Kya hua hai (Aamna Rajeev) ~new part pg 66~ - Page 4

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Posted: 16 years ago
#31
Nice part. Raj n Neha's convos r always very funny n sweet. And Raj is very naughty. He's always trying to irritate Neha.
ANYWAYS, UD SOON.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 14:
Ne: ab pata nahi yeh mujse kya karae ga bohat badi badi karte thi na jungle billi se bhige billi kaise ban gaye o god kuch bachpan ki aadat te kabi nahi ja sakti (she was saying this to herself & enters the cabin without knowing).
Ne: mai i come in sir.
Ra: u r already in, kya aapko itni b manners nahi k kise bade office mai knock karke andar ate hai.
Ne: duffer idiot monkey donkey (she said this in her mind).
Ra: kuch kaha aapne.
Ne: kuch suna tumne.
Ra: i guess yes qki mai ladkeyo ki dil baat padne me expert hu. Miss neha ab tak to ap jaan chuke hogi k mai apka boss hu to behtar yehi hoga k aap mujse izzat se baat kare.
Ne: jo k bohat mushkil hai (she said this in her mind).
Ra: kuch kaha aapne.
Ne: q kuch suna apne (she said shockingly).
Ra: i guess yes par shayad tumne meri bat suni bahar joa aur knock karke aao.
Neha goes out & start talking to her self.
Ne: yeh sirf meri pridiction ti ya sach me wo meri dil ki bat sun sakta hai, aisa hai toh muje iske samne apna dimag blank rakna padega aur jab mai dimag blank rakhne k bare me sochti hu mere dimag aur sochne lagta hai jaise vo raj bahat jaye to ek bohat bade gutter me gir jae aur use apna mu saf karne k liye pani b na mile (then a voice come from behind).
Ra: itna pyar karti ho mujse.
Neha turns behind & get scared.
Ne: vo,mai, actually (she said nervously).
Ra: dont worry mai b tumse kuch itna hi pyar karta hu ab jaldise ek pen aur paper lo aur andar aao muje tumara dictation lena hai.
Ne: dictation? Lekin vo to school me hota hai (she said in a kidish way).
Ra: no wonder k tumne mujse dushmani mod le, itne stupid to tum hi ho sakte ho (& he goes inside her cabin).
Ne: muje stupid kaha,yeh bunder (& she looks hear & there if he is there or not. She took pen, paper & a recorder) ab dikhate hu, muje stupid kaha.
Raj keeps on dictating for 1 hour & she was acting as she was writting but she was recording everything).
Ra: yaad rakhna isme ek b galti nahi honi chahe ye its very important.
Ne: dont worry sir apko 1 b mistake nahi milege.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#33
This is just so funny. I simply luv it. Raj n Neha r just brilliant n more than dat U R.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#34
Part 15: Neha listens to the recording & wrote everything correctly but she doesn't know that raj cabin's door was a mirror from outside and he can se everything from inside. Ra: smart, bohat chalak samaj ti hai apne aapko. An: chodna na yaar tu kyu us bechari k piche pada hai. Ra: 1st of all raj kabi kise ladke k piche nahi padta hai aur dusri baat use bechari bolna band kar tu mera dost hai ya uska aur waise b maine kuch soch rakha hai. Neha enters the cabin. Ne: yeh li jiye sir aap ka kaam ho gaya. (he start looking the paper). Ne: achi tarase dekhlo likin tume andar ek b mistake nahi milege itne ache se jo record kiya tha. (she said in her mind). Ra: well. Ne: kya sir (she was scared k usne pirse uske mann ki baat to nahi padli. Ra: well good work ek b mistake nahi thi waise konsa gana sun rahi thi. Ne: what? (then a lady comes inside & neha saw that he can see everything from there & her table was in front of the door & neha's ka chehra bikul ek kid ki tara ho jata hai jiske shararat pakdi gayi & raj was smiling & looking at her face). Ne: isme se to sab dikta hai. Ra: aa...ha. Ne: to iska matlab tumne sab dekh liya. Ra: ha, arre chill itna darne ki zarurat nahi hum log itne b bure nahi hai jitna bura tum hume samaj te ho mai to bas tume sabak sikhana chahta tha, vo kya hai na aaj tak ladkiya sirf mujpar pyar barsate hai tum pani barsane wali wo pehle ladke ho. (now raj & neha become friend). Ne: to tum dono agle hafte diwali par ashram aa rahe ho na. Ra: tume diwali bohat pasand hai kya. Ne: nahi not so much, aur tume. Ra: i like diwali, i love it dair sare fatake masti.(he said it in a happy tone but neha becomes sad listening to this). Arre tume kya ho gaya. Ne: maine kabi fire crackers jalae qki mujhe fire ko phobia hai. Ra: to pir tum waha q ja rahi ho. Ne: qki jai ne muje bohat insist kiya to mai mana nahi kar pae. (In this one week neha become the soul of the office & raj also got very close to the ashram kids.Raj aur neha ke ladai ab dosti ban gaye ti aur diwale ke baad vo pyar me badal jayegi.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#35
Sorry k maine ek hafta short cut me khatam kar qki yeh story pir aur badi ho jate aurDiwali aur dur ho jate. Diwali ke part me kya hoga yeh maine soch liya hai lekin toda aur soch rahi hu qki diwali se meri first half story ka pehla raaz juda hai aur is part me Raj ko Neha se Pyar ho jayega to kuch to interesting hona chahena.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 16: a night before the diwali day. Raj comes at home at 9:00 for the first time. An: arre yeh kya, tere tabiyat to thek hai na tu ghar itne jaldi kaise aa gaya. Ra: q nahi mai nahi aa sakta kya. An: aa to sakta par ek minute (he try to smell if he's drunk or not). Ra: yeh tu kya kar raha hai yaar. An: yeh dekh raha hu k tune sharab pe hai ya nahi, kamal hai tune sharab b nahi pe hai. Ra: agar tuje yaad na ho to kal hume ashram jana hai tuje yaad hai na humne neha se vaada kiya k hum kal pura din ashram me bitaege. An: ha to. Ra:to tu samja nahi kya. An: samaj to mai achi tarase raha hu. Ra: kya. An: kuch to hai kuch ho gaya hai (he starts singing). Ra: angad tu apni bakvas band kar. An: acha to tu neha se pyar nahi karta. Ra: what r u mad pyar aur vo bi us jungle billise kabi nahi. An: acha to tu usse pyar nahi karta (he puts her hand on raj shoulder). Ra: nahi karta. An: sochle. Ra: soch liya. An: chalo acha hai yahni mera rasta clear. Raj face become like a angry kid. Ra:kya,mai use ache tarase janta hu vo tuje ghaas nahi dalne wale. An: shayad tu bhul raha hai i am Angad, rockstar Angad Garewal agar ladkiya tujse pyar karte to kai ladkiya mere saat hone ke liye marte hai vo to muje hi ladkiyo me interest nahi. Ra: acha to pir tuje kisme interest hai.(angad runs behind raj to beat her). An:aaj tuje pee ne ka mud nahi hai na par mera hai. (they both drink a lot). Ra: angad tuje pata hai na mai kabi kisise isliye pyar nahi karta qki mai jisse b pyar karta hu vo mujse dur ho jata hai. An:acha to isliye neha se pyar nahi karna chahta. Raj starts laughing. Ra: to tuje b yakeen ho gaya k mai us neha se pyar karta hu, mai pyar to karta hu lekin neha se nahi. tu sahi kehta hai vo sach me bechari hai maine kaha mai acha hu aur vo maan gaye aur kal to mai kuch aisa karnewala hu ki. (raj stops & realise that he was going to say the whole plan to angad when he saw angad he was slept & raj was relived & he goes to her room). Neha was standing near the window when she got a call & a shocked expression on her face)
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Posted: 16 years ago
#37
Nice n interesting part. Wondering wats Raj upto.
PLS CONTINUE SOON.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 17: raj & angad has reached to the ashram but neha was not there. Ra:mai yaha itne jaldi utakar aya hu aur vo ab tak so rahi hogi, gin gin kar badla luga tujse. Neha was not sleeping at thing time. Ne: konse kapde pehnu, kripa yaar mai itni tension me hu aur tu so rahi utna. Kr:neha chupkar ab sirf 7:00 baj aur aaj meri chuti hai to muje sonede. Ne: what sone de tume yaad hai na hume ashram jana hai. Kr: ha lekin itni jaldi nahi jana to bakvas band kar aur muje sone de. Ne: lagta hai tu aise nahi manege 123 and dhum. Kr: hai mai margai kamar ki hadi tut gayi (she looked at the room & she saw that all the clothes were out of the cubboard). Kr: yeh kya kiya tune & wait a minute aaj tune in 3 hafto me muje pehle baar kripa keh kar bulaya pehle bar itne jaldi ute anything special. Ne: special ki bachi tuje yaad hai na hume aaj ashram jana hai. Kr: lekin tune to kaha tha k tuje aag se darr lagta hai kai tune mujse jhut to nahi bola aur har roz mujse khana banaya dost hoke tune muje dhoka diya hai (she said it in a melodramatic way). Ne: tuje pata tu kitne over acting hai hindi pictures ka asar saf dikh raha hai aur waise b mai dhoka sirf unhe dete hu jo muje dhoka dete hai ab chal tayyar b hona hai (& now neha & kripa are ready they are looking fab but neha was just looking like jannat k hurr everyone was just looking at her). Kr:yeh le aaj k din tuje helmet ki sabse zyada zarurat hai dekh sab kaise dekh rahe hai. Ra: kya yaar teri neha di ab tak nahi aye. Ja: vo dekhye vo aa gaye. (both angad & raj stood up & raj mouth was kept open as he have saw such a beautiful girl). Ja: muh to band karo phantom.(raj closes her mouth & looked at angad who was continuously looking at neha). An: wow kya lagti hai yaar. (raj become angry & closes angad eyes). An: arre hata na yaar dekhne dena waise b tuje to isme koi interest nahi hai na. Ra: right, to muje kyu jussa aa raha hai (he thought in her mind). Ne: hi angad, hi raj. An: hi neha. Raj just gives a bad smile to neha. Ne: jusse me ho ya shakal hi aise hai. Yeh hai kripa.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 18: Ne: yeh hai meri friend, roomate aur ashram ki music teacher Kripa. Ra: kamal hai ek paagal aur dusri invisible hai (he said in her mind). Ne: kuch kaha apne. Ra: q tumne kuch suna kya. Ne: i guess yes, tumare saat rehtde hue yeh powers mujme b aa gayi hai. Ra: apne ap ko bohat smart samajti hai. (he said this in her mind). Ne: correction, mai such me smart hu mr bunder.(she said this in her mind). Ra: u jungli billi muje bunder bulana band karo (he said this pointing finger towards neha). Ne: aur tum b muje jungle billi bulana band karo (she said this holding her finger & then they looked to their side & guess what angad & kripa was not there). Ne & Ra: ye dono kaha chale gae. Angad & Kripa was talking to each other & Raj and Neha was looking them from behind the tree. An: to ap music teacher hai. Kr: ha aur apki fan b. Ne: kab se. An: Angad aur Kripa chalo acha hi hai ab yeh mere raste me nahi ayega. Ne: tumne kuch kaha kya. Ra: nahi to. O god ye to sach me mera mind pad rahi hai isse pehle is kuch aur pata chale mai yaha se khisak leta hu (& he slowly moves away). Ne: raj tune..arre yeh kaha gaya. Now its diwali night raj was looking at neha playing with kids from behind & she was behaving just like a kid & he was trying to avoid the feeling that he is starting liking her as he cant see her with any body else her care & love for everyone makes her starting loving her & angad was noticing all this). An: kya hua hai tuje yaar. Ra:muje kya ho sakta hai. Ra: wah kitni achi acting karta hu mai mere apne dost ko b pata nahi chala k mai acting kar raha hu. (when neha voice come from behind & raj got scared). Ra: tume kuch suna kya. Ne:q tumne kuch kaha. Ra: itni awaz me agar mai sach me b kehta to isse kuch sunai nahi deta. Next scene Neha was standing alone when Raj saj Neha's dupatta has caught fire & there was 1 kerosene can nearby & Neha was not knowing that. Ra: neha waha se hat jao.(but neha was unable to here anything) end
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 19: Raj runs to save neha everyone saw that. Aur vo waha pohanch jata hai aur neha ke dupatte ko lagi hui aag apne haato se bhuja ta hai uff bechara raj uska haat hi jal gaya. Neha was sitting in a shock. Kr: neha tu thik to hai na. Raj stood up when neha holds raj hands. Ne: thanks aaj tum nahi hote to (neha saw raj hands). Ne: arre tumare haato me to chot lag gayi hai lao mai band age laga dete hu. Ra: koi zarurat nahi hai, agar tum apne ankh kaan dimaag muh khula, oh muh to tumara hamesha khula rehta hai, lekin agar tum apne kan khula rakhte to tume mere aawaz sunnae dete lekin tum to... Neha becomes angry & she stood up. Ne: raj u r impossible, aur tum yeh mat samjo k tumne meri jaan bacha k koi ehsaan kiya hai. Ra: silly girl ek to maine tumare jaan bachai, muje tumari waja se chot aae (he shows her hand to neha) dekha aur uparse tum muje hi daat rahi. Ne: maine tume nahi kaha tha meri madat karne k liye vo tum the jise hero banne ka shock tha (angad & kripa was continuously looking at them) agle bar jab tak tumse madat na mangu tum meri madat mat karna. Ra: ok fine. Huh!. Ne: huh! (Raj & angad goes from there). Kr: kya yaar usne teri jaan bachai aur tu uspe hi. Ne: kya karu yaar vo jab b mere samne aata hai mera dimag dhum se ud jata hai. (neha looks at raj who was playing with jai & other kids). Ne: thanks raj (she said slowly). Ja: arre phantom fatake to khatam ho gayye. Ra: chal Angad hum jake aur fatake laate hai. (angad was looking at kripa). Ra: Angad. An: ha bolona Kripa. Ra: Kripa? Angad (he said loudly)fatake lane chale (Angad nods her head). Ja: phantom mai b aapke saat chaluga. Ra: lekin tume yaha na paakar sab pareshan ho jayege. An: aane dena yaar hum konsa bohat dur ja rahe hai ek kaam karte hai hum kripa ko b saat le lete hai. Ra: thik hai waise b tere koi b kaam uske bina ho sakta hai. (raj,angad,jai & kripa r now gone). Everyone is out of ashram & playing diwali when we see a rocket went inside the orphanage aur dhire dhire aag aur badgae then a kid shouts aag every1 starts running.

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