NR FF! 'Anmul muhabbat' ( part 2)

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Posted: 16 years ago

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hii seher dear😊.. hope u r fine😊..
once again a wonderful part..😃.. keep up the good work sweetie😊.. finally nida aur raj ki bhi shadi ho gayi🥳.. chitra aur raj ki tarah😆.. tum sochti hogi ki main har serious situation ko funny bana deti hoon haina?? par kya karu yaar hase bina raha hi nahi jata..😆.. chalo abb thoda serious ho jati hoon.. nida aur raj pehli baar mile amazing.. .. part bahot emotional tha.. main to kahi kho hi gayi thi☺️.. nida ki sis ne uski help ki raj se milne main.. she is soo caring😊.. thank god nida ki mom ne usko permission dedi raj se milne ki.. she proved that her daughters happiness is the only priority in her life😊.. raj ne ekdum filmy style main nida ki maang bhari 😊.. main agar nida ki jagah hoti to kya karti yeh to tumne me and my philosophies main padh hi liya hoga na😆.. main phir se idhar udhar bhatakne lagi..😡.. haan to main yeh soch rahi hoon ki abb nida ke papa zarur koi problem create karenge.. mujhe uske papa se bahot darr lagta hai pata nahi kyu??😔.. par jo bhi ho mujhe raj pe pura bharosa hai😆.. u know mujhe tisri baar pyaar ho gaya..☺️ pata hai kisse?? raj se sweetie 😳😆 pehli baar kth dekhte dekhte hua tha, dusri aur tisri baar tumhara fic padhte padhte hua☺️😆.. abb aur kya irade hai sweetie?? mere paas ek hi dil haia ur wo already main tin tin baar de chuki hoon ek hi insaan ko😆..

maine bahot long reply diya hai aaj.. yeh compensation hai agey ke har parts ke liye jinpe mein kuch din tak comment nahi kar paugi.. hostel wapas ja rahi hoon na isliye.. i'll miss u and ur fic😊 jab mujhe phirse padhne ka mauka milega tab tak to pata nahi anmul muhabbat kaha tak pahoch gayi hogi 🤔..

bye bye and tc sweetie.. agar kabhi udaas ho jao to meri stupid batein yaad kar lena apne aap hasi aa jayegi😆..
take care sweetie..😊

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Posted: 16 years ago

#112

Hey Seher, though its small but its simply a beautiful part. I luv the intensity of RAJ-NIDA luv. Their each n every dialog showed the depth of their luv.

According to me, luv is like this only which is actually beyond right or wrong. So I donno whether wat they did was ryt or not, coz luv is a feeling much beyond dat.

Thnx 4 such a sweet part dear. Do continue whenever u r free.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#113

hi seher dear.........simply very beautiful and lovely...............raj ne nida ki maang bhar diya and told to wait for him but till how long and wat is nida gonna do abt the alliance her dad has chosen for her??????????? this time raj could hav went to her home and explained to them and sorted out the things.............cont soon...lets c wats happens now...............

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#114

Originally posted by: goodkashish
hey seher it is very nice part.........infact muje khud samaj me nahi aa raha ki unhone jo kiya woh use karna chahiye tha ki nahi kyunki shayad main aisa kabhi nahi kar paungi..........janti ho kyun kyunki main apne parents ko bhi to dhoka nahi dena chahungi aur shayad main kabhi apne pyaar ka saath bhi nahi chodna chahungi is liye shayad main hoti to..........raj ko leke ghar jati aur phir apne parents se baat karti aur main aise shadi karti jisme sab ki marzi ho aur aashirwad bhi...........kyunki na to main apne pyaar ko chod pati na hi apne family ko..............jaan yeh meri rai hai jo tumne mujse puchi...........lekin agar pyaar sacha ho to woh apni manzil zaroor pa leta hai phir kyun na kitni hi kasuti deni pade..................lekin main itna bada faisla jaldbazi me kabhi nahi leti.............yeh mera manna hai jaan aage sabki soch alag hoti hai...............thanks for pm and ple continue soon......
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kashish

thanks buddy for ur sweet comments . ur right sweetherat actually even i was confuse too when i was writting that part...per phir suchti hun jo kuch be likha wo shaid theek he hay kyunki nida nay aysa is liye kia kyunki us kay ghar walay us ki marzi kay bina usay kisi ore kay saath jorna chahtay hain ore agar wo un ki baat maan be leti hay tab be dekha jaye tu jo insaan kisi ore ko itni shiddat say chahta hu ore apnay dil main kisi ore ko basa kar wo kisi dossray insaan kay saath zindagi guzaarnay jaye ye be tu dhuka huga us insaan kay saath jis ko wo chore kar jaye gi ore us insaan kay saath be jis kay saath wo mansoob hugi...so i think aysi situation main ore koi solution nahi tha.......ore tumnay bilkal theek kaha agar payar sacha hu tu wo apni manzil zaror pata hay.... n thanks sweety for ur opinion, i like it...

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hii seher dear😊.. hope u r fine😊..
once again a wonderful part..😃.. keep up the good work sweetie😊.. finally nida aur raj ki bhi shadi ho gayi🥳.. chitra aur raj ki tarah😆.. tum sochti hogi ki main har serious situation ko funny bana deti hoon haina?? par kya karu yaar hase bina raha hi nahi jata..😆.. chalo abb thoda serious ho jati hoon.. nida aur raj pehli baar mile amazing.. .. part bahot emotional tha.. main to kahi kho hi gayi thi☺️.. nida ki sis ne uski help ki raj se milne main.. she is soo caring😊.. thank god nida ki mom ne usko permission dedi raj se milne ki.. she proved that her daughters happiness is the only priority in her life😊.. raj ne ekdum filmy style main nida ki maang bhari 😊.. main agar nida ki jagah hoti to kya karti yeh to tumne me and my philosophies main padh hi liya hoga na😆.. main phir se idhar udhar bhatakne lagi..😡.. haan to main yeh soch rahi hoon ki abb nida ke papa zarur koi problem create karenge.. mujhe uske papa se bahot darr lagta hai pata nahi kyu??😔.. par jo bhi ho mujhe raj pe pura bharosa hai😆.. u know mujhe tisri baar pyaar ho gaya..☺️ pata hai kisse?? raj se sweetie 😳😆 pehli baar kth dekhte dekhte hua tha, dusri aur tisri baar tumhara fic padhte padhte hua☺️😆.. abb aur kya irade hai sweetie?? mere paas ek hi dil haia ur wo already main tin tin baar de chuki hoon ek hi insaan ko😆..

maine bahot long reply diya hai aaj.. yeh compensation hai agey ke har parts ke liye jinpe mein kuch din tak comment nahi kar paugi.. hostel wapas ja rahi hoon na isliye.. i'll miss u and ur fic😊 jab mujhe phirse padhne ka mauka milega tab tak to pata nahi anmul muhabbat kaha tak pahoch gayi hogi 🤔..

bye bye and tc sweetie.. agar kabhi udaas ho jao to meri stupid batein yaad kar lena apne aap hasi aa jayegi😆..
take care sweetie..😊

hey sweetherat thanksss for ur long reply really read kar kay bohat acha laga....OMG sweety teen teen baar payar kia huga tumhara?????main yaha eik nida ko sambhal rahi hun uper say tu be.....khuda khair karay.....ur going back to hustel thats not good i'll miss u. please come back soon😳😳 wasay be sweety next part is last one....so stay n touch.....

tum be apna bohat khyal rakhna...

love

seher😊

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#116

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid
Hey Seher, though its small but its simply a beautiful part. I luv the intensity of RAJ-NIDA luv. Their each n every dialog showed the depth of their luv.

According to me, luv is like this only which is actually beyond right or wrong. So I donno whether wat they did was ryt or not, coz luv is a feeling much beyond dat.

Thnx 4 such a sweet part dear. Do continue whenever u r free.

hey sumy thanks buddy for ur lovely comments...i was not sure ki tum lugu ko kasay lagay ga anyway thankssss, 😊😊

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Originally posted by: spvd
hi seher dear.........simply very beautiful and lovely...............raj ne nida ki maang bhar diya and told to wait for him but till how long and wat is nida gonna do abt the alliance her dad has chosen for her??????????? this time raj could hav went to her home and explained to them and sorted out the things.............cont soon...lets c wats happens now...............

hey deepa thanks buddy..for ur lovely comments dekhu ab kia huta hay...😊

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Anmul muhabbat

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us din raj say milnay kay baad jab nida ghar luti tu sab kuch kitna badla badla sa lag rag raha tha ...sab kuch wahi tha wahi lug wahi ghar per wo khud wo nahi rahi thi....jasay he wo ghar aye mamma nay usay dekha us kay maang main sandoor ore juki nazrain wo bina kuch kahay he smaj gain...mamma! nida tum theek hu naa sab theek hay naa???

nida! sirf khamoosh khari hay kuch nahi bole sakti eik ajeeb sa darr us kay andar tha...

mamma! tum chup kyun hu kuch bolti kyun nahi ..sana tum batao...

sana! wo main batati hun..phir sana nay sab kuch mamma ko bata dia..mamma sab kuch sun kar jasay saktay main aa gain...nida tum nay ye sab ..ye kar dia eik baar be hamaray baaray main nahi sucha..ore sana tum nay kaha tha na ki mujay tum per whiwaas hay tu ye sila dia tum lugu nay ore ye kih kar wo runay lagain...

nida! please mamma mujay ghalt mat samajyee

mamma! mat kahu mah mujay ....main nay tum per bharosa kia ore aaj tum nay...

nida! rutay huye per mamma main nay aysa kuch nahi kia. yakeen karu mera...

mamma bas ru rahi hay ore kuch nahi kihti...

nida! mamma main raaj say bohat payar karti hun, wo be muj say bohat payar karta hay, main us kay bina nahi jee sakti...please mamma ....

mamma! sana is ko bolo yaha say chali jayee nahi tu ....

Nida bohat ru rahi hay ore sana usay us kay room main lay jaati hay..nida to herself main nay aysa kia ghalat kia .. mamma aap samajti kyun nahi main eik joothay bandhan main nahi bandhan main nahi band sakti please mujay maaf kar du ore ye kihtay huye wo ronay lagi....ye raat nida ki zindagi ki sab say lambi raat thi jo us nay suchtay huye guzaari...ore mamma be saari raat suchti rahi ki ab larkay walay anay walay hain kia huga wo nida kay papa say kia kahay gi....ore saari raat unhun nay be inhi waswasu main guzaari...

doosri taraf raaj be suchta raha ki jaldbaazi main kahain us nay kuch ghalat tu nahi kia ???? per pata nahi kyun usay dil kay kisi kony main eik sukoon sa tha. jis ki waja say wo khush be tha..

next morning nida kay ghar main ajeeb sa mahul tha , sab apnay apnay rooms main thay nida apnay room say bahir nahi ana chahti thi kyunki jo kuch be raat ko hua shaid wo mamma ko face nahi karna chahti thi lyunki usay abhi tak darr tha...jab adha din guzar gya tu daadi jaan us kay room main ayain..wo be dil main us say naraaz thi per usay udaas be nahi dekh sakti thi kyunki wo nida say bohat payar karti thi ore is waqt wo jaanti thi ki nida ko un kay payar ki bohat zyada zarorat hay...jab wo us kay paas ayain tu nida nay dekhtay he un kay galay lag kar runa shuru kar dia....i'm sorry daadi jaan main aap ka dil nahi dukhana chahti thi per aap jaanti hain naa main nay aysa kyun kia...main aap ko dukhi nahi kar sakti per main us kay bina be nahi reh sakti main us say bohat payar karti hun..ore wo be mujay bohat chahta hay...

daadi jaan! agar aysi baat hay tu tu usay ghar bula hum us say milna chahtay hain..ore tumharay papa say main baat karu gi..

nida! kia sach daadi jaan, aap papa say baat karain gi..

daadi jaan! haan main baat karu gi per tu aaj he raj ko ghar bula huamain kuch decide karna huga ..un lugu kay anay say pihlay .

ye suntay he nida huggs her daadi ore us nay kaha okk main aaj he raj say baat karti hun...

nida was so haapyus nay jaldi say raaj ko call ki per wo apni shooting main bohat busy tha...shaam ko jab usay time mila tu us nay call return ki...tu nida nay usay batay ki us kay ghar walay us say milnaa chahtay hain....raj ko be sun kar khushi hui ore wo raat ko us kay ghar a gya...daadi jaan nay us say detail say baat ki , ore raj nay ye kaha ki wo nida ko bohat chahta hay per abhi shaadi nahi kar sakta, ye sun kar nida ko be ajeeb laga per usay apnay raj per pora bharoosa tha is liye wo kuch be suchna nahi chahti thi,

daadi jaan! tum jaantay hu naa ki nida kay papa us ki shaadi ,,,,,

raj! jaanta hun per aap ko muj per yakeen karna huga main jald he ayun ga nida ko leyne.....ye mera wada hay app say...

ore ye kih kar wo chala gya...

mamma! nida say baat kartay huye,...ab kia suchti hu, main nay kaha tha naa ki wo eik dhuka hay ore kuch nahi...

nida! mamma please us ki aankhu main aansu aa gye wo dhuka nahi hay wo zaror aye ga....

ddadi jaan ko be samaj main aa rah tha per unhu nay himmat kar kay nida kay papa say baat ki ore u ko yehi bata ya ki nida abe intersted nahi hay wo abhi parana chahti hay..wo abhi raj kay baray main unhain nahi batana chati thi unhain darr tha ki agar abhi sab kuch sach bata dia tu kahain wo ghussay main aa kar nida ki shaadi na kara dain is liye unhain ye baat un say chupaani pari...ore unhu nay finally naa chahtay huye be dadi jaan ki baat maan le ore un lugu ko anay say ruk dia...

doosray din raj india wapas chal gya....per lagta tha ye saal raj ki success ka saal tha , her jaga bas usai kay charchay hunay lagay , us ki pilhi film he itni hitt hui ki us kay baad continues movies ka silsila shuru hu gya wo apni showbiz ki dunya main kahain bohat agay nikal gya....

waha pakistan main nida us ki success ko dekh kar khush huti rihti per us ka dil bohat udaas tha kyunki jab say wo pakistan say wapas gya tha yab say us ki nida say baat nahi hui thi....nida tu us ki awaaz kay liye taras gye thi. per najany kyun us ka dil andar say mutmain tha. usay raj say koi shikwa nahi tha, wo tu us ki khushi main jeena chahti thi...ore aaj tu nida ko raj say bicharay huye du saal hu gye thay...nida kay papa ko maama nay aakhir kaar sach bata he dia ore wo apni beti per gussa nahi huye balki un ko us kay dukh ki fikal hunay lagi ...sab nay nida ko bohat samjaya per wo tu aysay safar per nikal chuki thi jaha say wapsi ka koi raats nahi thi, ye waqt be bohat zalam hay naa kabhi kisi kay liye nahi rukta ore phir dekhtay he dekhtay eik ore saal be guar gya per raj ka koi pata nahi chala wo apni dunya main kahain bohat door jaa chuka tha....nida ki is halat kay liye sabhi bohat pareeshaan thay per wo apni zindagi main khush thi....aaj raj ka birthday tha ore nida her saal ki tarah us ka birthday celebrate kia khud he ore raat ko sunay say pihlay us nay eik poem raaj kay naam likhi..

( ye poem meri friend ki hay jisay main yaha post kar rahi hun)

jisay soochti hun tanhai kay udaas lamhu main

kia wo be muj ko suchta huga.................

main nay yaad kia hay us ki shaid

cheenk anay per us nay ye kaha huga

bekhyali main her taraf ...

muj ko he dhoongha huga

phir naa pa kar mujay haqeeqt ki dunya main

is baat per wo kai baar ulja hua

roz parti hun us ki her tehreer ko

kia wo be muj ko suchta huga

khyalu ki dunya main her pal

muj ko he apnay saath paya hua

haan main suchti hun meri tarah

judai nay usay pe tarpaya huga

aankhain nam hui hungi us ki jab

akeelay main un raastu say guzra huga

main us ki humsafar huti aa kaash

her kadam per us nay ye sucha huga

suna hay musmu kay saath badal jaatay hain lug

per nahi wo nahi badla huga

chup na saki hugi bechaibi us ki

laakh us nay magar chupaya huga

aankhu ki surhi main ayyan hugi tasveer meri

raat su na saka ye bahana banaya huga

meri neendain ujaar kar khud be

saari raat yakenan wo jaga huga

haan main suchti hun usay raat kay pichlay pihar

kia wo be muj ko suchta hua

ore ye likhtay he uski aankhain eik baar phir num hu gain....waqt guzarta raha ore phir sana ki shaadi hu gye ore phir dekhtay he dekhtay noor be apnay ghar ko hu gye...nida kay liye be bohat say proposal aye per koi samjay ya na us kay dil main tu sirf raaj basa hay...mamma papa sabhi nay haar maan le wo jantay hain nida koi react nahi karay gi.....

aaj 7 saal guzar gye ...per wo aaj be raaj ka intizaar kar rahi hay wo apni maang main aaj raaj kay naam ka sindoor bhari hay ore aaj be her roz usi jaga per zaror jaati hay jaha per wo apnay raj say mili thi usay us jaga say apnay raj ki khushbu aati hay un sheeshu ki deewaru main apnay raaj ka aks nazar ata hay ....per wo bohat khush hay wo jaanti hay us ka raaj eik din zaror aye ga......

tu ye thi kahani nida ki main nay kabhi sucha be nahi tha ki main is story ka end aysay karu gi per karna parah! shaid isay parnay kay baad tum lugu kay dil main be bohat saaray sawaal hugay ki raaj nay aysa kyun kia , us nay nida ko intizaar ki umeed kyun dilaye.....per inshallah zindagi rahi tu main is story ka part 2 jab start karu gi tu shaid un sab sawalu kay jawab be mil jain...per aaj ki kahani ka bas yehi amjaam hay. agar mian nay tum say kisi ka dukhya hu tu please forgive me....

i'm very thankful to u gys kashish, sumy, nandni, deepa , aarti n nida thanks friends for ur support n love. mujay story likhnay say zyada tum lugu kay sweet comments read kar kay acha laga...so thanks once again so inshallah zindagi rahi tu phir milay gain 2nd part kay saath.

love

seher😳

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Hey Seher dear. Maine nahi socha tha iss kahani ka end aisa hoga. Jab maine PM me dekha k ye last part hai tab mai thoda udaas ho gayi par phir socha shayad ek sweet sa ending hoga. But iss ending ne sach me mann me bahut se sawal khare kar diye aur Unka jawab pane k liye main tumhare iss story k part 2 ka besbhri se intezaar karungi.

Well On second thoughts iss story ko ek sweet ending dena shayad utna asaan nahi tha. So I'm quite happy the way it has ended. Iss baat ka dukh zaroor rahega ki ye part yehi kahtam ho gaya but dil me ek khushi hai ki mai itni achhi story pad payi. Today I'm really happy dat I decided to read this FF.

Thnx 4 this wonderful story of Raj n Nida. This story will always remain very close to my heart.

Luv,

Sumy

Edited by sumaiya wahid - 16 years ago

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Deepa

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Posted: 16 years ago

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hey seher...............my god this is the last part and i thought it would be different but here u hav ended the ff lik this and now am waitin for the second part................yaar asli zindagi main bhi aisa hua raj ke saath i mean the kth days and ab yahan bhi intezaar..........jaldi hi second part shuru karo dear....loved the way the story has been taken...........and congrats for finishini it and good luck wit the next one...........