MAYUR (FF) short; Part 11 pg 18 (august 19) - Page 4

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nupur says "haan mujhe wese log pasand hai. lakin tum wese nahi ho. samjhe"
Mayank says "haan main vesa nahi hoon lakin" he pauses realizing that he was about to confess his love to her
Nupur realizes that he was about to say something. She looks up into his eyes and slowly says "lakin kya?"
manyank starts to walk away from her "kuch nahi"
Nupur sees him walk away and starts to look at the ground with moist eyes. She thinks to herself "Nupur kyun apne pagalpan ko bhadava de rahi ho. Dekh, woh tujhse pyar nahi karta hai. Usne tujhse kuch nahi kaha. Woh thera acha dost hai. Tera itna khayal rakh ta hai. Uski dosti ka galat matlab nahi nikal."
Mayank reaches the door and thinks "abhi uska reaction toh dekha nahi. uski confusion se hi toh pata lagega woh mujhse pyar karti hai ya nahi" he turns around to look at Nupur. He sees her dazed and in tears and he looses control of himself. He runs back to her and wipes her tears.
Nupur comes out of her dazed world of talking to herself about Mayank and just looks into his eyes. Seeing her still moist eyes breaks Mayank and he just hugs her. He can't see her in pain.
Mayank says "main tumhare asoon nahi dekh sakta. mujhe bohat dard hota hai."....

Here's part 4 everyone! Sorry for the delay in writting it. I hope all of you like it. Thanks for reading :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome yaar.......update soon.........😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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update soonn...this part was soo brilliant...if only this happened...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome yaar update soooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzz .

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: AMMY LUVS RIDZ

awesome yaar.......update soon.........😳


thanks for reading and liking it hun :) i'll for sure update it soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: xOxMwahxOx

update soonn...this part was soo brilliant...if only this happened...


thanks for reading and liking it my dear :) i wish this would happen in real too! i'll update it soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: tehzeeb25

awesome yaar update soooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzz .



thanks for reading and liking it my dear :) i'll update it soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Aaaaaaaaaaaa..... So sweet yaar... Cute it s 😊
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Originally posted by: anthara_mjht

Aaaaaaaaaaaa..... So sweet yaar... Cute it s 😊


thank for reading it and liking it :) main jald hi update karugi!
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it was amazing 👏plzzz update soon......
m waiting.....😊

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