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hi.......late again........
kya karon yaar...yeh exams........but finally im free...
so a quicky quick comment..........
simply amazing update....
so finaly all r happy...
SK in their life n soo are others...
ab kya hua....kya ghazab ho gaya...
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Originally posted by: anumeha_rajat

hi.......late again........

kya karon yaar...yeh exams........but finally im free... - hehehe it's ok since I was also quite busy myself

so a quicky quick comment..........
simply amazing update.... - thanks very much

so finaly all r happy...
SK in their life n soo are others... - yep happy days are here again for sure

ab kya hua....kya ghazab ho gaya... - ab na ho to ajab nahin huwa 😆
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Part 45

All three men gaped at Visaal wondering what made her so restless. Everything had just gotten back to normal and again something terrible was on its way. Sujal just couldn't allow that anymore. He moved towards her and made sure she calmed down. "What happened Kashish?"

She still looked really tensed and shook her head, "don't ask what happened. Ask what is going to happen."

It totally confused the guys and they exchanged glances with each other. What could possibly have had happened that was so terrible?

"Tell me exactly what, is wrong Kashish?" Sujal held her by the shoulders and made her face him. He saw the worry in her eyes and was able to guess that something was definitely serious. "Achanak aisa kya hogaya?"

The colour from her face had drained due to the tension building up inside her. "I totally forgot I was to be in Malaysia by now." she thought over the conversation with her mother on the phone. "Bus itna hee nahi hain. Papa wants me to come as soon as possible because Imraan is only going to stay for a week or so."

Now it was confirmed that they were confused especially Sujal. "Imraan?" he made a whimsical face as she gave him distorted information, which was too less to interpret anything. "Ab yeh bala koun hain?"

Visaal brushed her fingers through her hair with agitation. "He is the most annoying man to live on Earth and I just hate him as he is just so irritating and self centered and egoistic and papa just has this glitch since like forever that I should end up marrying him and now he is hell bent and…" she talked nonstop as she always did when she was nervous.

He calmed her down, "just hold on and take a deep breath." He demonstrated by taking heavy breaths. "Now tell me clearly what exactly this whole mess is." He sat her down on the chair and then sat adjacent to her to listen patiently.

Visaal narrated the whole conversation she had with her mother after Sujal had left her to come inside. How she was reminded that she had to be in Malaysia and how come hadn't come yet. Then the biggest bombshell was laid upon her that Imraan had arrived and her father wanted her to be there as soon as possible as he didn't want to delay in the alliance any longer. "I was so angry then that I blurted out that I'm already married so how I can possibly think of another marriage." She held her head in her hands. "I don't know what will happen now as no one knows about you and now all Hell's going to be loose."

He leaned back on the chair and folded his hands across his chest. He didn't seem that much perturbed by the new set of information whereas Kashish felt extremely bloated and sick out of worry. "Hmmmmmmm." That's all he mustered out which surprised nearly everyone present and mostly Kashish.

"I'm worried sick here and all you can say is 'hmmmmm'," she looked utterly disappointed. "You do understand the depth of this problem?"

It still kept Sujal relaxed. "It's not that big of a problem Kashish, since you didn't tell your father anything but the truth. You are already married to me."

She stood up excitedly, "Kashish is married to Sujal not Visaal." She crossed her arms across her chest. "You don't understand Sujal, my father is a very difficult man to handle and plus he is total orthodox so now if he finds out I'm married and that too to a guy out of our religion he is just going to freak out." She was able to imagine all the drastic consequences.

Sujal stood behind her and turned her towards him slowly. "Don't worry Kashish." He smiled which always solved her problems by itself. "I know that right now things are scaring you but they would all be solved. Ab tak to sab kuch bura hoke sulaj hee gaya na to phir?" his charm was enough to calm her down.

In return she smiled weakly, "Sujal tum mere papa ko nahi jaante wo…"

He interrupted her in between by softly squeezing her shoulders, "…or tumhaare papa mujhe nahin jaante. But now I think it's about time we both made our acquaintances." He also knew it was a difficult task yet he wanted to remain calm for her. "Now stop worrying and trust me." He didn't leave eye contact with her, "you do trust me don't you?"

Visaal nodded and then both of them hugged where he took away all of her worry. That's what she loved about him the most as whenever she had felt so down, he had always been there to console her and make her forget the rest of the world.

Just as he separated from her, his phone rang. He picked it up, "Hello…"

He was greeted by a nonending scolding, "don't hello me. What kind of behavior is this? Mujhe laga tha ke hospital se nikal ke akal waapis aagayee hogi lekin wo to or bhi bigar gayi. Koi is tarha ghar ko chor ke waapis chala jaata hain kya?"

Sujal made all sorts of funny faces as he couldn't help but be amused by Mauli. He knew her usual habit and in a way it was correct of her to be that upset with him. "Mauli, Mauli, Mauli just calm down." He waited for her to finish and then he began again. "I know I didn't do the right thing but now everything is going to change. I'm coming back home," he eyed Kashish affectionately, "or haan ghar ki bahu ko saath lekar aaraha hu to sab taiyaari kar lena." Both the friends shared some more pleasantries and then he shut the call.

For the next hour or so all of them finished off the cleaning at the farmhouse until it was back to its original self. All of them were thrilled that things had come back to its old self again. Then Varun and Pratham took their leave from Sujal, saying how they had to return back to their wives as they've been away for months now. He agreed and bid both his friends adieu. They promised they would all meet up again soon and that too with their respective partners hopefully. During that Sujal managed to ask about Akshat but they very cleverly avoided it and then the matter was left for then.

Sanjeevni, Mumbai

The night duties had just begun with half of the doctors already left with only the reserved left. The interns had left hours ago yet Atul still remained in the caf, looking lost as if he had lost something tragically.

Everyone had nearly left and Anjali also had collected her stuff and was leaving when she stopped by the caf. She saw how Atul still sat there when the lights had begun to be dim and wondered what was up with him. She walked inside and stood beside him. "Atul?" she put her hand over his shoulder.

It broke him out of his reverie and he looked up. When he saw it was Anjali he looked sad again and turned away.

"Kya huwa Atul, tum aise yaha kyu bethe ho?" she looked concerned.

He didn't answer her so she asked again and this time he just let out a long sigh. "Nothing Anji, I was just…well I was just…" he didn't finish and just sighed once more.

Now Anjali could definitely feel something was wrong so she sat down beside him. "What happened? You look so sad."

"That's because I am sad Anji." He made a cute face.

"Why? Come on Atul now we all should be really happy that Sujal and Kashish have reunited." She smiled and gave him a side hug. "Cheer up."

He only managed a weak smile, "Of course I'm happy about them. It's just that after seeing Sujal bhaiya's intensity of love I realized what it really is to strive for the one you love. Pyaar to aisa hota hain ke insaan apni puri zindagi osi ke intezaar me khud ki zindagi ki parwa tak na kare."

She saw how sad he was and somewhat also felt uneasy. It was because she failed to understand why the ever so cheerful fellow had become so grim. She had always cared for him and wanted the best for him.

He continued, "I learnt the true meaning of love and life from him and realized that I'll never be able to gain what he has."

"What are you saying Atul?" Anjali became worried by the manner of this talking.

This time he looked staright at her with compassion in his eyes. "I'm simply saying Anji that I always used to think the love I hold for you is really great and noble yet now after seeing Sujal bhaiya's yearn for his love over the whole period, I see my love totally selfish and meaningless." He looked at her with sorrowful eyes. "I'm sorry Anji for all the stupid things I've done to gain my love from you but now I understand the depth of it." he stood up, "I'll no longer bother you again in that way and I hope one day you'll also be able to understand my love and except it in return." He walked away sadly.

It certainly left Anjali thinking as for the first time she had actually heard Atul say so many serious things. It wasn't that she had never held any respect for him. He had always been her really good friend but after what he said, it made her think twice that was there anything deeper than that. She felt too confused right then but she was sure to find the answer quick and just left too.

Journey back to Delhi

Now the remaining four – Sujal, Kashish, Armaan and Rishi, returned to Delhi. Kashish was nervous as well as excited to finally be going to her rightful house. After she had married Sujal, they had been separated and never got the chance of living that feeling of being a wife and a daughter in law of the house. She was finally going to live it and she knew that as much as she was going to love others, they were going to love her equally.

The journey back remained quiet with Armaan driving and Rishi sitting beside on the passenger seat. Sujal and Kashish sat together at the back leaning against each other and lost into deep peaceful slumber. Everything that had taken place in the past 24 hours had been quite exhausting but the warmth of their reunion had washed it all down. Therefore they shared a peaceful sleep have had thrown away all their temporary worries.

"Hey Armaan, look at them." Rishi whispered as he turned around to check on Sujal and Kashish. "They look so sweet together." He made sure he kept his voice low so that he didn't disturb them.

Armaan turned his head slightly to catch a glimpse and then turned back to the road. "Yes and I can't thank God enough to have listened to our prayers." A genuine smile appeared on his face. "Ab to rab se ek hee tamanna hain ke dono aise hee zindagee bhar ab sirf saath hee rahe."

"Yes I wish the same." Rishi leaned his head back onto the head rest of his seat and looked upon the snowy roads as they passed by. Just like how the snow covered the whole world in total white and everything glistened in its purity, similarly Sujal and Kashish's love had also bloomed like that.

Two to three hours later

The car came to a final halt which jostled Sujal out of his sleep. He looked around a bit delusional but soon realized that they had reached home. He slightly shook Kashish back to life. "We're here sleeping beauty."

She gave him a cute smile and sat up looking out. Everything was new for her yet she still felt this sense of familiarity. It was only due to the immense love she shared with Sujal.

All of them came out of the car one by one and whilst Armaan and Rishi walked on forward towards the door of the house, Sujal and Kashish still remained behind leaning back against the car.

"So madam, how do you like your house?" he asked with slight amusement in his tone.

She linked her hand in his, "It's not my house Sujal; it's our home."

He totally loved that line and adored her to the core. She had so easily slipped back inside the avatar of his Kashish that he simply couldn't stop thanking God for the boon. He must have performed some really good deeds to why he got such a wonderful mate for life.

Then still holding hands, both of them walked towards the house, following the other two. Just as the door opened they were greeted by a delighted Mauli who had anticipated their arrival. She appeared more excited than them and they all just exchanged lovey dovey smiles.

"Uh…Mauli…" Sujal eyed her naughtily "…kya puri raat tum hame bahaar is thand me rakhne waali ho?" he asked sarcastically.

In return Mauli furrowed her eyebrows at him, "Very funny. Tum shayad bhool rahe ho ke Kashish is ghar me pehli baar aarahee hain or wo bhi is ghar ki bahu ban kar." It was then that a thaali was revealed in her hands. "Have to follow all the customs and traditions."

All of them smiled and Kashish eyed Sujal to ask what was going on. He assured her with his eyes and then she turned back towards Mauli. Mauli performed all the necessary traditions of the gripravesh by first doing the aarti of both Sujal and Kashish. Then she allowed them to come in.

Some time later

Kashish spent nearly an hour in just admiring the whole house have had a guided tour provided by both Rishi and Armaan.

Sujal was busy with Mauli and Piyush discussing about the issue with Visaal and her parents. The matter didn't look that simple as it seemed and they had to handle the situation carefully.

Armaan and Rishi had entertained Kashish with their witty jokes throughout the tour and it had helped her to know them further. However she didn't feel at all distanced as if she had been amongst them all her life. They continued through the different rooms and just as they got near Sujal's room a hand stretched out and pulled her inside closing the doors behind. Both the men were left dumbfounded as to what just happened and exchanged confused glances. Both of them expected the other to know the answer yet they just remained confused.

Inside Sujal's room Kashish was bewildered to have been pasted against the wall with no way out. She very clearly was able to recognize the passion written all over his eyes and it just curled her insides. She got this very funny sensation in her tummy as if butterflies fluttered. It had been quite a long time since she had been that close to him so she was bound to be nervous. "Sujal tum…"

"Shhhh…" he covered her mouth with his finger as he got closer. "Don't say anything." His finger lingered around the edge of her mouth causing havoc inside her. "Jab se tum aayee ho mujhe to waqt hee nahin mila tumse kehnne ka ke…"

She shuddered slightly, "ke kya?" she wished so much for him to stop what he was doing yet she craved for more. "Sujal please tum…"

However he stopped her again and came even closer. "yehi ke jab bhi tum mere kareeb hotee ho to me puri dunya ko bhool jaata hu." His thumb smudged her lips continuously, "I simply loose myself in your beauty that I just want to blend in it." he came even closer that there remained just an inch distance between them. His eyes remained fixed on hers and they pierced her through and through. It made her close her eyes as she felt him getting closer and closer until they were totally one entity. At first he made a brief encounter with her lips but soon he couldn't hold it any longer and devoured the sweet taste of her lips which he had craved for a long time now.

Initially she felt as if she had forgotten the special feeling that encounter held but as soon as it sunk in that he was kissing her, she automatically responded with equal hunger. She had missed him for sure and now wanted to shower all her love on him.

They had just lost themselves so much that track of time was once again dismissed. He had left her lips and had gotten busy laying soft kisses all over her face and then moved down towards her neck, taking the path towards her collar bone.

His intense love took her totally into a different realm where there was nothing but them and their never ending love for each other. At one point she wanted him to stop otherwise she was going to burst and totally loose all control, but then again she wanted to loose all control and remain that close to him.

Their session continued for atleast the next fifteen minutes or so when there was a rather disturbing knock on the door. Sujal lifted his head out of the crane of her neck and made an irritated face. He decided to just ignore it and got busy once more. He slowly pulled her in his arms and gradually led her towards the bed. Once they touched it, she fell back with him on top. At first amazement took over her but then she forgot it again after he began his immense kisses all over her once more.

Then there was that horrible knock on the door again and it didn't stop just at one but continued for atleast three. Sujal felt like killing whoever was outside. "Who the hell is it?" he asked rudely hoping the person would just leave.

"Big B, we've been waiting for you and bhabhi from the passed half an hour." Rishi spoke as if it was just a casual thing to have happened. "What exactly is taking you so long?" on pupose he teased them which was the best thing about Rishi.

It definitely annoyed Sujal to the core and he said several curses under his breath. Kashish heard him and warned him that what he was saying. In return he made a face at her too but didn't feel like getting off the bed at all. "Rishi tu jaa me teri bhabhi ke saath bohat zaroori baat karaha hu." He gave a naughty grin whilst Kashish frowned further.

That stopped the knocking so Sujal resumed his earlier exercise. His intentions were very clear now that he wanted her totally right then and then. Yet he felt that perhaps she wasn't ready so it was best he took it rather slow. His hand travelled down her side only to slide inside the slit of her top to gain access to her bare body.

She shuddered at the touch of his cold fingers on her waist. He played around making her squirm and then just as she felt his thumb brush over her tip she gasped loudly that he had to stop otherwise things could become disasterous.

Just then as a savior, there was the knock again. Kashish pushed him slightly and sat half way in order to answer but he pulled her back down. "Sujal I think we should leave otherwise they would keep coming."

"Why do I get the feeling you're running away from me?" he asked rather cheesily. The knock was continuous which made him burst out yet once again. "What is it?"

This time it was Armaan who had come, "bhaiya its been over 40 minutes since both of you are in there." On purpose he pushed the matter further, just to pull his brother's leg. "I really fail to understand what you two are doing?" he winked at Rishi who in turn put his thumbs up encouraging him to continue. Of course they knew Sujal was going to be really angry with them but hell it was their job to annoy the hell out of him.

"Armaan I already said what I was doing so we would be right there. Now leave." After that he bobbed his head down with the intention of reaching her body with his lips but instead he hit the mattress.

Kashish moved away, "Sujal come on we should leave. Pata nahin kya sochenge wo sab." It was like this sudden urge developed amongst her to stay with others as she was quite afraid of staying with him alone. It was rather funny since he was her husband and it wasn't their first encounter, yet she was still very nervous.

However he definitely was not in the obedient mood, "Let them think anything. I'm with my wife to whom I've missed loving." He pulled her underneath him, "so now let me continue."

"Bhaiya come on hurry up." Armaan knocked again much to Sujal's annoyance. "Mauli bhabhi is calling for dinner as it has already become too late." He knocked one more time.

"Haan Armaan ham bus aahee rahe hain." Kashish answered and tried to get off the bed but Sujal's resistance was too strong. "Sujal please chodo na," she pleaded with a shy grin.

He felt it as an invitation, "ab kese chor du itni mushkil se to haath aayee ho mere." He rolled over pulling her on top of him. "I've lived throughout the whole year with these images in my mind and now I don't want them to be erased. I want them to remain like this forever.

"Are Big B, come on bhabhi is getting angry now." Rishi took over the knocking.

"Rishi I told you that we're coming." Sujal spoke with gritted teeth. "Ab agar dubaara tune darwaza knock kiya na to ghantee banake tujhe taang dunga." It was rather harsh but Rishi just laughed along with Armaan outside.

"Seriously you're acting like teenagers, God." He pretended to be really ashamed and walked away with Armaan as they knew that now they definitely would have to come out.

Unfortunately, Sujal was left disappointed when Kashish forced him to get off her and to leave the room. He sulked like a child and just obeyed her. She found him rather sweet but he remained crossed with her. Of course she knew it wouldn't take her long to pacify him again.

Dinner time

After a long time had they all enjoyed a really happy family dinner. The whole family had gathered together which was a boon in itself and the biggest celebration was of Sujal and Kashish's reunion.

Sujal finally had got the chance to meet the little Rohit and totally adored the small bundle. As he held him in his hands he showered him with all his love and just simply couldn't stop admiring him. It was a God's gift and everyone knew how much he loved children. He told Piyush how Rohit had all his features and looked just like him. Of course it made Mauli annoyed that how could he be so partial and the tiff just continued amongst them like old times. Certainly old times had returned once again.

Then the discussion commenced on how they desired to get Sujal and Kashish married again since their last wedding was done in an abrupt way. It was something out of the necessary whereas Mauli had always had great wishes for his wedding. There were a lot of discussions as well as disagreements here and there, when at last they all agreed that first most thing which had to be done was for Sujal to go and meet Visaal's parents. It was a tough path and they all knew it, yet it had to be crossed.

Visaal was terribly nervous about it yet she also knew that Sujal was going to go to any limits to maintain their relationship now. She was confident enough to know that he wasn't going to let her go astray. She held his hand high up, "I know Sujal that you'll handle everything. Or mujhe yaad hain tum ne hee kaha tha ke jab tak maine tumhaara haath pakra hain mujhe darr ne ki koi zaroorat nahin." She leaned her head against his. "To ab me bilkul darree huwee nahin hu."

It brought a genuine smile on everyone's faces as they looked upon the two love birds, who certainly were made for each other.

End of part

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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesum part hai...and well...mujhe na iss problem se bhi zyada problem nahi hai...I hav fullllll faith in Sujal...😃😳....he said wo sambhal lega...and am rather excited to see wat he does...I liked this line of his:


"…or tumhaare papa mujhe nahin jaante. But now I think it's about time we both made our acquaintances."

And next....SK return home....and Sujal has his share of tiny bit romance...loved Rishi n Armaan's disturbance in btwn....😆😆...mujhe pura scene hi kaafi funny kag raha tha...and I thoroughly enjoyed it...😃

Now wanna eagerly knw....wat Sujal is going to do...😳😳

Thanks for such a lovely part....and it truly feels awesum to have this Sujal back....he makes the parts shine for me...😉 pls continue soon dear!! 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part dear................just loved it..................seeing sujal romantic really made my day.......................and sujal will not leave any stone unturned to get his kashish for himself with her parents consent....................cont soon dear..........................
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice part
Sujal tries to assure Kashish that there is nothing that she needs to worry about and that he will speak to her father about their marriage.
But Kashish is very tensed about what will happen now that her parents know the truth.
Everyone is happy to see SK together. Mauli is overjoyed to have both Sk back in their home.
please continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
so finally koiiiii badiiiiiii problem nai ...are are i mn sujal hai na phir phir to koi bhi baap apni beti ki shadi kar hi dega aur agar ai karega sidhe s to fir sujal palton kis liye hai bhaiiiii
well i jus love all the meeting scene of soooooooo puure n happy family..the way visal gell p wit member n house...sory..home is jus so sweet
and the way sujal jus took her in his arm n close the door it jus tooo hot yaar.the overall intimacy,the flirting n the passion n magic created by sujal is jus ...no worrds to say dear
and it was the funniest thg which rishi n arman did yaar too gud..
hmm so kashish actually get nervous..actually she is rgt at her part she wants to hav n she dont want to hav..confusion...but again suja hai na,then everythg will defenetely will fall on rgt trach that too veryy soon..well like the way ashish shows confidence in sujal.
waise maine bhi kafiii confidence show kiya hai sujal pe...
well ab dekhna ye hai ki kya hoga kaise hoga..after all itne beautiful writer jo ise likh rahi hai...:)
well dear pls cont so soon...atlst try your level best ha...asusual...
will be waiting eagerly
thank u for the story....
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Awesum part hai...and well...mujhe na iss problem se bhi zyada problem nahi hai...I hav fullllll faith in Sujal...😃😳....he said wo sambhal lega...and am rather excited to see wat he does...I liked this line of his:


"...or tumhaare papa mujhe nahin jaante. But now I think it's about time we both made our acquaintances."

Thanks alot for loving the whole part. Yep Sujal ke maamle me koi doubt nahin hosakta for sure

And next....SK return home....and Sujal has his share of tiny bit romance...loved Rishi n Armaan's disturbance in btwn....😆😆...mujhe pura scene hi kaafi funny kag raha tha...and I thoroughly enjoyed it...😃

Yeh things are getting back to normal. Hehehe boys shall remain boys and they loved to always tease Sujal and finally they got to do that again. I'm glad u found it really funny

Now wanna eagerly knw....wat Sujal is going to do...😳😳

Surely he wud be doing something big

Thanks for such a lovely part....and it truly feels awesum to have this Sujal back....he makes the parts shine for me...😉 pls continue soon dear!! 😳


Aaaaaw thanks for thinking that way and I guess this Sujal is back and here to stay

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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks for the wonderful part....

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