Kya hua hai (Aamna Rajeev) ~new part pg 66~

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Neha: A Single bubby girl..lives life as she wants..
Raj Singhaniya: cool dude owner of india's bigest music company par ye duniya me akela hai he's a bad boy
Angad Garewal: a rockstar, lives with best friend raj and family stays in USA.

Kripa: best friend & room partner of neha, music teacher in a orphanage.

Jai: a small boy in orphanage who cant walk & like a brother to neha.
Other character which will be introduced in 2nd half from Pg 53.

Sonia Yuvraj: the futer rock star can touch your heart & get your soul off.

Adi Oberoi: soniya's childhood frnd jo bachpan me hi mila hai the 2nd hero.

Samrat Raheja: Angad cousin & going to get engaged with Sanaya (Page 53).

Sanaya Gujral: Sonia frnd very innocent, sweet & caring..Samrat fiance.
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Amir Ali: frnd of Adi.
Sanjeeda Sheikh: frnd of Sonia a bubbly bindas girl.....

How come 2 girl have same face?? R they 2 diffrent people?? What will happen if they came to know that they know eachother before they themself?? Kya hoga jab unhe pata chalega woh ek dusre ko pichle janam se chahte hai?? What if they came to know they r Sujal And Kashish who got killed once & got this life to find their lost love to take revenge from the person who killed them??

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Thnx 4 writing another FF on Rajeev n Aamna.. Nice concept. PLS CONTINUE SOON.

And yes, WC 2 IF.🤗
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Edited by afreenaamna - 16 years ago
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Part 1:
Its rose day and we see a guy sleeping on her bed but we cant see her. Suddenly phone rangs
"sir i have call u to remind u about the important meeting today at 11:00",
Raj:ok i will be there.
He looks her watch it was already 10:30 he got up from her bed in white track but we cant see her face, he took shower and came out with wet hair's select's a suit and watch from her wardrobe and stood in front of mirror when Ramu kaka enters
Ramu: Raj baba apka khana tayyar hai. (Then raj turns with jel in hairs, white coat and cute sime on her face:-)
Raj- Nahi kaka main already meeting ke liye late ho chuka hu agar khana khaya to flight leke office pohach na padega.
Ramu- Thik hai baba.Raj rush toward her car he tooks the key from the driver and drives the car at top speed.
Her was the entry of our hero and the end of the part..
Edited by afreenaamna - 15 years ago
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Part 2:
Raj reaches the office and all the girls in the office stars peeping to him..
Girl 1- wow yaar aaj sir kitne hott lag rahe hai na.
Girl 2- No ways yaar bohat cool lag raha hai.
Girl 1- nahi hot hai.
Girl 2- kaha na cool hai.(they both starts fighting with eachother then we here something from behind)
stop it girls coming towards them with a cute smile and he is none other than Raj collage friend Angad.
Angad- well girls u both r correct. Raj ki to personality hi kuch aise hai woh ek hi waqt pe hot bhi lag sakta hai aur cool bhi, abi mujhe meeting ke liye jana hai varna tumhare yeh Raj sir mujpe hot ho jayega. (In the meeting room)
Raj- Are yaar Angad 11:00 baj chuke hai aur ab tak koi bhi board member pohcha nahi hai.
An- Vo isleye dude kyonki meeting 12:00 baje ki hai
Raj- watt! To phir Ramu kaka (Angad interups)
An- ha ha pata hai maine hi unhe kaha tha ki tumhe ye timings batae, kyonki maine dekha tha ki kal raat ki party me tum Sunita se kis tarha flirt kar rahe the
Raj- konsi wali Sunita yaar.
An- dont tell me ke tujhe yaad nahi, i an talking about Sunita , Sunita verani
Ra- o! vo, mai to bhul he gaya tha acha hua tune yaad dila diya aur vaise vo Sunita ho, Mikita ho, Chikita ho ya koi papita ho isse kya fark padta hai. Humare music company ko Veerani's se bohat profit ho sakta hai.
An- Aisa mat kar yaar its not correct fir se sab.
Ra- Stop it Angad mujhe is ke bare me koi baat nahi karne hai.(Everyone enters the meeting room)
dou mahine baad ek bohat bada competition hone wala hai London me agar humare company ye competion jeet gayi then we will be on top then.(someone interups)
man- But sir yeh competition me to Deven Yuvraj ki company bhi hai aur vo apni beti Sonia ko launch karne wale hai to mujhe
Raj- to mujhe what? Mujhe harna pasand nahi aur mujhe tum jaise loosers ki apni company me koi zarurat nahi hai So u r fired
man- but sir
Raj- u all may leave. (everyone goes from there except Raj and Angad end of the part..
Edited by afreenaamna - 15 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Nice part. Raj's intro was cool as well as hot. Btw even I cant decide whether he looks hot or cool. I guess Angad is ryt. Raj ki ersonality kuch aisi hai k ek hi tym pe hot bhi lagta hai or cool bhi.
Gud to knw dat he is typical Raj here who doesnt like 2 lose. I luv this trait of his. But wats it dat Raj doesnt wanna talk abt?? Wud luv to knw dat. PLS CONTINUE SOON.
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Thankx meri FF padne ke liye. I am a new member aur yeh pehle baar hai that i am writing something, so sorry for the mistakes i made.. to hogi hi so i am sorry for that..
Edited by afreenaamna - 15 years ago
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Part 3:
(Raj with a evil smile)
. An-kya hua yaar aise q hass raha hai.
Raj- un logo ne kaha ke koi Sonia perform karne wale hai.
An- u r sick man aur kitne ladkeyo ko dhoka dega tu kahi aisa na ho ke jis ladke se tum pyar karne lago vo tumhe chod ke chale jaye.
Raj- o come on dude dont be a spoil spot, aur vaise bhi is duniya me aise koi bhi ladke nahi hai jo Raj Singhaniya ke seene se uske dil ko chura ke le jaye, so good bye buddy.
An- vaise woh ladke Kahi to hogi hi jise tu apne jaan se bhi zyaada pyar karega. (raj voice comes from far away)
Raj- uske liye to tujhe sona padega dude qki vo to tere sapne me hi possible hai.(We see a girl a running toward a chawl room and bang!!! Vo gir gaye aur vo thi
Intro-
kripa- jo Neha ki roomate aur friend bhi hai..she is a music teacher in an orphanage.
Kr- o sorry aunty.
Lady- kya sorry bolthi hai itne moti aurat dikhai nahi hai teko, ankhen hai ya dhakkan. (kripa opens her mouth in anger by listening this)
lady- ab mu kya khol rahi hai ja yaha se.
Kr- dhakkan aur mai..vo neha ki bacchi ab tak so rahi hogi, jaise kahi ki rajkumari ho (kripa lagda ke chal rahi thi qki use leg par lag gaya tha kripa knocks the door)
Kr- neha ki bachi darwaza khol (she said angriely) neha yaar darwaza please khol na bohat zor le lage hai..i mean pair pe.. (she said in a kiddish way) o darwaza to maine hi lock kiya tha, how stupid of me.
Kr- mujhe pata hi tha yeh ladke 1:00 baje tak so rahe hogi, o god iska kya hoga life me aur waha jai ne mujhe pareshan karke rak diya hai aur yaha yeh bhi kise bache se kam nahe hai. Neha come on getup and she picks up the blanket and she saw 2 legs. "Arre yaha to sirf 2 sirf uske pair hai uska sir kaha gaya",she thinks. " O god mai bhi is ladke ke saat rehkar pagal ho rahi hu",she said to herself. Neha this is the last warning nahi to mai (then we here neha voice)
Ne- Nahi to kya kar loge Kripu (she said in a kiddish way)
Kr- what kripu i hate this aur main kya kar lugi vo to tujhe abi pata chalega. (1,2,3 and dham!!!!
Ne- Ouch!! Kirpa u idiot, stupid, donkey mujhe bed se q nichhe gira diya. (we can hear her voice but cant see her face).
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Part 4:
Kr- tujhe pata hai jai ne mujhe kitna pareshan kiya.
Ne- O my god jai (throws her blanket and rushes in the bathroom and starts the shower but still we cant see her face , tune mujhe pehle q nahi utaya.
Ne- Hello madam teen teen alaram clock ek aat baje par set tha, ek nau baje par aur ek dus baje par,aur tune kya kiya alaram stop kiya aur teeno bhi zameen par fek diye.
Ne- O gosh,kya maine sach me aisa kiya (we can just see her hands).
Kr- yakin nahi ho to bahar aake dekh le, pura ghar clock ka garbage dumb bana hua hai, o god kise din mai ise utane jaoge to kahi yeh mujhe bhi na utakar fek de.(neha now praying tn god).
Kr-hey bhagvan mere neha ko gusse pe kabu rakhne ke shakti de, usse thodi sambudhi de.(bathrooms door open and we here Neha (aamna's) voice.
Ne- So sweet of u kripu par yeh sambuddhi wale line tumpar zyada suit karte.( she is in towel with wet hairs and she shook his head here is our heroine entry with beautiful eyes the Kashish wale cute si smile).
Kr- so madam yeh apne kya pehna hai.
Ne-kripu tune mujhe itne bade baat q nahi batae 2 hafte purani he sahi lekin mai teri dost to thi na (she asks in a very serious way).
Kr- kya (she too become serious).
Ne-ke tujhe.
Kr-ke mujhe kya.
Ne- ke tujhe din me dekhai nahi deta.
Kr- kya mujhe din me dikhai nahi deta aur mujhe hi pata hai. (suddenly neha starts laughing and kripa realise that she was kidding and neha starts running upon the bed as kripa was running behind to beat her.
Ne- O come on Kripu mai towel mein hu aur mujhe Ranbir Kapur wala scene create nahi karna hai. (they both sat on the bed & start laughing together)
Ne- toh miss teacher ab tujhe late nahi ho raha ha aur waise bhi waha jane se pehle mujhe apne sweetheart jai ke liye roses bhi to lene hai. (neha wore a shalwar khameez with diamond ear ring and hair fully open. (they both went on double seated scooty).
Raj is in her car talking to his secatary about some project.
Raj- hey driver paas ki fullo ki dukan par gari rok dena i wanna take some roses.
Read it to know what hapens when jab they met
Edited by afreenaamna - 15 years ago
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Nice part. Luved Raj n Angad's convo. That was funny. But I really dont want Raj to be in pain as Angad said. Neha's intro was nice. W8ing 4 Raj-Neha meet. I understand dat its ur first FF n u r updating it 4m mobile. So its ok. Take ur tym n continue it.

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