NR FF! 'Anmul muhabbat' ( part 2)

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Posted: 16 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: -Aarti-
wah wah! superbly written mindblowing update......sab kuch awesome tha re.....do conti soonn

thanks buddy😳 i'm happy that u like it😊

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Posted: 16 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: goodkashish
hi seher i just read the part and i must say ki nida bhi mere tarah bilkul pagal hai..........i just luv it..........aur sabse jyada jo poem tumne end me likhi woh.......i mean it had very deep meaning with touch anyone;s heart............thanks for the pm and ple continue soon.....thanks

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hey thanks sweety ..yeah wo be tumharay jasi hay pagal hay bilkul bt dekhu sab theek huu raha hay naa' i'm glade that u like the poem bas main be emotional hu jaati hun😳

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Posted: 16 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid
Oh Seher, I'm feeling so bad 4 Raj n Nida. Everything was going so well bt now.........I really feel like crying. Specially Nida ka mail parne k baad.

U did a fabulous job dear. There was so much intensity. Hats off 2 U!!!!!!!!!

PLS CONTINUE SOON.

heyy sumy sweety thanks buddy for ur lovely comments...dont worry tum lugu ko zyada dukhi nahi karu gi...i send next part i hope ki tum lugu ko pasand aye...😳😳

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Posted: 16 years ago

#104

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wow i love u seher😆.. finally raj aur nida mil gaye.... abb agey kya hone wala hai yeh mujhe bilkul bhi ehsaas nahi hai🤔.. jo bhi hoo aaj bahot acha hua hai and i m happy with it..🥳mujhe pata hi nahi tha ki nida pakistan mein rehti hai main to use india amin hi imagine kar rahi thi 🤪.. raj pakistan aa gaya aur nida se mil bhi liya.. maza aa gaya sweetie 👍🏼..
continue soon 😊

me too😆😳 yeah she lives in pakistan tu kia hua mil tu gaye naa😊 i'm glade that u like it sweety😊 thanks for ur lovely comments...

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Posted: 16 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: spvd
seher dear its the most sweet and wonderful part......love u for this.........finally they met and the scene was soooooooooo touchin.......cont soon dear................

thanks deepa for ur sweet comments😊i'm glade that u like it..i'll continue soon....

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Nice part Seher. At first I was so sad while Raj n Nida's phn convo. Their helplessness was killing me. I felt like crying.

But then Raj came to Pakistan n Nida met him. The meeting was amazing. Each moment was so sweet n emotional. I luved the whole scene. Thnx 4 this wonderful sequence.

PLS CONTINUE SOON.

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Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid
Nice part Seher. At first I was so sad while Raj n Nida's phn convo. Their helplessness was killing me. I felt like crying.

But then Raj came to Pakistan n Nida met him. The meeting was amazing. Each moment was so sweet n emotional. I luved the whole scene. Thnx 4 this wonderful sequence.

PLS CONTINUE SOON.

thanks sumy😊 i'm glade that u like it . yeah i'll continue soon..

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kashish

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Posted: 16 years ago

#108

hey seher very beautiful part and wonderfully written................thank for the pm............

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Anmul muhabbat

raj nida kitni dair tak eik doosray kay saath rahay. per phir be unhain ye waqt bohat kam lag raha tha//raj ka mann he nahi kar raha tha apni jaan ko churnay kay liye usay aysa lag raha tha jasay abhi ye haath agar us kay haath say chut gya tu shaid wo usay dubaara nahi chu sakay ga! ye sooch kar he us ka dil betha jaa raha tha....ore nida be kaha apnay janu ko chur kar jana chahti thi..wo in lamhu main apni pori zindagi guzaarna chahti thi....aik doosray kay payar main dubay huye lugu ko tu dekha hay per payar main itnay majbore do lugu ko shaid pihlay kabhi nahi dekha.

Raj! ab janay ka samay aa gya hay...ab hamain jana huga..

Nida! ye suntay he usay kay galay say lag gye...main aap say door nahi jana chahti...please mujay kahain lay chalu raj apnay saath yaha say door bohat door....

Raj! main be kaha tumhain chur kar jana chahta hun....

Nida! kia aap muj say shaadi karain gain???

Raj! ye suntay he heerani say nida ko khud say alag kia ore us ki taraf dekha. kia kaha..???

Nida! kia aap muj say shaadi karain gain???

Raj! ore tumharay ghar walay un ki marzi kay bina...

Nida! main kuch be nahi jaanti pata nahi phir hum milay na milay per main hameesha say khud ko aap kay naam kay saath mansoob karna chahti hun. ore is say pihlay ki dair hu jaye hamin ye karna huga..

Raj nay kuch sucha ore phir apni eik ungli main cut laga kar apnay khoon say nida ki maang bhar dil. nida nay apni aankhain band kar le ore is waqt jo aansu aankhu main thay wo khushi kay thay apni muhabbat ko panay kay thay....raj nay uska chehra apnay dono hathu main lay kar ...mera intizaar karu gi naa...

Nida! aakhri dam tak jab tak meri saansain rahay gain un main aap basain gain ore meri maang main sirf aap kay he naam ka sandoor sajay ga ye wada raha...bas yehi wo aakhri pal tha ore phir raj usay bye kih kar chala gya....ore nida wahi per khari usi dekhti reh gye ore phir kuch he dair baad wo kahain door chala gya..

( raj tu nida ko samajnay aya tha per apnay payar kay haathu mujbore hu gya, wo kisi say kia hua wada nahi torna chahta tha per apni muhabbat ka bharam be tu nahi tur sakta tha wo anmul muhabbat jo us kay dil main bas chuki thi..)

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seher😊

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kashish

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Posted: 16 years ago

#110

hey seher it is very nice part.........infact muje khud samaj me nahi aa raha ki unhone jo kiya woh use karna chahiye tha ki nahi kyunki shayad main aisa kabhi nahi kar paungi..........janti ho kyun kyunki main apne parents ko bhi to dhoka nahi dena chahungi aur shayad main kabhi apne pyaar ka saath bhi nahi chodna chahungi is liye shayad main hoti to..........raj ko leke ghar jati aur phir apne parents se baat karti aur main aise shadi karti jisme sab ki marzi ho aur aashirwad bhi...........kyunki na to main apne pyaar ko chod pati na hi apne family ko..............jaan yeh meri rai hai jo tumne mujse puchi...........lekin agar pyaar sacha ho to woh apni manzil zaroor pa leta hai phir kyun na kitni hi kasuti deni pade..................lekin main itna bada faisla jaldbazi me kabhi nahi leti.............yeh mera manna hai jaan aage sabki soch alag hoti hai...............thanks for pm and ple continue soon......

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kashish