MAYUR (FF) short; Part 11 pg 18 (august 19)

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Hi everyone,<br>Just writing one because its the weekend and we don't get to see anything new with MAYUR...hope you guys like it... thanks in advance for reading...please do comment!<br><br>Nupur is sitting in the library lost in her dream world. She starts talking to herself, "Nupur, Mayank tera hero nahi hai. Woh safad ghode pe nahi aya." She gets frustrated with herself, gets up and starts playing around with her duppata, "tu pagal hogayi hai Nupur. Woh tujhe kabhi pasand nahi kar sakta. Woh sada akudu Mayank kisi ko pasand nahi kar sakta" Suddenly she sits back down, "Lakin woh kitna acha hai. mera kitna khayal rakhta hai. mere liye ladhta hai. mere." her eyes light up..."CHUP pagalon jasi baat mat kar Nupur" <br>Mayank comes from behind and puts his hand on her shoulder. She gets scared and nervous. Out of nervousness she picks up the book laying next to her and pretends to read it. Mayank just looks at her and smiles. He pulls up the chair next to her and sits down. He keeps smiling. Nupur gets even more nervous and keeps looking at his from the corner of her eye. She thinks "yeh kya dekh raha hai? main kharab dikh rahi hoon kya? ... arey ushe kya farak padhta hai agar main kharab lag rahi hoon?..... chup nupur tu phir se paglon jese khayal soch rahi hai." Mayank puts his books down and says "Nupur ye padhne ka style bohat interesting hai." Nupur gets really confused, "kyun?" Mayank "haan dekho kitna interesting style hai. tum to ese ulta khadi hoke bhi padh sakthi ho" Nupur gets agitated, "matlab?" Mayank gets up and goes real close to Nupur. Nupur gets even more nervous and leans back. He moves even closer and they have an eye lock session. He touches her right hand that she is still holding the book and pulls it towards him. They r still looking at each other when he says "interesting toh hai tum ulti kitab jo padh rahi ho"...........<br><br>I just will leave it at that. I'll continue if anyone wants me to. Thanks! :)<br><br>
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CookMySock thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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LOOL
typical of her to read it upside down
It's nice
Carry it on!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: StarryEyedGyal

LOOL<br>typical of her to read it upside down<br>It's nice<br>Carry it on!<br>


thanks! okay i'll continue it soon.... glad u liked it!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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haha
really liked ih ... lol ... !!!
can see dem actually doing all dis ... :-)
plz continue soon
xxx
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: MJHT_ROX123

haha

really liked ih ... lol ... !!!


can see dem actually doing all dis ... :-)


plz continue soon


xxx


thanks for reading and liking it hun! i'll for sure continue it soon :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice ff sweettyy...
plzzz cont karo!
n pm me hun!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: cool.sindhya

nice ff sweettyy...

plzzz cont karo!

n pm me hun!


thanks hun! I'm glad you liked it my dear. I will continue it very soon and as soon as I write the second part I will PM you :) thanks once again for reading it and liking it!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ruchimayur

awesome yyaar

continue soon


thanks! i'll for sure :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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FF continued:

They r still looking at each other when he says "interesting toh hai tum ulti kitab jo padh rahi ho"
Nupur gets real nervous and drops the book. Mayank lets go of her hand and backs off while Nupur pulls her dupatta up and tries to hide her face due to her nervousness. She gets up and fixes her kameez and dupatta again. Mayank is still staring at her and can't stop smiling. Nupur looks up again and says "haan woh" she pauses and swings her arm upwards out of confusion "woh main dekh rahi thi log ese ulta kese padhtha hai" Mayank starts laughing and says "acha" Nupur gets irritated and screams "haan aur kya" Mayank moves close towards her once again. She starts to move backwards. He keeps coming forward. She hits the wall and becomes nervous. Mayank moves even closer. He goes really close to her ear. "Tum ese experiment kar thi riya karo. Tumhe suit karta hai." Nupur starts blushing and starts to hide her face behind mayank's shoulder.......

I want to keep them short so I'll leave it at that :) I hope all of you like it.... thanks for reading everyone!! lemme know if u guys want me to continue
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ye kya hua... itna kam.. oho lamba likho mere bachhe!
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
bdw lovd it!
pm me when u update!

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