisa hi tufaan Raj k dil me bhi utha hua tha tab. nahinnnnnn ....voh raj nahin hai....😆

Shayad yahi pyaar hai na. Ab Naina apne aap se sawaal kar rahi hai ki kaun hai vo anjaan shaksh jis ki aakhon me dekhte hi laga ki Naina us se gehrai se judi hai. Ab jaldi hi Naina ko sach ka pata chal jaayega i know. vaise kis sach ki baat kar rahi hai tu...???😆

Kab tak Raj Naina se bhaagne ki koshish karega? arre raj ki toh entry bhi nahin hui hai...bhaagega kis se...???😆

Naaz k saath kaun hai? I mean mujhe lagta hai ki vo vahi shaksh hai jis se Naaz ab pyaar karti hai. nahin.... Naaz us insaan se pahli baar mili hai...aur us ka x-bf toh terrorist tha na...aur abhi phil hal us ki zindagi me aur koi hai hi nahin.😊

ab jaldi se bada sa update kar is fic ka. try karti hun...aage uparwala jaane...😛

Originally posted by: tanushree.panda

update was really good please next ud mein rn ko mila do and please ud asap

Originally posted by: Sanskruthi

Hi priya, Hiii Yogitha...😃

This fic is nice, n i liked all the parts they r simply awesome,u described each character very well,great work 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏thanqqqq so much dear...😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

Naaz n the strangers pehle aap pehle aap was funny ,by the way who is this stranger, i think it is gunny welll tumhe voh next ud me sayad pata chal jayega...😃

Naina tackled salim khan very well, finally jiska intezaar tha wo moment came wohi yaar our fav couple meeting indirectly sahi 😃😃😃😃😃😃achha...??? yeh haadsa kab hua...mujhe toh pata hi nahin chala dear...!!! 😛 😆

u described the emotions of both raj n naina well ...naina ka samajh me aata hai...par Raj voh kahan hai...voh toh mujhe kahin bhi nazar hi nahin aaya...😛

Raj naina ka naam sunte his grip on her was tight haiiiiiiiiii aur wo naina ko aur bhi kareeb mehsus karna chatha hai,😳😳😳😳😳oye nt Raj yaar...maine likha hai ki dat army officer😃 😛

The poem was beautiful...thanqqq😃

waiting for the next part, plz continue soon

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya