Naina (A story-Unseen) {RA} PART 2 PG2 - Page 5

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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice part....................ainun.............nice name..................havent come across such a name before................and it means eyes that too i came to know now only..................so shes the heroine in ff.............and i hope shes aamna.................u havent given her character sketch dear or have i missed it? cont soon....................
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Interesting part. I liked the name Ainun. Must say Aman did a gud 'investigation'. The entire scene was nice. Specially, Aman's taking 10 mins to cross her house. That was really sweet n lil funny.
Anyways, pls continue soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Interesting part. I liked the name Ainun. Must say Aman did a gud 'investigation'. The entire scene was nice. Specially, Aman's taking 10 mins to cross her house. That was really sweet n lil funny.

Anyways, pls continue soon.

thank u very much for liking the part, and aman could have become a good detective 😆 but a really slow one. i'm glad that u liked my selection of name.

Originally posted by: spvd

nice part....................ainun.............nice name..................havent come across such a name before................and it means eyes that too i came to know now only..................so shes the heroine in ff.............and i hope shes aamna.................u havent given her character sketch dear or have i missed it? cont soon....................

thank u for liking this part and the name ainun. Since this story revolves around eyes, i wanted the name of the lead to have it in the meaning, and hasna means beautiful, these are arabic names and are used often. I have not given a character sketch of the character because this story will be seen through Aman's eyes and aman has started his investigation only now. 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey faizu sweetheart!! that was an awesome part!!! loved it completely...so finally hero heroine ka aamna saamna hua lekin aaj bhi sirf aankhein hi dekhne ko milli usse...hehehe ainun is a lovely name by the way...waise aamna is also half arabic na..hehehe lovely part 4 sure....very interesting and different concept...n am sure i will stay hooked 2 ure story till the end dear!!!....gr88 part n do cont soon!!!...luv summi xxx
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Posted: 16 years ago
#45
Oh nice !
She seems very mysterious !!
Continue soon !!
Luv,
Vandu
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Posted: 16 years ago
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great part..

Aman has finally found Ainun...but her personality has surprised his as much as her beauty...waiting to know what happens next
please continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

great part..

Aman has finally found Ainun...but her personality has surprised his as much as her beauty...waiting to know what happens next
please continue soon

ainun's personality had to be different esp when i had to break my head for a long time to think it up, i'm very thrilled that her character is appealing..

Originally posted by: togepe30

Oh nice !

She seems very mysterious !!
Continue soon !!
Luv,
Vandu

thnks di and yes ainun is very mysterious

Originally posted by: kashishdabest

hey faizu sweetheart!! that was an awesome part!!! loved it completely...so finally hero heroine ka aamna saamna hua lekin aaj bhi sirf aankhein hi dekhne ko milli usse...hehehe ainun is a lovely name by the way...waise aamna is also half arabic na..hehehe lovely part 4 sure....very interesting and different concept...n am sure i will stay hooked 2 ure story till the end dear!!!....gr88 part n do cont soon!!!...luv summi xxx

aap ko yeh part acha laga i'm very happy and yeah aamna is half arabic, i' m even more happy that i have created something that can hook u up..😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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PART 5

Aman his mind jam-packed with what had happened hurried home. The moment he stepped inside he herd a voice:

" So you have come at last!" it was his mother.

' Weird it is how she can sense that.' Aman said to himself as he entered the house.

" Yes mom, I'm finally back." He replied even though he did not know why he or his mother had used the words " at last" or " finally."

"Come for dinner." His mother called as he washed up for the same. He left Ainun to invade the back of his head, where it seems as if she has taken up permanent residence.

Aman and his parents sat around the table waiting to be served.

" Where is Karan dad?"

Aman's dad just looked at him in a "what-are-you-asking" type of an expression in his eyes.

Aman raised his own brows and asked, "why that expression dad?"

" Well maybe because Karan was with you in the office!!??" Aman's father said in a "you-have-forgotten-about-your-brother" and "how-could-you-do-that" kind of a tone.

Aman's reply to his father came in the form of laughter.

" Dad are you serious? Karan, at work, that is impossible, if I see Karan at work, then I can assure you that you won't be seeing me at work for a long, long time." Said Aman winking at his mother.

" So Karan was not with you the entire day?"

Aman just shook his head.

" Let him come, I'm going to give him a piece of my mind."

So with a nice smile on his face, (that appeared by thinking about Karan's reaction when he will be questioned) Aman continued to eat, enjoying himself more, not because he did not like Karan, but because, maybe just for the heck of it.

" Hi people." Said Karan's voice as he entered.

" HI" said everyone together in such a manner that it forced Karan to retrace his steps as fast as possible and rush back out through the door.

" Go get your brother." Came an order from dad.

" Yes sir." Came his reply.

Aman walked outside to find his brother talking on the cell.

" Kya hua? Everything all right inside? Is it safe to come in now?"

" Where were you the entire day?" Aman asked in a manner every elder brother should adopt to correct his younger sibling.

" I was with?with? My friends?Yeah that's it, I was with my friends."

" Doesn't look like your speaking the truth."

" Does it not convince you?" he asked in a voice in which a kid would answer when he is caught red handed doing something wrong.

" Not one bit."

" Good, then it's sure to convince mom and dad. See you bro."

" All the best with that, and I'll be in my room if you need me."

' He sure to come and brag about what happens.' Thought Aman as he walked up to his room.

Once all relaxed and stretched out on his bed, he called his permanent 'visitor' out of the back of his head.

' God this girl is weird and "wonderful". Not only does she go right in middle of the goons to save the girl, but slaps the girl and blames the whole thing on her.' Thought Aman to himself.

'As far as what I heard, she said that it was because she was wearing tight clothes. I'm also a guy na, how come I did not notice that, yeah maybe because I was too busy with Ainun.'

' Not once did she turn back to look at me. I'm good-looking after all, right?' Aman thinks, as he looks himself in the mirror.

" Of course I am, and if she did not turn to look back at me, I'll make her do so next time". Said Aman to himself. "Till then get your beauty sleep Aman." Laughing a little Aman got into bed.

Edited by Arshie - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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sorry for the late continuation, got stuck up iwth school work, hope u like the part.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Nice part. Gud to c Aman like this. A lil bit funny n naughty. Liked the way he said Karan was not actually wid him. And the convo was also fabulous. And wat he was talking to himself was also gud.....in fact gr8. But I guess he doesnt need any beauty sleep. Agar woh aur zyada handsum ho gaya to hum to gaye.....hehe.
Anyways, its ok to UD late. After all skool cums 1st. Pls continue soon whenever u get tym.

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