MAYUR (FF) short; Part 11 pg 18 (august 19) - Page 5

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: mjhtnupurmayank

it was amazing 👏plzzz update soon......

m waiting.....😊


thanks for reading and liking the FF :) hanji main jald hi update karugi....aaj hi karugi!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Mayank says "main tumhare asoon nahi dekh sakta. mujhe bohat dard hota hai."
Nupur doesn't understand what's going on. After 30 seconds, she gets out of the hug. She just stands there staring at him. Her eyes are still moist and now filled with questions.
Mayank doesn't know what to say. He just keeps looking at her.
Nupur finally says "tumhara matlab kya hai mayank? pls ab toh ye masak khatam karo. mere bardasht ke bahar ja raha hai. main jaan ti hoon ye varun ka dialouge tha lakin har jaga practice theek nahi hai" Nupur starts to scream "mujhe ye sab bilkul nahi pasand"
Nupur starts to run away as she breaks into tears.
Mayank is dazed. He doesn't know how to calm down a crying Nupur. He starts to talk to him "Kya iska matlab hai woh bhi mujhse pyar karti hai? Uske aankh main asoon ka ye hi matlab hai?" He remembers her tears again "Jo bhi ho Mayank tu ushe ab nahi rula sakta. Uske rohne se tujhe itna dard hota hai. Ab ushe aur mat rula"
mayank runs out and tries to find nupur. He runs into gunjan. Mayank "Kya tumhe pata hai nupur kaha hai?"
Gunjan "Nahi, kya huha? Didi theek hai na?"
Mayank "Mujhe ushe dhund na hai. Bye...baad main baat karenge"
Gunjan becomes confused and says "magar huha kya hai?"
Mayank runs away in an attempt to find Nupur. He sees her duppata and runs even faster, while he notices her running into the women's restroom......

Here's part 5 everyone! I hope all of you like it. Thanks for reading it. Please let me know if you guys want me to continue writing it :)

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Posted: 16 years ago
#43
It was a very good part 👏
please continue soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#44
AWESOME PART .......CONTINUE SOON......😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#45
it was really very nice......plzz continue soon.....m waiting.....😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: nanchie

It was a very good part 👏
please continue soon.


thanks for reading my dear and i'm glad u liked it....i'll continue it soon.... in fact i'll continue it today only :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: AMMY LUVS RIDZ

AWESOME PART .......CONTINUE SOON......😊


i'm glad u liked it my dear :)
yeah i'll continue it soon
i'll continue it today only!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: mjhtnupurmayank

it was really very nice......plzz continue soon.....m waiting.....😊


thanks for reading it!
I'm glad aap ko pasand aya :)
i'll continue it today only
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice part do continue soon.waiting😍
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: swarnima123

nice part do continue soon.waiting😍


thanks for reading it hun.... im glad u liked it!
i'll write the next part today itself :)

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