mayur ff.....Courtship[part-14..pg-58]..updated!!!

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x.Heena.x

@x.Heena.x

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#31

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo cute....the fun in the rain...eps mayurs line "aasma ke dekho" and nupurs kis on the cheek.

LOLLLLLL at the ending...gosh i wuda died from embarrassment

lovely updateee...pleaseee update sooonn....was sooooooooooooo cute!

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tehzeeb25

@tehzeeb25

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Posted: 16 years ago

#32

awesome ......👏... fabulas......👍🏼...... amazing ...... love it ...

waiting for the next part update sooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.😃

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ShwePoo

@ShwePoo

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#33

very cute update.....
thanks 4 the pm....
plzz continue soon.....m waiting.... 😊

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Nikhila Chandran S.S.

@Nikki_Titli

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Posted: 16 years ago

#34

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.................amaaaaaaaaaaaazzzzzzzzzziiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnn updateeeeeeeee yaar................ur take on MAYUR 1st date just superrrrrrbbbbbbb tooooooooo toooooooo beautifulllllllll.........10 on 10.............👏.............plzzzzzzzzzzz continueeeeeeeeeee sooooooon........n thnx soooooooooo much 4d pm......

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heena

@heena.damor

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Posted: 16 years ago

#35

awwwwwwwww it was just tooooooooooooooooo superb yaar....
mayur ki actual date se phele tumne ye itni romantic date dikha di..

ab to actual date se hamari expectation or bhi increase ho gayi hai

yaar really gr8 part loveeeeeeeeed it.......sooooooooo awsum

ending to or bhi gr8 thi.........plzzzz yaar real me bhi isa he hona chahiye.......

thanks 4 d pm dear.......

plzzzz continue soon......n plzz pm me.....

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nishi

@Nishithini

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#36

hey!

it was sooooooooo cute. I really loved it.

thanx for the pm.

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Let-It-Go

@Let-It-Go

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#37

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww....it was soo chweet yaar

truely heavenly :))

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Hgrhrnwl

@hgrhr

Sparkler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#38

Oh I loved this part!! The date was really romantic!!

And the whole no rain till I kiss you thing he planned....LOL..plan toh fail ho gaya somewhat kyunki tank khali ho gaya...but that song you put it was really sweet!

BUT the best part was the scene with his mom...!! oh god, lipstick on his cheek!! I can just imagine the teasing that would have followed!

Awesome part yaar!

Update soon!

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Priyanka

@AMMY LUVS RIDZ

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#39

wow it was sooooo romantic........awwwww nupur kissed mayank.............i loved the rain part........hey u can give this date suggestion in mayur date suggestion topic......or else i will pm this to pd...what say??.....pd wants the suggestion.........and this ff mayur date.....is awesome😉

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Senny

@Senny

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#40

hey oh my gosh this is amazing, piyu told me about this ff, prerna you are doing a great job, haven't read all the parts, will do so soon and comment. excellent job, keep it up.