Kya hua hai (Aamna Rajeev) ~new part pg 66~ - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 5:
Kr-neha yaar jaldi karna half an hour se flower chouse kar rahi sare roses hi to hai le lena.
(Rajeev car reaches there raj was talking on the phone and ask her secatry to bring flowers and ask her to come fast. The secatary enters and took the roses from Neha's hand and Neha became very angry).
Ne- excusse me ye mere fool hai.
Sec- acha ispe kahi tumhara naam to nahi likha. (listening to this neha become very angry and throw water from the glass on her face now now raj saw all this from her car but cant see the girls face and go there).
Ra- excusse me as he was standing behind to neha and neha turns while turning neha hairs were all over on raj face.
Ra- yeh sab kya laga rakha hai tumne.
Ne-now who the hell r u.
Ra-yeh jiske upar tumne pani feka tha vo mere secatary hai got it u stupid girl.
Ra-let it be ise yeh flowers lelene do ise apne boy friend ko dena hoga.
Ne-hey excusse me mera koi boyfriend nahi and how can u say it like that.
Ra- i cant beleive it, tum ladkiya pyar karte ho to itna chupa te kyon.
Ne-mujhe lagta hai ke tumhare kan me koi prob hai ek baar kaha to samajme nahi aaya kya. (kripa was feeling ambarrase as everyone was looking at them.
Kr-arre chodna yaar neha.
Ne- chodu, isse pakad na bhi kon chahata hai.
Ra-yeh rahe tumhare flowers aur yeh extra flowers mere taraf se us bechare ko dedena jise tum pyar karte ho and started moving (this left neha's mouth open as everyone was laughing at her this makes her more angry)
Ne-excusse me she said to raj who was walking holding something in her hand.
Ra- Sorry kehne ki koi zarurat nahi hai and dishh! (neha was holding another glass of water which she threw on raj face)
Ra-tum jaanti bhi ho ke mai kaun hu.
Ne-ofcourse janti hu,tum behat hi batamiz insaan ho, jiske paas donkey jaise akal hai aur monkey jaise shakal hai and i think itna description kafi hai.
Ra-whatt!Meri bundar jaise shakal hai.
Ne-ek baar bolne par sunai nahi deta hai kya.she started walking away when she heard raj voice from behind which makes her anger level on the 7th sky..
End
Edited by afreenaamna - 15 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 6:
Ra-tumne kabhi apni shakal mirror me dekhi hai kya jungalle billi se itne milte hai ke agar billi ko baju me khada kardo to pehchanna bhi mushkil.
(aur billi hi ek aise cheez hai jisse neha ko darr bhi lagta hai aur nafrat bhi hai).
Ne-tum to mai... Ok,fine maine tumhe bandar bulaya aur tumne mujhe billi kaha to scores r equal (she was going to go in anger when raj holds her hand tightly & turn her face. At this time neha was very scared.)
Ra-tumne muj par pani feka tha na to ab it's my turn (he took a glass of water and came more closser to neha, neha's eyes were thightly close and he came more closer everyone on the road were stop to see what is going to happen and finally something hapens raj ne neha ke gaal pe kiss kiya aur road pe sare logo ka muh khula ke khula reh gaya including kripa looking at this a old man kiss a girl standing next to him and got a tight slap hearing to the noise neha opens her eyes and realise what just happend.)
Ra-yeh lo thanda thanda pani tumhara dil aur dimaag dono shaant rahenge
(he gives the glass in nehas hand and went away).
Neha after sometime
Ne: Kripu ab to mera haat chod do vo chala gaya hai.
(kripa left neha's hand in which she was holding the glass which raj gave her.
Kr-Vo jab usne tera haat me glass diya to mujhe darr lag raha tha ke kahi tu usse use marr na daale.
Ne-Dont worry usse itne aasani se nahi marne dungi mai.
(with lots of anger on her face)
End of the part
Edited by afreenaamna - 15 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#13

Nice part. Interesting meeting of Raj n neha.

W8ing 4 the next part.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 7:
Ne- o god ab mujhe ghar jake phirse nahana padega.
(raj apne ghar pohach jata hai jaha par Angad hota, Angad and Raj stays together in the same house).
An: arre raj tu.
Ra: nahi a sakta kya.
An: nahi yaar aise to koi baat nahi hai, lekin tu itna bheega hua q hai sunita ko date par water kingdom to nahi le gaya.
Ra:Sunita?, o shit! Sunita, mai to us ke bare me bhul hi gaya tha.(raj calls sunita).
Ra-hi sweetheart (this time we see a girl wearing sari talking on the phone).
Su:dont tell me sweet heart u dont love me any more. (raj phone was on speaker mode so angad was listening to their conversation and was eating a apple and throws the apple to raj).
Now raj eating & talking on the phone.
Ra: o neha aisa mat kaho tumse baat kiye bina mai khana kaise khauga & took a bite of apple.
Su: o poor baby, wait yeh neha kon hai (raj was like o shit).
Ra:mai kis neha ko...
Su: nahi jhut mat bolo.
Ra:stop it tumne soch bhi kaise lia ke mai tumare alava kisi (angad trys to tell him that his other girlfriend phone is on other line. Raj keeps hand on the phone).
Ra: tu baat karle na yaar waise mere sari girlfriend tere gaane ki bohat badi fan hai.
Su: hello raj i so sorry baby bye.(she kept the phone)
An: Chodna yaar kya is sunita ke piche pada hai.
Ra: hey dude raj kisi ladke ke piche nahi padta aur vaise bhi sunita ke dad ne humare hotelwale project me bohat se paise invest kiye hai..(angad interupts).
An:arre ha vo hotelwala project me to humare bhi bohat se paise lage hai aur maine suna ke vo zameen gispe hum yeh hotel bananewale the vo zameen bhi hume nahi mil rahi.
Ra:dude just chill us zamen ke bareme mujhe sochne de aur tu apne london ke show par focus kar, i am sure vo jo bhi ho tujse nahi jeet sakti aur vaise agar tuje yaad ho to maine tume Sonia ke bare me pata lagane ke liye kaha tha.
An:raj,raj tu Sonia ko patane ke bare me sochna bhul ja, jaha tak muje pata use patana itna aasaan nahi hai.
Ra: Q tune try kiya tha kya, well how she looks.
An:Well aaj tak usse kisene nahi aur woh isliye ke usually travel karte rehte hai aur ye show me vo pehle bar sabke samne ayege..so uske baare koi b info mere paas nahi hai..
End
Edited by afreenaamna - 15 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 8:
Ra: uske samne aane ka intezar to mujhe bhi rahega akhir hum bhi to dekhe yeh Sonia kya cheez hai.
An: yeh sonia kya cheez hai vo to hum badme dekhlege lekin yeh neha kya chez hai.
Ra: neha vo koi nahi hai.
An: raj tu jhut ladkeyo se bol sakta hai mujse nahi.
Ra: chodna yaar bohat lambi kahani hai.
An: aur mai bilkul free hu
(raj told her everything what happend angad become silence for 1 sec & suddenly begain to laugh.
An: acha to yeh waterfall use tujpar dala tha.
Ra: hehehe hasle apne dost ke upar (& trew the apple on angad and was geting ready to go).
An: kya hua yaar kaha ja raha hai, neha se milne.
Ra: dekh angad muje neha ka naam bhi nahi sunna hai.
An: abi to liya.
Ra:kya?
An:uska naam, dekh raj pyar ki suruvat hamesha takrar se he hoti hai.
Ra:tu apni ye bakvas logic band karega aur vaise bi muje us hotel ki zameen ke liye baat karne bi jana hai so please neha ka naam bi mat lena (raj goes in a deep thought that why he is taking neha's name and goes from there and angad from behind said).
An: good start dude. (Raj in the car)
Ra: yeh angad bi na kuch bi bolta rehta hai
(he again goes in a deep though use yaad aata hai jab neha ke baal uske chehre par aate hai now a sweet smile comes on raj face. Raj came out of her thoughts & the smile disappear.)
Ra: what the hell.
He reaches the place where he wanted to go and it is none other than orphanage where neha is gonna come. In orphanage he saw ke kuch ladke jai ke walking stick cheen ke use pareshan tab vo uski madat karke uska dost ban jata hai.
Ra: to ab hum dost hai.
Ja: right phantom.
Ra: yeh phantom kon hai.
Ja: phantom mera fav comic hero hai jo humesha sabki madat karta hai jis tarah apne ki.
Ra: o to ab mai superhero bi ban gaya hu lekin kuch log to muje bunder samajte hai
Ja:kya hua phantom.
Ra:kuch nahi..so from now we r best friend right?
Ja:wrong, qki meri best friend to koi aur hai.
Ra:o ho! meri, u mean girl friend.
Ja:are nahi vo to mujse bohat badi hai lekin agar mai unki age ka hota to unhe apni girlfriend banata because she is the most beautiful girl in the whole world..but ab toh mai unhe di bulata hu..
Edited by afreenaamna - 15 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 9:
Raj: to kaha par hai tumhare di.
Ja: vo aa rahe hogi.(at this time neha and kripa reaches orphanage from their scooty).
Kr: neha tu bi bohat ajeeb hai pehle to un fullo ke ke liye us admi se lad padi aur phir vo fool bhi nahi liye aur phir se aada ghanta fool pasand karne me laga diye.
Ne:maine dusre fool isle liye qki us fool ne us fool ko haat lagaya tha, o god us fool ne muje bhi to kiss kiya tha aur maine abi tak apna muh nahi dhoya kahi pimples a gaye toh.
Kr:neha, u r too much, aur waise bhi vo itna bhi bura nahi tha actually vo bohat cute tha aur uske kiss karnese tere chehre par kitne KASHISH aa gaye hai.(neha gives a very tuff look to kripa).
Kr:kya hua? Ab tu muje aise q dekh rahi hai maine kya kiya.
Ne: toh aur kya karu us ladke ne meri sabke samne itne insult ke aur meri frnd usi ke tariffo ke pool band rahe hai ''O kitna cute tha na, kitna handsome tha".
Kr: waise maine handsome to nahi kaha tha..tere dil ki baat zuba pe aa hi gayi..ab andar challe.
Ne: tu andar ja muje saame ki dukanse kuch balloons lene hai.
Kr: now dont tell me ke tu is umar me balloons ke saat khelege.
Ne:wah! Kripa kya dimaag paya hai tune mai tumare students ke liye balloon lene ja rahi hu apne liye nahi.(they both enters the orphanage and as they enters sare bache neha ko gher lete hai aur vo sabko ballons deke jai ke paas jaate hai and closes her eyes frm behind)
Ja:neha di.
Ne: are tumne to ek barmehe muje pehchan liya.
Ja:huh!
Ne:naraz ho? Lekin isme meri koi galti nahi tumare liye best fool chune me waqt lag gaya aur raste me muje ek stupid bandar mil gaya tha.
Ja:wow di itne beautiful flowers.
Ne:ache hai na specially tumare liye.
Ja: waise di aaj in foolo se bi zyada apke gaal shine ho rahe hai.
Kr: shine ho rahe hai na maine neha se kaha tha, ke us kiss...
Ja:kiss...
Ne: kiss, what kiss kaise kiss,konsi kiss (she said angryly to kripa) waise tume kaise pata chala ke mai aye hu.
Ja:its simple qki jab hum kise se pyar karte hai to usse pehchane ke liye hume ankho ki zarurat nahi padti.
Ne:yeh kisne kaha tumse.
ja: usne (ery1 turns behind)
End
Edited by afreenaamna - 15 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Really nice part. PLS CONTINUE SOON.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I have created 2 polls plez vote well pure story mere dimaag me to ready hai par likhne me bohat time lagta hai aur is story me bohat suspence hai to mujse control hi nahi ho raha hai vo suspence ko suspence rakhne me well muje is story ka second half jyada pasand hai jisme new hero hoga & believe me vo rajeev se jyada acha hai
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 11:
Ne: arre yeh to wahi bunder hai.
Ra: arre yeh rajdhani express yaha kya kar rahi hai.
Raj & neha: tum?
Ja: wow to ap dono ek dusre ko jaante hai.
Ne: bohat hi ache tara se yeh bohat hi saru aur batamiz kissam ke insan hai.
Ra: agar mai to batamiz hu to tum bi koi sharafat ki putli nahi ho aur agar tume yaad ho to vo tum thi jisne laddae shuru ki thi aur jaha tak mera khayal hai ek shariff kissam ki ladke is tara ki harkat nahi karte.
Ne: Acha to shariff kise kehte hai, beach raste me ek bichari khubsurat ladke ko kiss karte hai? Is this what u call sharafat?
Ja:kiss...
Ne: tu chup kar jai.
Ra: maine kiss kiya yeh baat to sach hai lekin yeh bechari aur khubsurat ladke kon hai.
Ne: muje tum jaise bunder se baat hi nahi karni chahheye thi.
Ra: as if i'am interested.
Ne: chal jai aise loga ke muh nahi lagte .(she turns to go lekin vo phirse mudte hai aur uske baal raj ke chehre par chale jate hai & raj become fully blank).
Ne: aur ha agle baar jai se 50 metre aur mujse 100 metre durr rehna got it (but raj was not listening to her worlds but just observing her face her eyes and smiling looking at her this made neha more angry).
Ne: hey u tumare ear dum me koi problem mein hai kya. (when orphanage mother came out).
Mo: kya hua neha tum kis par itna gussa ho rahi.. 'o aap ab tak yaha par hai', she said looking at raj.Neha yeh bohat ache insan hai inhone humare orpanage.. ko 5 lakhs ka donation diya hai.
(neha feels little bad at the way she talk to him).
Ne: o i am sorry.
Ra: u should be bohat batamiz ho tum rasteme ladne lag gayi.
Ne: ha bohat badi galti ke maine, lekin meri galte yeh hai ke maine tumse maafi mangi meri rai tumare bareme pehle hi sahi thi. Bevakuf, ghamandi bunder huh!! (She said in a very kidish way but she looked damn cute & looking at this raj smiled and she walked away.)
Ra: raj hasna band kar (he said to herself)
ja: yeh kya phantom tumne to pehle hi din di ko naraz kar diya.
Ra: to mai kya karu yaar? Teri di hi aise hamesha ladte rehte hai, par sabse pyaari hai.
Ja: q ho gaya nah..
Ra:kya?..
Edited by afreenaamna - 15 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice fic pls cont. just read it

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