Kya hua hai (Aamna Rajeev) ~new part pg 66~ - Page 6

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 21: Raj ab present me aa jata hai, vo neha ko dekh ta hai jiske sir me se bohat khoon beh rah hota hai jo kabi b behosh ho sakte hai, raj saw a big stone near by and break the window and got got inside the house without thinking about herself aur vo neha k saame hota hai. Kuch pal k liye vo bas ek dusre me hi kho jate hai (BG Thoda sa pyar sad version). Thoda sa pyar hua hai thoda hai hum to chahege tuje jab talak ja hai baki (raj pulls neha toward herself and hug her tightly) pyar humne kiya hai pyar tumne kiya hai yaar pir inteha q zamane ne liya hai saat hum denge tera tujse vada hai saati(angad & kripa was shouting and saying them to come out but they got no response us waqt wo dono ek dusre se itna pyar karte the k agar unhe us tara maut b agai to unhe koi fark nahi padega this hapens on above song line). (Raj opens her eyes & saw a wooden fire log was going to fall on neha so he stoped wooden log frm her hand on the next line) dard jitna milega pyar utna badege apni chahat k age ye zamana jhuke (neha at last behosh ho gai aur raj use uta leta hai on this line) saat tujse vada hai sati. (I love u neha he said on that line)Thoda sa pyar hua hai thoda hai baki. END OF THE PART. PLS COMMENT.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#52
Mind blowing , awesome thank you for pm
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome story main ne abhi sirf 12 part tak read kia hai aur bohat acha laga baki baad mein read karongi
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Nice part. Raj was doing every possible thing to save Neha. Oh I'm feling so sad 4 them. And Poor Raj was left to confess at such a crucial tym. It was really touching.
PLS CONTINUE SOON.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ahaa! very well written sweety.....i jus luvd it....... kya song hai aur kya scene banaya tumne awesome.....plzz update soon..
luv,
Aarti....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 22: ab neha slowly apni aankhe kholte hai really dont know k usne i l u wala statement suna ya nahi. Neha is coughing. Ra: neha tum thik to hona. Ne: aise condition me koi thik kaise reh sakta hai, tum yaha se chale jao ab b waqt hai muje nahi lagta hai k mai bach paoge. Ra: neha, aise bate mat karu tume mujpar vishwas hai na. Neha nods her head saying no. Ra: o so sad lekin is waqt mujpar vishwas karne k alawa tumare pas koi option he nahi hai. Neha starts coughing. Ra: r u ok. Ne: vo yaha oxygen bohat kam hai. Ra: a vo neha agar mai kuch karu to tum gussa to nahi karogi. Ne:kya. Raj was feeling shy and neha noticed that. Ne: che tum aisa soch b kaise sakte ho hum dono no way. Neha's fav locket falls frm raj pocket. Ne: mera locket tumare pas tumne liye. Ra: nahi ye kripa k pas tha. Ne: just chill raj ab hume kuch nahi hoga. Ra: q tum future dek sakti ho kya. Ne: nahi ab yeh locket humare pas hai na to hume kuch nahi hoga. Ra: ruko ek min mai dundta hu yahi kai gira hoga. Ne: kya dund rahe ho locket to mere pas hai. Ra: nahi mai to tumare dimag ka screw dhud raha tha. Ne: haha very funny. Ra: lao vo locket mai abi ise fek deta hu (he starts pulling it frm neha's hand and neha also start pulling it. Angad & kripa was looking it frm outside). An: agar mai galat nahi hu to vo dono pir lad rahe hai. Kr: in dono ka kuch nahi ho sakta aise situation me b lad rahe hai. Ne: raj agar mere locket ko kuch hua na to mai tume zinda nahi chodugi. Ra: vo to vaise b kuch der me hone hi wala hai, tum jaise bevakuf ladki to maine apni puri zindagi me nahi dekhe. Aag se dar lagta hai to yaha q ayi. Ne: muje laga jai yaha to.. Ra: to tum yaha aa gayi, aj k zamane me itna to ko apno k liye b nahi karta aur tum to jai ko sirf teen hafto se jante ho kya rishta hai tumara jai se. Ne: rishte waqt se saat nahi bante hai vo to bus dilse bante hai aur waise tum b to muje bachane aye the par q. Ra: qki mai. (he goes closer to neha). Ra: qki mai . (they were just looking in each other eyes). Ne: pyar karte ho.(eyes full of tears)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 23: Ne: kaho na tum mujse pyar karte ho na. Ra: lekin tume kaise tum to. Ne: raj in bato k liye waqt nahi hai tum yaha se chale jao samne khidki hai tum aasani se bach sakte ho. Ra: nahi mai tume chodkar kahi nahi jaoga. Aisa bohat kam khushnasib hote hai jine apne pyar k saat jine milta, lekin unse b kam khushnasib vo hote hai jine apne pyar k liye marne milta hai, but i promise u k mai tume kuch nahi hone dunga. They hug each other jab ek kerosene ki can gir jate hai aur ek bohat bada blast hota hai. Angad and Kripa get very shocked at looking this. Kr: yeh sab mere galti hai, its all my fault (she said this crying when someone hold her shoulder). Kr: nahi angad muje sahara mat do yeh sab meri galti hai. (she turns back and saw neha there and hug her). Kr: i sorry neha meri waja se tum nahi rahi. Then she realise neha is not dead. Kr & An: tum dono zinda ho. Ne & Ra: ha hume kya ho sakta hai. (both kripa and angad hug raj and neha while raj and neha was looking at each other). Ra: to aaj se humara pyar shur. Ne: ofcourse. Kr: are tumare sir pe chot lagi hai chalo mai patti laga deti hu. (ab kripa neha ke sir pe dawai laga rahi). Ne: oouch! Ra: kripa aram se lagaona bichari ko dard ho raha hai(angad was shoch listening bechari frm raj mouth)(raj ko uska dard feel ho raha hai). Ne: raj tumare b haat par chot aye lao mai dawai laga deti hu. (now kripa was shocked at this statement). Ra: nahi mai thik hu. Ne: raj zyada natak mat karo & just sit. (she makes raj sit). Ra: angad, tune kaha tha na k tuje kripa se koi important bat karne hai. An: maine nahi to. Ra: kaha to tha (he said angrily as he wants angad & kripa to go frm there). An:o ha kripa muje tume baat karni hai. Kr: kya? An: nahi yaha nahi kai akele me. (angad & kripa goes frm there & neha was looking at them & talking to raj). Ne: raj tume kya lagta hai,angad ko kya bat karni hogi kripa se. (raj pulls neha's hand & makes her sit on her lap). Ra: une chodo na hum humare brand new pyar k bare me baate karte hai (he said in a naughty way).
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Posted: 16 years ago
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The part was really sweet. Raj n Neha r a limit. Even in such a situationthey wer quarrelling. But then they also confessed their luv which was very cute. The last scene was very funny. Luved Raj's dialog regarding his brand new Pyaar.
PLS CONTINUE SOON.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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SWEET YAAR CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 24: ne: brand new pyar,ye line tum kitne ladkeyo ko bol chuke ho.(raj started counting 1 2 3). Ra: actually maine kabi count nahi kiya tha yaar, waise ye lo tumara locket, waise isme itne khas baat kya hai. Ne: actually ye meri mom ki akhri nishani hai. Ra: o i am sorry (neha starts thinking something). Ra: kya mai jaan sakta hu k mere samne hote hue b tum kiske khayalo me khoe hue ho. Ne: nahi aise baat nahi hai, vo actually ashram to nahi raha to ab ye sab. Ra: bas itni si baat, mere hote tume kisi b chez ki tension lene ki zarurat nahi hai aur waise b maine sab soch k raha hai. Ne: kya? Ra: kal hum shimla jayege waha mera ek cottage hai, jab tak ashram k liye dusri jaga ka intezam nahi hoga tab tak hum wahi rahege. Ne: lekin kya main jan sakte hu k aap yeh kiske liye? Ra: aap, plz neha tum muje itni izat mat do vo kya hai na mujse digest nahi ho raha hai aur kya tum ye nahi janti,k mai ye sab sirf. (they got lost in each other). Ne: sirf.. Ra:sirf sirf..jai k liye kar raha hu. Ne: u (she beats raj on her hand). Ra: ouch! Shayad tum bhul rahi ho k mere haat pe chot lagi hai. Ra: ab ghar chale,ghar chalke packing b to karni hai. Ne: ha lekin ye angad aur kripa kaha reh gaye. (angad & kripa was coming frm behind). Ra: lo vo log b aa gaye. An: whats up, aj tum dono muskurake baat kar rahe ho. Ra: vo maine tuje baad me bataoga filhal hume ghar jake packing karne hai qki hum sab shimla ja rahe hai aur koi sawal mat puchna. An: thik hai chalte hai.(raj is saying bye to neha by shaking her hand). Ra: bye to hum kal milte hai. Ne:thik hai (raj still holding her hand). An: raj uska haat to chod. (raj ne uski awaz nahi suni aur sirf neha ko dekhta raha). Ne: to mai jao. Ra: ha jao na (he says smiling). Angad starts pulling raj hand but was unable. An: are yaar, isne to aise haat pakda hua hai jaise fevekol se chipkaya hai. Ne: raj mera haat to chodo. (then raj leaves her hand & neha starts going then she turns back & give a cute smile to raj. Ra: oh god neha, she's damn good ye suba kab hogi. (Angad looks at raj)

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