mayur ff.....Courtship[part-14..pg-58]..updated!!! - Page 3

very nice part.

here's the next part....sorry for any mistakes....suggestions and criticisms are most welcomed....

sorry guys...couldn't write better....still floating on cloud 9 in the excitement of their confession!!! but promise a better part-4....thanx for reading.....

Mayank tied the blindfold and supported her to move to the place of surprise....

Nupur was really excited and that showed on her face...she tried to guess various things but couldn't guess the exact surprise....

as she entered she felt the soft breeze kissing her cheeks and she could feel the essence of mayank's love in the air.....

mayank stopped her at some point and said-

M: nupur main jaanta hoon ki tumhara sapno ka rajkumar humesha tumhare liye filmy chizein(things) karta tha...par maine aaj tak aisa kuch bhi nahi kiya...lekin aaj maine ek choti si koshish ki hai jo na to puri filmy hai aur na hi puri "mayankish"....i hope u like my surprise...

N: mayank mujhe tumhari akdoopanti acchhi lagti hai to ye kyon nahi......acchha ab ruka nahi jaa raha hai plzzzz jaldi se aankhein kholo na....

M(smiling widely): ok...so ready for the surprise......

and he opens the blind fold-

nupur slowly opened her eyes and looked around....she was mesimerized by the beauty of the place.....

it was a big and spacious lawn with ankle-length white flowers growing all over the ground....there was an artificial fountain sorrounded by soft stones with colorful lights around it.....and amidst the flowers there was a table and chair for 2 surrounded by beautiful red n white semi-transparent curtains with an awning on the top to protect it from rainfall....lighted by candles...a soft music playing...the whole lawn was at the edge of a lake .....there were trees all around....all in all a complete fairy tale area....(i don't know whether such place exists or not...just my imagination)...

nupur's eyes filled with tears of joy....she was too happy to speak anything'..she 1st looked at mayank who was staring her to capture her reactions....she stretched out her hand and started turning round n round....

she turned to mayank n said stammeringly-

N: mayank ye..ye..sab...t..tumne kab kiya....

M: kiya nahi karwaya...tumhe acchha laga....

nupur could not say anything she just hugged him tightly....n mayank responded in the same way....

they seated themselves holding each other's hands n looking into their eyes....

N: by god!! mayank kitna romantic lag raha hai mausam....aur upar se ye arrangement ise aur bhi romantic bana rahe hain.....aise mein agar baarish ho jaye to sone pe suhaga!!!(in her own stlye)

M(smiling sarcastically): wo bhi hogi!!!

N: acchha! tum itne confidently kaise bol sakte ho???

M: kyunki main mayank hoon!!

N: acchha!! to batao kab hogi baarish??

M: batoon?? bura to nahi maanogi??

Nupur nodded her head in "no"-

M(naughtily): jab main tumhe kiss karunga tab!!

Nupur opened her mouth in a gasp-

N: k..k..kya???main kaise maan loon??

M: aazma ke dekh lo!!

nupur blushed and turned scarlet red...she was looking straight into his eyes...

Mayank cupped her face and came closer to her lips to kiss....she could feel his warm breath and was lost in it when suddenly she gained her conscious and placed her finger on her lips blocking the way...and turned her face putting forward her right cheek and tapped her finger on her cheek indicating the place to kiss.....

mayank first seemed shocked but then smiled and respected her limits!!!

he kissed her on her cheek....

as he kissed suddenly rain started pouring heavily.....

nupur was shocked to see that and turned to mayank with a questioning look!!

N: mayank...ye ye kaise???

M: mere pyaar ki taakat hai jiske aage bhagwaan ko bhi jhukna pada....(with mischief n truth in his eyes)

she became emotional and tears of joy fell from her eyes....

he pulled her from under the shade into the rain...tears still coming out but mixed with rain water....

M: tumhe baarish mein bheegna pasand hai na...isi liye humari 1st date pe baarish ho gayi!!!

N: haan par mujhe abhi tak samajh nahi aaya ki baarish ki timing itni perfect kab se ho gayi?? bachpan mein jab hum school jaate the to baarish kabhi bhi right time pe nahi hoti thi...har baar school ponhonchne ke baad hoti thi...aur hume rainy day ki chutti bhi nahi milti thi....na chahte hue bhi school jaana padta tha (n makes a sad face remembering that she had to attend the school forcibly...)

Mayank looks at her smiling widely as if he was so amused to hear that!

M: wo morena ki baarish thi aur ye mumbai ki!!!

as he said this suddenly rain ceased to pour....

mayank shocked, looked around, up n down and shouted-

M: ye baarish band kaise ho gayi??

then suddenly a voice came from behind the bushes-

voice: wo sir ji paani khatam ho gaya!!!!

nupur turned to face the voice and found that a man was standing there with a large shower with a pipe in his hand....she was shocked to see him and understood that the rain was an artificial one!!

she looked at mayank with an "i'll kill u" look....

mayank gestured that person to go and started hiding his face avoiding to look at her....

N: acchha bacchu!! mujhe bewakoof bana rahe the....abhi batati hoon....

saying this she started running after him chasing him...and mayank shouting "sorry sorry" ran to save his life....with nupur chasing him shouting "mayank ruko...main nahi chodoongi tumhe"!!!!

while chasing nupur just slipped b'coz of the wet ground and was about to fall-

N: aaaahhhhhh!!!

M(turning around with horror): nupur!! kya hua???

seeing her falling he ran back just in time to catch her...in his arms....they have an eye lock.....both wet from head to toe....

sudenly the rain starts to pour in actual!!!...this brings them back to their conscious....

she looks at mayank with "not again" look.....but he gives back a "i don't know" look meaning "its the real one"....

nupur stands straight...feels shy and is about to run away when he stops her holding her wrist....he comes closer to her....she takes a step back....he again comes more close.....she keeps stepping back until she's stopped by a tree behind!! This time no escape!!!!

He came closer to her face...both feeling the warmth of each other's breath!!!

But nupur blushes hard...turns scarlet red.....bends a bit downwards and outwards and runs away from the grip of the tree n mayank....

this time mayank is not able to catch her....she's running away when she hears someone singing from behind.....she turns to see n realizes its mayank....

M: tauba tumhare ye ishare, (pointing his finger towards her)

hum to deewane hain tumhare, (walking towards her)

raaz ye kaise khol rahi ho, (coming near her)

tum aankhon se bol rahi ho, (looking into her eyes)

jaadu aate hain tumko saare!! (picking her up from the waist and turning around)

N: tauba tumhare ye ishare, (touched his nose in "cute boy" style)

hum to deewane hain tumhare, (ruffled his hair)

choo lete ho taar jo dil ke, (dancing in khuda jaane style)

tum hi batao tum se mil ke, ( " " )

jaanu dil koi kyun na haare!! ( " " )

M: husn ka jaadu chhalka chhalka, (mayu laying n nups covered his face with her hair slowly moving away, uncovering his face)

hosh bacha hai halka halka,

hum hain jaise khoye khoye,

jaage lekin soye soye, (nups lays in the mayu's opposite direction, both of theirs head tops touching)

machalti raho, pighalti raho,

baahon keg here mein humare'( they hug )

tauba tumhare ye ishaare'''

both hold hand in hand and walk about in the lawn'have their dinner'.kabhi khud khaate kabhi ek dusre ko khilaate'then mayank drops her home on his bike'

in front of nupur's house'.

N: thank u mayank'itni khoobsurat shaam ke liye'maza aa gaya by god!!!

M: humari pehli date thi'special to honi chahiye na'

Nupur looks at him and smiles lovingly'

N: acchha ab main jaati hoon'bohot raat ho gayi hai'

M: haan theek hai'bye' gud night!!

Nupur went near him'kissed on his cheek'..said "good night"'.and ran away'blushing n smiling'

Mayank'.surprised'.but extremely happy'..returns home'

At his place'his mom was waiting for him'.

As she opened the door'looked at him from "toe to head"'.he was all wet'but as she looked at his face'a smile crossed her face'.her type of "teasing" smile....

He entered but was continuously noticing her'she was in convulsions of suppressed laughter'.trying hard to hide her smile'.

M: kuch hua hai kya maa???

MM: kise? Mujhe?? nahi to beta'kyun poocha??

M: nahi main tab se dekh raha hoon'ki jab se main aaya hoon tab se bas hanse jaa rahi ho'tumhari tabiyat to theek hai na'

MM: meri tabiyat to theek hai'par teri theek nahi lagti'aur kaisi rahi tumhari 1^st date??

M: acchhi thi'.

Mom was continuously smiling'.mayank got irritated at this'.and said-

M: maa! Ya to bata to kyon hans rahi ho ya phir hansna band kar do!!!

MM: acchha theek hai'tujhe jaanana hai ki main kyon hans rahi hoon to jaa sheeshe mein jaa ke apni shakal dekh'

Mayank went furiously to to mirror'was shocked to see what he saw'

He blushed hard'smiled'changed his clothes and hid himself in his pillow'.and went off to sleep'.

Thinking bout what he just saw'.

" nupur's lipstick mark on his cheek"!!!!

Guys plz do comment!!!!

Part-4...Pg-7