Kya hua hai (Aamna Rajeev) ~new part pg 66~ - Page 3

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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome please conti soon ,
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Posted: 16 years ago
#22
Interesting part. The convo of raj n Neha was nice n funny. But wat wer u saying like the 2nd part n new hero??? Pls dont chng Rajeev. May be ur 2nd hero is very gud but pls dont chng Raj if possible.
PLS CONTINUE SOON.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 12:
ra: ho gaya, muje kya hua hai? (He said to herself) ha par us neha ko zarur kuch honewala hai. Wo janti nahi us jaise kai ladkeyo ko raj apni little finger pe nacha chuka hai, koi bat nahi bohat jald hi tume pata chal jayega ke yeh bunder. 'bunder' yeh mai kya bol raha hu.
(Neha is talking to kripa).
Neha: chal yaar kripu muje ab jana hai.
Kr: neha first of all tu muje kripu bulana band kar aur by the way kya mai jan sakte hu ke aap ja kaha rahi hai.
Ne: job ke liye interview dene.
Kr: what?? Kaha??kyu??.(raj was listening to this dicussion from behind)
Ne: o my god itne sare sawal aur vo bi ek saat. First of all maine Singhaniya industries interview dene ja rahe hu.
Ra: wah,machli khud he jaal me fasne aa gaye, aa interview dene yeh job tuje he milega aur uske baad mai tumare zindagi hell nahi bana di to mera naam bi Raj nahi.
Kr: tu jayege job karne vo bi singhaniya industries me. Kya kabi tu 12:00 baje se pehle ute hai aur ha maine bohat suna hai, ki raj singhaniya is a very big playboy, kai ladkeyo ki life spoil kar chuka hai, to mai tuje waha kaam karne nahi de sakti.
Ne: come yaar, mai yeh sab apne liye nahi kar rahi, mai yeh sab jai ki kar rahe hu mai use apne pairo par chalta hua dekhna chahte hu (Raj got very impressed by listening to these world like those words have touches her heart & brings a very big smile on her face & then he come out of her thoughts).
Ra: Raj, yeh tu has q raha hai,yaad nahi tuje usse badla lena hai just focus ya badla (he told to herself).
Ne: & what do u mean by ki vo bohat si ladkeyo ki zindagi kharab kar chuka hai, kai tuje yeh to nahi lag raha ki mai.. O please us jaise logo se bohat nafrat karti hu (raj feels sad and calls angad).
Ra: hey dude listen to me waha ek ladke ayege interview dene ayege uske koi paper mat dekhna & just give her the job.
An: anyone special.
Ra: Angad yaar tu apne dimag par itna zor kyo de raha hai, just do as i say..uska naam Neha hai, ok bye..ab agar maine uss jungle billi ki akal thikane nahi lagae toh mera naam bhi Raj nahi..
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Edited by afreenaamna - 15 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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So sumaiya u dont want me to change the hero soch lo kahi baad me pach tana na pade mai ek riddle dete hu usse tume uska naam pata chal jaye ga 'hi mera naam hai dill, har ladke ke dil ka armaan, jab bhi kise ladke se mill ta hu to unke dill to gayye guess who am i ?
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 11:
(neha comes to Singhaniya's office & goes to give interview while Angad is taking the interview)
Neha enters the cabi.Ne: may i come in sir.An: u r already in miss..?
Ne: neha sir (then angad realise that the girl is neha & looked her properly).
An: wow.
Ne: what sir?
An: kuch nahi u sit.
An: ab samja ke pehle hi mulakat me raj ise kiss kaise karliya badla lene k bahane chance mar raha tha. So miss neha yaha se pehle aap kaha kaha kaam kar chuki hai.
Ne: sir maine ab tak kai kam nahi kiya hai.
An: lekin miss neha hum bina experience ke kise ko job nahi dete.
Ne: lekin sir agar aap newcommers ko mauka hi nahi denge to hume experience kaise milega lekin ap mere paper check kar sakte hai.
An: well ap apni file yahi rakh dijiye mai ise dekh lunga.
Neha comes out of the cabin & talking to her self.
Ne: arre isne to koi sawal hi nahi pucha lagta hai muje ye job nahi milega (dish bechari pirse kise se takra gae aur raj k hoti hua vo aur kisse se kaise takra sakte hai).
Ne: tum..tum yaha b mera picha karte karte a gaye, tume bilkul b sharam nahi atti hai.
Ra: aati hai na bohat aati hai k itne sari khubsurat ladkiyo k hote hue b mai tumse hi takra jata hu really very bad timing.
Ne: u..u (she dont have any words to say & then Angad comes out of the cabin).
An: kya hua ms neha.
Ne: sir dekhye na yeh bunder mera matlab yeh ladka mera picha hi nahi chod raha, maine sabke samne iske mu par pani b dala lekin ye ab b mera picha kar raha hai (raj feels embarrased as everyone was listening to this).
Ra: u jungle billi tum.
An: neha tum jante b ho k tum kisse baat kar rahe ho, yeh raj singhaniya hai is company k MD.
Ne: what!! (shocked & she went out of the office).
An: bechari bohat bada shock laga hoga nahi.
Ra: o please, bechari aur vo.
An: I am sure hamesha ki tara ladae tune hi start ki hogi.
Ra: i am sorry to say, par ye ladke apne samne kisi aur ko bolne ka mauka hi kaha dete hai to ladna toh bohat dur ki baat hai..
Edited by afreenaamna - 15 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 12:
Neha reaches to the chawl when Kripa came to her very shockingly.
Kr: neha acha hua tu aa gayi muje tujse bohat hi shoking news batani hai.
Ne: nahi Kripu aaj nahi jo bi bolna hai kal bolna qki mai ek din me sir ek hi shock bardash kar sakti hu,aur agar ek aur shock mila to heart attack aane k chances hai.
Kr: nahi yaar tuje sunna padega woh jiske saat tera jhagda hua tha na.
Ne: ek minute konsa wala jhagda, kal raat wala, aade jhante pehle wala ya vo jo mai abi abi rickshaw driver se kar k aa rahi vo wala.
Kri: arre yaar vo fool ki dukankan wala wo ladka aur koi nai balki raj singhaniya hai.
Ne: o my god ambulance bulao muje heart attack aa gaya (she said in a kidish way). Ho gaya (she said angrily to kripa).
Kr: kya iska matlab tu ye shock bhi jhel gae.
Ne: ha, ek min, maine kaha muje heart attack aa jaega pir b tune muje sab kuch bataya , it means u dont love me, no one loves me qki mai billi jaise lagti hu, bachpan me b sab muje chidate the aur ab to muje vo job b nahi milege aur mai jai k liye kuch b nahi kar pauge(she said it crying in a kidish way).
Kr: o, to tuje isleye uspar itna gussaya aya tha,well yeh le rumaal apni naak pochle beh rahi hai.(Neha took hanky & wipes her nose. In night when kripa was sleeping neha was thinking about the job when her mobile rings).
Ne: maine kaha tha na muje phone mat karna...,nahi mai vapas nahi aa sakti (she said very angrily) ya i miss u to & yah take care bye.. (she said very lovingly)
Edited by afreenaamna - 15 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Nice part. Raj n Neha's convos r always very sweet.

BTW as 4 ur riddle goes, I guess u r talking abt Armaan (KSG). Well no doubt he is really gud, one of my most favs but I'll NEVER regret my request of not changing RAJ. Coz u c, der is always sum1 u prefer more n in my case I always prefer Rajeev most.
Well I dont knw wat ur story demands. If it really needs the chng of the hero or u really feel like doing this chng then its completely upto u. After all the FF is urs dear. Its just dat Rajeev is a bit too special n Karan doesnt create dat craze in me.
However I will still keep reading at least to c wat makes u do the chng. PLS CONTINUE SOON.
P.S. Ur riddle was very sweet. Hope my ans is correct.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I dindn't siad that the 2nd hero will be the main lead or i dint siad that he will not be the main lead, kya yaar ab kya sara suspence fodkar sari story in short bata du waise b ek suspence fut hi chuka hai k 2nd hero kon hai & yes your ans was correct well uski entry to londom me hogi but Neha to, dekha mere pet me ek baat nahi rehte aur isse pehle mai ek aur suspence fodu mai apni story contd karti hu.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Well its Ok Afreen. Tum apna story apne mutabik continue karo. I'd luv to read this story till the end to knw wat happens in the end.
And anyways it seems Karan will be playing a supporting role (though not sure). Well ab main aur kuch nahi likhungi aur na hi kuch poochungi (at least I'll try to do so) coz I dont want the suspence to end.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 13:
neha is sleeping on her bed when her cell rings.
Ne: kripu yaar zaara mera phone utta dena.(Kripa was going to pickup the phone).
Ne: agar uska phone hua to lekin maine to kal raat usse yaha phone karne se mana kar diya tha (she thought in her mind & jump from the bed & just took the phone from kripa's hand).Ne: thanks par mai khud he baat kar lugi.. tum (she said while talking on the phone).
Ra: ha mai q tume kisi aur k phone ka intezar tha kya. Waise maine tume yeh batane k liye phone kiya hai ki tume yeh job mil gaye hai aur tu aaj se office joint kar sakte ho, hope u'll have a good day in office today.
Ne: subha subha tumare awaz sunli hai to din kitna good hoga yeh to mai andaza hi laga sakti hu (she said this in mind and dissconect the phone).
An:muje nahi lagta k vo office aae ge.
Ra: nahi yaar vo zaroor ayege, vo baki ladkeyo ki tara nahi hai she's diffrent.
An: o she's diffrent.(Raj give angad a angry look).
Ra: tu apne stupid signals dena band karega.
(Neha was thinking.)
Ne: usne muje yeh job q di, ofcourse badla lene ke liye de hogi lekin vo janta nahi k neha b kis bala ka naam jo ek baar kisi ko barbad karne par utar gaye to use chodti nahi hai. Jungle billi kaha tha na muje ab bata ti hu k yeh jungle billi kya kya kar sakti hai.
(Neha on the bus stop.)
Ne: o god yeh bus q nahi aa rahi hai. (then a man standing next to her said).
Man: mam aap ko koi problem hai.
Ne: nahi koi problem nahi hai (she said angrily).
Ne: o god kitni garmi hai yaha.
Man: ma'am agar aap ko koi problem hai to muje bata de jiye.
Ne: teko ek baar bola na koi problem nahi.
Man: waise yeh hai mere number agar aapko aadhi raat ko b koi problem hogi to aap muje phone kar di jiye ga ab aap muje apna number di jiye.
Ne: do u want my sandal number.
(Neha reaches the offi & she was give the table in front of raj cabin & he can see her.)
Ra: kuch maza nahi aa raha (then he calls on neha's desk.
Ra: miss neha kya aap mere cabin me aa sakti hai.
Neha was like 'ab' is bunder ko kya hua ab bulaya hai to jana padega. Ab har roz is ka muh dekhna padega.
Edited by afreenaamna - 15 years ago

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