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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#101

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Naina chand ko dekh kar Raj ko yaad kar rahi hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍

Naina is missing Raj and Navin very much!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Kitna akeli hai woh!!!!!

Mujhse ab uska dukh dekha nahi jaata!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔Ab jaldi hi usse Raj se mila do!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Gunny medicine lene aaya hai tab bhi mazak kar raha hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Gunny ne Naina ki diary mein rakhi huyi Raj ki tasveer dekhi!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

The poem is beautiful and depicted Naina's pain very well!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Naina ke diary mein likhe huye Kavita ko padh kar Gunny ko pata chalta hai ke uske dil mein kitna dard chhupa hai!!!!!

But he did not say anything to Naina!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Magar mujhe lagta hai Gunny waha kisi aur wajah se bhi aaya tha!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

The way Naaz described her religion was superb!!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

Naaz Raj aur Naina ki jaan bachane ki koshish kar rahi hai aur iske liye woh kuch bhi kar sakti hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Both these people and Naaz know about Naina!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Dekha ek Raj ne hi Naina se nahi kaha warna puri duniya ko pata hai ke Raj Naina se pyaar karta hai!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naaz ka boyfriend ek terrorist hai and she is fighting against him to save her beloved brother Raj!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Poor Naina!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Her parents want her to marry soon but she cannot do that!!!!!

Accha hai woh ish mission pe jaa rahi hai kyunki waha sab theek ho jayega!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina used Huda as an excuse!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Kisi aur ka naam bhi toh le sakti thi like Yudi or Gunny!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

I think that would have been safer because I do not trust Huda one bit!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Naina apne mom dad se jhooth nahi bolna chahti thi magar uske paas aur koi raasta nahi tha!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Pyaar toh woh sirf Raj se karti hai aur hamesha karti rahegi!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

He is present in her soul and she can never ever forget him!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Pyaar toh zindagi mein ek baar hi hota hai naa!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Gunny ko headquarters mein brief mil gaya hai mission ka aur ish mission ko lead karne waale ke baare mein bhi bataya gaya!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Jo officer unhe lead kar raha hai woh apne saathiyon ko pehchanta hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

I am sure Raj is going to lead them and Naina will be with Gunny in this mission!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Naina ko ek terrorist se ghira huya bus dikha!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲Now lets see what she does!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

After all woh Raj ki protegee hai toh kamal toh karegi hi!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Yeh kaun hai jisne Naina ke muh par haath rakha??😕 😕 😕 😕I hope it is Raj!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Edited by Shaina_b - 15 years ago

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#102

The update was very good.

NAina is missing navin and raj dearly...and who could describe her pain, longing and loneliness better than Navin. She has suffered a lot....but her life is about to be changed once she goes to JK.

Naina ki diary mein likhi use kavita ko paadh kaar gunny ko pata chalta hai ki naina ke dil mein kita dard chupa hai..par who iske bare mein naina se kuch nahi kehta.

Naaz's raj aur naina ki jaan bachaane ki koshish kar rahi hai...she is fighting for their safety...aur iske liye who kisi ko bhi maar sakti hai.

Par Naaz, Naian ke baare mein kaise jaati haan?

Gunny bhi naina aur raj ko JK mein joins kar raha hai...kaash use pata hota ki uska who superior officer raj hi hai..

Naina apne mom dad se jootha nahi bolna chanti par uske paas aur koi choice nahi thi. Aur who janti hai ko huda uska doost hai..and he will understand why naina had to make this excuse.

Naina akele nikal padti hai jungle mein....she is a true soldier and was even willing to face the terrorist alone...

Par naina wahan akeli nahi thi...uske mooh par haath rakhne wala i hope raj hi ho..

please continue with the next part soon....don't make us wait so long.

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sania_58

@sania_58

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#103

awsome update

superb

loved the update

RN ko jaldi milao

great going

plz continue soon

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#104

Wow....wat a brilliant UD. Though iss me Raj nahi tha.....par phir bhi uska jis kadar mention kiya gaya hai....chalta hai. Firstly Naina's helplessness was described beautifully. The poem was awesum. It was really touching....I thought I cud feel the pain n helplessness of her. Specially at her home, when her parents wer talking abt her marriage wid Huda.....oh poor girl must hav been extremely hurt....terrible!!!! Achha hua wo iss mission par jaa rahi hai.....waha sab thik ho jayega....😉😉😉
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Gunny ko head quarters me brief mil gaya mission ka. Aur iss mission ko lead karne wale ke bare me bhi bataya gaya.....cool. I knw thats Raj onluy....wow...I cant stop grinning that they r gonna meet soon.😃 Wanna knw who r the other 2 officers.

Naaz is so nice. Usne jo baatein kahi...that was gud. But wo jisse pyar karti thi wo ab Raj aur Naina ko nuksaan pohchane k bare me soch raha hai......😡 But khub dhamki di usne....aisi hi honi chahiye Raj ki behen....😊😊

But Naina ye kaha phas gayi...and who was the person????

I luved this part Priya...was w8ng for this fic to UD from long. Am glad that I vud help u in writing Naaz's character.....it is really nice n I liked her as Raj's sis. W8ing for the mission to start wid Raj. 😳😳😳

Pls continue soon.

Edited by sumaiya wahid - 15 years ago

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Prerna

@prerna1

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#105

that was so nice

you explain Naina's emotion for Raj so beaytifully

plz continue soon and RN ko jaldi milao

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fanatic 21

@fanatic 21

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#106

I must say dis ur 1 of d best ud.....

reallly very well described emotions n d dialogues wer fabulous....

ders was no wer ne hurting sentiments .....really awesome

too good...

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ChhalkiSyaahi

@ChhalkiSyaahi

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#107

Hi Priya,

Thank God ki aapne update to kiya. Rehem aa gaya apne bechare readers par tumhe?

Coming to the update: Beautiful ud.👏

Toh tumne Naaz ke role ke liye Daljeet Kaur ko chuna hai. Well she was my choice too.😆JAb maine part 2 me Naaz ke baare me padha tha tabhi se Daljeet Kaur ka naam hi dhyan me aaya tha. Good choice.😆. Meri choice.😉. I loved Naaz's character.

Felt sorry for Naina. Bechari kitni akeli hai. I feel sad for her. Uska jaldi hi Raj se saamna ho jaye.😭😭😭.
Aur Naina ne terrorists se ghire hue bus ko dekh liya. Ab dekhna hai wo kya karti hai. Rajveer ki protegee hai, kuch na kuch kamal to karegi hi. I hope wo kuch kamaal kare.😉

Gunny ko HQ se apne orders mil gaye hain. But wo iss mission ko lead karne wale officer ko nahi jaanta. But wo officer usse apne team members ko jaante hain. Kahin Raj toh nahi lead kar raha iss mission ko. Ab wo captain se Major ban chuka hai toh zahir hai HQ ko uske baare me sab pata hai. Wo wahan kisi mission par hai, tabhi toh usne terrorists ko maara aur tabhi baki terrorists Naaz se kuch secrets laane ki baat kar rahe the.

Hmmmmmmm. Raaz gehrata jaa raha hai. Aur mai apne grey cells use karti jaa rahi hun.😆😉😆 Aise suspense me rakhogi tum mujhe toh jaldi hi mai pagal ho jaungi.😆 Kuch toh raaz-fash karo.😕

Aur next update jaldi karo. Warna iss fic ko tum bahut late ud karti ho, jabki ye mujhe bahut pasand hai. Plz id ka chand mat ban jana.😉

Waiting for the next ud.

Love
Guglu.

Edited by guglu088 - 15 years ago

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#108

thank you maate....

tune is fic ko update kiya!

awesome update tha...

Naina bechari sad sad....😭

gunny ka character achcha hai...usse RN fic mein bahot kam imp milta hai...so this is a welcome change...😊

Naaz is also awesome...

The meanining of " musalmaan" you quoted was awesome...

areyaar... yaha bhi naina ke parents uske piche padhe hai shaaadi karne ke liye....

kisne naina ka muuh band kiya????

mai guess nahi karungi....kyunki main jaanti hun,tera dimaag ulta hi chalega..

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#109

G8 update.
Naaz ne jis tarah se apne aur apne religion ko describe kiya hai that was simply superb. Loved that. But who was the guy to whom she loves the most. Rajveer us ka bhai kaise hua ye baat bhi mujhe samajh me nahi aayi. Kaisa rishta hai dono ka?
Gunny kya check karne aaya tha Naina k room me? Head ache to ho raha tha but mujhe lagta hai ki us ki vahan jaane ki koi aur bhi vajah thi. Us ne Naina ki dairy me Raj ki photo bhi dekhi hai. I think Gunny k saath hi Raj aur Naina kaam karenge is mission me.
Shaddi ki baat par kitna hurt hue Naina, sach bhi hai ki ab vo kisi aur ko pyaar nahi kar paayegi kabhi. Huda to bus ek excuse tha na is matter ko taalne ka. Par Naina ka pain vakai me bahut gehra hai, itna asaan nahi hai is dard ko bhool paana.
Kis ne Naina k mouth ko apne hand se cover kiya tha?
update soon.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago

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sweet_shona

@sweet_shona

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#110

Hi Priya, how r u?
i m happy that finally u hv updated this fic... 😛
Naaz jisse pyaar karti thi wohi raj n naina ko hurt karna chahta hai.. 😡 ..but naaz is soo nice..woh raj n naina ko kuchhh nahi hone degi.. 😊
lovely poem.... n gunny understood naina's mental state...!!
poor naina...her parents want her to marry soon... n naina ko unse huda ke baare mein jhuth bolna pada..n she is feeling bad...but she didnt hv any other choice..!! 😒 ..she cant forget raj... 😒
so mission is on ... n i m sure the person who is going to lead the mission is RAj..n gunny is going o work with him... who r others??
ohh god..naina ne fir se apne aap ko mushibat mein daal diya...!!!..but i m sure woh un logo ko bacha legi..but who is this unknown person??
looking forward for RN meeting.... 😳
awesome update.. 👏

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