mayur ff.....Courtship[part-14..pg-58]..updated!!!

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prerna_agrawal

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Posted: 16 years ago

hi everyone...this is my second attempt at writing something...but the first attempt in writing an f-f....the link to my previous one shot is here:

https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1202196

well plzzz read it and tell me if i should continue.....sorry for any mistakes....

Mayur courtship

Introduction:

Mayank and Nupur were in love with each other. Mayank had proposed to nupur which she accepted and they had decided to marry once they finish their college and mayank settles in his job.Their parents knew bout this and had agreed to it and were very happy with their relationship. They were to get engaged 2 months after they graduate and married after 2 weeks frm their engagement. Mayank had already been selected by a MNC through campus selection.The f-f is all about their courtship before they get married.

Part 1:

Mayank, in black tees and jeans, was moving to and fro in his room, with tension clearly visible between his eyebrows. He was continously looking at the telephone expecting it to ring at any time. Then suddenly--ring ring...the phone rings....

Mayank jumps to the phone and immediately picks it up at the first ring-

M: Hello...haan nupur bolo!!

N: are waah....phone ko bajne bhi nahi diya...peheredari kar rahe the kya phone ki??

M: bakwaas mat karo...yeh bataao ki tum aa rahi ho ki nahi??(mayank asked with a tensed expression)
N: haan maine wahi bataane ke liye phone kiya tha...aa rahi hoon...ab gunjan ko bukhaar nahi hai..aur samrat bhi hai uske paas...to main ab aa sakti hoon.....

tension on his face was replaced immediately with a huge smile and he said to himself "thank god"

M: acchhi baat hai...jaldi aa jao mere ghar pe....main tumhara intezaar kar raha hoon...

N: haan main aa to jaaongi par ye to batao ki hum jaa kahan rahe hain???

M: tum aao to main bata doonga!!!

N: theek hai....bye...

M: bye...luv u..

Nupur looks around and after making sure that gunjan was not listening (as she didn't know bout this and nupur wanted to give her a surprise) said-

N: luv u too!!

they finish their convo. mayank goes to the kitchen and nupur goes to get ready...

(MM=mayank's mom)

mayank goes to the kitchen and starts the preparation for the food...

MM: beta kya kar rahe ho??

M: maa tumhare liye khaana banaa raha hoon..

MM: kyun beta tum aaj khaana nahi khaaoge??nupur ne tumhari neend ke saath saath tumhari bhook pyaas bhi mita di hai kya??

M: nahi maa aisa kuch nahi hai...wo aaj...

MM: aaj kya beta??

M: aaj main baahar khaana khaoonga...

MM(teasingly): nupur ke saath??

M: haan maa...

MM:oh to finally tum dono date pe jaa rahe ho...

M:haan...mera matlab nahi matlab...(frustatingly) maa abhi jaao yahan se...

wo aata(flour) goondne lagta hai(roti banane ke liye)...and then suddenly wipes the sweat from his forehead....some of the flour(ataa) uske baalon pe lag jaata hai....

uski mom usko dekh ke hansti hai-

M: maa tum haans kyon rahi ho??

MM: tumhare baalon ko dekh ke...(and raises her hand to clear it off)

Mayank suddenly leaning back...

M: maa baalon ko mat chuo....

suddenly the door bell rang....

guys plz tell me hows it n should i continue it or not....

part-2 ---- pg-2

Edited by prerna_agrawal - 15 years ago

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heena

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Posted: 16 years ago

hey dear it was really nice...... luved 2 read next part..... i hope u will surelly continue dis......... can u pm me 4 next part.......

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twiinkletoes

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: prerna_agrawal

guys plz tell me hows it n should i continue it or not....

DEFINITELY !!! & 👍🏼 for your next update.

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adi_gupta

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Posted: 16 years ago

very nice prerna

continue soon

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Ananya

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Posted: 16 years ago

nice.....plz pm me wen u updt

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Let-It-Go

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Posted: 16 years ago

plz plz continue

and pm me too

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prerna_agrawal

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Posted: 16 years ago

thank u all...n i'll definitely pm mayank-nupurfan ,ananya_s and ruchimayur

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Hgrhrnwl

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Posted: 16 years ago

oh yes please continue and do PM me as well!!

i really liked the first part!

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prerna_agrawal

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Posted: 16 years ago

hey guys...thanx for liking it....hers the next part...sorry for the mistakes....

Part-2

Mayank aata(flour) goondne lagta hai(roti banane ke liye)...and then suddenly wipes the sweat from his forehead....some of the flour(ataa) uske baalon pe lag jaata hai....

uski mom usko dekh ke hansti hai-

M: maa tum haans kyon rahi ho??

MM: tumhare baalon ko dekh ke...(and raises her hand to clear it off)

Mayank suddenly leaning back...

M: maa baalon ko mat chuo....

suddenly the door bell rang....

M: maa main dekta hoon....

mayank goes and opens the door....

as he opens it he sees nupur standing there.....she was looking very pretty in a beautiful white chudidaar with the kurta below the knees....hair open....beautiful AD danglers and a locket as usual....with slight makeup....and heels in the feet...

as the door opened she gave a beautiful smile to mayank...mayank was mesemerized with her beauty...he kept staring her with a smile on his face n was lost in her eyes....

she observed something in mayank and suddenly started laughing...

M: tum hans kyon rahi ho??

N: mujhe pata hai ki tum bachpan mein hi buddhe ho gaye ho par uske liye tumhe apna look buddon jaisa banane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai!!!

M: kya bol rahi ho tum nupur???

N: haan apne baalon ko to dekho!!

mayank tries to look at his hair with the corner of his eyes...tries to look up without facing up...but does not succeed...

nupur smiles and says-

N: laao main theek kar deti hoon..

then she ruffles his hair softly and cleans off the flour(ataa) from his hair...

mayank was just looking at her and could not say anything....

mayank's mom peeping from the kitchen, gets surprised to see nupur touching his hair and mayank not saying "baalon ko mat chuo"!!!!

MM(loudly so that they can hear): chalo koi to hai jo mere bete ke baalon ka khayaal rakh sakta hai!!!! mujhe to wo apne baal chune bhi nahi deta hai!!!

Mayank realizing what was happening, resumes his consious and says-

M: nupur tum to jaldi aa gayi...mujhe laga tha tumhe taiyaar hone mein time lagega...main to abhi tak taiyaar bhi nahi hoon...

N: by god! mayank tum bhi na...jaao taiyaar ho jaao main aunty ki help karti hoon....

M: haan theek hai aao andar aa jaao..

mayank runs to get ready...

mayu's mom goes upto nupur who was feeling shy and seeing his mom approaching her got all the more nervous and started staring the floor...

mayu's mom stood in front of nupur and raised up her chin...and said-

MM: beta bohot sundar lag rahi ho...kisi ki nazar na lage tujhe....

Nupur started blushing.....

after some times mayank came from inside....all ready to go....

he was wearing a white formal shirt(different from the regular one) with jeans and boots...had stlyed his hair with hair gel in tzp style...had worn a pleasant smelling gents' perfume....and was looking really dashing....he came while swirling the keys of his bike round his fingers.....this bike was provided to him by company...

nupur saw him and thought that he was looking so charming.....she had just started to stare him when he said-

M: chalo nupur....maa hum jaa rahe hain...

MM: jaao beta mera aashirwad tum logon ke saath hai...aur haan (teasingly) der hone par chinta mat karna meri...u both ENJOY...

mayank gives a "stop it" look and goes to her....kisses her forehead and says-

M: bye maa..

N: namaste aunty...bye...

and they both go out...

as they move out...mischief starts hovering over him......mayank holds her hand and pulling her runs to the garrage where he has his bike parked....

then he stops suddenly and nupur bumps into him and mayank catches her from her waist and pulls her close to him...

she looks at him with an aghast expression then starts blushing and smiling from within....

mayank raises his hand and trailing his hand through her face....nupur started getting a tingling feeling in her stomach....he moves it to a lock of hair that was disturbing her eyes....he slowly puts it behind her ears....then cupped her face and came closer to her ears and whispered-

M: tum bohot acchhi lag rahi ho...

nupur blushing hard tries to speak-

N: t..t..tum bhi..

nupur tries to free herself...mayank noticing that she was feeling uncomfortable let her go free...

she ran and stood outside the garrage rolling her dupatta on her finger and staring the ground....

mayank came out on his bike and stopped in front of nupur...

nupur slowly sat on it with both the legs on one side....very close to mayank....mayank started his bike and drove off....

nupur was feeling scared as she had never before sat on a bike like this....

then suddenly a speedbreaker came and nupur held mayank from the shoulder...tightly....

mayank noticed this and again thought of something mischievous....while driving he left one hand and lifted up nupur's hand from his shoulder and kept it on his waist....

nupur was surprised at this act af his but didn't say anything and obeyed....but held it casually....with a distance of bout an inch b/w them....

then he suddenly sped up his bike with a jerk....nupur got a jerk and frightfully held mayank's waist tightly with both hands....there was no distance b/w them....she stuck to him frightully....and hid her face in his back....and closed her eyes...

mayank was noticing her expresions in the mirror.....smiling....

he then eased out and nupur also became easy...but had started enjoying the ride....she slowly slid her hands stretching them from his waist till his chest holding him...and rested her cheek on his back and closed her eyes smiling and blushing.....lost in his thoughts completely....

mayank and nupur both were loving the ride now.....and wished never to stop....

BUT then they had to stop.......mayank slowed down and stopped the bike some distance away from the actual spot....

M: nupur hum aa gaye...

N: oh!! (realizing....she looked up and then released mayank).....

they both got down from the bike....and mayank took out a blindfold...and said-

M: nupur ab apni aankhein band karo..

N: kyun???

M: surprise hai...karo na...

a smile crossed over her face....and her heart started beating fast

N: acchha theek hai....(n closes her eyes)..

Mayank ties the blindfold n helps her to move upto the place of surprise.....

guys plzzz do comment n tell me if u like it or not.....