Adolescence of Love - Chap15/Pg136 (11/29) - Page 41

Originally posted by: spln

@shivani: yayyy! ur here! hugs! its always awesome to hear back from readers i knew from perfect imperfection :D engin isn't a link hard to relate to if ur anywhere in the league doesnt matter where and what! abhi wanted to see LSR badly, cause of just the guy thing to watch the hip girls' college perform... LSR is huge for any delhi IITian, u have to agree! it just so happens they are armaan n abhi in the fics, in general, i'd never advice u dating iit guys :P (ps: no offense anyone, i have thick buddies from the same place, this is a GENERAL caution notice!) sumit, is going to unravel in his time... on the whole, glad ur enjoying shall look forward to more comments from u shivani!

i know i knowwww im sooooo late and I am soooo sorry :( this is really not like me to delay the comments for so long…no excuses…here i am… taking a break from all the "grilling" (lol which im quite enjoying) so here are my views on part 7!

this has got to be my favourite part yet! :D

he laughed outside of planet m and she heard him!!! wow talk about coincidence (or good timing lol) i really liked that scene…the little boy was damn cute, really reminded me of armaan! i think i liked this scene because it showed just how guilty riddhima felt...it really gave a insight to her character. she really is such a sweetheart! coming back to ccd just to get a chance to "bump" into armaan! in her heart she knows she did something to upset someone…and instead of blowing it off or saying yeah whatever (like a lot of people would), she is taking a chance to see armaan…her conscience wont let her rest until she clears things up! very commendable and sweet of her!

the abhi nikki scene was damn entertaining! im really loving these two…they got fire! and even tho they started off unpleasantly, im glad they are giving each other a chance…how better then to do it over coffee :D

atul anjali…again very interesting pair…and the way u set up their intro was awesome! hehe God?! how appropriate! i think out of all the characters…atul is the "normal"ist one…hes wise in his way, and i really like him!

ok riddhima sitting in the car waiting for armaan…amazing job nj! again, this scene really brought out riddhimas character! i really didn't expect her to actually go to IIT and wait for him! but im sure glad she did :D i just loved the way she worked through her thoughts…she was in a double mind, but built up her courage and waited, hoping she would meet him! and fate was on their side :D

and now comes my favourite scene!!!! :D OMG I cant stop gushing about this part…im still grinning like crazy! the initial shock and hesitation, confusion and nervousness …u penned it perfectly nj! lol the lady bug bit was damn cute! lol awesome way to break the ice! it was really quite cute! and then coming straight to the point…why was she there? i think the way riddhima told him straight up that she felt bad for missing the game was perfect…no lame excuse and what not! and he soo wanted to spend more time with her…driving her back was such a wonderful way to end their encounter! seriously nj, i cant tell u enough how wonderfully u have penned that scene…it had a great flow, natural and light mood, sweet conversation, expressions and emotions described so well…it was really a perfect scene! :D loved it!

and to end it off…sumit told armaan she was at the game :D YAY he knows! this fact makes me very happy!

*sigh* looks like everyone was having coffee that night (minus romeo and her gentleman) this seems to be the trend with the couples in this ff ...start off their "relationship" over coffee!!!!! ahhhh sooo much coffee lol this is why u r my gharma gharm coffee ;)

kk so theres my feedback for part 7 (whoa just realized how much I wrote lol sorry if I put u to sleep!) now im off to read part 8 …will be back with my comments for that one soon!

Hey NJ!!!!!!

Thanks a ton for the pm! Down to commenting finally, as delayed as ever and so no redundant apologies for as I said they seem quite useless in light of the repeated delays! :D

Rahul and Muskann ...I really like the way you are taking them forward, with a definite character sketch in mind and the not so pronounced declaration of opposites attract. Ok. I am sure that didn't make sense but umm… You know the fact that they are poles apart in their day to day lives and yet at some basic unknown level they connect; the realization of that and the fact that they are still so unknown to each other, the ground ahead has its set of unsure footings as well, and so Muskaan's flow of thoughts right after Rahul narrated the childhood memory seemed as natural as could be.

I read your reply to my earlier comment and I am glad you cleared the situation in my mind; helped me understand both Armaan and Ridhima better in this part :)

As you said, the nitty – gritties come naturally and so the mention of the Wind T. Its quite a place especially on a windy day! I absolutely loved Armaan's reaction about Ridhima coming for the match. I hadn't thought that he would jump with joy as you have mentioned in your footnote. But yes, I did expect him to give it a thorough thought; which he did. His whole process of analysis was extremely funny not only for itself but for the fact that it was an association that I could make; I tend to do the same, maybe everyone does but still the sense of familiarity had me grinning! :D

It indeed is interesting how in a span of a few meetings the two of them are able to determine the cause of reactions, or should I say are able to understand what could not have driven the reaction. And so, I am happy that Armaan is not under the illusion that Ridhima is crushing on him! Which by the way is I feel one of the reasons that adds to the intrigue factor that he feels.

Muskaan – Nikki convo; not much to say for you explained it all too well and left little scope for anything to be pondered upon; which seems to have become quite a habit of mine with your fan fictions. :P

And finally; Chicken – Chick-N? Hilarious! God I laughed so loudly at that! Has to be one of those originals :D

AR convo; like quite a few whose comments I happened to glance at while scrolling down; I loved it!

And so Armaan reclaims his title of being the show stopper! Winks! Don't know how consequential it is but wonder how Ridz will find out that it was Armaan…if she will that is. Muskaan just might be the right source!

The part was all of its usual good. I seem to have run out of adjectives at the moment and so all that comes to me is that it was just what I'd expect from you!

Love

Smriti

p.s now that I have caught up I can however ashamedly, demand the next part! :D hope to see it soon!

Shall we move further?😛