MAYUR (FF) short; Part 11 pg 18 (august 19) - Page 8

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kanika05

awww dont torture us like dis!!! awesum part...continue very soon!..lol


i'm sorry yaar I had to run.... but thanks a ton for reading :)
n i promise i'll continue it within the next hour!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: fariaa70

hi its very sort but very cute.
thanx 4 ur nice update.
plz update next part soon and add me in ur PM..
faria


thanks for reading it my dear!
I'm glad u liked it :)
hanji i'll.... i'll update it in the next hour.... n i'll pm u as well.... thanks once again for reading it!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ruky786

aww man i was getting into it i hope they confess soon ive been a silent reader so i thought i might as well comment as well love the update


aww im real sorry sweetie.... yeah they r confessing don't worry... n i'll update it within an hour paka!! .... thank you so very much for reading it and im glad u liked the FF :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: mjhtnupurmayank

really nice....plzz continue soon....n make it a bit long....


thanks for continuing to read the ff .... im glad u liked it.... i'll continue it within the next hour n hanji i'll make it longer :) .... sorry for the wait!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: swarnima123

plsss update soon and it liltle long this time.plss do update soon.


hey buddy, i'm sorry i know i probably made u the most frustrated..... but pakka i'll update it in the next hour.... n hanji i'll make it longer :) thanks for reading the FF and liking it my dear!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: tehzeeb25

awesome👏👏👏.fabulas ......... love it. update next part soooon plezzzzzzzzzz.


thanks for reading the FF! I'm so very glad u loved it :)
i'll update it very soon.... in fact, i'll update it within an hour! I hope u like the next part as much as well.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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where r u dear .are u updating it today.anyways continue soon waiting for ur fabulous part ahead.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Nupur " kya kaha tumne?"
Mayank moves closer to her. He never looses her eyes even for a second.
He takes her hand and pulls her close to him once again. He embraces her and she is shocked beyond any reasonable doubt. She thinks to herself "Mayank tujhe pasand karta hai Nupur. Tu theek thi. Woh tujhe pasand karta hai"
She embraces him as well. As soon as Mayank realizes that Nupur is embracing him as well, silent tears form in his eyes. He slowly and softly says "main tumhe bata nahi paya Nupur lakin main tumse bohat pyar karta hoon." he paused and hugged her even tigther when he felt her tears drops on his face "tabhi toh main tumhare asoon bardasht nahi kar pata. tumhara dard mujhe mar dal ta hai" he backs away from the hug but still keeps Nupur close to him. He wipes away her tears and rests his hand on her cheeks. He keeps looking at her percious eyes and just smiles.
Nupur then just rushes in to hug him again. She just snuggles him like a teddy bear. She doesn't want to let go him.
Worried Mayank asks "kya huha nupur? maine kuch galat kaha kya?"
This puts a huge smile on nupur's face but she still doesn't let go of Mayank and is still hugging him and she says "tum pagal ho ek dum"
Mayank becomes really confused and pulls her away "Kyun?"
Nupur just smiles and says "pagal toh ho...tumhe ye bhi samaj main nahi aya ki main bhi tumhe pasand karthi hoon.... aur abhi bhi nahi samaj paye jab main tumhare paas khadi hoon..... tumhe kitanbe toh ache se samaj main athi hai par tum ho ek dum bhondu" She slaps his shoulder while saying that.
This aggitates mayank and he starts to walk away in anger but Nupur holds him back by the collor of his shirt......

There you go my dear friends... Here's part 8.... well, this is part of the confession and like I promised it's longer :) .... I hope all of you like.... lemme know if you want me to continue it..... thanks for reading everyone!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: swarnima123

where r u dear .are u updating it today.anyways continue soon waiting for ur fabulous part ahead.


hey hun, well like i promised u my dear buddy the next part is up already :)
i hope u like it!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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HI! yes u should continue it for sure . this part was awesome,👍🏼fabulassssssss👏 . just loveeeee it . do continue & update next part sooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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