NR FF! 'Anmul muhabbat' ( part 2)

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Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid
Hey Seher dear. Maine nahi socha tha iss kahani ka end aisa hoga. Jab maine PM me dekha k ye last part hai tab mai thoda udaas ho gayi par phir socha shayad ek sweet sa ending hoga. But iss ending ne sach me mann me bahut se sawal khare kar diye aur Unka jawab pane k liye main tumhare iss story k part 2 ka besbhri se intezaar karungi.

Well On second thoughts iss story ko ek sweet ending dena shayad utna asaan nahi tha. So I'm quite happy the way it has ended. Iss baat ka dukh zaroor rahega ki ye part yehi kahtam ho gaya but dil me ek khushi hai ki mai itni achhi story pad payi. Today I'm really happy dat I decided to read this FF.

Thnx 4 this wonderful story of Raj n Nida. This story will always remain very close to my heart.

Luv,

Sumy

hey sumy thanks for ur comments n for ur love. yes sweety aysa anjaam tu hunay be nahi dun gi afterall its my fev jori per kihtay hay naa ki jaha payar sacha hu waha azmayshain be bohat huti hain....is liye ye judai be aik azmayash ki jasay hay....is lye udaas nahi hu inshallah i'll try to continue soon bt abhi kuch problems hain whenever i feel better then i'll continue thanks once again buddy..........

love

seher😳

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#122

Originally posted by: spvd
hey seher...............my god this is the last part and i thought it would be different but here u hav ended the ff lik this and now am waitin for the second part................yaar asli zindagi main bhi aisa hua raj ke saath i mean the kth days and ab yahan bhi intezaar..........jaldi hi second part shuru karo dear....loved the way the story has been taken...........and congrats for finishini it and good luck wit the next one...........

thanks deepa! dont worry un ka intizaar zaror khatam huga i'll try to continue soon...is kahaani ko adhura nahi churu gi😳 n thanks once again for ur support n love😳

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hi friends today i'm going to writte part 2 of anmul muhabbat . i hope u'll like it...

Anmul muhabbat.

Intizaar kihnay ko tu sirf eik word hay per is ki haqeeqat ko wahi log samajtay hain jo is say guzartay hain. ore nida kay liye ye saat saal he nahi balki eik lamba arsa ji main guzri us ki pori zindagaani thi.

ore intizaar kay in lamhu main us ki muhabbat eik ibadat ban gye ore us ki halat kuch aysay hu gye..

wo butt bana rahay ore main pooju us ko sada

us ka saath mil jaye phir chahay nifratu ka jaha mil jaye

main us ka intizaar karu gi aakhri dam tak...

gar us kay lutnay ka muj ko koi nishaa mil jaye...

usay apnay payar say koi shikwa nahi tha. phir be aysa kia hua ki raj nay eik baar palat kar peechay dekha thak nahi.....

aaj say saat saal pihlay jab Raj pakistan say wapas luta tu wo bohat khush tha. apnay payar ko panay kay ehsaas say he us ki zindagi badal gye thi. ore wo apni khushi sab say pihlay apnay ghar walu say share karna chahta tha specially apni mom say. kyunki dunya main wo eik he insaan thi jin say wo behad kareeb tha ore jin say wo apnay dil ka haal bataana chahta tha. ore jab unhu nay mamma ko batana chaha tu wo kuch hamoosh hu gain. wo apnay betay ki khushi say bohat khush thi ore wo is baat say be khush thi ki raaj ki zindagi main koi aa gya hay isi din ka tu unhain intizaar tha ore apnay beta ki khushi say bhar kar tu ore unhain kuch nahi tha magar phir wahi eik he baat jis ko lay kar wo eik dam say pareeshaan hu gain ki raj kay papa is baat ko kabhi be accept nahi karain gain ki un kay betay ki shaaadi eik muslim larki say hu. jab raj nay showbiz ki dunya main kadam rakha tab be wo is baat say raazi nahi thay kyunki wo usay eik army officer banana chahtay thay per raj nay apnai marzi say sab kuch chur kar apnay dil ki baat suni thi ore phir kitnay arsay baad papa nay us say baat karni shuru ki yhi ore phir waqt guzarnay kay saath saath unhain apnay betay ki kabliat per gurve hunay laga tha. per ye baat shaid wo kabhi be bardaasht nahi karain gain kyunki raaj un ka eik he beta tha ore un kay be apnay kuch armaan thay apnay betay kay liye... per phir be mamma nay raj say kaha ki wo fikar nahi karay ore apni taraf say bharpoor koshish karain gi unko samjanay ki...Raj ko dil main eik umeed say hui per phir be dil main eik darr sa tha. ore is raat jab mama nay us kay papa say baat ki tu un ko suntay he ghussa aa gya ki raaj aysa such be kasay sakta hay. main usay aysa hargiz nahi hunay dun ga. eik muslim larki say shaadi kay baray main tu sawal he unahi huta. hamaray handaan main aysa aaj tak nahi hua ore na he main hunay dun ga. mamma rutay huye main aaj tak aap say kuch nahi maanga per main aaj aap say ye zaror kihna chahu gi ki aap ye kyun nahi suchtay ki wo aap ka beta hay jawaan hay independent hay aaj wo shuhrat kay jis maqaam per hay agar wo chaahay tu apni zindagi ka fesla khud lay sakta hay per wo hum say pooch rahay hay oresab say bari baat ye ki wo usay pasand karta hay tu ye hamara farz hay ki hum us ki khushi main us ka saath dain ore main apnay betay ko achi tarah say amajti hun us nay ye fesla bohat such samaj kar liya hay ore wo larki koi aam larki nahi hugi is liye hamain...papa eik dam say un ki baat ko kattay huye mera fesla nahi badlay ga . eik baar pihlay be us nay meray feslay ko thukra kar apni marzi ki thi agar abhi be wo yehi chahta hay main us kay saath nahi hun ore ye kih kar wo chalay gye...mama ki aankhu main aansu aa gye. wo jaanti thi ki raaj kitna hurt huga..wo abhi inhi suchu main thi ki raaj ka phone aa gya.

Raj! mamma kia aap nay papa say baat ki???

Mama! unko samaj nahi aa raha tha ki wo kasay kahain...beta wo ye kih rahay hain ki wo muslim ore...

Raj! ma aap jaanti hain na ki main us say kitna payar karta hun ore main nay us say wada kia hay ki main usay leynay auo ga ore main apna wada nahi turna chahta maa.....

wo raat bhar isi baray main suchta raha. us ki aankhun kay samnay wahi eik masoom say chahra jis ki aankhu main eik umeed eik aas , apnay payar per bharusa ore apni muhabbat ko panay ki khushi....wo us kay masoom armaanu ko turna nahi chahta tha...

next day wo subha tayyar hukar as usuall shooting kay liye ghar say nikal he raha tha ki us kay cell per kisi ki call aye.

Raj! hi papa aap..

papa! haan main kia main nay tumhain disturb tu nahi kia..

Raj! kasi baatain kar rahay hain aap..aysa kuch nahi..

papa! main jaanta hun tum bohat busy hu. ore itnay baray aadmi be ban gye ore isi lye aaj tum itnay baray baray feslay be lay rahay hu..

Raj! papa main jitna be bara aadmi kyun na ban jauo per hun tu aap ka he beta naa ore koi beta shaan main apnay baap say bara nahi huta.. ore main zindagi main koi aysa fesla nahi lunga jis say aap ka sar juk jaye...

papa! tu tumharay is feslay ko main kia samjun???

Raj! papa main us say payar karta hun kia ye ghalat hay?

papa! payar karna koi gunah nahi per ye jaantay huye be ki wo eik mulim larki hay phir be tum...

Raj! tu kia hua papa hum eik doosray ko jaantay hain samajtay hain or wo meri zinagi ki sab say bhari khushi hay ..

papa! ore hamari khushi ore izzat us ki koi tumhain parwa nahi..

Raj! papa aap jaantay hain ki mujay aap ki kitni parwa hay phir be aap ...

papa! agar tumhain waqi main hamari fikar hay tu tumhain us larki ko apnay dil say nikaalna huga! nahi tu phir tum saari zindagi be hamari shakal be nahi dekhu gay ...ei baar pihlay be tum nay hamara dil tura tha jisay hum nay nazarandaaz kar liya tha per is baar nahi...

Raj! per papa aap meri baat tu sunay??

papa! ye mera aakhri fesla hay..agar manzoor hay tu theek hay nahi tu aaj kay baad main tumharay liye marr gya ..ore ye kih kar unhu nay phone rakh dia....raj ki aankhu main aansu aa gye..usay samaj main nahi aa raha tha ki wo kia karay kaha jayee...us din raj nay bohat sucha wo jaantay thay ki papa apni baat say kabhi nahi hatnay walay...ore finally wo isi conclusion per puhancha ki wo aaj kay baad nida say kabhi be baat nahi karay ga.. wo apnay papa ki baat ko tukhara kar apnay payar ko nahi pana chahta tha..ore doosri taraf wo apni muhabbat ko be nahi chur sakta tha is liye us nay sab kuch waqt per chur dia......

love

seher😳😳

Edited by sknra - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Ah Seher sweety. Thank U so much 4 continuing it. I was actually very sad abt this ending n wanted to read further as soon as possible. Thnx a Ton dear. I cant say PM me ANMUL MUHABBAT dekh kar mujhe kitni khushi hui.

Now abt the Ud. I'm very happy to knw wat had actually happened to Raj. Though I was always sure he'll never betray her. I really hope uske papa maan jaye. After all it has been 7 long years.

PLS CONTINUE SOON.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#125

it was mindblowingg!!! tum gr88 ho yaar kya likkhti ho very well written plzz conti soon.......luv aarti...

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Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Ah Seher sweety. Thank U so much 4 continuing it. I was actually very sad abt this ending n wanted to read further as soon as possible. Thnx a Ton dear. I cant say PM me ANMUL MUHABBAT dekh kar mujhe kitni khushi hui.
Now abt the Ud. I'm very happy to knw wat had actually happened to Raj. Though I was always sure he'll never betray her. I really hope uske papa maan jaye. After all it has been 7 long years.

PLS CONTINUE SOON.

heyy sumy thanks buddy for ur lovely words 😳 yeah sweety even i was not satisfy too is liye sucha continue kar lun! tujay khush dekh kar mujay bohat acha laga😳😳 i'll continue soon....😊😊

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Originally posted by: -Aarti-
it was mindblowingg!!! tum gr88 ho yaar kya likkhti ho very well written plzz conti soon.......luv aarti...

heyy arti thanksss sweety for ur lovely comments....😳😳😳

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anmul muhabbat.

in saat saalu main raj superstar tu ban gya per is duraan na he us nay apnay parents say waasta rakha ore naa apnay payar ki habar le. kyunki wo be tu apnay papa ka he beta ..usay khud ko aziat main rakhna gawa tha per apni zid say nahi hat sakta tha...per is poray arsay main koi aysa pal nahi guzra tha jab wo apnay payar kay liye tarpa na hu..apnay parents say judai ka dukh tu tha he kyunki wo un say bohat payar karta thaper najanay aysi kon si zid thi ki jis nay us kay pairu ko jakra tha...ore ye tanhai ka arsa kitna takleef deh tha ye wahi jaanta tha wo lugu main tu rihta tha per apnu say door tha. jo muskurahat us kay chehru per lugu ko dekhaanay kay liye huti thi kisi ko kia maloom tha ki us muskurahat kay peechay eik gham ka tufaan chupa hay..ore wo gham usay chupana achi tarah ata tha...ore shaid yehi us kay payar ki sachaye thi ki nida aaj be us kay liye utna he tarapti thi ore us kay intizaar kay lamhaat ko be khushi khushi jee rahi thi beghair kisi shikway kay...

aaj raj jab shaam ko ghar wapas luta tu thakan ki waja say wahi sufay per he lait gya, per achaanik phone ki bell nay us ki aankh khul di, us nay jasay he phone uthaya tu usay yakeen nahi hua doosri taraf raj ki mamma thi...mamma! hi raj main tumharai mamma baat kar rahi hun...

raj! mamaa aap ,,,aaj itnay saalu baad apni mamma ki awaaz sun kar usay khuch ajeeb lag raha tha ore believe be nahi hu raha tha us ki aankhu main aansu aa gye..

mamma! beta raaj un ki awaaz bohat dabi dabhi si thi ore runay waali be...beta ghar lut auo hum bohat akeelay hain ore tumharay papa ye kih kar wo runay lagain...

raj! mamma kia hua papa ko theek theek say batain..

mamma! rutay huye tumharay papa ko heart attack hua hay ore wo huspital main admit hain....

raj! ye suntay he jasay wo shock hu gya ...kia papa ko....app fikar nahi karainmain aaj he jai pur kay liye nikalta hun...eik he pal main us ki zid toot gye. wo kabhi such be nahi sakta tha ki papa ko...raj nay mamma ko tassali di ore us nay usi din jai pur janay ka fesla kia.

jab wo waha huspital pouncha . tu hospital kay baad media walo ko kasay pata chal gya jasay wo usi ka intizaar kar rahay thay ore finally raj nay bari mushkil say un say jaan chura kar jab aandar aya tu mamma ko dekh kar un kay ghalay say lag kar hoob ruya. itnay arsay say jo gutan us kay andar thi pal bhar main jasay khatam hu gye..

raj! mamma papa kaha hain?/

phir mamma usay papa kay paas lay gain. us nay jasay he papa ko dekha tu toot kar reh gya us ki aankhu say aansu girnay lagay..raj phir khud ko sambhaltay huye..papa kasay hain aap?

papa ! mujay laga ki tum nahi auo gay? un ki aankhu main aansu thay hum tumharay bina aadhuray hain kia tum hamain maaf nahi kar saktay...

raj! papa aysa mat kahayee...main be kaha aap kay bina jee sakta hun...

papa! main nay tumhari maa ko be tum say door rakha shaid main tum sab ka mujrim hin. wo bari mushkil say bole rahay thay...ore raj say un ka dard dekha nahi jaa raha tha .

raj! papa please aap ko aram ki zarorat hay..itnay main narse be andar aa gye ore kaha ki patient ko aram karnay dain zyada baat nahi karain...ore phir wo room say bahir aa gye...mamma ru rahi thi ore raj unhain tassali day raha tha. wo aaj apnay betay kay saath apnay dil ka bujh halka karna chahti thi..

mamma! raj tum aa gye naa ab wapas tu nahi jao gay naa. raj unko galay say lagatay huye..kabhi be nahi.

mamma! ye kasi zid thi ki tum hum say itna door rahay kia tumhain hamari kabhi yaad nahi aye ???

raj! per ab tu main aa gya hun naa ab sab theek hu jaye ga..

mamma! ore hamari bahu kaha hay??

raj! per raj abhi is baat ka koi be jawab nahi dena chahta tha. phir wo do din tak wahi rukay ore teesray din un sab ghar chalay gye papa ab pihlay say behtar thay. jab wo ghar aya tu usay ajeeb sa lag raha tha ore eik ajeeb si khusi be...

mamma! raj tum hum say wada karu ki ab tumharay saath rahu gay??

raj! main wada karta hun per main aap ko is baar apnay saath mumbay saath lay kar jao gaab aap meray saath he rahain gain..

mamma! per beta is ghar ko chur kar hum kasay jaa saktay hain. is ghar main hamari eik umar guzri hay..is ghar say hamari zindagi ki yaadain juri hain.

raj! mamma hum is ghar ko hameesha kay liye tu nahi chur rahay hum atay rahain gain..

abhi wo lug baatain he kar rahay thay ki papa aa gaye..

papa! raj beta tum nay abhi tak hamari baat ka jawab nahi dia sab theek hay naa ore hamari bahu???

raj! papa main nay shaadi nahi ki ore naa he us say kabhi milnay gya ore na he koi wasta rakha. main aap ki baat ko kasay taal sakta tha.

papa ore mamma ye sun kar heraan reh gye unhain yakeen nahi hu raha tha..

mamma! tu kia tum nay....

raj! jee mamma main nay us say koi waasta nahi rakha. per ye be sach hay ki main aaj be usay utna he payar karta hun. main nahi jaanta ki wo aaj be mera intizaar kar rahi hay ya nahi per meray dil main sirf wahi hay ore ye jagah main kisi ore ko dun ga be nahi ore isi eik payar kay saharay apni saari zindagi guzaarnay ko tayyar hun....

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Oh Seher dear, I luv U. Kitna sweet part tha. I'm so happy. Isliye nahi k Raj k dad ko attack aya (lolz) but isliye kyunki ab lagta hai Raj k parents usse Nida ko lane k liye bhejenge. I really hope aisa hi ho.

And btw, I really liked the way Raj kept himself away 4m both his family n luv. Though he was in pain but that was the only way to fulfil his duty towards both.

Ab agle part k liye betaab hu main. Pls continue soon.

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Posted: 16 years ago

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hi seher dear...........sorry for not commentin.........had net probs now only it got solved................wow u hav started again......loved it......raj separated himself both fron nida and also from his family....it would hav too difficult............but atleast now after 7 yrs let his parents accept nida..............cont soon dear................