IZHAAR-ek haseen shuruat-{RN-ff}imp note on pg 19. - Page 7

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Posted: 15 years ago
#61
Nice part...!!!

I am glad you are continuing this fic...!!!!

Update soon..!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#62
that was very good
love the way RN relationship is proceeding
plz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#63
nice part... 😊
gr888..we hv one more running RN ff... 😛
pls continue soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#64
Wow......such a sweet cute part....Raj aur Nandini k hug se Naina kitni jal gayi thi....but Raj knew the cutest way to wipe away her anger!!! Such a sweet scene...I specially luved Raj's dialogue to Pooja...."kiss kiss par kya kya muft"...hehe

And then Nandini n Abhi teased Raj a lot....and it was funny to c Raj asking Abhi abt the shirt he only had gifted. Chalo ab Raj Naina ko date pe le jayega!!!

Sword practicing was awesum!!! Every bit of it was full of romance n cuteness!!! And Raj's wink....i'm so in luv wid it!!!

Pls continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#65
HIII PRITI HOW R U?
AFTER A VERY LONG TIME

A SUPER BRILLIANT UD
IT WAS SOOOOOOO ROMANTIC
I LOVED IT
YAAR TUM KITNE DIFFERENT
ROMANTIC SCENES LIKTI HO
NAINA JAL GAYI NANDINI AUR
RAJ KE HUG KARNE SE HOT HOT
PAR RAJ BHI JAAN GAYA NAINA
KI DIL KI BAAT AUR KYA MANAYA
HAIN😉 SO ROMANTIC
AUR SAATH MEIN RAJ KO BHI
KISS MILE VO BHI DO DO HEHEHEHE😉
RAJ KO NANDINI AUR ABHI MILKAR
TEASE KAR RAHE HAIN VERY GOOD
AAKIR KAR RAJ KO BOLAHI PADTA
HAIN SACH KYA HAIN CHALO NANDI
KE SAMJHANE SE RAJ NAINA KO DATE
PAR LE JAAYEGA LAGTA HAIN TABHI
RAJ NEXT DIN PRACTICE KAR RAHA HAIN
TALWAR BAAZI BAHUT HI NEW CONCEPT
THA ROMANCE KARWANEKA NAINA NE
TOH BAHUT AASANI SE RAJ KO HOT BOL
DIYA HMMMM😆 AUR RAJ NE BHI
KYA PRIZE DIYA HAIN BADLEMEIN MUJE
NAHI PATA THA RAJ ITNI ROMANTIC TARIKE
SE PAANI PE SAKTA HAIN😳
THAT WAS SOOOOOOO ROMANTIC I REALLY
LOVED IT OKAY NEXT PART MEIN DATE
WAITING EAGARLY FOR THE UD JALDI KARNA

LOVE
DEEPA



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Posted: 15 years ago
#66

Update was very nice and romantic. Its good to see that you are going to continue with this FF.

So Nandini has come to KMA and she is going to the academy psychiatirst. Naina is surprised to see Raj speaking so freely with Nandini and she feels very jealous. And later jealousy leads to anger.
Raj finally understand that naina is jealous of Nandini and is liye who naina ko manane lagta hai. Naina finally maan jata hai aur raj ko ek par ek kiss free mein bhi de deti hai.
Nandini and abhi do not miss any chance to tease Raj and for once instead of denying it....he accepts his love for naina. He even agress that he need to take her on a date.
The talwarbaazi wala scene was very good....raj aur naina ek dusere se flirt hi kiye jaa rahe hai...
Raj is madly in love with naina...the last scene was very romantic.
please continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#67
Hey Priti...
u update this..it's soooo beutiful part.Naina ka jeulous hona n Raj n Naina's romance.....thats so cute of them.plzzz continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#68
Hiiii.....
its really nice to see this fic updated
superb part..... n sooooo cute
naina was so jealous when she saw nandini hugging raj...when raj came to know that naina was angry...wo kitna romantically manaya naina ko...that part was so sweet
nandini n abhi raj ko bahut tease kar rahe hain...akhir main raj ko batana hi padana nandini ko that he lost his heart to naina .....n nandini tikhi kaha naina to rajs girl friend hain aur usse date par lejana jaroori hain..n raj also agreed to this....so sweet of him
the sword practicing scene was too awesome...its so romantic...raj kitna romantic hain....u have written that part really so good
totally its a beautiful part
plz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#69
hey!
nice 2 c d ud aftr a long time
it was really gr8...u described raj nd naina's relation relly well!
keep up d gud work
nd plz ud regularly karna
thnx fr d pm
love
sur
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Posted: 15 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi DearHII SUHANA.........

How r u???I AM ABSOLUTELY FINE.......AND HOPE THE SAME FOR U TOO.......
Welcome back..I really like this fiction n it was gud to see u updating again..THANX A LOT SWEETY........
So Nandini has came in KMA as a psychiatrist...YES........
Naina was so jealous when Nandini n Raj were talking with each other...WOH PYAAR HI KYA JISMEIN JEALOUSY NA HO.......RIGHT......
Aakhir Raj ko pata hi chal jata hai ki Naina kaafi jealous feel kar rahi n sath hi gussa bhi hai..But Raj ko usse manana aa gaya hai..Kitne romantic tareeke se woh Naina ko manta hai..😉😳HAAN AFTER ALL YEH RAJ KA STYLE HAI........
Naina bhi apna gussa bhool kar usko ek kiss ke sath ek kiss free mein deti hai..😆😆AB KYA KARE DIL PE KAABU PAANA MUSHKIL HO GAYA THA........
Nanadini n Abhi Raj ko bahut tease kar rahe hain n Raj zara bhi blush nahin kar raha but woh to boldly apne pyaar ka izhaar kar raha hai..😛OFCOURSE AUR KITNA SHARMAAYEGA........AUR KAB TAK CHUPAAYEGA........
Gud change..😆😆😆KEHTE HAIN NA KI JO HOTA HAI ACHCHE KE LIYE HI HOTA HAI........
Talwarbaazi mein Raj n Naina lad kam flirt zyaada kar rahe hain ek dure ke sath..Sahi hai lesson ke sath tomace free..😆😆😉Last scene was just so romantic..Lagta hai kaafi romantic movies dekhi jaa rahi hain..😉😉I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS SCENE TOO WHILE WRITING.........HAAN KEH LO KUCH SRK KI MOVIES KA ASAR HAI AUR KUCH KHUD KI ROMANTIC IMAGINATION KA......
It was very romantic indeed..Just brilliant.THANX A LOT.........BYEEE......AND I WILL UD SOON.........
Continue soon
Bye

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