mayur ff.....Courtship[part-14..pg-58]..updated!!!

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Let-It-Go

@Let-It-Go

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#11

awww..it was really sweet yaar

the best part was nupur shuffling mayank's hair..

awww..i was actually imagining it ..it was soo chweet

and then the bike -ride ...ahahah..mayank maaza re raha tha.

awesome..

actually it was jst like watching a show..with evrythng so easy to imagine

update soon and thanx for pm

love yaaa

ruchi

Edited by ruchimayur - 16 years ago

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ShwePoo

@ShwePoo

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#12

amazing part....
plzz can u pm....wen u continue....???
m waiting...

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

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Posted: 16 years ago

#13

Nice update yar.
very good going.
plz continue and PM me when u updated
faria

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x.Heena.x

@x.Heena.x

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#14

awww soo cute...please add me to ur pm list....and update soonnn

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Hgrhrnwl

@hgrhr

Sparkler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#15

Awww...prerna...very nice update yaar!!

the begining scene...when he lets her touch his hair...hehe...shoo cute!

And the romance was awesome...the whole bike ride scene...!

Mayu on a bike...pehli baar I'm reading a scene like that...lol...loved it!

Now I can't wait to see what the surprise it!

Update soon!

Thanks for the PM.

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Nikhila Chandran S.S.

@Nikki_Titli

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+ 6

Posted: 16 years ago

#16

gr88888888 update yaar.........i really liked bike-ride part..... 👏 ....if possible plzz pm me when u post d next update..... 😊

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Priyanka

@AMMY LUVS RIDZ

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#17

awesome part..........plzzzzz add me in ur pm list😊

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adi_gupta

@adi_gupta

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#18

very nice part

first mayu mom is the best

second when nups touch mayu hair love change peoples habits

love this part

bike ride is also very romantic

mayu is very naughty

like this part

update soon

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angelwingz04

@angelwingz04

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Posted: 16 years ago

#19

heyy there ..
dat was really cuteeee
can u plz pm me when ever u update ur part !! =]
plz continue soon
TC =)

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heena

@heena.damor

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Posted: 16 years ago

#20

awww soo sweet update yaar...... oh god yakeen nahi ho raha mayank ne apne balo ko chune diya..... bike ride was gr8.....i always wanted 2 c mayur on bike....thankx.. very well written dear....... thanks 4 d pm yaar....... hope u will continue soon......