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Posted: 15 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: rituka7

damn cool
awesome
superb
update soon

THANX A LOT RITU FOR UR LOVELY COMMENTS........I AM GLAD...........AND I WILL UD SOON......
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Posted: 15 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: prerna1

that was very good
love the way RN relationship is proceeding
plz continue soon

THANX A LOT PRERNA FOR UR LOVELY COMMENTS...........I WILL UD SOON............
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Posted: 15 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: sweet_shona

nice part... 😊 THANX..........
gr888..we hv one more running RN ff... 😛 YES IT IS.........
pls continue soon...

OFCOURSE I WILL...........
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Posted: 15 years ago
#74

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Nandini, who is Raj's best friend, has come in KMA as the new psychiatrist!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina is so jealous when she sees Nandini hugging Raj!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Pooja and Huda's discussion added fuel to the fire and Naina's jealous turns into anger!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Yudi's logic ke psychiatrist aur terrorist kitna similar sound karta hai was too funny!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Yeh Naina bhi na Raj se class mein kaisa sawal pooch rahi hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Jab Naina gir jaati hai Raj was so concerned aur usse uske room tak chhodna chahta tha!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

But Naina is still angry and refused but when she tried to walk woh ladkhadane lagti hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj usse dobara sambhalta hai aur kehta hai uske bagair toh Naina do kadam bhi nahi chal sakti!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

He is right but Naina is still insisting that she doesn't need him!!!!!! 😔 😔 😔 😔

But Raj said usse toh hai and then teased her ke usse pata tha ke kuch jal raha hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Raj ko pata chal hi gaya that Naina is jealous aur phir kitna romantically Naina ko manaya!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj is looking at her so lovingly and Naina said ke woh usse aise na dekhe!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

This situation reminds me of a song!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Aise na mujhe tum dekho
Seene se laga lunga
Tumko main chura lunga tumse
Dil mein chhupa lunga
Hey hey ha ha......... 😊

Naina's heart melts aur woh apna gussa bhool kar Raj ko I love you kehti hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Raj kissed her forehead and hugged her and they remained in each other's arms!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

I loved the way Raj Naina ka paon theek kar deta hai while she is lost in his eyes!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍

Naina ka Raj ko ek par ek kiss free dena was very cute and funny!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

I loved Raj's dialogue to Pooja's question ke kiss kiss par kya kya muft mil raha hai yeh poocho!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Raj wink to Naina when she turned back to see him was cute!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Nandini and Abhi are teasing Raj a lot!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😛

It was funny to see Raj asking Abhi about the shirt jo Raj ne hi usse gift ki thi!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Nandini and Abhi singing the song in Raj's ear was too funny!!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Instead of denying, Raj accepts his love for Naina!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Its a good change to see ke Raj boldly apne pyaar ka izhaar kar raha hai aur bol raha hai that he has lost his heart to his Naina!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Nandini is right that Naina is Raj's girlfriend and Raj needs to take her on a date!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Raj agreed to take Naina on a date the next day!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Great!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Raj was looking hot while he was practicing with the sword and he was described very well!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Raj bhi darwaza bandh karke Naina ke peeche khada ho jaata hai!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina and Raj are flirting with each other and romancing while Raj is teaching her to use the sword!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

The sword fighting scene and their getting lost in each other's eyes during it reminded me of the sword fighting scene in Jodha Akbar!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj ne end jaise paani peena that was soooo romantic and Raj's wink was so cute!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️


Edited by Shaina_b - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: Deepanwita

HIII PRITI HOW R U?HII DEEPA I AM FINE AND HOPE THE SAME FOR U TOO.........
AFTER A VERY LONG TIME
YES..........

A SUPER BRILLIANT UDTHANX A LOT DEAR...........
IT WAS SOOOOOOO ROMANTIC
I LOVED ITI AM GLAD U LOVED IT...........
YAAR TUM KITNE DIFFERENT
ROMANTIC SCENES LIKTI HOTHANX KI TUMHE AISA LAGTA HAI.......
NAINA JAL GAYI NANDINI AUR
RAJ KE HUG KARNE SE HOT HOT
PAR RAJ BHI JAAN GAYA NAINA
KI DIL KI BAAT AUR KYA MANAYA
HAIN😉 SO ROMANTIC HAAN SAHI KAHA TUMNE AUR WOH PYAAR HI KYA JISMEIN JALAN NA HO........PHIR HUMAARA RAJ TOH HAI HI RAJ........USKI TAAREEF MEIN TOH MUJHE SHABD BHI KAM PAD RAHEIN HAIN.........
AUR SAATH MEIN RAJ KO BHI
KISS MILE VO BHI DO DO HEHEHEHE😉HAAN EK PE EK MUFT-MUFT-MUFT..........
RAJ KO NANDINI AUR ABHI MILKAR
TEASE KAR RAHE HAIN VERY GOOD AFTER ALL DOSTON KA HAQ BANTA HAI...........
AAKIR KAR RAJ KO BOLAHI PADTA
HAIN SACH KYA HAIN CHALO NANDI PYAAR CHUPAAYE NAHIN CHUPTA HAI.......CHAHE HUM LAAKH KOSHISH KAREIN......
KE SAMJHANE SE RAJ NAINA KO DATE
PAR LE JAAYEGA LAGTA HAIN TABHIHAAN AB DEKHTE HAIN KI AAGE KYA HOTA HAI...........
RAJ NEXT DIN PRACTICE KAR RAHA HAIN
TALWAR BAAZI BAHUT HI NEW CONCEPT
THA ROMANCE KARWANEKA NAINA NETHANX KI TUMHE YEH NAYA CONCEPT PASAND AAYA...........
TOH BAHUT AASANI SE RAJ KO HOT BOL
DIYA HMMMM😆 AUR RAJ NE BHI
KYA PRIZE DIYA HAIN BADLEMEIN MUJE
NAHI PATA THA RAJ ITNI ROMANTIC TARIKE
SE PAANI PE SAKTA HAIN😳
YEH RAJ KA STYLE HAI.......AUR ROMANCE MEIN SURPRISE NA HO TOH MAZAA NAHIN AATA...........
THAT WAS SOOOOOOO ROMANTIC I REALLY
LOVED IT OKAY NEXT PART MEIN DATE
WAITING EAGARLY FOR THE UD JALDI KARNATHANX DEAR FOR LOVING IT........AND I WILL UD SOON.......TAKE CARE......LOVE U TOO.......

LOVE
DEEPA



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Posted: 15 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: sania_58

nice update

plz continue soon

THANX A LOT SANIA FOR UR LOVELY COMMENTS......I WILL UD SOON........
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Posted: 15 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!THANX A LOT.......

Nandini, who is Raj's best friend, has come in KMA as the new psychiatrist!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊YES LETS SEE AAGE KYA HOTA HAI......

Naina is so jealous when she sees Nandini hugging Raj!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊IT'S NATURAL JAHAN PYAAR HAI WAHAN JALAN BHI HAI......

Pooja and Huda's discussion added fuel to the fire and Naina's jealous turns into anger!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡ISE KEHTE HAIN JALE PE NAMAK CHIDAKNA....

Yudi's logic ke psychiatrist aur terrorist kitna similar sound karta hai was too funny!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣YUDI AUR USKE LOGICS TOH HUMESHA SE HI FUNNY HOTE HAIN........

Yeh Naina bhi na Raj se class mein kaisa sawal pooch rahi hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆GUSSE MEIN INSAAN KA KHUD PAR CONTROL NAHIN REHTA HAI......IT'S ALSO NATURAL......

Jab Naina gir jaati hai Raj was so concerned aur usse uske room tak chhodna chahta tha!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊OBVIOUSLY RAJ TOH HUMESHA SE HI NAINA KI BAHUT ZYAADA FIKAR KARTA HAI.......

But Naina is still angry and refused but when she tried to walk woh ladkhadane lagti hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊RAJ KE BINA WOH DO KADAM BHI NAHIN CHAL SAKTI HAI........MAGAR PHIR BHI APNI ZIDD NAHIN CHODEGI HAI........AFTER ALL SHE IS NAINA.......

Raj usse dobara sambhalta hai aur kehta hai uske bagair toh Naina do kadam bhi nahi chal sakti!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳MAINE KAHA THA NA......

He is right but Naina is still insisting that she doesn't need him!!!!!! 😔 😔 😔 😔KYUNKI SHE IS NAINA..........THE ZIDDI GIRL........NAHIN MANNE WAALI HAI........

But Raj said usse toh hai and then teased her ke usse pata tha ke kuch jal raha hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆RAJ TOH PEHLE HI SAMAJH JAATA HAI.......NAINA KE DIL KI HAR BAAT JAAN LETA HAI........

Raj ko pata chal hi gaya that Naina is jealous aur phir kitna romantically Naina ko manaya!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳YEH HUMAARE RAJ KA STYLE HAI........

Raj is looking at her so lovingly and Naina said ke woh usse aise na dekhe!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳KYA KAREIN RAJ KI AANKHEN HAIN HI ITNI NASHEELEE........KI NAINA KHUD KO SAMHAAL NAHIN PAA RAHI HAI........

This situation reminds me of a song!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Aise na mujhe tum dekho
Seene se laga lunga
Tumko main chura lunga tumse
Dil mein chhupa lunga
Hey hey ha ha......... 😊THIS SONG IS PERFECT FOR THIS SITUATION.......

Naina's heart melts aur woh apna gussa bhool kar Raj ko I love you kehti hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️MAINE KAHA THA NA KI NAINA KHUD KO ROK NAHIN PAAYEGI.......

Raj kissed her forehead and hugged her and they remained in each other's arms!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗SO ROMANTIC FULL OF LOVE AND WARMTH....

I loved the way Raj Naina ka paon theek kar deta hai while she is lost in his eyes!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍HAAN KYA KAMAAL KA THIK KIYA NA........

Naina ka Raj ko ek par ek kiss free dena was very cute and funny!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆MUFT-MUFT-MUFT........HAHAHAHA.........

I loved Raj's dialogue to Pooja's question ke kiss kiss par kya kya muft mil raha hai yeh poocho!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆RAJ HAS A GR8 SENSE OF HUMOUR...........

Raj wink to Naina when she turned back to see him was cute!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳MY CUTIE PIE RAJ AUR USKA WINK BHI USIKI HI TARAH CUTE THA.......

Nandini and Abhi are teasing Raj a lot!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😛FRIENDS KA KAAM HI HOTA HAI CHEDNA...........

It was funny to see Raj asking Abhi about the shirt jo Raj ne hi usse gift ki thi!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆BAAT KO PALATNA CHAHTA THA.......PAR DAAWN ULTA HI PAD GAYA.........

Nandini and Abhi singing the song in Raj's ear was too funny!!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆HAAN MUJHE BHI BAHUT MAZAA AAYA........

Instead of denying, Raj accepts his love for Naina!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏KAB TAK CHUPAAYEGA PYAAR TOH CHIPAAYE NAHIN CHIPTA HAI........

Its a good change to see ke Raj boldly apne pyaar ka izhaar kar raha hai aur bol raha hai that he has lost his heart to his Naina!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊HAAN MUJHE BHI BAHUT ACHCHA LAG RAHA HAI RAJ KA YEH ANDAAZ.........

Nandini is right that Naina is Raj's girlfriend and Raj needs to take her on a date!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼ABSOLUTELY RIGHT...........

Raj agreed to take Naina on a date the next day!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Great!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏LET'S SEE KI AAGE KYA HOTA HAI.........?

Raj was looking hot while he was practicing with the sword and he was described very well!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏RAJ TOH HUMESHA HI HOT LAGTA HAI......AND THANX FOR LIKING MY DESCRIPTION........MUJHE BHI LIKHNE MEIN BAHUT MAZAA AAYA..........

Raj bhi darwaza bandh karke Naina ke peeche khada ho jaata hai!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊HAAN........

Naina and Raj are flirting with each other and romancing while Raj is teaching her to use the sword!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️I LOVED IT TOO.........

The sword fighting scene and their getting lost in each other's eyes during it reminded me of the sword fighting scene in Jodha Akbar!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊YA AND IT SUITED RN VERY WELL.........

Raj ne end jaise paani peena that was soooo romantic and Raj's wink was so cute!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️THIS PART IS MINE FAV. TOO.........


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Posted: 15 years ago
#78

PART 4.

Next scene………

Ali bathroom se nahakar nikalta hai aur usne bed ke upar apni shirt nikaal kar rakhi hui thi jo ki use kahin par milti nahin hai, woh bahut dhoondta hai magar use phir bhi nahin milti hai………..

ALI-are humaari shirt kahan gayi, humne toh yahin par rakhi thi……….

Tabhi ali ke peeche se awaaz aati hai……..

Kahin tum isko toh search nahin kar rahe the…………

Ali peeche ki taraf turn karta hai………..

ALI-{shocked}-ppp……..pooja aap yahan par kya kar rahi hai?

Pooja niche se upar tak ali ko bade hi pyaar se dekhti hai…………

Yeh dekhkar ali thoda sa jhenp jaata hai aur jhath se bed ki chaadar uthakar odh leta hai………..

ALI-aap humaare shirt ke saath kya kar rahin hain?

Pooja dheere-dheere ali ki taraf bhadne lagti hai…….

ALI-{haklaate hue}-pooja aap humein aise kyun dekh rahi hain?aur aap humaare paas kyun aa rahi hai?dekhiye aap……..

Magar isse pehle ki ali apni baat ko poori kar paata ki pooja uske ek dum kareeb pahunch jaati hai aur uske hoton par apni ungli rakh deti hai……..

POO-sshhhh………..

And both of them share a romantic eyelock session…………

Cut to naina………….

Jo ki sword room se nikal kar corridor mein chal rahi hai, aur rajveer ke khayaalon mein khoyi hui hai, ki tabhie woh saamne se aa rahe aalekh se takraati hai………….aur girte-girte bachti hai kyunki aalekh use samhaal leta hai……….

NAI-oh…… aalekh tu hai, I am sorry maine tujhe dekha nahin, aur thanx mujhe samhaalne ke liye…………

Aalekh naina ke chaaron taraf round lagata hai………..aur use upar se niche tak ghoor kar dekhta hai……….

NAI-yeh tu mere chaaron taraf chakkar kyun kaat raha hai? aur tu mujhe aise ghoor ke kyun dekh raha hai?

AAL-woh toh thik hai………

NAI-kya thik hai?

AAL-are apun ke kehne ka matbal yeh tha ki tune jo apun ko sarry aur thaankoo kaha uske liye come-come…………..

NAI-{confused}-come-come………..oh….u mean welcome right……..

AAL-haan-haan wahich kya bolte hai isko hindi maa yaad aaya………swagat hai……..

Naina aalekh ki baat sunkar halke se smile karti hai…………

AAL-ek baat bata naina tu bheeg kaise gayi haan?

NAI-woh main baarish mein bheeg gayi thi……..

AAL-magar tu toh andar se aa raiili hai, aur apun bahar se, aur bahar toh dhoop khilich hui hai………..

NAI-nahin actually woh main baarish mein nahin paani mein gir gayi thi……….

AAL-kahan hai………..? kahan hai…………?

NAI-kya kahan hai?

AAL-samundar kahan hai?

NAI-samundar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AAL-haan apun ko bhi doobki lagaani hai……….

NAI-aalekh tu pagal ho gaya hai kya?

AAL-nahiiiiin………..par shayad tu apun ko wahich samajh rahi hai………..

NAI-nahin aalekh main kyun…………..?

AAL-{naina ki baat ko beech hi mein kaat te hue}-thik hai toh phir apun rajveer sir se jaake poochta hai ki tu bheegi kaise?

NAI-{aalekh ke haath pakadkar use rokte hue hadbadahat mein}-nahin-nahin aalekh ruk RAJ ko thode hi na pata hai ki main kaise bheegi hoon? USNE mujhe thode hi na bottle ke paani se bhigoya hai……..

AAL-{chaunkar naina ki taraf turn karta hai}-RAJ………………USNE……..bhigoya hai tujhe botal ke paani se……..haiiiiiiiiii……..kya baat hai…………apun ko nahin pata tha ki rajveer sir itne woh kya kehte hain angrejii mein haan ROMAANTIK bande hain……..

NAI-oops………mere kehne ka woh matlab nahin tha, I mean ki main yeh nahin kehna chahti thi, main jo kehna chahti thi woh yeh nahin tha…aalekh tu samajh raha hai na ,ki main kya kehna chahti hoon………

AAL-bas kar –{aur woh naina ke paas jaakar uske shoulders par haath rakhta hai}-apun sab samajh raha hai ki tu kya kehna chahti hai…….sach bolun naina apun bahut khush hai tujhe aur rajveer sir ko saath mein dekhkar……………..bas tu aise hi khush raha kar…………

NAI-{gets emotional}-thanx aalekh……..tujhe toh sab pata hai…….aur main pagal tujhe samjhaane chali thi………

AAL-so toh hai, achcha jaa aur khud ko sukha phir milte hain……….

Next scene in rajveer's room………….

Rajveer apne room mein baithkar coffee pee raha hai aur naina ke baare mein soch raha hai, ki tabhie uske door par knock hota hai………….raj fauran uthkar darwaaza kholkar kehta hai…………NAINA…………lekin darwaaze par nandini hoti hai…………

NAN-naina nahin nandini…………

RAJ-oh………..nandini tum maine socha tha ki……………tum hi hogi………

NAN-{raj ki chori ko pakad leti hai}-oh really is that so………….

RAJ-ofcourse it is………….

NAN-well, I don't think so………….

RAJ-so what do u think?

NAN-batati hoon-batati hoon, pehle mujhe andar toh aane do, ya phir yahin darwaaze par hi saare sawaal kar daaloge………

RAJ-oh I am sorry, plzzz andar aaona……….

NAN-thanky…………

Nandini raj room mein enter karti hai aur kehti hai……………

NAN-toh yeh hai tumhaara room, I must say kaafi achcha sajaaya hua hai………

RAJ-tumhe sach mein achcha laga………..

NAN-ofcourse kyun achcha nahin lagna chahiye tha…………

RAJ-nahin aisi koi baat nahin hai, actually kabhi-kabhi mujhe room mein kuch kami si lagti hai………..

Isi beech nandini raj ki photo ko uthakar dekhne lagti hai…………

NAN-hmmm…well kami toh hai………….

RAJ-tumhe bhi aisa lagta hai na…………..

NAN-haan………….

RAJ-toh batao na ki kya kami hai aur kahan par hai, main use bharne ki poori koshish karunga…………

NAN-hmmm………well kami is room mein nahin, balki tumhaari life mein hai jise sirf naina bhar sakti hai……..aur phir yeh adhuri tasveer bhi poori ho jaayegi…………..

RAJ-tum sahi keh rahi ho nandini, naina hi mere adhurepaan ko bhar sakti hai, aur mujhe poora kar sakti hai…………

NAN-main toh humesha hi sahi kehti hoon…………anyways meri baat chodo aur apni baat karo date ke baare mein kya socha ki kahan leke jaa rahe ho naina ko?

RAJ-actually maine abhi tak kuch socha hi nahin hai………..

NAN-aise karoge tum apne pyaar ki haseen shuruat izhaar ke baad……….

RAJ-kyun agar main naina ko date pe nahin le gaya toh kya humaare pyaar ki shuruat haseen nahin hogi……..

NAN-aisa nahin hai raj, magar izhaar ke baad tumne aur naina ne kya saath mein pyaar ke kuch haseen pal beetaayein hain………….

RAJ-{apne mann mein sochta hai, with a cute smile on his face}-haan kai baar jaise point 1857 par,surang mein, store room mein, class room mein aur aaj subah sword room mein bhi…………………

NAN-raj maine tumse kuch poocha aur tum ho ki khade-khade muskuraaye jaa rahe ho?

RAJ-nahin woh main soch yeh soch raha tha ki………..

NAN-hmmm…..let me guess, tum naina ke saath beetaayein hue pyaar ke lamho ko yaad kar rahe the right…………

RAJ-right…………

NAN-magar kya un palon mein ek bhi aisa lamha hai jab tumne naina ko is baat ka ehsaas dilaaya ho ki woh tumhaare liye kitni special hai, aur uski tumhaari zindagi mein kitni ahmiyat hai……….

Nandini ki baat ko sunkar raj soch mein pad jaata hai………

NAN-nahin………….mujhe pata tha………….

RAJ-maine kabhi is tarah se socha hi nahin…………

NAN-toh ab sochna shuru karo, tumhe pata hai raj ki,ek ladki jab kisi se pyaar karti hai, toh badle mein sirf pyaar hi chahti hai aur yeh tumhaara farz banta hai ki tum use khaas hone ka ehsaas karaayo, use jataayo ki tum usse kitna pyaar karte ho aur………..

RAJ-main tumhaari baat samajh gaya nandini………..

NAN-{smile karte hue}-Gr8………waise bhi samajhdaar ke liye toh ishaara hi kaafi hota hai…….aur jahan tak mujhe pata hai tum toh kaafi samajhdaar ho…….

Raj bhi nandini ki taraf muskuraakar dekhta hai…………..

RAJ-thanx nandini……….

NAN-thanx………..tum shayad bhul rahe ho toh yaad dilaan doon, best friends and friendship mein………..

RAJ-no thanky and no sorry right………..

NAN-{smile karte hue}-right……after all friends hote kis liye hain haan………

Aur phir dono ek doosre ko hug karte hain…………

Next scene………..

Abhimanyu apne office mein baithkar kuch kaam kar raha hai, ki tabhie orderly BC ki taraf se ek notice leke aata hai…………abhi us notice ko padhkar kaafi khush ho jaata hai aur sign karke orderly se kehkar use bahar notice board par lagwaa deta hai………….

Jab orderly notice laga raha hota hai ki tabhie huda wahan se guzarta hai aur uski nazar us notice par padti hai, aur uska chehra bhi khil uthta hai……..aur woh zor se chillaa uthta hai………

HUDA-{in excitement}-"NEW YEAR PARTY CELEBRATION", aur woh bhi KMA mein………kahin main sapna toh nahin dekh raha hoon………..

Huda orderly se khud ko chutki kaatne ko kehta hai………..

HUDA-abe chutki kaat raha hai ya phir mera haath………….. chal jaa apna kaam kar…………..

ORD-wahi toh kar raha tha………

HUDA-ho gaya chal ab jaa……..

Aur orderly wahan se chala jaata hai………….

HUDA-{looks at the notice}-kya baat hai taau is baar hum par bada meherbaan ho raha hai, {looks at the sign of abhi}- aur saala isi chakkar mein gadha matlab ki zhabreela bhi pehelwaan ho raha hai yeh khabar toh sabko sunani padegi……..

Aur phir is news ko dene ke liye huda canteen ki taraf jaata hai………..

Next scene………

Raj aur nandini baatein kar rahein hain ki tabhi abhi aata hai………..

ABHI-kya hum andar aa sakte hain raj…………..?

RAJ-haan bilkul aa sakte ho aur waise bhi tumhe kabse ijaazat lene ki zaroorat pad gayi haan……..

Abhi room mein enter karta hai aur nandini ko dekhkar hai kehta hai………..

ABHI-toh kya baatein chal rahin hain kya hum jaan sakte hain…………?

RAJ-philhaal toh aisi koi khaas baat nahin chal rahi hai……….

ABHI-magar hum ek khaas khabar lekar aayein hain aap dono ke liye…….

NAN-achcha aisi kaunsi khabar leke aaye ho abhi…………….?

RAJ-hmmm………zara hum bhi toh sune……….

ABHI-BC ne is saal KMA mein new year party celebrate karne ka decision liya hai…………

RAJ&NAN-{together}-whatttttttt………..?????????????????

RAJ-I don't believe this, BC aur party woh bhi KMA mein………

NAN-same here jo aaj tak nahin hua, woh achanak kaise ho gaya……..?

ABHI-well yeh toh humein bhi nahin pata ki kab-kyun-kaise hua, lekin job hi hua achcha hua humaara toh yahi manna hai………….

NAN-haan so toh hai, {looks at raj and blinks}-aur waise bhi ladies ko surprises achchi lagti hain, phir mauka bhi hai aur dastoor bhi……….right……….

ABHI-hum kuch samjhe nahin……….

NAN- mere kehne ka yeh matlab tha ki jo ab tak nahin hua ab woh finally hoga…………..aur waise bhi samajhdaar ke liye ishaara hi kaafi hota hai abhi………..

Aur phir abhi aur nandini dono raj ko byeee kehkar wahan se chalein jaate hain……..aur raj nandini ki baaton ko sochkar apne mann mein muskuraata rehta hai…………….

RAJ-{smile karte hue}-naina………..be ready a big surprise is waiting especially for you…………..

Cut to the canteen….jahan par saare hi cadets bahut khush hain NEW YEAR PARTY ke baare mein sunkar………….

Next scene………….

Gehlot ka mobile ring hota hai………

GEH-halo………..

SHERRY-halo dad aap kaise hain…………?

GEH-sherry beta tum, main thik hoon beta tum kaise ho………..?

SHER-I am fine dad…………

GEH-tum kahan se bol rahi ho…………..?

SHER-dad main Mumbai airport par hoon aur kal tak KMA pahunch jaaongi…………

GEH-{khush ho jaata hai}-toh main rajveer ko…………

SHER-no dad aap raj ko kuch nahin bataayenge, main kal khud aakar naye saal mein use bada sa surprise doongi………byeee dad see u 2 morrow……..

GEH-thik hai beta jaisa tum kaho……..byeee………..

SHER-{to herself}-raj……….kal tumhe bahut bada surprise milne waala hai………..so be ready for sherry…………

Next scene……..

Aalekh aur naina canteen mein baithkat baatein kar rahein hain……….

AAL-toh naina kal tu rajveer sir ko naye saal ki khushi mein koi gifat nahin degi…………

NAI-gifat!!!! U mean gift…........

AAL-haan-haan wahich………..

NAI-magar main kya gift doongi rajveer sir ko………..

AAL-apun bhi wahich soch raha tha, kyunki sabse jhakkaas gifat toh tu pehle hi de chuki hai unko……….

NAI-kaunsa gift…………?

AAL-are tera dil aur kya woh toh pehlehich rajveer sir ke dilvich………. Bole toh jud chukka hai…………ab isse bada gifat toh aur koi ho nahin sakta hai unke vaaste……magar phir bhi apun soch raha tha ki agar tu……..

NAI-aalekh tu bhi na……..magar main unhe kya tohfa doon, jo meri zindagi mein khud ek khubsoorat tohfe ki tarah aayein hain………..

AAL-ab yeh toh tere kohich sochna padega………apun toh chala……..

NAI-{to herself}-jise bhagwaan ne khud mere liye tohfa banakar bheja hai, main use kya doon……?

Cut to gehlot…………jo ki nair ka phone try kar raha hai magar phone lag hi nahin raha hai………..aur woh gusse mein apna mobile zameen par patak deta hai………..

GEH-{angrily}-yeh nair aur uska phone dono hi ek hi thaali ke chatte-batte hain kaam ke waqt hi araam farmaate hain………..{in his mind}-lagta hai ki ab mujhe hi khud jaana padega KMA usse milne……..nahin toh mera saara bana banaya khel bigad jaayega……..

NAIR-{with a wicked smile}-NEW YEAR PARTY CELEBRATION……….celebration toh hoga aur woh bhi dhamaakedaar tareeke se jise koi bhula nahin paayega, yeh naya saal KMA, RAJVEER AUR USKE CHAHETE CADETS ke liye kisi bade surprise se kam nahin hoga……..SURPRISE…………..hahahahaha…………..

END OF PART 4………PLZZZ DO COMMENT………AND SILENT READERS DON'T FORGET TO PRESS THE LIKE BUTTON TOO……………

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Posted: 15 years ago
#79
superb update.loved it.
continue soon dear.
thanks for the pm dear.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#80
nice part !
Awesome...
let's see what surprise Raj gives to NAina..
Don't know what is lala planning for Raj...
UD soon...😊

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