MAYUR (FF) short; Part 11 pg 18 (august 19) - Page 6

ur posting it today only i will be wating for it.

Originally posted by: swarnima123

ur posting it today only i will be wating for it.

ji... i'll post it today only.... in fact i'll post it within this hour :)

Mayank runs away in an attempt to find Nupur. He sees her duppata and runs even faster, while he notices her running into the women's restroom.
He doesn't know what to do. He wants to talk to her but she's in the women's restroom. He waits outside for a minute and then decides that he doesn't care what anyone thinks about him as long as Nupur is okay. He walks in.
Seeing him, a crying Nupur runs into the stalls. Mayank rushes to the stall and bangs on it real hard.
Mayank "Nupur please rona band karo. maine kaha na mujhse tumhare asson nahi dekhe jate"
Nupur is still crying inside the stall and does not come out.
Mayank "Dekho Nupur mujhe nahi pata main tumhe kya kahu ya kese chup karayun lakin mujhse tumhare asson bardasht nahi hote. Ye koi varun tumse nahi kehraha hai. Ye tumse tumhara dost Mayank keh raha hai. Please tum bahar toh ao" he bangs on the stall once again.
Nupur is still crying very badly and doesn't open the door. In a broken voice she mumbles "please mujhe tang mat karo...yaha se chale jaho"
Mayank gets angry and scream "Main nahi jahunga... mujhe pagal samaj ke rakha hai kya?" His voice gets even louder "Main ladkiyon ke bathroom main khada hoke tumse baat karne ki binti kar raha hoon aur tum mujhe jane ke liye bhol rahi ho" He bangs on the door again "Tumne mujhe samaj ke kya rakha hai? Haan maine chalo galti ki hogi koi lakin kya main tumse baat bhi nahi kar sakta.. abhi bahar aho Nupur"
A very angry and broken Nupur opens the stall. Right away she screams in a broken voice "Kya chahiye tumhe? Kyun mujhe pareshan karne main tuleh huhe ho Mayank.... Mujhe tang karke tumhe kya mil raha hai"
It kills Mayank to see such a broken Nupur. He can see the pain in her tear filled eyes.....

Here is Part 6 everyone. I hope all of you like it :) thanks for reading.... lemme know if u guys want me to continue it!

offcourse yaar do continue and plss include some romantic moments also.is mayank going to confess soon?nice part yaar.when ur updating the next part.i am really greedy for reading ur ff.its very nice.

Originally posted by: swarnima123

offcourse yaar do continue and plss include some romantic moments also.is mayank going to confess soon?nice part yaar.when ur updating the next part.i am really greedy for reading ur ff.its very nice.

do update soon.

thanks yaar.... actually the next part will b the confession for sure :)
im glad aap ko pasand aya.... thanks a ton for reading it!
i'll for sure update it either today ya at latest tomorrow....... then after that there will b the romantic scenes hehe

Awww Such a Sweet FF..Continue soon hun!

thank u so much plss make the confeession lill passionate.ohhhhhhhh can't wait for it yaar.plsss if possible update it today only.once again a nice and awsome part.

please continue it as soon as possible

Originally posted by: Kanika05

Awww Such a Sweet FF..Continue soon hun!

thanks for reading it hun
im glad u liked it sweetie :)
i'll update it very soon.... i'll probably update it today!

Originally posted by: swarnima123

thank u so much plss make the confeession lill passionate.ohhhhhhhh can't wait for it yaar.plsss if possible update it today only.once again a nice and awsome part.

hanji i'll make the confession passionate.... anything else u would like to see in the next part my dear?
okay main aaj hi update karungi paka
thanks once again for reading.... i'm so very glad u liked it :)