FF DV-FANNAH(VEER PRIYA)Part 26 updated - Page 14

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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanks for the update dear...Wow in this condition 2 veer is worried about his people....
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Posted: 16 years ago

DHARAMVEER

Fan-Fiction DV - FANNAH

Veer & Priya


VEER AND PRIYA CONFESS THEIR LOVE TO EACHOTHER:
Rahul & his companions, secretly go to Dharam's palace to get their food. But they fail to get it due to heavy security. They try several times, but the result was the same, they were unable to get eatables. Some of the slaves get caught & get injured badly.After trying alot of times, they go back to the village.
Two days pass & there was no food & water even after continuous struggle. All people of the village were starving,& they were passing their time only with hope.
In Arya kingdom,when Priya comes to know through the minister that slaves are punished. She decides to get food for the slaves in the village. Dharam was out of the palace, so she was not having any problem in doing that.
Veer was quite tense & frustrated, he was thinking as to how will he bring food for his people, he was unable to find a way out,he was just sitting on a chair with his hands on his forehead. After a few minutes Rahul with a smile comes running towards Veer;
Rahul: Veer!
Veer: Yes, what happened? (replies with a serious tone. In response, Rahul gives him a plate containing food. Veer was surprised to see it.) Where did this food come from,who has brought this?
Rahul: Well...... guess.
Veer: I don't have time for guesses, just tell me.
Rahul: Your Priya.
Veer: What? Priya?
Veer goes & sees Priya coming towards him with food. His heart beat becomes fast than ever. He becomes a little nervous;
Priya: Sit down Veer,& have some food. Rahul told me that you haven't taken food for last three days. (She says in a firm tone.)
Veer: No... I mean... I want to feed my people first.
Priya: Rahul is feeding them relax.
Veer tries to lift his hand but due to his deep injury, he was unable to do it. Priya observes it. She sits near him;
Priya: Let me help. (She makes a small bite & feeds him. Veer just stares at her. As she was feeding him, she was wiping the tears in her eyes)
Veer in his mind: Don't stop yourself today Veer. Just confess your true feelings to her.) I love you Priya. (Priya was stunt, she stares at him.)
Priya: But... Veer... I... I don't love you. (she stands up & replies in nervousness with her back facing Veer.)
Veer: Don't lie. I have clearly seen in your eyes, that you love me.
Priya: No, this is not love, this is just your illusion.
Veer: Illusion! you came all the way from your kingdom to meet me, was'nt this love? you wrapped your piece of dupatta on my bleeding hand wasn't this love? you had tears in your eyes when Dharam raised his hand on me was'nt this love? and now you have given food with your hands, isn't this love?
Priya: I don't know.
Veer: I know the reason. You are scared that Dharam will again raise his hand on me, if he comes to know that you have confessed your love to me.
Now you have to choose, you want to destroy your life with that ruthless creature who beats you all the time,or you want to stay with me I know that I am poor & I am unable to give you the luxurious life which you have at your house. But I'll give all my love to you & the happiness, you deserve. Just take off the engagement ring once, from your hand & see that your heart will witness my love. The choice is yours Priya. I'll be waiting for your answer tonight at the place, where we met for the first time.( Veer leaves)
It was night time, Priya goes back to her palace sits in her room & thinks what to do. She takes off her engagement ring & shuts her eyes. She sees Veer infront,she quickly opens them;
Priya: Yes, I have got to confess my love to Veer now that I love him.
On the other hand Veer was in the ground lying on a bench looking at the stars in the black sky,while puffing a cigrette. Suddenly he listens the footsteps of someone & gets up. It was Priya;
Veer: I knew that you will come Priya. So, what do you say? (Priya remains silent) I know that you have alot of pressures from Dharam, from your parents & the society,but to tell you the truth. I can sacrifice my life for you.
Priya: I came to say ... that ... I love you Veer. Yes Veer I really love you, I can't live without you.
Veer opens his arms, Priya runs towards him and both of them hug. The song in the back ground plays;

Kaise Mujhe Turn Mil Gayeen
Qismat Pe Aaye Na Yaqeen
Utar Aayee Jheel Mein
Jaise Chaand Utarta Hai
Kabhi Houley Houley Dheerey Se

Gungunati Dhoop Ki Tarah Se
Tarannum Mein Turn


Chhookey Mujhe
Guzri Ho Yun
Dekhoon Tumhe
Ya Main Sunoo
Tum Ho Sukoon
Turn Ho Junoo
Kyun Pahle Na
Aayeen Turn

Kaise Mujhe Turn Mil Gayeen
Ho' O0'H0..O0
Qismat Pea Aye Na Yaqeen
Ho' O0'H0..O0

H0'O0'H0'O0
H0'O0'

Main To Ye Sochta Tha Ki Aaj Kal
Oopar Wale Ko Fursat Nahi
Phir Bhi Tumhe
Banake Woh
Meri Nazar Mein Chadh Gaya
Rutbe Mein Woh
Aur Badh Gaya

Ho' O0'H0..O0
Ho' O0'H0..O0''''

Badley Raaste Jharne Aur Nadi
Badley Ret Ki Tim Tim
Chhedhe Zindage Dhool Koi Nahi
Badley Barkha Ki Rim Jhim
Badlengi Rituen Ada
Par Main Rahoongi Sada
Usi Tarah
Teri Bahon Mein Bahen Daalke
Har Lamha Har Pal

Zindagi Sitar Ho Gayee
Rim Jhim Malhar Ho Gayee
Mujhe Aata Nahi
Qismat Pe Apne Yaqeen'..yaqeen
Kaise Mujhko Mil Gayee Turn
Edited by sweet_1 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow dear...this was such an awesome part
yayyy...im sooo happy
finally now and the song is so apt for d situation
loved it soo much
and i just now saw u gave a name to the ff
fanaah is a superb name
do cont
its an amazing ff
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanks for the lovely update dear..wow what a romantic confession by both veer & priya..god knows how dharam will react to this!😳😃 😉 😆 👏⭐️
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Posted: 16 years ago
Wownderful update dear.Now, both veer and priya confess their love and what a romantic way.
Post next part soon dear.
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Posted: 16 years ago
DHARAMVEER

Fan-Fiction DV FANNAH

(Veer & Priya)


DHARAM INFORMS SOMESHWAR & NIVRITI ABOUT PRIYA'S LOVE AFFAIR:
Veer & Priya walk together in the ground. Priya puts her head on Veer's shoulder, holding Veer's hand & closing the fist.
Priya: We will have to run away Veer. (Veer stops)
Veer: Run away! what are you saying Priya? (replies calmly)
Priya: Veer, try to understand. No one will support or understand our love here. Everyone will be against this. There is a law that a princess can only marry a prince no one else. There is no choice left for us. (says in anxiety)
Veer: Calm down Priya, relax. Everything is going to be fine. There is still a choice.
Priya: Which one?
Veer: Talk to your parents & tell them each & everything.
Priya: What? do you know what are you saying Veer? my parents are deadly against my marriage with a slave(shramik) especially my father. He will never support me. He trusts Dharam blindly. He didn't believe me when I told him the truth about Dharam. He will kill you, & I don't want to lose you. I am telling this is out of question.
Veer smiles, cups Priya's face in his hands;
Veer: Nothing will happen to me. Talk to your parents & try to convince them & then I'll think what to do next.
Priya: But Veer....
Veer: Do you trust me?
Priya: More than myself.
Veer: Do you love me?
Priya: More than my life.
Veer: So, do as I tell you & leave the rest on me.. ok sweetheart? (Priya hugs him again. Veer smiles again & tell her to leave.)
But both of them didn't notice that they were being watched by someone from behind the bushes. Yes, I was none other than Dharam;
Dharam: So my fiance is in love with Veer. Hmmmm.... now the story is going to be more interesting. ( Dharam decides to tell all the story to Someshwar & Nivriti)
The very next day, Dharam goes to Dehli. He reaches the palace. Someshwar welcomes him whole-heartedly;
Dharam: I want to tell you something very important & shocking as well about your daughter. (Someshwar becomes serious)
Someshwar: Why,what happened?
Dharam: Your daughter, my fiance Priya is in love with a slave.
Someshwar: What?
Dharam: Yes, it is true. (Someshwar becomes furious & loud)
Someshwar: HOLD YOUR TONGUE. I TRUST YOU THAT DOESN'T MEAN THAT YOU CAN PUT BASELESS ALLEGATIONS ON MY DAUGHTER, I KNOW HER.
Dharam: I have seen with my own eyes.
Someshwar: GET YOUR EYE-SIGHT CHECKED.
Dharam becomes a little scared while looking at Someshwar's behaviour.
Dharam: Uncle, why are getting upset ( says calmly, with a fake smile)
Someshwar: I am not in a mood to talk to you now. Please leave.
Dharam: But.. uncle...
Someshwar: LEAVE!!
Dharam leaves angrily.
Someshwar: How could he talk about our daughter like that Nivriti?
Nivriti: Leave it, he is gone now. Just relax. We'll talk to Priya.
Edited by sweet_1 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanks for the lovely update dear..Ohh no Dharama telling Someshwar & Nivriti about Veer & Priya's relation before Priya could tell them.....will cause problems for priya & veer now!😳😃 😉 😆 👏⭐️
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Posted: 16 years ago

Wow, wonderful update.But, dharam knows everything now and he told her father everything.

It's interesting.
Pls post next part soon dear.
Edited by veersherafan1 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
o no wat will happen now
thanx a lot for the update
it was as usual superb
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Posted: 16 years ago
THANKS A MILLION for these highly encouraging comments by all of you i appreciate that u all spare ur time to read my ff regularly thanku soooooooooooooooooo much will updte the nxt part very soon inshallah... lub ya all...😛

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