~Na Tum Jaano Na Hum - Rm FF ~ UPD. Pg 19!!! - Page 14

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ejaz_lover

awesome nam.. i just read the whole thing and it's amazing! i loved the concept and characters.. Akshay is kind of a flirt guy.. i hope he is not 'that bad' with Sanya..Hpe he is sincere with her.. Sanya is cute, easy going.. Muskaan and Rahul.. wow!! Rahul tried to kiss her.. loved that scene..<br>Please PM me if you can.. and continue soon! :)<br>




Thankss mewiii =)

Happy Birthday once again... or belated should i say.

Yepp will pm u...

thanks again

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ibdt2004

Awesome update Nami!! 👏<br><br>I loved the popcorn fight!! 😆<br><br>and the smell of his cologne... must have smelled damn good 😍<br><br>please pm me next time!! <br><br>btw.. continue soon!! 😊<br>



Thankss shiilllpaa 😃

yesss i was imagining how good it must have smelled while i was writing it...

Thanks again

keep reading

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Sab93

yessss, you finally updated!!!!! it was a nice part. everything was awesome, especially the almost kiss in the movie theater, and the attraction they both are having for each other. i can't wait till the next part!!!

~ Saby



Sabbbbbb!

Now im updated but ur gone.... u better read it when ur back after a week okay??

Thankss so muchh

keep readingg

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsugar

Namii 🤗🤗kya "mast" update tha yaar 👍🏼....hayeeeeeeeee 😍 i enjoyed reading the theater part so much ☺️☺️ ❤️ ...but they dint kiss💔 will b waiting to read their next kiss part <br>..and i wanted to knw her answer for sanya's qs "<font size="3" color="#006699" face="Calibri"> par kya tujhe kuch mehsoos nahin hua</font> " 😳<br>Fantastic update !!!! 5 stars ⭐️and i loved the awkwardness btw the two after they were out of the theater 😛😛 <br>yeah and plz do PM 😳<br><br><br>



Sabbuu! i miss u in the resorrt!

where have u been? busy i think? samee i have been busy too with work.. come back soon :)

Thankk uuu soo much for ur comment all the emotions :)

Will pm u :)

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: AshiYuvi4life

NIKKIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


You rock! You TOTALLY rock!!!! I LOVE YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!



Kya awesome rocking part likha hai yaar! you were amazing! Every single thig was perfectly in place!


Sanya-Akshay? EW! Oh well. As long as he's off Muskaan's back, what does it matter?


RM scene was damn good. Sparks! Although I'm relieved that she forgave him. It was just a mistake yaar. Haiye they're SO CUTE!



komz




KKKKKKKKKKKKKOOMMMII 😃

Hahah yeahh sanya and akshay kinda unexpected na? even i didnt know it till i wrote it 😛

Thankss for ur commenttttt 😃 😃

Keeep reading komz

take care

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Posted: 16 years ago
Pheeww done with all the comments.. i hope i didnt miss anyones..

Im updating now... once again im so sorry for the delay....

Just school work comes in between so cant update.

Hope u all will like this part...

Please comment/criticize

Take care

Namrata
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Posted: 16 years ago


Part 6:

Khushi.... Nice name..... my real name is something close to that.... kash main bhi tumhari liye kuch acha sa naam soch sakti. Anyway.... tumhara naam Rajendra Shehkar Shiv Kumar Singh hai. Main tumhe pyaar se RajendraKumar bolaungi. Koi problem? Sorry bad joke. Don't worry main itni bhi stupid nahin hoon joh tumhe itna lamba boring sa naam dun. Hmmmm Raj kaisa hai? You know Raj as in Shahrukh khan from Dilwale Dhulania Le Jayenge. Tumne voh movie dekhi hai? Maine toh 1000 baar dekhi hogi. Haan toh aaj se main Khushi aur tum Raj.

Of course hum ek dusre ko mail kar sakte hai, frankly speaking I hate going to the post office everytime. Kal raat ko maine ek dusra email banaya tha.... khushi_raj@hotmail.com tum mujhe ispe email kar sakte ho, tumhara email adress kya hai? Tum bhi ek naya banao na, raj_khushi@hotmail.com. Agar tum chaho toh.... maine tumhe force nahin karna chahti....

So tum apne bare main kuch batao... tumhara lifestyle kya hai, favorite color, favorite food, tumhara friend circle kaisa hai, tum karte kya ho, anything....

Anyway mujhe ab jaana hoga.... bye Raj.

(This was when Muskaan wrote a letter to rahul and now rahul wrote a email to muskaan)

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Raj... wow... main toh ek minute ke liye dar hi gaya tha ki tum mujhe Rajendra shehkar... kumar... sorry i dunno aage kya tha.. Raj is cool. Khushi aur Raj... wait no pati ka naam pehle aata hai na, so Raj aur Khushi.. wait... Pati? Huh?? Sorry no i meant.. ladke ka naam.. not pati.. i duno waht i was thinking.

Anyway its so much easier to type.. i hate writing letters, and im so sorry about my bad handwriting, i wish i could write like you, not even a single mistake in your letters.

Wow wow wow itne saare sawal ek saath? Agar main abhi hi sab ka jawaab dunga toh hum badme kis bare mein baat karenge? Hmm agar tumne ab puch hi liya hai.. so let me just answer them.

Favorite food... wow hard to decide.. main sara din khana hi khata hoon.. i love food. i dunno tum ladkiyan vrath kaise rakh sakti ho, main toh kabhi nahin rakh sakta, i cant live without food. As they say live to eat or eat to live. i live to eat =) cheesy dialogue i know.. but i tried...

OKay next question...

Lifestyle... jaise mumbai ki lifestyle hai waise bhi meri lifestyle hai.. you know late night parties... chilling with friends.. eating... but right now all that has decreased.. sab meri dost settle ho gaye hai.. isiliye for them no more late parties.. but my best friend is still single.. actually... not anymore... can you believe it.. he loves MY SISTER? Meri behn! Cousin hai lekin phir bhi.. i never thought of it.. so right now im the only single one.. uhmm.. if u dont mind me asking are you single? Or... still waiting for your prince charming?? Main tumse yeh sab kyun bata raha hoon... why would you be interested anyway?

Okay moving on next question... mujhe toh aisa lag raha hai ki main koi interview de raha hoon.. anyway.. tumhe bhi next email main apne baare main batana hoga okay?

Haan soo.. favorite color. BLACK! I like black because..i think... oh wait nevermind.. i wont go into details for that. agar main sab questions ke baare main itna kuch likhunga toh tum bore ho jaugi. So lets just leave it simple. My favorite color is black.

I dont have much of a friend circle.. sab mere college ke joh friends the woh sab buissiness main settle aur apne biwi ke saath settle ho chuke hai.. so not in touch with them. But i have one best friend, and now her girlfriend is my sister, and her friend, and... OKay no.. Raj stop. No more typing. Sorry Khushi.. im signing off now. so rest of the answers you will get later okay?

Im sorry if you fell asleep of boredom when you read my letter.

Take care

Raj

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Wow... pehle toh mujhe doh teen din wait karna partha tha tere letter ke liye.. lekin ab email main toh tune mujhe 2 ghante main hi jawaab bhej diya, aur woh bhi itna lamba! Niceeeee

RRRRRaaaaJJJJJJ pata nahin main aaj itni kyuuuuuuun khush hoon, main hamesha khush rehti hoon, lekin aaj toh main kuch zyaada hi has rahi thi... aur phir

meri dost.. woh samaj rahi thi ki main pagal ho gayi hoon.. tum bhi aise hi soch rahe hoge.. main bina matlab ke has rahi thi.. you will have to bear with my stupidness okay?

Hmmm so back to the letter.... kahan se shuru karun?? Lets start with the simplest... i am single too. Wow... main tumhe jaanti tak nahin aur main aise hi khe diya ki main single hoon.. but i think i am starting to trust you.. otherwise i wouldnt be replying to your mails..

Are you serious?? You live to eat?? main bhi aise hi hoon =) Main toh hamesha khati rehti hoon, breakfast khaya, phir ek ghante ke baat thoda chocolate khaya, phir early lunch, a small sandwich or whatever, phir proper lunch.. and then snack again.. ICE CREAM! Aur phir coke! Wahhh i love coke, i cant live without coke, actually maybe i can live without coke but if not coke then i need sprite. Anyway.. phir dinner. Tumhe pata nahin hai ki main kitna dinner khati hoon, i bet you main tumse bhi zyaada khati hoon, soch lo agar tumhe mujhe dinner ke liye bhar le jaana hai, toh tumhara bill thoda zyaada hoga... But one good thing... main itna zaroor khati hoon, but touchwood main weight gain nahin karti, pata nahin itna sara khana jaata kidar hai! And yes i just touched my wooden desk, nazaar na lag jaye. Im stupid i know =)

HAH you are asking about vrath?? Please koi vrath kyun rakhega aur woh bhi ek ache pati ke liye? Haan pata hai ki DDLJ main kajol ne sharukh ke liye vrath rakha tha... but im never going to do that.. agar mujhe acha pati nahin millega toh iska matlab yeh nahin hoga ki maine kabhi vrath nahin rakha isiliye nahin milla... acha pati milla toh milla.. im not worried about that right now.. im sure i will get a prince charming =)

You know... you seem so confused with your whole story of ur friend, and her sister, and your friend, dating, together, ur sister... ughhh im so confused.. but you know to me that story seems kind of familiar.. mere saath bhi kuch din pehle aisa hi kuch hua tha meri dost ke saath... strange..

Okay for one question maine bhi itna sara detail likh diya.. so i dont blame you but now i will keep it short okay? My favorite color is blue, my lifestyle is nothing great, its just me and my best friend.. hum sab kuch saath karte hain, hum same college main bhi the aur hum same flat bhi share kar rahe hai...

Oh shit i kept noodles on the gas... AHHH its burning! I have to go bye

loves

Khushi

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All night Rahul and Muskaan were awake typing emails to each other, now they know each others likes, dislikes, personalities, everything. Now Rahul was sure that he wanted to continue this friendship. Yes they had become good friends now, and decided that they would continue emailing each other. And their replies were so instant that muskaan didn't realize that she wrote loves khushi and rahul didn't notice that either.

During this whole night they had switched on chatting on msn as Raj and Khushi.

It was 10 in the morning, and muskaan typed this last message to him because if she didnt sleep now, she was sure that her eyeballs would fall out.

Khushi:

Okay look im going to sleep

Raj:

What? So early? Kyun??

Khushi:

Early? Its 10 in the morning raj.. aur main puri raat mere laptop ke screen ke samne hoon, i dont want my eyeballs to fall out im sorry.

Raj:

Hahha you are funny.. dont worry if ur eyeballs will fall out im there to catch them for you :)

Khushi:

Very funny... tumhe neend nahin a rahi?

Raj:

Surprisingly no... please thodi der ke liye chat karte hai.. phir tum so jaana.

Khushi:

Fine.. lekin thodi der ke liye hi okay?

Raj:

Thanks :)

Khushi:

Hmmm yeh pehli baar hua hai ki main puri raat soyi nahin hoon aur kisse se chat kar rahi hoon...

Raj:

Hahhaa
Khushi:
Why are u laughing?

Raj:

Kuch nahin...

Khushi:

Kuch nahin?

Raj:

Haan tu bhi toh bina matlab ke has ti hai na?

Khushi:

Haan... toh?

Raj:

Toh main bhi bina matlab ke hasta hoon... tumhari baatein funny ho ya na ho main hasta rehta hoon..

Khushi:

Acha? Par pehle toh aise hi nahin hasse the tum... hum pichle 10 ghante se chat kar rahe hain.. aur main hi has rahi thi tumhare baatein se...

Raj:

Chod na... anyway ab bata.. ki hum kab milne wale hain?

Khushi:

Uhhm..... humhe milna zaroori hai kya?

Raj:

Kyun.. tu nahin chahti ki hum mille?

Khushi:

Nahin aise baat nahin hai.. bas i love having a internet friend.. so not so soon :P

Raj:

Yea thats true... khushi... are you pretty?

Khushi:

hahahh see now im laughing.... why are u so random?

Raj:

Yeah that was pretty random na?

Khushi:

Probably the most random thing u have said. and uhh... when we meet then u say if im pretty or not okay...

Raj:

Nooo show me a picture of you.

Khushi:

No

Raj:

Why?

Khushi:

Rajj! Not so soon.

Raj:

Why dont u trust me?

Khushi:

Its not t he matter of trust... but..

Raj:

But what?

Khushi:

Nothing... i just want to know if i can regonize u without seeing a picture of you...

Raj:

Why? What if we are right in front of each other but we dont recognize?

Khushi:

We will..

Raj:

Okay khushi wahtever u want...

Khushi:

Are you mad at me now?

Raj:

No...

Khushi:

look...

Raj:

im going off okay?

Khushi:

Noo dont go...

Raj has just signed off.

2 minutes later...

Raj has just signed back in..

Raj:

Dunt worry... main itna bara nautanki nahin hoon.. joh itni jaldi ghussa ho jaye

Khushi:

Hahhaha good i thought so.... but now really i want to go okay?

Raj:

Hmm.. okay. Can we talk on the phone?

Khushi:

Yeah... i guess?? I dunno.

Raj:

Okay my number is 92918909

Khushi:

You are giving out your number to a stranger you know that..

Raj:

you still think that im a stranger to you? To me i think we spoke more than how 2 lovers speak.

Khushi:

Hahha thats true... okay ill call u sumtime then i gues..

Raj:

Okay no rush...

Khushi:

Bye..

Raj:

Bye..

Khushi:

Uhmm come online again then..

Raj:

Yup u too.. same time?

Khushi:

Yeah sounds good.

bye

Raj:

Bye

Khushi just signed off.

Muskaan quietly put her laptop away and layed down on her bed, since a couple hours she wanted to sleep so badly and now that they stopped chatting she couldnt fall asleep. All she was thinking about was their chats and emails. She has never chatted with anyone for more than 2 hours and here she chatted with him for 10 hours straight, and they probably covered each and every topic possible but still she wanted to find out more about him, she didnt think these 10 hours were enough for her to know him, she wanted to talk more. Now she is even more eager to hear his voice.. how is it? A deep manly voice, or a friendly normal guy voice? so many thoughts at once.. no answer.. should she call him up right now? She had his number saved on her phone as Raj. but what if he is sleeping?

Rahul had his phone in his hands waiting for her to call.. what is happening? Just a few days ago he wanted to end this letter thing going on and now he wanted her to call? Why didnt she give her number, if she would he would have called her up right now... how is her voice? A girly voice or a matured girl voice? He wanted her to call right now.. he couldn't sleep until he heard her voice. And then he did get a call...

This part is all dedicated to Raj and Khushi and none of Rahul and Muskaan is here... in this part their friendship grows. And this part is just a series of letters and their chat log.

*Note- Muskaan doesn't know that this number is of rahul and when they talk please bear it but they wont recognize each others voices even though they have talked on the phone before. Sorry if there are any confusions.


Edited by Namrata_12 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Omg.. Awesome Part Nami!! So many memorable parts!! ok shuru se start karti hoon!!

firstly.. love the names.. Khushi.. so cute!.. and Raj.. hayye.. Rahul toh humara sapno ka rajkumar hi toh hai! 😍

and I loved the cute email ids Muski made for them.. awww... khushi-raj!!

haha Rahul's random pati thought 😆😆😆

haila.. isko black color kyun pasand hai?? im soo curious now... 😛

awww.. he will be there to catch her eyeballs.. so cute! 😳

aaww.. yaar.. Muski trusts him.. but still feels a little confused.. sweetie pie!

Omg.. Rahul is soo desperate to get to know her!!
"are you pretty" haha bohut jaldi ho rahi hai rahul ko 😉

OMG... is it Muski's call?? i wanna know!!

There are many more fave parts! but i will stop boring you with repeating ur own story to u now.. 😆😆😆

continue soon yaar.. im waiting desperately!!!!!!!! 🤗
Edited by ibdt2004 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Awesome part!!
Finally you got time to update!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
OMG yayyyyyyyyyyyyyy..
from letters they started emailing eachother.. and from emailing they started chatting!!! and from chatting they will talk on call!!!

Lovely update Namrata!! 👏.. Thanks alot for the PM :)

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