Adolescence of Love - Chap15/Pg136 (11/29)

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Sai Prasanthi

@Prasanthi

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Hi NJ!!!!!

An awesome start of the day for me. Could read it all in a rush and dropped in to give a quick comment :D.

RM conversation seem to take them to little higher in their relationship... afterall speaking out forwards everything. Armaan's contemplation about himself and her is so much fun to read on. Poor guy he has almost lost it! Muski-Nikki convo though started in a heavier tone eased out to be the teasing three-some. Was not expecting to become so witty over the phone after the long night thinking. But then that was very much fun to read on. So, the party next seem to extract too many things out.

ps: aria, armaan.. happy to share the chair of "pestering nj"..lolzzz....!!!

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nikita

@ammy_furor

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Posted: 15 years ago

#382

He he ha ha...jus wen i was abt to loose hope..! *res

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@ammy-ridz

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Posted: 15 years ago

#383

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Hi NJ,

Sorry couldn't make it yesterday. But now..here I m. I see this particular part makes me Bless Mr. Bell for his wonderful creation….It is just cauz of him(and You too..ofcoure.) that I was able to have AR together, Rahul-Muskaan could connect….and Armaan could have a Hearty laugh along with an Invitation for the bash (along with a bruised wound)

Enjoyed AR very much in the whole thing….BUT more or Armaan alone Around the Tunnel and the sidewalk..with his clouded thoughts. The Blatent comment "I'm leaving. Have fun you guys!" by Armaan it did had me in Splits:D:D.but did shocked me too..it was so Unusual to come from HIM!!...Well I don't say he is NOT outspoken or legpuller..Heck He IS!!! Definitely…BUT… Not with Random people man. Shows how people behave so 'uncharacteristically' and 'Soo not themselves' when they are literally Puzzled or someting is preoccuping their minds. I did thought that he would be getting 'ideas' about her when he discovered the Truth…But Glad he never humored himself to think she had a crush on him..This was the reason..I never wanted her to tell him she had come for the game. Her secreacy did make a diffrence..atleast I think so.

Haha..The phone Chat with Ridz- Abhi..err..Armaan was Fun. I never had thought Him to pull it through..I had thought that she will recognise it as she had earlier..or..eventually find the truth or he will slp somewhere..or may be spill the beanns himself..but nothing happened..I guess this is something you have preserved for Future. It was actually Good fun to read the descriptions whether Muskaan's stupid act of Blowing coffee..or Armaan sneaking out at the middleof night and his Antics ..or the Dust laiden Sleeves and bumped and bruised wound…I enjoyed those all bits. Also somewhere I m happy that Armaan got to attend the call ..I doubt if Abhi would have been so Kind to ask for The Invitation for The Others..This was something like Khud mehnat kiye bagair phal nahi milta or Should I say Khoon-pasina bahana padta hai tab jake Inaammilta hai..I think the later suits Armaan more.

The AR chat was FUN…a lot more than that to be precise. Muskki-Nikki were again Great!..RM – well I can see Rahul as a Mature guy..but Nikki is right about what she said about them. Now again RM and AR convo intrigues me about their Parents and all. Clearly their Dad was mentioned here..but Mom isn't. Ridz not staying at her own place, they shift to mumbai, them not very keen to dig the past…I have assumptions in my mind with the plot..but will want you to speak the real story in coming parts. You know the particular Ridz-Rahul-Shakuntala thing..I think I never liked it at first..but later realized that Kids do it all unintentionally…and I may have done many such things myself being a kid…so then I was Fine!!! With all that stuff..shows they were Bratty kids.

The last Armi-Abhi bit was hilarious. Abhi justifing himself.. Its Chic-N... Chic-Nikki" and Armaan teasing, getting showered in honour with Pen and Mouse pad…That was …haha..And OMG!! he saved her name as Chicken..I m with Armaan..Nikki HAS to know that!:D:D

Ok that was it. Hope that was not too longgggg ..and you din't sleept halfway reading it thing it is a never ending lullaby…But belive me I never tend write so much..but it just happens in some cases. Neways Nice part…Great AR stuff.

Plz continue soon.

Thanx.

Edited by ammy-ridz - 15 years ago

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@-Aria-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#384

@nj

strangely this post has nothing to do with the update :O though i'm soooo glad to finally see it posted. and you kept nij's words :)ok i'm gonna spam your thread. you know i strangely enjoyed posting those "pester posts" and now for the anti-climax, after all said and done, i am not going to read your update now or tonite, and i can't belive i am saying that.but trust me, sometimes you can be stuck with the most boring phone calls. like the one i was just subject to that my ears are still ringing! i read the first few lines of your update, only to realise that i have suddenly lost all ability to make sense of anything..almost like a blank mind..and my ears are still ringing..i feel like screaming!!! and i've ben waiting for you to upload this

:(does it get any worse!!

i am NOT reserving this space.

i will get back to your thread when my ears no longer ring!!oh mypoorself! :Si want to read tis!

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maryam

@mar-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#385

grt part really goood plsss continue sooon

tnx for the pm

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Alia

@SimplyNice

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Posted: 15 years ago

#386

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Hey me back! loved it as always. Armaan wz my ultimate fav in this..(not 2 mention he always is regardless of any reason lolz! )i cud picture the faces he must b making in his confusion specaily "Unknowingly, his shoulders stooped limply and he rolled his tongue in thought" Cute! & LOLZ is he fatheaded 2 b actually thinking dat she myt b crushing on him lyk countless of the others!! thank God he atleast gav ridz da benefit of da doubt dat in this case its da other way round, 1 things pretty obvious,He IS getting affected by her *sigh* Aag donoun taraf ki barabar hai beeruuu!!

And than, OMG da phone call!! Well i can actually relate 2 dat cz it hz happend with me smtym bak, Unlike ridz, i wz told da truth in d end to which at 1st i wz furious bt dan laughed my head off(but not b4 i came up with n equalyevil prank for dat person & dan...well it wz all very funny v still laugh at it wenevr v meet,dunno abt ridzi thou,she'l probably kill him more lyk) & as if dats not enough, he tried his best 2 manipulate her in2 inviting him too,jeez this guy is lyk really crazy J

Now i think he'l take revenge for his terrible game by refusing & than turning up unexpected wen all hope is lost 4 ridz. But maybe by impersonating abhimanyu he hz already avenged himself!oh boy he's going 2 regret bigtym, ridz will b furious once she comes 2 know dat she hz bin hoodwinked! Nikki's birthday bash will surely b n un4gettable one!!

Ok so "question time"…. m having a lil trouble in undrstanding muski & rahul's convo & why they had n awkward moment,i mean shudnt muskaan b happy dat for da 1st time rahul shared something about his childhood/something personal with her? i understand its a long distance relationship & rahul hz told her dat he does feel 4 her bt is yet 2 figure out da depth of his feelings 4 her 2 finally come out in the open about it cz of which she's insecure… but..i dunno...dat awkwardness wz really awkward..

all in all, loved it as always... J

keep em coming lyk this nj!!

love,

Alia.

Edited by SimplyNice - 15 years ago

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aishwarya

@aish_punk

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Posted: 15 years ago

#387

hey nj..nice part..!..n it had been a long time..! .n i hate whatever's happening with IF..ugh..hope it's fine soon 😊

So Armaan was i guess sorta happy she came and disappointed that she did'nt talk to him?!..aww..

n well RM convo was sweet..Muskaan blabbering like usual..n Rahul listening!..lol..but then Rahul opened up about Shakuntala?..i mean thats sort of weird in a way..no wonder Muskaan kept thinkin abt it!

n well they're plannin a b'day party for Nikki..thats sweet! ..i hope it goes well 😉..n she shudnt get to know the 'real' plan!..lol..

well Muskaan-nikki talk was sorta nice..she did'nt really clear her problems..but atleast she managed to cheer her up a bit..

n lol Armaan talked to Ridz n she did'nt know it was him!..so typically Armaan..!..lol..but then it was nice..the way she asked abt him though not deliberately. n he was longing to hear something from her..i hope all his confusion gets cleared when he meets her..

n Abhi will def a get a gud gift for Nikki..lets just c what it'll be..n loved the Abhi-Armaan fyt like always..

ps: there was something i was supposed to figure out?..u mentioned it in mah os..but well i did'nt!..so do let me know..😛

thnx 4 d PM

update soon

-aish

Edited by aish_punk - 15 years ago

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Armaan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#388

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Originally posted by: spln

phew! i still can figure what i struggled with so much in this part, but it refused to just come to me...

and I still can't figure out what WE struggled so much in this part... but still it refused just come to US... So early nah..? *Passes on a smug look* Though it took forever of me to read and update the comment... but I'm back na... I was just too engrossed in watching the late night cricket of which my friend brought a DVD... that it was impossible for me not catch on sleep... but today I refrained myself just completed reading it before the Exams and then Christmas seasons start... ''I am supposed to be inactive in those times :P "

Yea... it was kinda much of a RM part... though I loved them... but still would love to catch AA together... more often. and the AR part... I hardly succeeded holding on my laugh for an un-understandable reason... It's weird though! But seriously I just looooooved AR phone call conversation...It was worth appreciation, especially Muskaan handing over the phone to Ridhima... and of course, Arman urging Ridhima to give 'actual' him an invite... hehe... I found it quite funny.. but one of the commendable 'plus' points.

The RM conversation and the whole RM element was superbly written.. Hugs for that!!

Coming to Nikki-Muskaan-Ridhima teasing session : It was great fun reading Muskaan and Ridhima teasing Nikki about Abhi..

Muskaan-Nikki interaction: I loved the way you penned own Muskaan's part and her dialogues were way too perfect for the situation... I mean... atleast from my side 3 claps for the Dialogues you penned.

and Finally last but for sure not the least.. The short and sweet AA convo.. before you jump to any conclusion AA, here, stands for Arman-Abhimanyu ... Their conversation was really how the boys talk...like being possessive about their Gadgets... and calling girls by 'weird' names.. like Chic-Nikki... had me laughing out loud on the full mention... Arman's one liner - "She might just...FALL IN LOVE WITH YOU" and "By the way Modi...it's chicken's happy Birthday this Saturday. You must start thinking of the gift." Were the two um.. say sentences... which made me smile in grief of not sleeping ...!!

In the end I would just mention that the part was surely a treat to read... especially after 4 and a half of exhausting study.

and now as I have finished reading it I'm free to pester you.. So, when are you updating then..? Lolz..! Have a Good Day (or night if it is :P) hehe... Take Care :-)

Originally posted by: spln

*aria and armaan: for such persistence, wow! either you guys were competing with prathi, or i was genuinely far too delayed but your pester posts had me laughing ...

*Smiles - grins - smirks - Sighs* Was just pondering over what to say... but then I guess.. "I'm glad my pester posts made you laugh" would be fine.. and yeah.. This time I want my reply.. !! Lolz... Bye again.. Oops I forgot to mention something - 'Thanks for the PM'

Continue soon :D

Edited by -Armaan- - 15 years ago

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krazyboutkaran

@krazyboutkaran

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Posted: 15 years ago

#389

heyyyy...dis part waz fab....luvd armman nd ridz.....cnt w8 4 nikki's bday blast..........cont soon.......

urvi

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DMG fan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#390

Hi Nj,

Finally the update!!!!! woooohoooooo!

Loved muski-rahul conversation...the easy in his flow of thoughts and ofcourse our all time confused-fidgety muski.

Muski-Nikki convo reminded me of my best-friend back in the days. We never had complete convos, just abbrevated...any third person listening could not make out what was going on, but we had some best heart-felt just the way.

But the cherry on top were A-R.....although I would have loved to see Riddhima take Armaan's number and call him right away....would be fun to see what she would make of the identical voice "on-phone"...ha ha ha....

Great part...need more! ;-)

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