MAYUR (FF) short; Part 11 pg 18 (august 19) - Page 7

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: nanchie

please continue it as soon as possible


thanks for reading it......i'll pakka.... i'll continue it today only :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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plzz continue soon.....it was very nice....!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: mjhtnupurmayank

plzz continue soon.....it was very nice....!!!!


thanks for reading it my dear ..... i'll continue it today online... actually i'll continue it in an hour :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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It kills Mayank to see such a broken Nupur. He can see the pain in her tear filled eyes. He just shakes her and then pulls her close to him.
He embraces her. She cries even harder. She is just being held by him and lets her heart cry out. He embraces her even tighter. She realizes whats going on and screams at the top of her voice "BAS HOGAYA MAYANK" she starts to run away again.
Mayank grabs her hand, yanks her towards him and hugs her again. She again tries to get away but can't.
Mayank murmurers "haan bas bohat hogaya nupur"
he pauses for a while and embraces a sobbing nupur even more "ab toh mujhse door mat jaho"
Nupur is shocked and her expression changes.... she backs off in a hurry and just stares at Mayank, with her tears sparkling like diamonds..... her expressions are unreadable cause of the sheer shock
Nupur " kya kaha tumne?"
Mayank moves closer to her. He never looses her eyes even for a second.....

Okay my dear buddies here's part 7 for all of u .... I'm gonna torture u guys for a lil bit and leave it at this cause I have to run.... thanks for reading everyone.... i hope u guys liked it :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awww dont torture us like dis!!! awesum part...continue very soon!..lol
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi its very sort but very cute.
thanx 4 ur nice update.
plz update next part soon and add me in ur PM..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome👏👏👏.fabulas ......... love it. update next part soooon plezzzzzzzzzz.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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aww man i was getting into it i hope they confess soon ive been a silent reader so i thought i might as well comment as well love the update
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Posted: 16 years ago
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really nice....plzz continue soon....n make it a bit long....
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plsss update soon and it liltle long this time.plss do update soon.

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