ANKAHI...{LRL-RN}note n page 157 - Page 12

Originally posted by: kads_8302

hi priya, Hiiiiii Dear...😃
how r u...f9...aur tum...???😊
ud id too good ... thanqqqqqq😃
aur is fic mai joh tumne transformation kiya hai sab characters ke bich ... is very nice.. thanqqqqq😃
scene differentiation is also amazing... thanqqqqqqq😃
and pls naina aur huda ka pairing bilkul nahi karna... mujhe kya peetna hai tum sab se jo main yeh karungi...!!! voh toh naina jhuth bol rahi hai na pane parents...!!! & don't worry dear...main RN k bich me kisi ko bhi aane nahin dungi...😃 😃 😃
so i am wishing that joh naina ke mooh pe haatha rakha hai woh raj ho...😉voh ek surprise hai...!!! bas next ud me dekho...kya hota hai...hope ki tumhe achha lage...😉 😛 😃
waiting for the next ud...
ud sooon ...

for u

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏thanqqqqqqq😃
oh me the first one to reply... yeah....😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛

Originally posted by: sea_nyx

"Agar tumhare paas koi goli hai toh de do yaar...bandhook ki hogi toh bhi chalegi...!!!" 😆😆😆 wow yaar, loved the humor

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Dear ... Hi Suhana😃

How r u??? f9...& what abt u dear...???😊

Congrats on completing 1 year in IF..😊😊😊Thanqqqqq😃

Now coming to the update it was as usual too gud..👏👏👏thanxxx😃 😃 😃

Naina is remembering Raj.She is not able to forget him.. voh kabhi bhul payegi bhi nahin...

"Dard kuch ghatata nahin hai , kya karain,
Dil kahin lagataa nahin hai , kya karain .

Raat kalee syaah itnee der thee,
Din main kuchh dikhta nahi hai kyaa karain.

Baandh tha jo sabr ka barson talak,
baadh aa kar dha gayi hai kya karain.

Khwab - khali the , bahut khaamosh the,
Koi chham se aa gayi hain kya karain.

Dekh kar ek baar unko roo ba roo,
yaad se jee bharata nahin hai kya karain."

hey suhana tum toh superb likhti ho yaar...!!! mujhe lagta hai yeh jarur jeeju ka asar hoga...!!! kyoun...sahi kaha na...???😛 😛 😛

Naina is going to J&K ..Lets see wat surprise is store for her dere.😊😊surprise toh suru ho hi chuki hai na...!!!😛

Gunny is like a brother to Naina..He too is going to J&K..Through her diary Gunny comes to know abt Naina's loneliness.😭😭😭yeah...

Naaz is trying to save Raj from those traitors...haan...kyoun ki Raj baht khaas hai Naaz k liye...!!! kaise voh tumhe pata bhi chal jayega..!!!😃 😃 😃

These people call themselves Muslims but woh log apne religion ko badnaam kar rahe hain... They r not fit to b an animal also..Even animals r better dan dem...Naaz Apne bhai Raj ko bahut chahti hai tabhi to uske liye woh kissi ko mar sakti hai.. haan...maar bhi sakti hai aur mar bhi sakti hai...!!!

How does she know him..Woh log hain kaun jo Raj ke sath sath Naina ko bhi jaante hain??? mere fic k villian hain yaar...!!!

Even Naaz bhi Naina ke baare mein janti hai..😕😕haan...magar confused mat ho...!!! yeh toh sirf 3rd episode hai yaar...!!! story aage badhegi tabhi toh sab samne aayega na...!!!

Naina ne apne parents se jhooth bola coz woh unhe pareshan nahin karna chahti..But pyaar to wo sirf Raj se karti hai...Shayad woh uski zindagi mein is tarah shamil hai jaise woh uski aatma mein ho....This is true love... yeah aur pyar toh zindagi me ek hi baar hota hai na...!!!

Gummy ko mission mein ek officer lead karenge..He is unknown to him but I think he will b Raj only...😛😛😛dekhte hain...

Naina ne ek bas ko kinap dekha hai???Uske piche kaun aaya???

Is he Raj???I wanna know dis fast..!!! next ud me clear karungi...yaar...!!! tab tak k liye thoda sa wait kar lo...

Do update soon

Bye

Originally posted by: hinal60

that was a really good UD

naina ko jitne surprises milne hai who saare jald hi mil jaaye

also RN bhi jaldi se mile

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Great part...!!! 👏👏Thanqqqq
Bechaari Naina...!!! yaar Rn ko jaldi jaldi milado...Kitna rulaate ho Naina ko...???? 😭😭😭okkkk...try karti hun milane ki...!!! par............😕 😕😕
Naaz is one brave woman⭐️...lekin yeh kya. 😲..her lover is a terrorist.. .toh fir woh kaun tha jo uske saath pehle...???? 😕😕pahle jo tha...voh toh use marna chahta tha na...

Can't wait for the next part...Update soon...!!! 😃jaldi karungi...

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

The update was very good. Thanqqqqqqq

NAina is missing navin and raj dearly...and who could describe her pain, longing and loneliness better than Navin. She has suffered a lot....but her life is about to be changed once she goes to JK. welllll...mera toh kuch aisa hi plan hai yaar...😉

Naina ki diary mein likhi use kavita ko paadh kaar gunny ko pata chalta hai ki naina ke dil mein kita dard chupa hai..par who iske bare mein naina se kuch nahi kehta. kahega toh...naina ko aur bhi jyada dard hoga na...

Naaz's raj aur naina ki jaan bachaane ki koshish kar rahi hai...she is fighting for their safety...aur iske liye who kisi ko bhi maar sakti hai.

Par Naaz, Naian ke baare mein kaise jaati haan? yeh suspense bhi over ho jayegi...bas thda sa aur intezaar...!!!

Gunny bhi naina aur raj ko JK mein joins kar raha hai...kaash use pata hota ki uska who superior officer raj hi hai.. vaise tumhe kaise pata ki voh Raj hai...!!! voh koi aur bhi toh ho sakta ya sakti hai na...!!!😆

Naina apne mom dad se jootha nahi bolna chanti par uske paas aur koi choice nahi thi. Aur who janti hai ko huda uska doost hai..and he will understand why naina had to make this excuse. tabhi toh naina ne yeh risk liya...😆

Naina akele nikal padti hai jungle mein....she is a true soldier and was even willing to face the terrorist alone... akhir protege kis ki hai...😉

Par naina wahan akeli nahi thi...uske mooh par haath rakhne wala i hope raj hi ho.. dekhte hain ki voh koun hai...😉

please continue with the next part soon....don't make us wait so long. baht jald ud karungi...

Originally posted by: sania_58

awsome update

superb

loved the update

RN ko jaldi milao

great going

plz continue soon

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Wow....wat a brilliant UD. Thanqqqq Sumi😃

Though iss me Raj nahi tha.....par phir bhi uska jis kadar mention kiya gaya hai....chalta hai. Firstly Naina's helplessness was described beautifully. The poem was awesum. It was really touching....I thought I cud feel the pain n helplessness of her. Specially at her home, when her parents wer talking abt her marriage wid Huda.....oh poor girl must hav been extremely hurt....terrible!!!! Achha hua wo iss mission par jaa rahi hai.....waha sab thik ho jayega....😉😉😉
😉 ...achha tumhe kaise pata ki sab thik ho jayega...??? 😆 😆 😆

Gunny ko head quarters me brief mil gaya mission ka. Aur iss mission ko lead karne wale ke bare me bhi bataya gaya.....cool. I knw thats Raj onluy....wow...I cant stop grinning that they r gonna meet soon.😃 Wanna knw who r the other 2 officers. sabhi guess kar rahe hain ki voh Raj hai...!!! isiliye main soch rahi hun ki maj bhargav ko le leti hun un sab ka head bana kar...😆 😆 😆

Naaz is so nice. Usne jo baatein kahi...that was gud. But wo jisse pyar karti thi wo ab Raj aur Naina ko nuksaan pohchane k bare me soch raha hai......😡 But khub dhamki di usne....aisi hi honi chahiye Raj ki behen....😊😊tabhi toh voh sister hai na us ki...😃 😃

But Naina ye kaha phas gayi...and who was the person???? next ud me batati hun na...😃

I luved this part Priya...was w8ng for this fic to UD from long. sorry for d late dear...main thoda busy thi...😳

Am glad that I vud help u in writing Naaz's character.....it is really nice n I liked her as Raj's sis. W8ing for the mission to start wid Raj. 😳😳😳 arre dear tum ne bilkul sahi name suggest kiya tha mujhe...daljit kaur k naam k paas hi meri ankhen ruki thi...aur jo bhi tum ne VG k bare me bataya tha... us k baad mujhe ghunny k charachter ko likhne me asani hui...aur Naaz k bare me bhi....!!! thanxxx a lot...!!!😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

Pls continue soon.

Originally posted by: nisha1984

nice update

continue soon