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Namrata_12

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Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: ibdt2004
hey awesome update!!👏 👏 👏
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loved all the randoms topics of discussion between rahul and muskaan..

also he told muskaan they would sit separately😆

very cute

thanks for the update 😊
do continue as soon as u can!!

Shilpuuuu!!

Thankss hunn 😃

Hahaah yeahhh i didnt even realize how i came up with all these random talkss. lolll

Thankss once againnn

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Namrata_12

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Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: lovebapu18

wonderful part nami!!😊

do continue soon!!

Thankss Radhikaa

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Namrata_12

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Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: imane568
Cute...cute..cute....CUTE!!!
It was a very *pinches cheeks* types part
I loved it to the core!
RM are rocking...
Muski admires John...wow...I so don't blame her...! LOL

Thankk uu imane, but i must say it cant be better than ur stories in the Rm story house 😃

but thankkk uu once againn, hahah yeahhh everyone starts drooling over john abraham, muskaan is just one of them 😆

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Komal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#114

Nikki my jaani! I'm back and for good this time. Bohot sir khaane waali hoon tumhaara! Aren't you lucky! 🤣 I love both parts! Just read 3-4 by the way. lol. Rahul bhi naa... bechaari muskaan itni khush hai ki uska secret friend usse write kar raha hai aur woh... interested hi nahi hai. poor girl!

lekin muskaan aur rahul alone for a while was the icing on the cake! I'm so HAPPY! Thank god she asked him that question. Seriously agar kisi ladki ko uss se pyaar hojaaye toh woh toh bechaari heartbroken hojaayegi. Nice part yaar!

update jaldi jaldi!

love u!

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Namrata_12

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Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: AshiYuvi4life
Nikki my jaani! I'm back and for good this time. Bohot sir khaane waali hoon tumhaara! Aren't you lucky! 🤣 I love both parts! Just read 3-4 by the way. lol. Rahul bhi naa... bechaari muskaan itni khush hai ki uska secret friend usse write kar raha hai aur woh... interested hi nahi hai. poor girl!

lekin muskaan aur rahul alone for a while was the icing on the cake! I'm so HAPPY! Thank god she asked him that question. Seriously agar kisi ladki ko uss se pyaar hojaaye toh woh toh bechaari heartbroken hojaayegi. Nice part yaar!

update jaldi jaldi!

love u!

Komz

Komzziii my jaani!!!!

Kahan thi tuu??? Jitna sir khaan hai khale, mujhe koi farak nahin parne wala 🤣

Haan haan update karungi.. jalldii 😃

Thankss komzii!!!

Ab itna time mat lagana comment karne main theek hai??

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-Mishti_Divz-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#116

im Sooooooooooooooooooooooo Soory for commenting late dear!! was a away for a few weeks!!😛

just catch up with da update !! was simply beautifull Im waiting for that day whn they Meet eachother!! 😳

waiting for next part do continue soon honey!! 😳

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Namrata_12

@Namrata_12

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: divyashaz
im Sooooooooooooooooooooooo Soory for commenting late dear!! was a away for a few weeks!!😛
just catch up with da update !! was simply beautifull Im waiting for that day whn they Meet eachother!! 😳

waiting for next part do continue soon honey!! 😳

Its okayyy diivuuuuuu!! Im still happy that u commenteddd 😳

Thankkk uu soo muchhhh!!!!

Continuing noww =)

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Namrata_12

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Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#118

Update coming upp!!!

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Namrata_12

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Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#119

Part 5:

They all get settled into their seat in the theater waiting for the movie to start, with popcorn, drinks, chips, and chocolates in their hands. Rahul didn't let muskaan sit next to Akshay, so muskaan was stuck between Rahul on one side and Sanya on the other while Akshay sat next to Sanya.

As the lights dimmed, and the movie started, Muskaan couldn't help but smile the minute she saw John, she wasn't paying attention to what he is saying, but only staring at his looks.

Rahul got really bored after a while, so he started throwing popcorn at Muskaan, muskaan didn't realize that she started throwing popcorn from her pack also. They kept on throwing popcorn at each other, when Rahul took the whole pack of popcorn and threw it on Muskaan, making her flood with popcorns all over her, that's when she realized what Rahul had done.

Muskaan: RAHUL!

She leaned over and grabbed his shirt collar, she was about to yell at him but realized that they were really close, their lips were a few centimeters apart, and their noses were almost touching. Rahul stared into Muskaans eyes and couldn't move them away, as much as Muskaan wanted to move she couldn't as her eyes were fixed with his stare. For Rahul the world had stopped, all he could see was Muskaan in front of him, Rahul's stare went to her rosy lips, without thinking he started to lean in, their lips now were just a few millimeters apart, almost touching, but then Muskaan suddenly backed away and let go of his collar. Rahul got back into his senses and looked straight ahead at the screen, wondering what he had just done.

Muskaan could feel her breathing rapidly, but she tried to calm herself down, she stood up and shook off all the popcorn that had fallen on her and then she struggled to get out all the popcorn that got stuck in her hair. Rahul took a quick glance at her, and one word that came in his mind was.....Beautiful. But then he quickly looked straight again, and smacked his head hard. Like what was he thinking?

After the movie was over, Muskaan didnt meet Rahul's face, she straight went by Sanya and started talking with her, but she didn't realize that Akshay was with her too, and so they met and Akshay started flirting with her once again.

Akshay: Muski, kahan thi tum? Puri film mein maine tujhe dekha hi nahin.

Muski? Muskaan thought in her head, not many people have called her that.

Muskaan: Uhh.... main.... main... sanya ke saath behti thi...

Sanya: Jhooti, tu mere baju wali seat peh toh behti thi lekin hamesha Rahul ke uppar popcorn phek rahi thi.

Muskaan didn't even want to think of that scene, how come they came so close? What had happened all of a sudden? She had never been so close with a guy before, and so it felt really odd for her.

Rahul: Sanya, woh kuch nahin kar rahi thi, sirf john ko dekh rahi thi, bechari ko pata bhi nahin tha ki woh meri uppar popcorn phek rahi thi.

Sanya and Akshay started to laugh and Rahul joined them, he could see that muskaan was feeling highly uncomfortable because of what he tried to do, and he wanted to make it fine.

Rahul: Aur phir maine uske uppar pura popcorn ka pack pheka, waise Muskaan ab bhi tere baalon main popcorn hai.

Akshay: What? Pura pack?? Poor popcorn waste ho gaya.

Muskaan: Oyee, tujhe popcorn ki pari hai, mera kya huh? Ab sanya mere baalon se please popcorn toh nikaal.

Sanya: Tere baalon mein koi popcorn nahin hai Rahul aise hi mazaak kar raha tha.

Rahul: Ey main mazaak nahin kar raha tha, Muskaan idhar aa.

Muskaan: Nahin.

Rahul didn't listen to her, her pulled her and held her tight, Muskaan shivered with his touch, she could smell his colgne till where she was standing, and damn he smelled good, she thought in her mind, but when Rahul let go, she washed those thoughts away also.

Rahul: Haan ab theek hai.

Muskaan: Th....tha...thanks..

She smiled weakly and went back to Sanya.

Akshay: Muskaan, chal hum date par chalte hai.

Rahul gave him a stare, and Akshay understood.

Akshay: Sorry..... nevermind.

Sanya: Okay.... so tum logo ko movie achi lagi?

Muskaan: Yess!! Haii John! Hmmm, sooo sexyyy!!!

Sanya: Hello.... main movie ke baat kar rahi hoon, John ki nahin.

Muskaan: Movie ki story mujhe abh tak nahin pata, main sirf John ko dekh rahi thi, tu mujhe ghar par story batana okay?

Sanya: Hah Muskaan, you are impossible. Teri ticket bhi waste, aur Rahul ki popcorn. Rahul tune ek bar bhi nahin socha tera pura pack uski uppar phekne se pehle? Tera toh pura popcorn waste ho gaya.

Rahul: Yeah after throwing I realized I shouldn't have thrown it....

Akshay put his hand around Muskaan's shoulder.

Akshay: Don't worry muskaan, yeh phir kabhi aisa nahin karega.

Muskaan moved away, she just hated it when Akshay touched her. Rahul went by Akshay and gave him a tap on the shoulder giving him yet another sign to stop it.

Akshay: Whats your problem?

He said this softly not wanting Sanya or Muskaan to hear him.

Rahul: Stop flirting or touching don't you get that?

Akshay: Main joh bhi karun, why does it matter to you?

Rahul: look relax buddy, just don't touch her, she doesn't like it.

Akshay: I didn't do anything, what putting a hand around someone shoulder is a sin?

Rahul: Yo sanya can hear us I bet, so just stop.

Akshay: Whatever.

Akshay then went by Sanya and put his hand around her shoulder, that made Sanya smile big.

Rahul: Oye kya chal raha hai?

Akshay: Kuch nahin.... Ab hum ghar chale please?

Rahul: Hmm.

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Muskaan- Sanya:

Sanya: Muskaaaaaaan!!! Ahhhh I need to tell you soo much, idhar aa!

Muskaan: Kya hua, kaun mar gaya?

Sanya: Koi nahin, uhmm..... main aur akshay.... You know... girlfriend, boyfriend.....

Muskaan: WHAT!?

She practically yelled that, and stood up from the bed.

Muskaan: Yeh kaisa mazaak hai?

Sanya: Yeh mazaak nahin hai..... Shocking right?

Muskaan: Sanya! Are you drunk? Tune sharab pi hai kya? Whats wrong with you? Akshay, I mean.... eeew.... woh tere samne mere saath flirt kar raha tha, aur woh tera boyfriend hai? Ewwwww! Sanyaa!!!! Yeh kya kiya tune? Ek bar mere se puchti, im sorry hunni but what happened to your taste?

Sanya: Shut up Muskaan, tu Akshay ko nahin jaanti, woh bahaut sweet hai.... woh sab ke saath flirt karta hai, so what? Please ghussa mat ho.

Muskaan: God, im still in shock.... Yeh sab kab aur kaise hua?

Sanya: movie main..... we somehow made out ..... ahhh he kisses good! And then he said I love you. And what else... I said I love you too.

Muskaan: Eeeewww!! Just stop! Sanya.... what happened to u???

Sanya: I know.... shocking.... maine kabhi socha bhi nahin tha ki aisa hoga.... I want to see Rahul's reaction to this.

Muskaan: Rahul will freak. Main yeh sunke behosh nahin hui hoon, lekin Rahul pakka ho jayega.

Sanya: Really? You think? Wahhh main abhi Rahul ko phone karti hoon.

Muskaan: Ey ey no. Uhmm tu uske ghar jaake usse yeh KHUSH KHABRI bolke aa. Jaa.

Sanya: YES! Even better. Chal uske ghar chale.

Muskaan: Oye! Chale ka kya matlab? Main nahin aani wali. Tujhe jaana hai toh ja.

Sanya: Noo tu chal rahi hai. Rukh hum kahin bhar milte hai okay?

Muskaan: Listen.... mujhe Rahul se nahin milna hai....

Sanya: Lekin mujhe toh apne bhai se milna hai na.

Muskaan: Tu aaj hi toh movie me milli thi! Aur waise bhi itni raat ko hum kahan millenge?

Sanya: Babe its only 11. Mall abhi tak khula hai, toh main Rahul ko phone kar rahi hoon.

Muskaan: Sanya! Tu itni ziddi kyun hai?

Sanya: Oh god. Relax. Rahul waise bhi..

Muskaan: RAHUL RAHUL RAHUL RAHUL! Jab se Rahul aya hai tu meri baat tak nahin sun rahi hai. Maine bola na ki mujhe rahul se nahin milna!

Muskaan yelled this on top of her lungs and that made Sanya get really scared.

Sanya: But..... Why?

Muskaan: Tu nahin jaanti ki movie mai aaj kya hua tha.

Sanya: Kya hua tha? Aur tune mujhe kyun nahin bataya?

Muskaan: Tune mujhe mauka hi kab diya bolne ka, sara time Akshay Akshay Akshay!

Sanya: Okayyy.... sorry.... ab bata na kya hua?

Muskaan: He tried to kiss me.

Sanya: Rahul? Kiss? Tujhe? Yeh tu....?

Muskaan: Haan.... I dunno.... After it happend i was so uncomfortable, but the way he was staring at me... i couldnt movie...... He just kept on leaning in, staring at me, and his lips were just few millimeters apart. Just when we were about to kiss, thank god I backed away. Sanya tujhe nahin pata ki uss waqt main kaisa feel kar rahi thi, I mean I don't even know Rahul that much, and he just tries to kiss me! Isiliye mujhe ab usse face nahin karna hai.

Sanya: Par.... usne yeh ghalati se kiya hoga na?

Muskaan: Ghalati se koi kissi ko kiss nahin karta.... kya akshay ne tujhe ghalati se kiss kiya tha?

Sanya: Nahin.... woh mujhse pyaar karta hai..... OMG that mean.... Rahul....tujhse pyaar.....?

Muskaan: No... don't even go there.... Sanya.... tujhe batana hi bekaar hai, tu hamesha uska ghalat matlab nikalti hai.

Sanya: Okay.. toh main hi ghalat hoon.... hamesha main hi ghalat hoti hoon na?

Muskaan: No... mera matlab woh nahin tha..... bas yeh hai ki Rahul ne mujhe kiss karni ki khoshish ki and you know that I don't like that.... it was so awkward! Aur tu hai ki usse hi defend kar rahi hai..... haan manti hoon ki woh tera bhai hai lekin main bhi tumhari best friend hoon na?

Sanya: Ofcourse you are.... par kya tujhe kuch mehsoos nahin hua jab tu Rahul ke itni kareeb thi? Rahul ko kuch hua hoga, isiliye usne kuch nahin socha aur......

Muskaan: Aur kuch nahin' Please tu yeh apne dimaag se hata de. Okay? Ab tujhe pata hai na ki mujhe tumhare saath kyun nahin aana hai right? Toh tu akeli jayegi please?

Sanya: Muskaan.... dekh joh ho gaya so ho gaya..... aur awkward tab hoga agar usne tujhe kiss kiya hota toh, lekin usne aisa kuch nahin kiya. Aur agar tu nahin aayegi toh usse sach main bahaut guilty feel hoga. Aur waise bhi itni raat ko main akeli kaise jaun? Please tu chal aur uske samne bilkul normal behave kar jaise kuch nahin hua ho.

Muskaan: Uhmm..... I guess you are right..... okay tu usse phone kar okay?

Sanya: Thanks my jaaaaaaaan!

She gave Muskaan a bigg tight hug. Sanya called up Rahul and they decided to meet up in the mall.

At the mall:

Rahul: Sanya tune mujhe itni raat ko phone kyun kiya?

Sanya: Kyunki main BAHAUTTTTTT khush hooon!

She practically jumped on Rahul and hugged him so tight, he couldn't breathe. Rahul was so confused; he was giving signs to muskaan asking her; What on earth happened?? Has she gone mad? Muskaan just gave him a sign back saying I don't know.

Rahul: Woww woow, what happened?

Sanya: Rahulll!!! I love him!

Rahul: WOWWW U LOVE HIM!!! Sanya....... Who? He said sarcastically

Sanya: Duffer! Akshay aur kaun.

Rahul almost choked on his own saliva.

Rahul: What? Sanya..... Look..... I think you are drunk.

Muskaan cracked up laughing so hard.

Muskaan: Rahul maine isse exact same line bola tha. See sanya we all think you are drunk, you should go home.

Sanya: Tum log mera mazaak oora rahi ho? Hello im not drunk. Im in love!!! Tum dono ko kabhi kissi se pyaar nahin hua hai, jab hoga tab main bolungi: Rahul, Muskaan, ARE YOU DRUNK?

Muskaan: Ha ha! Very funny. Main thodi na Akshay ko pyaar karti hoon, joh tu mujhe aisa bolegi.

Rahul: Toh tumne mujhe idhar isiliye bolaya tha taki mujhe shock se heart attack mille? Itni jaldi mujhe marna chahti ho kya?

Sanya: Tum dono kabhi serious nahin ho sakte kya?

Rahul and Muskaan: No!

Sanya: Fine. Then my ja rahi hoon.

Rahul: Hello hum sirf mazaak kar rahi the, kahan ja rahi ho?

Sanya: Washroom ja rahi hoon.

Muskaan: Ohhh washroom. Pata hai tu ek number ki nautanki ho. Ja washroom ja.

Rahul: God shes mad!

Muskaan: I knoww right, I mean.... Akshay and Sanya.... kabhi expect nahin kiya tha.

Rahul: Exactly.... Yeh dono kabse dost the, yeh sala pyaar kahan beech main a gaya?

Muskaan: Hmm.... Toh kya ek ladka aur ladki kabhi dost nahin ho sakte?

Rahul: Ofcourse ho sakte hai.... jaise ki hum dono hai.

Muskaan was silent..... She wanted to reply yes, but then again rememberd what happened during the movie.

Rahul: Hai na?

Still Muskaan didn't reply to him.

Rahul: hey..... Main jaanta hoon ki tum chup kyun ho.... Uhmm.... im sorry Muskaan..... woh joh bhi movie main hua.... woh theek nahin tha I know..... pata nahin mera dhyan kahan tha... but I didn't really mean anything bad. Im really sorry.

Muskaan: Its okay..... don't worry. Uhm..... ab mujhe chalna chahiye....

Rahul: Toh hum dost hai na?

Muskaan: Haan hai.

Rahul: Good, and once again im sorry.

Muskaan: Oye ek aur baar sorry bola na, toh....

Rahul: MUJHSE BURA KOI NAHIN HOGAA!!! Jaise typical movies main aur tv serials main bolte hai, yeh hi kehna chahti thi na?

Muskaan couldn't help but laugh at him.

Muskaan: Tum kabse hindi serials dekhte ho?

Rahul: Dekhta toh nahin hoon, lekin pata hai ki har serial main aisa hi bolte hain.

Muskaan: Haan woh toh hai, specially Ekta Kapoor ke serials main.

Rahul: Yeaa, don't tell me ki tu sab K serials dekhti ho, jahan pe sabki yadaash chalti jaati hai, aur sab log mar jaate hain, lekin phir zinda ho jaate hai plastic surgery karate hain etc etc.

Muskaan: Wow tumhe toh mere se bhi zyaada serials ke bare main pata hai. But haan main sab K serials dekhti hoon. Kyunki saas bhi kabhi bahu thi, Kis desh main hai mera dil, Kasamh se.. aur

Rahul: Eyy okay okay I get the point.

Muskaan: Thoda zyaada bol diya na?

Rahul: Noo aisi baat nahin hai..... bas hum serials ke bare main baat kyun kar rahe hai?

Muskaan: Good point! Aur woh bhi itni raat ko.... how weird. Now really I have to go.

Rahul: Jaogi tab na ja madam washroom se niklegi.... lagta hai usne kuch zyaada hi sharab pi lit hi, isiliye ab woh washroom main vomit kar rahi hogi. I hope ki jab woh aa jaye uska screw tight ho jaye aur humhe ek aur baar heart attack nahin de.

Muskaan laughed again.

Muskaan: Sanya theek keh rahi thi, tum kabhi serious nahin hote na?

Rahul: Arrey main kya karun? Sanya aur Akshay...... I mean who thought of that??

Muskaan: Hmmmm woh toh hai. Lo tumhari MADAM a gayi.

Rahul bowed in front of Sanya.

Rahul: Madamji, agar ab kahen toh hum ab chale?

Sanya: Eyy Rahul, yeh kya hai, stop all this.

Rahul: Okay sorry, kya hua? Tum ab theek ho na? Or are you still drunk?

Sanya: I am not drunk Rahul! Kya ho gaya hai tum logo ko? Main Akshay se pyaar karti hoon, god is that so hard to believe?

Muskaan: Yup....

Sanya: Jab yakeen ho jayega, tab mujhe bata dena theek hai? Rahul humhe ghar drop kar na please, hum dono auto main aaye the.

Rahul: Yeah sure come.

Rahul dropped them both home, and headed to his house. When he reached his house, he continued reading the letter that he had to leave incomplete because of Sanya's call. Khushi's letter.

Edited by Namrata_12 - 16 years ago